应用文、读后续写和概要写作课件.ppt

1、写作专题 第9讲应用文(1)书信(电子邮件)第10讲应用文(2)通知、海报、活动介绍 第11讲应用文(3)日记类123第12讲 应用文(4)发言(演讲)稿4第13讲读后续写5第14讲 概要写作6第9讲应用文(1)书信(电子邮件)应用文的评分原则：1.本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于60和多于100的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影

2、响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差，以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。书信写作旨在考查学生在实际生活中应用英语的能力，体现了学习英语的实用性。书信种类很多，它包括笔友信、感谢信、慰问(候)信，祝贺信、鼓励信、介绍信、自荐信、询问信、应聘信、联系信、求职信、建议信及其答复信、邀请信及其接受邀请的信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。书信格式一般不作考查内容(开头和结尾已给出)，重点考查考生的谋篇布局、遣词造句能力。总的说来，写英语书信时有以下几点须注意：1.信件开头要开门见山、直入主题。常用语句是(1)Im writing to.；(2)Id like to.2.信

3、的正文是信函的主体部分。在高考作文中应该按照题目要求把题目的要点表达清楚；使文章逻辑清晰、语言通顺；可以根据需要分为若干个段落；要确保没有遗漏内容要点。3.注意根据收信人的年龄身份不同，信的语气也应不同，对朋友要亲切自然，对领导或长辈要委婉。高考书信开头语段：(1)Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide，I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number

4、 of books.(2015重庆)了解到你在组织这个在全世界分享书籍的活动，我正在写信申请参加。理由很简单，我爱读书，而且我有很多书。(2)Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.(2015全国)我想请你为我们学校的英语报写一篇文章。(3)Dear Chris，How is it going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July.But now，because my left foot was injured，I

5、 cannot go with you as planned.(2014北京)一切都好吗？我记得我们原本计划七月去云南。但是因为我的左脚受伤，我不能按计划和你一起去了。(4)Dear American guests，On behalf of our school，I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.(2014陕西)我代表学校，表达对你们的热烈欢迎。我们很幸运有你们参加我们的英语周活动。(

6、5)Dear Chris，Im Li Jin，monitor of Class One，Grade Eleven.Im very delighted to learn that youre coming to our class to study with us as an exchange student next term.Welcome to our class！(2014天津)我是李津，11年级1班的班长，我很高兴得知下学期你要作为一名交换生来我们班和我们一起学习。欢迎来到我们班！(6)Dear Mr.Wang，Knowing that our library is going to

7、buy books，Id like to give some suggestions.(2014浙江)得知我们图书馆要买书，我想给一些建议。(7)Dear Tom，How are you doing？I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.(2013新课标全国)你好吗？我想知道你是否能为我卖一些中国结。(8)Dear Tom，Im sorry I couldnt reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately.I was so occupied with

8、going over my lessons for my final exam.Now I am writing to tell you my plans for the coming summer holidays.(2013山东)我很抱歉没有立刻回复你上周发来的邮件，那时我正忙着复习功课准备期末考试。现在我写信告诉你我的下一个暑假计划。(9)Dear Peter，How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference，and Ive asked

9、 him to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.(2013新课标全国)你还好吗？我写信想告诉你我叔叔李明要去你住的城市开会，我已经请他捎去你以前曾向我索要的中国画。经典语篇经典语篇假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival，which will be held on June 1517,2015，is now looking for 20 student

10、volunteers to provide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，and English Debate.If you are interested，please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at .写作要点：1.表达写作意图；2.陈述应征目的；3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。写作要求：1.邮件词数80左右；2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Ms Chen，Im Li Hua，a st

11、udent from Class 2，Grade 3.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua佳作佳作欣赏欣赏Dear Ms Chen，Im Li Hua，a student from Class 2，Grade 3.Im writing to apply for the volunteer position stated in your notice.I think its a perfect opportunity for me to further develop my abilities.For the past two year

