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1、第二组：记 叙 文(一一)Dear Lucy,I would like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for Double Ninth Festival.It was the day for the elder people in our culture.We will go and make dumplings and cake with the elderly people here.We will also spend some fun time together

2、 play games,which we hope will make they happy.We should be back around 4:00 on the afternoon.If you are able to come to with us,please let us know so we will wait for you at the school gate at 9:00 in the morning.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua(一一)Dear Lucy,I would like to invite y

3、ou to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for Double Ninth Festival.It was the day for the elder people in our culture.elderly is theWe will go and make dumplings and cake with the elderly people here.We will also spend some fun time together play games,which we hope will ma

4、ke they happy.We should be back around 4:00 on the afternoon.in them playing there cakes If you are able to come to with us,please let us know so we will wait for you at the school gate at 9:00 in the morning.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua and(一一)本文是李华写给露西的邀请信，邀请她一同本文是李华写给露西的邀请信，邀请

5、她一同前往敬老院陪老人们过重阳节。前往敬老院陪老人们过重阳节。1.在在Double Ninth Festival前加前加the 专有名词前须专有名词前须加定冠词加定冠词the，特指重阳节，特指重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。2.was is 客观陈述规律性或习惯性的事情用一客观陈述规律性或习惯性的事情用一般现在时。般现在时。3.elder elderly 修饰名词修饰名词people要用形容词，要用形容词，elderly意为意为“上了年纪的上了年纪的”，符合文意；而，符合文意；而elder意为意为“年纪较大的年纪较大的”，不符合文意；下文也有相，不符合文意；下文也

6、有相同的表达。同的表达。4.cake cakes 因因cake是可数名词，要与是可数名词，要与dumplings并列，故要用复数。并列，故要用复数。5.here there 根据上下文语境，此处应该是指根据上下文语境，此处应该是指“敬老院那儿敬老院那儿”，而不是，而不是“这儿这儿”。6.play playing 由固定结构由固定结构spend time(in)doing sth.意为意为“花费时间做某事花费时间做某事”可知。可知。7.they them 作宾语要用宾格。作宾语要用宾格。8.on in 表表“在下午在下午/上午上午”用用in the afternoon/morning；而表；而表

7、“在具体的某天上在具体的某天上/下午下午”用介词用介词on。9.去掉去掉come后的后的to 此处此处come后并无宾语，故不后并无宾语，故不需要介词需要介词to。10.so and 表顺承关系用并列连词表顺承关系用并列连词and。around adj.大约大约 reply n.答复答复nursing home 敬老院敬老院 invite sb.to do sth.邀请某人做某事邀请某人做某事(二二)Ill spend this summer holiday in the countryside.Although the city is modern and convenience,there

8、re still some problems,such as airs pollution,crowdedness and noise.In the countryside I can enjoy comfortable and quiet life.There,the air is fresh but the water is clean.Trees are green and birds is singing.I can go to boating,fishing and swimming in the lake.Whats worse,I can climb the hills.All

9、this will be interesting and good for your health.Above all,I can learn more about nature.So I wanted to go to the countryside for a change.Im looking forward to the come of my summer holiday.(二二)Ill spend this summer holiday in the countryside.Although the city is modern and convenience,therere sti

10、ll some problems,such as airs pollution,crowdedness and noise.In the countryside I can enjoy comfortable and quiet life.aair convenient There,the air is fresh but the water is clean.Trees are green and birds is singing.I can go to boating,fishing and swimming in the lake.Whats worse,I can climb the

11、hills.more are and All this will be interesting and good for your health.Above all,I can learn more about nature.So I wanted to go to the countryside for a change.Im looking forward to the come of my summer ing want my(二二)本文讲述作者想去乡村度假的原因。本文讲述作者想去乡村度假的原因。1.convenience convenient 作表语要用形作表语要用形容词形式。容词形式

