（全国百强校）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件.ppt

1、高考英语作文的润色与提高高考英语作文的润色与提高专题一：优秀作文的基本特征专题一：优秀作文的基本特征优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征1 1、层次不乱、层次不乱2 2、句式多变、句式多变3 3、亮点若干、亮点若干3 3、巧妙串联、巧妙串联4 4、蠢错不犯、蠢错不犯6 6、整洁卷面、整洁卷面 层次不乱层次不乱开头：第一个要点开头：第一个要点主体：第二个要点主体：第二个要点结尾：第三个要点结尾：第三个要点句式多变句式多变长短变化长短变化主、被动变化主、被动变化主语变化主语变化同义词变化同义词变化同功能句型变化同功能句型变化横向比较变化横向比较变化亮点若干亮点若干高中词汇高

2、中词汇高中常见短语高中常见短语高级句型高级句型各种复合句各种复合句倒装句倒装句强调句型强调句型虚拟语气句型虚拟语气句型非谓语动词结构非谓语动词结构巧妙串联巧妙串联起：起：first of all,to begin with,above all.承：承：in addition,besides.转：转：however,on the other hand.合：合：in my opinion,all in all,in a word.蠢错不犯：蠢错不犯：初中二年级学生就应该掌握的初中二年级学生就应该掌握的基本语言表达能力。基本语言表达能力。1.I very like the book.2.He was

3、 very angrily.3.There have many student in the classroom.4.The car is yellow color.整洁卷面整洁卷面英文书写大方、圆润、自然；英文书写大方、圆润、自然；词与词间距适当词与词间距适当字母大小适当字母大小适当无大面积涂改无大面积涂改不影响交际不影响交际专题二专题二肃清基础语言错误肃清基础语言错误中学生英语写作中常见的中学生英语写作中常见的1414种语言错误：种语言错误：1.1.主谓不一致主谓不一致My father and I likes going fishing by the lake.Large quantit

4、ies of soil has been washed away.2.2.时态、语态混用时态、语态混用Last night,I had enjoyed a party.The painting on the wall damaged seriously.was3.3.句子成分残缺句子成分残缺I stood up and saw there a boy.The young man running in the street.waswas4.4.习惯搭配误用习惯搭配误用I once heard from the animal like this.We passed away the buildin

5、g.ofby5.5.名词单、复数不分名词单、复数不分I made many friend in the summer camp.We can get some informations from the Internet.6.6.动词单、复数不分动词单、复数不分Our teacher often say that success lie in hard work.Mr.Smith,together with some students,are coming to our school.7.7.赘词现象多发赘词现象多发I hope you can return back to our schoo

6、l soon.Well hold a party on next Sunday.8.8.近义词的误用近义词的误用The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform.I quarreled with my teacher about my grades.9.9.基本词汇拼写错误基本词汇拼写错误I flied to New York directly from Beijing.This will be done immediatly.10.10.前后人称不一致前后人称不一致The boy was born

7、 in a poor family but she works hard.We watched a few movies and we loved it.11.11.动词原形作主语动词原形作主语/宾语宾语Take a walk after dinner is very good for you.At that moment,I didnt feel like take a walk.12.12.逻辑主语与主句主语不一致逻辑主语与主句主语不一致Preparing dinner,the doorbell rang.Walking in the street,a car hit an old man

8、.13.13.一个简单句出现两个谓语一个简单句出现两个谓语There was no work to do,he went back home.I received your email,I was very excited.beingWhenand14.14.中式英语中式英语Next week have a party.I sorry you I cant with you go Beijing.有则改之，无则加勉；有则改之，无则加勉；用心则易，无心则难。用心则易，无心则难。专题三：第一反应与克制第一反应专题三：第一反应与克制第一反应他是个好人。他是个好人。第一反应测试：第一反应测试：He i

9、s a good man.generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospitable,easy-going,devoted,open-minded,modest,friendly 对不起，我不能和你一起去北京了。Im sorry that I cant go to Beijing with you.Would you accept my heartfelt apology that I cant make it to Beijing with you as we have planned.I sorry you I ca

10、nt with you go Beijing.fit in adapt to adjust to cope with be used to be accustomed to feel at home 专题四：打动人心的句型专题四：打动人心的句型 和和 打翻人胃的句型打翻人胃的句型 存点钱是很重要的。存点钱是很重要的。There is no denying/It is beyond any dispute that depositing some money in the bank is crucial.Sometimes,whether you have money at hand means

11、 the difference of life or death for a loved one.审题：审题：“十年后的我十年后的我”-“感性的、充满想象的感性的、充满想象的”切忌：套用了太多所谓的切忌：套用了太多所谓的“万能句式万能句式”，破坏了这种，破坏了这种“感性感性”，使之变得，使之变得“太理性太理性”、“太刚太刚”了：了：（1）运用了大量的表示顺序的词句）运用了大量的表示顺序的词句(太过理性太过理性)：Firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally;To start with；Last but not least;My future life is as follo

12、ws.（2）运用了大量的表达强烈观点句式（语气太刚）：）运用了大量的表达强烈观点句式（语气太刚）：I hold the point of view that There is no doubt that I strongly believe that I am firmly convinced that(there will be exciting and wonderful changes in/it gives me a strong body)It goes without saying that What I want to stress is that(health is very

13、important to us)（3）运用了大量的总结、转换、强调、转折等语气、句式，不够得体。All in all,/Generally speaking,As a matter of fact,As for my spare time,As far as I am concerned,I hope become a doctor.When it comes to my own family,it occurs to me that I will have 2 children.It is known to us that family is the most important thing

14、 in our life.On the one hand,on the other hand（4）运用了大量的强调句和倒装句，给人非常生涩的感觉。In my spare time,so active am I that I will go fishing with my family.It is after ten years that（5）在同一篇短文里，堆砌了大量同样的句式：Its I that want to be a teacher;It is I that am fond on children.It is I that like making a lot of friends.It

15、 is famous city that Ill go to（6）中式英语，意思相差较大,或完全不达意。Lover Organize a family I hope my will be little speak English.那些能稍微充满想象的句子，就显得难能可贵：My two sons surrounding me smile like sunshine.On weekends,I will take my family to the beach to have a rest,enjoying the sun rises.go out for a picnic,hugging the nature and strengthening our emotionclever and optimistic,my daughter is going to be the sort of girl who spread sunshine to others through her smile.Love can add delightful color to life.谢谢 谢！谢！