12、s，I have been an active participant of our national annual English festival and played an important role in it.As a diligent student，I have a good knowledge of English and can express my thoughts and opinions clearly and fluently with foreigners.In addition，I am an outgoing girl who has rich experie

13、nce in organizing school activities.I would appreciate it if you give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua即时训练1为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说

14、明理由。注意：注意：1.词数80左右；2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头和结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.Yours，JamieHi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is that everyone will have one of those perio

15、ds when things seem to be going wrong，so you dont have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper.Here are three useful tips：First，talk to someone you trust about how you feel.Second，go outdoors and play team games with your friends.And third，remain optimistic about your

16、 future.All of these can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours，Jamie参考范文即时训练2假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。注意：注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：参考词汇：住宿accommodationDear Sir/Madam，Yours faithful

17、ly，Li HuaDear Sir/Madam，I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.Ive seen your ad，and Id like to know something more about your sixweek English course.First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week？Besides，I wish

18、there would not be too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully，Li Hua返回返回参考范文第10讲应用文(2)通知、海报、活动介绍一、写作基本要点一、写作

19、基本要点1.交代活动的主办单位和时间；2.概括描写活动的内容；3.交代活动的主要目的；4.活动的具体地点、时间及持续时间；5.参加人员的主要任务；6.说明活动的参加条件；7.交代参加的联系方式；8.发出呼吁，诚邀参加。注意：注意：写作语句注意肯定、否定，祈使句的应用和主动句、被动句结合使用。二、通知开头语二、通知开头语1.口头通知开头语(1)May I have your attention，please?(2)Attention please，everyone.I have an announcement to make.(3)Be quite.There is something impo

20、rtant I have to tell you.(4)I have something(important)to tell you.(5)Im glad to tell you something important.2.其他常用语句(1)Everyone should be there on time.(2)Be sure not to be late.(3)Please be present on time.(4)Everyone is required to be present on time.(5)Be sure to attend it on time.(6)Everybody

21、is expected to attend it on time.(7)All teachers and students are required to.(8)Our school/The Student Union will/is going to hold.(9)A lecture will be given at 7：00 this evening in.(10)Please take your notebooks with you and be sure on time.(11)Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.三、高

22、考语段三、高考语段(1)This camp will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.(2015北京)该营地将于7月20号开放。它提供给像你我一样的青少年一个享受运动、了解中国文化的机会。(2)As scheduled，we have English Talent Show today.The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in E

23、nglish learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.The programme consists of the following activities：recitation，singing，word spelling，story telling and so on.The Show will begin at two oclock this afternoon at the Student Centre.Dear guests，you are welcome to take part in some activi

24、ties.I hope we students will benefit from your presence.(2014陕西)按照日程安排，我们今天有英语才艺表演。这个计划的目的是发展我们对英语学习的兴趣和锻炼实际听说能力。该计划包括以下活动：朗诵、唱歌、单词拼写、讲故事等等。表演将于下午2点开始，地点在学生中心。亲爱的来宾，欢迎你们参加一些活动。我希望你们的光临使我们学生有所收获。四、写作模板四、写作模板Notice will organize .This activity aims to .This activity is arranged to or so.It is planned

25、to begin on .The team members will be arranged to .Your main task is to .Anyone who is welcome warmly.Those who are interested can contact for further information.Looking forward to your active participation.经典语篇经典语篇假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活创意无限”(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文形式用英语写

26、一份书面通知。注意：注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：参考词汇：校园campus；创意作品innovation；颁奖prizegivingNotice An exciting event“Innovations on Campus”is around the corner.Come on，everybody！Its your show time.Student Union经典语篇经典语篇NoticeAn exciting event“Innovations on Campus”is around the corner.Ev

27、ery one of you is expected to be part of the event.Note that your innovations must be school things.You also need to hand in a report，explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym.Looking forward to the prizegiving

