广东省八年级英语上册写作教程课件：Unit-4.ppt

1、Unit 4 My city1.能合理全面分析调查结果，运用调查报告的形式，完成对周边环境的分析报告。2.明确说明文写作方式，学习读写结合型作文的写作策略。3.学会主动关注周边环境，培养城市主人翁精神。1.说明文的写作线索 说明文是以说明为主要表达方式，介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等特征的文章。它是一种应用性很强的文体，说明的目的是让读者有所知，给读者提供知识，使之了解客观世界，掌握解决问题的方法。以下是说明文的几种常见写作方法：（1）罗列法（listing）在文章开始时提出需要说明的东西和观点，然后常用first，second，and finally加以罗列

2、说明。（2）举例法（examples）举例法是用具体的例子来说明我们要表达的意思，常用for example，for instance，still another example is等词语引出。（3）比较法（comparison and contrast）比较法是对两个对象进行比较，从而进行说明的写作手法。比较法又可细分为比较相同点（comparison）和比较不同点（contrast）两种方法。（4）定义法（definition）定义法也是英语说明文中常用的写作手法，特别是在对具体事物概念进行说明时经常使用。定义法的基本要素是定义句。（5）顺序法（sequence of time，spac

3、e and process）顺序法是指按时间、空间或过程的顺序进行说明的一种写作手法。比如按照时间顺序介绍一个科学家的生平，用空间顺序阐述逐渐开发西部的重要意义，用过程顺序法解释葡萄酒的生产过程等等。（6）分类法（classification）分类法是将写作对象进行分类说明的一种写作手法。2.读写结合相结合类型的写作读写结合相结合类型的写作读写相结合类型的写作，读是为了写服务的，阅读的读写相结合类型的写作，读是为了写服务的，阅读的篇章与写作的任务通常有许多的相关性。因此，要学篇章与写作的任务通常有许多的相关性。因此，要学会从以下的途径分析：会从以下的途径分析：分析文本的语言特征，思考有哪些语言

4、可以灵活迁移分析文本的语言特征，思考有哪些语言可以灵活迁移至自己的写作中，包括适切的词块、漂亮的句式等。至自己的写作中，包括适切的词块、漂亮的句式等。首先要分析阅读的主题。首先要分析阅读的主题。分析文章的篇章结构，包括整篇文章的中心句分析文章的篇章结构，包括整篇文章的中心句/段、支段、支撑句撑句/段，总结句段，总结句/段，同时明晰作者使用的写作方法。段，同时明晰作者使用的写作方法。1 1Unit topic languages（单元话题语言）（单元话题语言）以连线、标序号等形式列举本单元与本以连线、标序号等形式列举本单元与本话题写作相关的词块、句子。话题写作相关的词块、句子。名词名词/动名词词

5、块动名词词块:comfortable seats,great service,best quality,best soundLanguage box（语言工具箱）（语言工具箱）动词词块：动词词块：have.in common,play a role,take.seriously,have the best clothes,sit most comfortably,buy clothes most cheaply,show their talent,come trueLanguage box（语言工具箱）（语言工具箱）介词词块：介词词块：in the neighborhood,with grea

6、t service形容词形容词词块：词块：more and more popular,much better,close to home,the most expensive,(be)similar toLanguage box（语言工具箱）（语言工具箱）名词/动名词词块:（）最好的声音（）最好的质量（）优质服务（）舒适的座位Quiz:Read aloud the chunks above and try to match the meaning by numbering.（）实现（）展示他们的才能（）在.有共同点（）扮演角色（）认真对待.（）有最好的衣服（）坐得最舒服（）以最便宜的价格买到衣

7、服 动词词块：动词词块：（）在周围（）有优质的服务介词介词词块词块（）好多了（）最昂贵的（）越来越受欢迎（）离家近（）与.相似形容词形容词词块词块.because.It has.It is.with.It is closest to.Movie City has the best.Talent show is getting more and more.All the shows have.in common.You enjoy your time most quietly at one of.（2）Patterns（句型）（句型）2.Extensive languages（拓展性语言）（拓展