12、。2.airs air 因因air是不可数名词。是不可数名词。3.在在enjoy后加后加a 由固定结构由固定结构enjoy/live/lead alife意为意为“享受享受/过着过着的生活的生活”可知。可知。4.but and 表顺承关系用并列连词表顺承关系用并列连词and。5.is are 因主语因主语birds是复数，故谓语也要是复数，故谓语也要用复数形式。用复数形式。6.去掉去掉go后的后的to 由固定搭配由固定搭配go boating意为意为“(去去)划船划船”可知。可知。7.worse more 根据上下文语境可知，此根据上下文语境可知，此处理应表处理应表“此外此外”，故要用，故要用

13、what more。(注意：注意：whats worse意为意为“更糟糕的是更糟糕的是”)8.your my 根据上下文语境可知，应当是根据上下文语境可知，应当是对作者的健康有利，应用第一人称物主代词对作者的健康有利，应用第一人称物主代词my。9.wanted want 因全文主体时态是一般现因全文主体时态是一般现在时。在时。e coming 固定短语固定短语look forward to的的to为介词，其后要接名词或动名词。为介词，其后要接名词或动名词。crowdedness n.拥挤拥挤 above all 尤其重要的是尤其重要的是learn more about 更多地了解更多地了解 f

14、or a change 换换环境换换环境(三三)What should you do when your parents become angrily?If your parents got mad,try to have a conversation with them about it.Remembering not to shout at them.They usually will try to change.But they will take some times to change because they always get angry,and that is all the

15、y know.You might have to change for your method a couple of times.Do any nice things for your parents that they dont expectlike cooking,doing the dishes,washing clothes,or clean the floors.If this doesnt work,bring in friend that you feel comfortable with,or have him or her help you.(三三)What should

16、you do when your parents become angrily?If your parents got mad,try to have a conversation with them about it.Remembering not to shout at them.Remember get angry They usually will try to change.But they will take some times to change because they always get angry,and that is all they know.You might

17、have to change for your method a couple of times.time it Do any nice things for your parents that they dont expectlike cooking,doing the dishes,washing clothes,or clean the floors.If this doesnt work,bring in friend that you feel comfortable with,or have him or her help you.and acleaning some(三三)本文讲

18、述父母生气的时候，你应该怎本文讲述父母生气的时候，你应该怎么做。么做。1.angrily angry 作表语要用形容词形式。作表语要用形容词形式。2.got get 因本文的主体时态是一般现在因本文的主体时态是一般现在时。时。3.Remembering Remember 祈使句要用祈使句要用动词原形开头。动词原形开头。4.they it 因因it在此作形式主语，后面的不在此作形式主语，后面的不定式才是真正的主语。定式才是真正的主语。5.times time 因因time作作“时间时间”理解时，是理解时，是不可数名词。不可数名词。6.去掉去掉change后的后的for 因因change是及物动词

19、，是及物动词，其后可直接接宾语。其后可直接接宾语。7.any some 肯定句中用肯定句中用some，意为，意为“一一些些”。8.clean cleaning 和前面的和前面的doing,washing并并列。列。9.在在bring in后加后加a 因因friend是可数名词，此处是可数名词，此处意为意为“一个朋友一个朋友”，表泛指。，表泛指。10.or and 表顺承关系用并列连词表顺承关系用并列连词and。expect vt.预料预料 shout at 对对大喊大喊a couple of times 好几次好几次 do the dishes 洗碗洗碗bring in 带来带来 have a

20、 conversation with 和和谈一谈谈一谈(四四)One of my favorite hobbies are backcountry hiking.However,after I go hiking,I make sure to have all of the proper necessities.First,I wore proper clothing and hiking shoes.This may include taking water shoes if I have plans for hiking through streams and rivers or a re

21、liable jacket to keep warmly.Next,I get my family and friends to know I will be going and when I would return.In addition to these item,I take plenty of the food and water.Finally,I always pack emergency supplies include a lighter.You never know when you will be in need for these things.(四四)One of m