28、ceremony？Sure！Itll be held from 15：00 to 17：00 on June 18.So dont miss the chance of being the winner.For any questions，call Li Hua at 44876655.Come on，everybody！Its your show time.Student Union即时训练星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1.时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountai

29、n)；2.活动的过程；3.你对于这次活动的评论。注意：注意：1.词数80左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise，our school organized a mountainclimbing on April 10.Hundreds of us took part in it.At 8：00 am，we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.At the

30、way we were chatting，singing and laughing，enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.About 2 hours later，we all reached the top.Not only did the activity get us close to nature and give us relaxation，it also promoted the friendship among us.What a wonderful time！返回返回参考范文第11讲应用文(3)日记类日记类作文要求考生根

31、据所给的提示信息，写出一篇故事完整、句子通顺、语意连贯、符合逻辑的短文。在命题形式上有图画提示或中英文提示，有的开头已给出。着重考查考生的语言表达能力和想象力。此类作文往往使用过去时，按照时间顺序叙述。开头开门见山、直入主题。正文注意用词恰当和句子之间的衔接过渡，可适当使用and，then，however，thus等使文章层次分明、文理通顺、意思连贯。结尾应自然有力。经典语篇经典语篇假设你参加了某国际旅行团的意大利三市游(罗马佛罗伦萨威尼斯)。今天你参观的是佛罗伦萨。请根据下面表格提示，写一篇游记。要求词数80左右。游记格式已经给出，不计入总词数。参观城市及景点介绍佛罗伦萨位于米开朗基罗广场、

32、大卫塑像、乌菲兹美术馆参观感受及旅游计划敬仰古代伟大的艺术家准备明天进行下一城市的参观(威尼斯)参考词汇：参考词汇：佛罗伦萨Florence；米开朗基罗广场Piazzale Michelangelo；大卫塑像the sculpture of David；乌菲兹美术馆the Uffizi GalleryOct.4th Friday Fine佳作欣赏佳作欣赏Oct.4th Friday FineHere I am in Florence，a worldfamous tourist city in the middle of Italy.Firstly，I came to the Piazzale

33、Michelangelo，from where I looked over the beautiful sights of the whole city.Then，standing in the middle of the square is the sculpture of David，which is the symbol of the city.At last，I came to the Uffizi Gallery，where lots of artworks are displayed.So attracted by them，I really want to stay here f

34、or a few more days.However，I must leave for Venice，another famous city in Italy tomorrow morning.即时训练假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序写一篇日记，记述你们在“传统文化进校园”活动中，向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。注意：注意：词数80左右。参考词汇参考词汇：一个面团a piece of dough；面人dough figurineJanuary 29th Friday FineToday，we invited an old craftsman to teach us how

35、 to make dough figurines.When the craftsman came，we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box.First，he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him and watched attentively.Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old man walked around

36、and helped us patiently.Finally，we took pictures with the old craftsman and the figurines we made.We were all very excited.We hope we can have more activities of this kind!参考范文返回返回第12讲应用文(4)发言(演讲)稿在日常生活中，人们为参加会议或者集会时表达自己的意见、看法，或者汇报思想、工作情况等而准备的文稿就是发言稿。在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的发言稿也称之为演讲稿或者演说辞。演讲稿是人们在工作和社会生活

37、中经常使用的一种文体。它可以用来交流思想、感情，表达主张、见解，也可以用来介绍自己的学习、工作情况和经验，等等。演讲稿具有宣传、鼓动、教育和欣赏等作用，它可以把演讲者的观点、主张与思想感情传达给听众以及读者，使他们信服并在感情上产生共鸣。一、其基本组成部分一、其基本组成部分1.开始时对听众的称呼语2.提出论题提出论题的方法各种各样，但常用的是举例法。别外，用具体的统计数据也是一个有效的引出论题的方法，比如：你要谈遵守交通规则的话题，可以从列举一系列有关车辆、车祸等的数据开始。3.论证论证就是要把道理讲清楚。常见的论证方法有举例法、因果法、对比法等。4.结论结论要简明扼要，以给听众留下深刻印象。