8、性语言）Famous saying，proverbs,aphorisms and Classical sample sentences（名言、谚语、警句与经典（名言、谚语、警句与经典例句）例句）（1）Better city,better life.城市让生活更美好。（2）The happiest people are those who can really appreciate the beauty of life.最幸福的人们懂得欣赏生活的美好。（3）There are no shortcuts to any place worth going.任何值得去的地方，都没有捷径。（4）Beca

9、use of these beautiful scenery and memories,I like go back my hometown in summer.正是因为这些美丽的风景和回忆，我喜欢在夏天回到故乡。（5）People love this city,and they will make it a better place.人们爱这座城，并将使之越来越好。（6）It used to be a small town,where people made a living by fishing.以前这里是个小镇，人们靠打渔为生。Guided reading(导读导读):Reading“B

10、etter city,better life.”Cities offer us a better life.What is your favorite city?What is your favorite city like?ReadingMy favorite city My favorite city in the world is Auckland,New Zealand.It is one of the worlds best cities for living,also known as the“City of Sails”and the Queen City.There are m

11、any harbors,beaches,oceans and mountains,among which is the famous Rangitoto volcano.If you like history,you can visit the Auckland Museum,the Auckland War Memorial Museum,the New Zealand National Maritime Museum and so on.If you like shopping,then go to the Queen Street,Parnell Road,and Ponsonby Ro

12、ad and enjoy yourself.If you like nature,One Tree Hill,which is named for its lone Reading tree on top of the hill will not disappoint you.At the foot of the hill,there are crowds of sheep and green grass.All is truly the New Zealand countryside style.If you want to learn about Aucklands education,y

13、ou can visit the University of Auckland.Its one of the most famous universities in the world.Founded in 1883,it has two campuses.Sometimes you have to take a bus to go to different colleges.Auckland is an English-speaking country,so if you want to visit there,youd better learn some English,or youll

14、have to take a translator with you.Welcome to Auckland and enjoy the great natural view and different culture.Task 1:Fill in the information.The city known as the“City of Sails”and the Queen City1.The places for shopping2.The year when the University of Auckland was found3.The language people in Auc

15、kland speak4.The things that you can see at the foot of One Tree Hill5.Auckland The Queen Street,Parnell Road,and Ponsonby Road 1883EnglishCrowds of sheep and green grassGood words and phrases from the passage _Task3 好词好句好词好句Good sentences from the passage _Task4 Write down your opinion or feelings

16、about Auckland.假设上周你校举办了一次题为“我们城市的靓点”的问卷调查，请你根据下面的表格写一篇英文调查报告。要求：1.内容完整，语句连贯，语法准确；2.词数70个左右。写作任务写作任务the bestNameReasonmiddle schoolNo.1 Middle Schoolgood teachers,beautifulhospitalPeoples Hospitalcomfortable beds,friendly servicemovie theaterNew Century Cinemabig screensclothing storeFashion Clothin

17、g Storecheap,good quality1.审题审题想一想，填一填。想一想，填一填。审题审题体裁：体裁：_人称：人称：_时态：时态：_第三人称第三人称 一般现在时、一般过去时一般现在时、一般过去时说明文说明文Where is your city?Can you introduce it to other people?What do you think is the best part of your city?Tell the reasons.How do you feel about your city?What can you do to make it better?2.内容

18、要点内容要点列一列，回答下列问题。列一列，回答下列问题。3.写一写写一写:写初稿写初稿用词方面用词方面:代词主格代词主格,宾格；宾格；名词单复数；名词单复数；动词搭配；副词位置动词搭配；副词位置 句子方面句子方面:篇章方面篇章方面:细节方面细节方面:句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；连词使用连词使用内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理 单词拼写；标点符号；大小写单词拼写；标点符号；大小写 4.4.（查一查）（查一查）请交换习作互相欣赏，用请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔红笔划出对方的划出对方的亮点亮点,并对并对 不足的地方进行适当修改。不足的地方进行适当