22、y favorite hobbies are backcountry hiking.However,after I go hiking,I make sure to have all of the proper necessities.First,I wore proper clothing and hiking shoes.wear before is This may include taking water shoes if I have plans for hiking through streams and rivers or a reliable jacket to keep wa

23、rmly.Next,I get my family and friends to know I will be going and when I would return.where warm will In addition to these item,I take plenty of the food and water.Finally,I always pack emergency supplies include a lighter.You never know when you will be in need for these things.of including items(四

24、四)本文讲述作者徒步旅行前要做的准备。本文讲述作者徒步旅行前要做的准备。1.are is 因主语是因主语是one，故谓语动词用单数。，故谓语动词用单数。2.after before 根据上下文意思可知是根据上下文意思可知是“在在我去徒步旅行前我去徒步旅行前”。3.wore wear 全文的主体时态是一般现在时。全文的主体时态是一般现在时。4.warmly warm 作系动词作系动词keep的表语，用的表语，用形容词。形容词。5.在在to know后加后加where 引导宾语从句。句意：引导宾语从句。句意：让家人和朋友知道我去哪里。让家人和朋友知道我去哪里。6.would will 根据上下文语

25、境和前面的根据上下文语境和前面的I will be going可知此处是指可知此处是指“我将什么时候我将什么时候回来回来”，故用一般将来时。，故用一般将来时。7.item items 由前面的由前面的these可知要用复数。可知要用复数。8.去掉去掉plenty of后的后的the 此处并没有表特指，此处并没有表特指，无需定冠词。无需定冠词。9.include including 因因including是介词，是介词，介词并无形式变化。介词并无形式变化。10.for of 由固定短语由固定短语in need of意为意为“需需要要”可知。可知。backcountry n.边远地区边远地区 st

26、ream n.小溪小溪item n.项目；条款项目；条款 lighter n.打火机打火机pack vt.装；打包装；打包 proper necessities 适当的必需品适当的必需品in addition to 除了除了之外之外 emergency supplies 应急物资应急物资plenty of 许多许多 go hiking 去远足；去徒步旅行去远足；去徒步旅行(五五)My hometown is Brighton where isnt a very big town.Its in the coast about 50 miles from London and has a popu

27、lation of 300,000.Certainly it isnt as interested as London.So the air is a lot of cleaner because theres little pollution here.Therere few factories in Brighton,but not many.So,it isnt easy to find a job there.My father used to working in a factory which shuts down a year ago and my father lost his

28、 job.Therere many hotels and languages schools in the town.In summer the town is full of travelers.My father has decided to open a small gift shop.(五五)My hometown is Brighton where isnt a very big town.Its in the coast about 50 miles from London and has a population of 300,000.Certainly it isnt as i

29、nterested as London.So the air is a lot of cleaner because theres little pollution here.But interesting on which/that Therere few factories in Brighton,but not many.So,it isnt easy to find a job there.My father used to working in a factory which shuts down a year ago and my father lost his job.shut

30、work here aTherere many hotels and languages schools in the town.In summer the town is full of travelers.My father has decided to open a small gift shop.language(五五)本文作者介绍了自己的家乡本文作者介绍了自己的家乡Brighton。1.where which/that 引导定语从句，并在从句引导定语从句，并在从句中充当主语。中充当主语。2.in on 由固定短语由固定短语on the coast意为意为“在海岸线在海岸线上上”可知。

31、可知。3.interested interesting 主语是主语是it，故用，故用interesting。4.So But 根据上下文逻辑关系可知此处显然存根据上下文逻辑关系可知此处显然存在转折关系，故用在转折关系，故用But。5.去掉去掉a lot后的后的of 此处并不是表此处并不是表“很多很多”，而，而a lot放在比较级前表放在比较级前表“得多得多”的意思，故去掉的意思，故去掉of。6.在在few前加前加a 根据后面的根据后面的but not many可知此可知此处应该是指处应该是指“有一些有一些”，而不是，而不是“few(几乎没几乎没有有)”，故在，故在few前加前加a。7.ther

