应用文-建议信课件.pptx

1、Suggestion letter应用文写作一应用文写作一Para1:描述对方情况/问题+写信目的1.Sorry to know that(大致描述问题).Im writing to express my views concerning+名词短语2.You have asked me for my advice on and Ill try to make some constructive suggestions.3.Im writing to offer my suggestions on 题干部分会给出Para2:提建议的句型1.In my opinion,it would be wi

2、se to take the following measures.(总起)2.The following suggestions carried out,things would be much better.3.被动句/非谓语作主语（重要信息提前）比如：Doing sth is a wise choice,which+功能4.I would like to suggest/recommend that+虚拟语气5.I think it would be more beneficial if you could.6.Youd better do/not do You might as wel

3、l do sth7.You may consider doing sth.8.虚拟+倒装：Were I you,I would.Para3:结尾套话（提出希望）价值2分！1.In the end,I will be delighted if you find my suggestions useful/practical/helpful.2.I would highly appreciate it if you would consider my suggestions.Looking forward to your reply.3.I do hope you can take my sugg

4、estions into consideration.Looking forward to your reply.4.Hope these suggestions will work for you.Please feel free to contact me/Dont hesitate to let me know if you have any problem.假如你是Mary，你的好友陈洁最近因为考试频率过高，课业繁重，感到身体不适，严重影响了学习。因此，她发e-mail给你，寻求你的建议和帮助。请你根据以下要点提示予以回复。内容要点：1.健康合理的饮食；2.有规律且适度的运动；3.注意

5、：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已为你写好；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Chen Jie,_Yours,MarySuggestion letter,things would become much better.林逸婧/黄思琪(独立主格)As your friend,I sincerely hope that you can be back on your track as soon as possible and study happily.李好雨Doing exercise regularly is a wise choice,which will surely make

6、you cheerful and raise your learning efficiency.朱思晴Dear Chen Jie,许真渝Learning that the frequent exams and lots of homework have troubled you a lot,Im writing to help you work out the problem.There follows the suggestions.It is strongly recommended that you have a balanced diet allows you to gain abun

7、dant nutrition and keep fit.Exercising regularly and adequately makes you refreshed.Additionally,youd better listen to some soft music and read some books you like,your stress would be driven away.I will appreciate it if you take my suggetions into consideration.Yours sincerely,MaryDear Chen Jie,黄思琪

8、Sorry to know that you have trouble in study.Im writing to express my views concerning study habits.The following suggestions carried out,things would probably become much better.Firstly,it would be more beneficial if you could develop a balanced diet.Additionally,youd better take part in more outdo

9、or activities.Lastly,staying up to study does harm to your health.Having adequate rest time is a wise choice,which can regain your energy.Hope these suggestions will work for you.Please feel free to turn to me whenever you have trouble.Yours sincerely,MaryDear Chen Jie,I feel so sorry to hear that y

10、ou are feeling bad these days.In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy and keep attentive in class.The following are my suggetions.Healthy eating habits are of great importance.So youd better have your meals on time and keep a balanced diet.Then,taking morning exercise every day is a nice cho

11、ice,which helps to build up your body.You can do some sports to refresh yourself if weather permits.Finally,dont stay up too late;otherwise youll suffer a lot every night.I believe it would be beneficial if you could follow my suggetions.Hope youll feel well soon.Yours sincerely,Li HuaSuggestion let

12、ter应用文写作二应用文写作二（宁波九校联考）（宁波九校联考）不同的题目，要求的也不同一：内容要点：1.健康合理的饮食；2.有规律且适度的运动；3.二：内容包括：1.你对这个事件的看法。2.你的建议 假如你是Jack,你的同学Ben给你发了一个电子邮件（e-mail）,请根据信息的内容，用英语给他回复。内容包括：1.你对这个事件的看法。2.你的建议注意：1.词数80左右。2.可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Jack,Im writing to you for some advice.I played a bad joke on my best friend John the other

13、day.I didnt realize that the joke had gone a little too far until he started to ignore me and refuse to talk to me.It made me very upset.However,I dont want to apologize because I think it was only a joke,but I dont want to lose our friendship,either.What should I do?Dear Ben,Sorry to hear that your

14、e having trouble with your best friend._Yours,JackFACTPROBLEM1)I think its your fault.(委婉点 its+adj+sb to do sth）1.你对这个事件的看法。（句型提高）学霸版Frankly speaking,you play bad jokes on others,even though you mean no harm.其他不同观点？Both of you should share the responsibility.Neither of you are to blame.进击版I you play

15、 bad jokes on others.2)You think it is only a joke,but it might be unacceptable for John.(定从/名从)1.你对这个事件的看法。（句型提高）What you think is only a joke might be unacceptable for John.许真渝The joke which you consider acceptable might hurt your friend.叶均涵 2.你的建议（句型提高）1)I think you should make an apology to your

16、 friend.It is important to rebuild your friendship.（定从）2)I think you should write a letter to him and tell him your apology and you dont want to lose your best friend.（非谓）I would like to suggest that you should write a letter to him,telling him your apology and you dont want to lose your best friend

17、.章子怡I would like to suggest that you should make an sincere apology to your friend,which is of importance to rebuild your friendship.黄佳乐2.你的建议（句型提高）3)You can write an apology on the paper.In this way you can avoid face-to-face embarrassment.(动名词作主语)4)You can explain to your friend.It can let your fr

18、iend know what you think.(动名词作主语)1.Writing an apology on the paper is a wise choice,which enables you to avoid face-to-face embarrassment.叶钧涵Explaining to your friend as soon as possible is an effective choice,which enables your friend to know what you exactly mean.张家豪2.If you dont want to apologize

19、 to him face to face,writing a letter is a wise choice,which is beneficial to avoid the embarrassment.余昕冕Dear Ben,Sorry to hear that youre having trouble with your best friend.Im writing to express my view concerning this matter.In my opinion,you are supposed to play the joke properly.Otherwise,it w

20、ill do harm to your friendship rather than improve it.The following suggestions carried out,things would probably become much better.If you dont want to apologize in person,youd better show him your apology by sending him some gifts.Besides,I think it would be more beneficial if you could help him e

21、nthusiasticly when he is in need.I will be delighted if you find my suggestions useful.Yours,Jack金歆悦金歆悦Dear Ben,Sorry to hear that youre having trouble with your best friend.I know youre feeling torn between making an apology and losing the friendship.I guess you just wanted to play a joke and didnt

22、 mean to hurt John.But he took it seriously and felt hurt.I think neither of you are wrong.if you do want to maintain the friendship,you might as well make an apology to him.Perhaps its not easy,but why not give it a try?Writing a card to express your sincere apology or carrying on a heart-to-heart

23、conversation is also an efficient way to work out the problem and can avoid the embarrassment as well.Hope you will make up and get along well with each other again.Yours sincerely,Jack提示语：提示语：感谢聆听本节课，本课件可任意编辑，请下载后调整使用Thank you for reading this courseware.This courseware can be edited at any time.Please download it and adjust it.