英语七年级写作训练课件何少琼.ppt

1、 七七 Hello,Hello,Im Kitty.Im Kitty.Nice to meet you!Nice to meet you!Where is Kitty?Where is Kitty?_the boxin_the boxon_the boxnext to_the boxabove_the bedunderMy BedroomWhats+介词短语介词短语.?There is/areWriting要求：要求：仔细观察图片，以仔细观察图片，以“My Bedroom”My Bedroom”为题目写为题目写一篇短文，用一篇短文，用 There be There be 句型描述图片中的物品，句

2、型描述图片中的物品，至少写出至少写出5 5句话。句话。Have a tryHave a tryMy Bedroom Showing TimeShowing Time My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a This is my bedroom.There is a bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is also a desk in the bedroom.There is also a desk in t

3、he bedroom.There is a chair next in the bedroom.There is a chair next to the desk.There is a TV on the to the desk.There is a TV on the desk.There are two pictures above desk.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very the TV.I like my bedroom very much.much.Passage:Passage:My Bedroom

4、 This is my bedroom.There is a This is my bedroom.There is a bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa in bed in the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is also a desk in the bedroom.There is also a desk in the bedroom.There is a chair next to the bedroom.There is a chair next to the desk.There is

5、 a TV on the desk.the desk.There is a TV on the desk.There are two pictures above the TV.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.I like my bedroom very much.Practice:Practice:My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There is a bed in There is a bed in the bedroom.Ther

6、e is a sofa in the the bedroom.There is a sofa in the bedroom.There is also a desk in the bedroom.There is also a desk in the bedroom.bedroom.There is a chair next to the There is a chair next to the desk.There is a TV on the desk.There desk.There is a TV on the desk.There are two pictures above the

7、 TV.I like my are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.bedroom very much.Use“and”：语言啰嗦语言啰嗦There is a bed,a sofa and a deskdesk in the bedroom.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There isThere is a bed,a bed,a sofa and a desk in the bedroom.a sofa and a desk in the bedro

8、om.There There is is a chair next to the desk.a chair next to the desk.There isThere is a TV a TV on the desk.on the desk.There areThere are two pictures two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.much.句式单一句式单一My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my be

9、droom.There isThere is a bed,a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.a sofa and a table in the bedroom.There There is is a chair next to the table.a chair next to the table.There isThere is a TV a TV on the table.on the table.There areThere are two pictures two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroo

10、m very above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.much.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed,This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.a sofa and a table in the bedroom.There There is a chair next to the table.There is a TV is a chair next to the table.There is a TV on

11、 the table.There are two pictures on the table.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.much.You can ask:Whats next to the table?There is a chair.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a d

12、esk in the bedroom.sofa and a desk in the bedroom.WhatWhats s next to the desk?There is a chair.There next to the desk?There is a chair.There is a TV on the desk.There are two is a TV on the desk.There are two pictures above the TV.I like my pictures above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.bedroom

13、very much.Read：We can divide(分成分成)the passage into three parts.Make the passage better and better(使文章更好)BeginningBodyEndingThe structure of a good passage(好文章的结构)My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a desk in There is a bed,a sofa and a desk in the bedroom.the b

14、edroom.WhatWhats next to the desk?s next to the desk?There is a chair.Where is the TV?ItThere is a chair.Where is the TV?Its s on the desk.Can you see the pictures?on the desk.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.I like my bedroom v

15、ery much.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.the bedroom.WhatWhats next to the table?s next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?ItThere is a chair.Where is the TV?Its s on the table.Can you s

16、ee the pictures?on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.I like my bedroom very much.Beginning Body Ending BeginningBodyEnding 总领全文总领全文引出话题引出话题分层描述分层描述诠释主题诠释主题总结全文总结全文深化主题深化主题Each part is:(文章各段的作用）文章各段的作用）2.We can write a b

17、etter beginning.Make the passage better and better(使文章更好)We can divide(分成分成)the passage into three parts.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?Its on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are abov

18、e the TV.I like my bedroom very much.1、Topic Sentence 主题句法主题句法Kinds of beginning2、Ask a question 提问式提问式 My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom?Please come to see it with me!Kinds of beginning3.We can write a better ending.Make the passage better and better(使文章更好)We can divide(分成分成)the passage

19、into three parts.2.We can write a better beginning.My Bedroom This is my bedroom.There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?Its on the table.Can you see the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.I like my bedroom very much.1、Topic Sentence-

20、总结主题总结主题 Kinds of endingTwo kinds of ending 1、Topic Sentence-总结主题总结主题2、Ask a question 提问式提问式 My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom?Please come to see it with me!There is a bed,a sofa and a table in the bedroom.Whats next to the table?There is a chair.Where is the TV?Its on the table.Can you s

21、ee the pictures?Yes,they are above the TV.Do you like my bedroom?Can you introduce yours to me?Which is better?Why?Your idea:Correct Expression Correct Expression 语言准确语言准确 Right Logic Mind Right Logic Mind 逻辑合理逻辑合理3.Smooth Flow 3.Smooth Flow 条理清晰条理清晰4.Diverse Sentence Patterns4.Diverse Sentence Patt

22、erns 句式多样句式多样5.Complete Structure 5.Complete Structure 结构完整结构完整加点儿啥？多加一些增添色彩的句子层次感、深度的问题 TopicMy BedroomBeginningDo you want to look at my bedroom.BodyThere is/are.Whats.?Can you.?.EndingDo you like.?Can you.?心中有图心中有词心中有方位、次序增添色彩句子Homework要求：要求：1 1、仔细观察自己的学校，、仔细观察自己的学校，以以“My School”My School”为题目，为题目，写出一篇意思连贯、符合逻写出一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、结构完整的短文。辑、结构完整的短文。2 2、字数不得少于、字数不得少于5050词词。NoImage