38、5.结尾结尾要干净利落。常用的结尾有：Thank you very much for your attention.Thanks for listening.二、常用句型二、常用句型1.Good morning/afternoon/evening,everyone.2.Honorable judges,ladies and gentlemen!3.Im very proud that I can tell you something about.4.I am very happy to show my opinion about environment protection.5.In my o

39、pinion,we students should not drop litter carelessly and walk or ride to school as soon as possible.6.Every one of us should think about future.7.As long as we work together,Im sure our beautiful dream will come true.8.Thats all.Thank you!经典语篇经典语篇近年来地震的频繁发生给人类的生存带来了严重影响，为此你所在的学校要求学生平时多了解关于地震逃生的方法。现在

40、，请你用英语为班里的同学做一次地震时在室内如何逃生的讲解，请结合下面要点写一篇英语发言稿。1.来不及跑时可迅速躲到坚固的家具下面或卫生间里面；2.趴下，闭目，并用毛巾等捂住口鼻，以阻挡灰尘；3.尽量关掉煤气开关或电器开关；4.不要外逃或从楼上跳下，不能使用电梯。注意：注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.短文要求包含以上要点，但不必逐条翻译；4.可以适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。Good afternoon，my dear classmates，We all know that life is precious.Then how can we protect ou

41、rselves when we come across a horrible earthquake？Thats all.Thank you!佳作欣赏佳作欣赏Good afternoon，my dear classmates，We all know that life is precious.Then how can we protect ourselves when we come across a horrible earthquake？Now let me give you some advice on how to survive an earthquake.When a serious

42、 earthquake takes place，we should hide in a bathroom or under some strong furniture immediately.At the same time wed better fall on the ground and close our eyes with a towel on our nose and mouth to stop the dust.If it is possible，please turn off the gas stop and the electric power switch.But you m

43、ustnt try to run out or jump off a building.And do remember not to use the elevator.Thats all.Thank you!即时训练假设你校英语社团举办以“文明出行，从我做起”为主题的演讲比赛，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。内容主要包括：1.遵守交通法规；2.注意举止文明。注意：注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Good afternoon everyone，My topic today is“On the Way to School”.Th

44、ese days，breaking traffic rules is not uncommon，causing serious harm to life.Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone.As for me，it should start on my way to school.I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bike，Ill always keep to the right and neve

45、r cross a road until the traffic light turns green.If I walk，Ill never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.I hope my behavior will make a difference.Thats all.Thank you!参考范文返回返回第13讲读后续写一、考纲解读一、考纲解读提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。二、原题分析二、原题分析1.原文材

46、料350词以内，所续写文章150词左右。2.原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文。3.原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语，所续写短文应使用5个以上。4.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已经给出。5.续写部分分为两大类别：半开放性质。必须依据文章的语境逻辑推理续写。完全开放性质。可以依据文章的思路，自己发挥。三、注意事项三、注意事项1.词数要求。2.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。3.内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。4.应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。5.上下文的连贯性。四、评分原则四、评分原则1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步

47、确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况；(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；(4)上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。经典语篇经典语篇阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。There was once a beautiful town and a couple

48、of lovers would often stay together on the top of the mountain enjoying the sunrise and by the sea appreciating the sunset.Everyone who knew them could not help envying them for their happy love.But one day，the man was severely injured and lying in bed in hospital for several days without any consci

49、ousness.The woman guarded him by the bed in daytime，calling his name nonstop while at night，she would go to the church and pray to God until her tears ran up.A week passed by and the man was still sleeping.One day，God was finally moved by her love and persistence and would like to do her a special f

50、avor.God said，“I can help your lover recover quickly on the condition that you should promise to be a butterfly for three years.Do you agree with the deal？”She said excitedly and firmly，“Yes，I do!I wont regret doing that.”The next day，the woman became a beautiful butterfly，flying hurriedly to the ho