32、e here 作者是介绍自己的家乡，要用作者是介绍自己的家乡，要用here才符合逻辑。才符合逻辑。8.working work 由固定词组由固定词组used to do意意为为“过去曾经过去曾经”可知。可知。9.shuts shut 由后面的由后面的a year ago可知要用过可知要用过去时。去时。10.languages language 通常名词作定语不用通常名词作定语不用复数形式。复数形式。coast n.海岸海岸 used to 过去曾经过去曾经shut down 倒闭倒闭 gift shop 礼品店礼品店lose ones job 失业失业 has a population of

33、有有人口人口(六六)Dear dad and mum,I have been very happy in the school.I work hardly in the school every day.After class,I play with my classmates.I spend a lot time doing my homework.After lunch,I play the ping-pong with my friends.Then,I spend some time read my English note.At six oclock,I have my evenin

34、g class.After that,I had some spare time.At eight oclock,I go to bed.This is a day in the school.Mum,you always tell us “Happiness is vital of our life.”And I want to be happy every day.If you are not happy,call me please or if I am not happy,I will call you either.Yours,Laura(六六)Dear dad and mum,I

35、have been very happy in the school.I work hardly in the school every day.After class,I play with my classmates.I spend a lot time doing my homework.of hard After lunch,I play the ping-pong with my friends.Then,I spend some time read my English note.At six oclock,I have my evening class.After that,I

36、had some spare time.At eight oclock,I go to bed.have notes reading This is a day in the school.Mum,you always tell us “Happiness is vital of our life.”And I want to be happy every day.If you are not happy,call me please or if I am not happy,I will call you either.Yours,Laura too So in me(六六)Laura给自己

37、的父母写信，谈到在学校的学给自己的父母写信，谈到在学校的学习和生活情况。习和生活情况。1.hardly hard 根据语境可知，此处理应是指根据语境可知，此处理应是指“努力学习努力学习”，hard本身就是副词，意为本身就是副词，意为“努力努力地地”，而，而hardly意为意为“几乎不几乎不”，显然不符合上，显然不符合上下文逻辑。下文逻辑。2.在在a lot后加后加of 由固定短语由固定短语a lot of意为意为“很多很多”可知。可知。3.去掉去掉ping-pong前的前的the 在表示在表示“打球打球”时，在时，在球类名词前不加任何冠词。球类名词前不加任何冠词。4.read reading

38、由固定结构由固定结构spend time(in)doing sth.意为意为“花费时间做某事花费时间做某事”可知。可知。5.note notes 因因note是可数名词，此处应用复数，是可数名词，此处应用复数，意为意为“笔记笔记”。6.had have 因此处讲的是因此处讲的是“规律性的动作规律性的动作”，故用一般现在时。故用一般现在时。7.us me 根据上下文逻辑可知，此处应该是指根据上下文逻辑可知，此处应该是指“你经常告诉我你经常告诉我”，故用，故用me。8.of in 因表因表“在生活当中在生活当中”常用介词常用介词in。9.And So 根据两句间的逻辑关系可知，此处显根据两句间的逻

39、辑关系可知，此处显然存在因果关系，故用然存在因果关系，故用So。10.either too 在肯定句中用在肯定句中用too，表，表“我我也也”。vital adj.至关重要的至关重要的 after that 之后之后spare time 空闲时间空闲时间 spend time(in)doing sth.花费时间做某事花费时间做某事(七七)Tommy has a little dog.Her name is Goldier.She is pretty and interested.Tommy loved her very much.The other day,Goldier was out wa

40、lking with Tommy.She cut her paw on a piece of glasses.When they arrived at home,Tommys mother thought that the cut was deeply.He asked Tommy to take Goldier the vet.The vet was very kind,but he gave her a injection.Then he stitched up(缝合缝合)the cut and put on a bandage.Goldier looks so funny as she