19、修改。你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？好呢？根据根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的习上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。作打分。4.同伴互赏同伴互赏我欣赏，我快乐！我欣赏，我快乐！修改习作时可使用这些符号：修改习作时可使用这些符号：优美句子；优美句子；漏词漏词；错处：错处：；删除；删除；语法错误语法错误 G；人称错误人称错误 P；时态错误时态错误 T；拼写错误拼写错误Sp 请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，相互欣赏与修改习作，然后列评价表，相互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习给对方的习作打分。作打分。

20、评分表评分表项目项目标准标准自我自我评价评价同伴评价同伴评价 教师评价教师评价结构（2分）段落合理（1 分）衔接自然(1分)内容（9分）要点齐全（8分）middle school（2分）hospital（2分）theater（2分）clothing store（2分）拓展合理(1分)语言（3分）词汇丰富(1分)句法正确，语言优美(2分)卷面（1分）书写工整（1分）Last week,we did a survey about good places in our city,Zhanjiang.Here are the results.Most of the middle schools are

21、 good,but No.1 Middle School is the best in our city.It has the best teachers and its the most beautiful.Peoples Hospital is the best of all,because it has the most comfortable beds and the friendliest service.New Century Cinema has the biggest screens.The best clothing store is Fashion Clothing Sto

22、re.It has the cheapest and the best quality clothes.I think Zhanjiang is a great city for living and having fun as well.Welcome to my city,Zhanjiang.文章结构完整，条理清楚，采文章结构完整，条理清楚，采用了直接了当的开口方式，用了直接了当的开口方式，“Here are the results.”起到起到了总起全文的作用。运用列举了总起全文的作用。运用列举法，说明了做居住的城市存在法，说明了做居住的城市存在的亮点。的亮点。使用了使用了“the bes

23、t of all,because,the friendliest service,the cheapest and the best quality clothes,great city for living and having fun”等词句，使文等词句，使文章语言丰富，句式多样。章语言丰富，句式多样。在结尾部分，作者做出在结尾部分，作者做出了总结，并欢迎大家到了总结，并欢迎大家到他的城市游玩。体现了他的城市游玩。体现了作者对所在城市的认同作者对所在城市的认同感和归属感。感和归属感。We did a survey about good places in our city,Zhanjian

24、g last week.The results are as follow.Most people think that No.1 Middle School is the best in our city because of the best teachers and students and the most beautiful campus.As for hospitals,Peoples Hospital is considered as the best one.It has the most comfortable beds and the friendliest service

25、.The best cinema is New Century Cinema.Its screens are so big that you think you are in the movie when watching it.Lastly,the best clothing store is Fashion Clothing Store.It has the cheapest and the best quality clothes.Welcome to my city,Zhanjiang.I am sure that you will have a great time here.本文思

26、路清晰，结构完整，本文思路清晰，结构完整，构思新颖。采用开门见山构思新颖。采用开门见山式开头，明确文章大意。式开头，明确文章大意。文章采用了说明文常见的文章采用了说明文常见的列举法，使城市的亮点能列举法，使城市的亮点能清晰地展示在读者眼前。清晰地展示在读者眼前。文章使用了大量的连接词，如：文章使用了大量的连接词，如：because of,as for,and,so.that.,lastly，使每个亮点，使每个亮点过渡自然，无突兀之感。同时，过渡自然，无突兀之感。同时，作者在语言的使用上，也是本文作者在语言的使用上，也是本文的一大亮点，如：的一大亮点，如：The results are as f

27、ollow,.is considered as.,you think you are in the movie when watching it”等句等句子让文章语言丰富，句式多变。子让文章语言丰富，句式多变。在结尾部分，作者对读者发在结尾部分，作者对读者发出了邀请，起到了画龙点睛出了邀请，起到了画龙点睛的作用。的作用。Summary1.How to write a passage about your city.2.Learn some of the writing skills.写写 查查想想 列列评评The happiest people are those who can really appreciate the beauty of life.最幸福的人们懂得欣赏生活的美好。最幸福的人们懂得欣赏生活的美好。Rewrite your article.