41、walks on three legs,holds her paw as if she has been to war!(七七)Tommy has a little dog.Her name is Goldier.She is pretty and interested.Tommy loved her very much.The other day,Goldier was out walking with Tommy.loves interesting She cut her paw on a piece of glasses.When they arrived at home,Tommys

42、mother thought that the cut was deeply.He asked Tommy to take Goldier the vet.to She deep glass The vet was very kind,but he gave her a injection.Then he stitched up(缝合缝合)the cut and put on a bandage.Goldier looks so funny as she walks on three legs,holds her paw as if she has been to war!holding an

43、 and(七七)本文介绍了本文介绍了Tommy的一只可爱的小狗的一只可爱的小狗(Goldier)。1.interested interesting 形容小狗形容小狗(是物是物)有有趣，用趣，用interesting。2.loved loves 主语是主语是Tommy，谓语要用第，谓语要用第三人称单数。三人称单数。3.glasses glass 因因glass作作“玻璃玻璃”理解时是理解时是不可数名词。不可数名词。4.去掉去掉arrived后的后的at 此处此处home是副词，是副词，arrived后面不加后面不加at。5.deeply deep 作表语要用形容词。作表语要用形容词。6.He S

44、he 此处指此处指Tommys mother，故要，故要用用she。7.在在the vet前加前加to 由固定搭配由固定搭配taketo意意为为“把把带去带去”可知。可知。8.but and 表顺承关系用并列连词表顺承关系用并列连词and。9.a an 句中句中injection以元音音素开头，前以元音音素开头，前面的不定冠词要用面的不定冠词要用an。10.holds holding 分析句子成分可知，此分析句子成分可知，此处处hold是非谓语，与逻辑主语是非谓语，与逻辑主语Goldier存在主存在主动关系，故要用现在分词，作伴随状语。动关系，故要用现在分词，作伴随状语。paw n.爪子爪子

45、cut n.伤口伤口vet n.兽医兽医 injection n.注射；打针注射；打针put on a bandage 绑上绷带绑上绷带 has been to war 参加过战争参加过战争(八八)Long ago people used bells more than they did today.The postmen was used to ring a hand bell when they delivered letters.Fire engines had bells instead sirens(警笛警笛).People which sold things came past h

46、ouses,rang a bell and shouting what was for sale.In many country,bells were hung around thenecks of animals.The bells helped owners find lost cows or sheep.Today,at India,animals still wear bells.Now bells are used less because various modern sound-makers have taken its place.Now people try to keep

47、the old bells in schools and churches but that they wont lose their beautifully sounds forever.(八八)Long ago people used bells more than they did today.The postmen was used to ring a hand bell when they delivered letters.Fire engines had bells instead sirens(警笛警笛).of do People which sold things came

48、past houses,rang a bell and shouting what was for sale.In many country,bells were hung around thenecks of animals.The bells helped owners find lost cows or sheep.countries ringing who Today,at India,animals still wear bells.Now bells are used less because various modern sound-makers have taken its p

49、lace.Now people try to keep the old bells in schools and churches but that they wont lose their beautifully sounds forever.beautiful so their in(八八)本文介绍了铃在生活中的使用。本文介绍了铃在生活中的使用。1.did do 由后面的由后面的today可知用一般现在时。可知用一般现在时。2.去掉去掉used to前的前的was 由固定短语由固定短语used to do意为意为“过去常常过去常常”可知。可知。3.在在instead后加后加of 由固定短语

50、由固定短语instead of意为意为“而而不是不是”可知。可知。4.which who 先行词是先行词是people(指人指人)，故要用关，故要用关系代词系代词who。5.rang ringing 分析句子成分可知，此处分析句子成分可知，此处ring作非谓语，且与逻辑主语作非谓语，且与逻辑主语People存在主动关系，存在主动关系，故要用现在分词，与后面的故要用现在分词，与后面的shouting构成并列的构成并列的伴随状语。伴随状语。6.country countries 由前面的由前面的many可知可知要用复数。要用复数。7.at in 表表“在某个国家在某个国家”要用介词要用介词in。8