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1、 We are frequently confronted with statement（statements） about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity. Globalization will always have supporters who are blind on(to)the destruction it can cause. One problem that has not yet been addressed is (that)the existing infrastructure and facilities

2、fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists. Children, if grown(growing) up in a multicultural society, are more likely to embrace different cultures and values. Importing goods from overseas might cause a country to depend exceedingly on imports, which mean(s) that it would grad

3、ually lose the control on the market. It would be not (There is no )denying that almost every country has its unique culture or art forms that is different from other countries. Cultural diversity can be viewed both positively and negatively. While some see it as a barrier to effective communication

4、 or a cause of miscommunication, the (去掉 the)others regard it as an asset. It is (an) undeniable fact that the tourism industry has provided a substantial source of income for many countries. I believe that everything has its downside, and the spread of English has a global language in the world is

5、not (no) exception. New immigrants cannot fit into a new environment, (which) can happen very often. Tourism also enables people, not only visitors, but also local dwellers, (to)learn values and features of different cultures. Cross-cultural communication occurs between people living in (the)same co

6、untry but from different cultural backgrounds. In a multi-ethnical society, nationality can (be) a taboo subject and people are embarrassed to talk openly about it. Many donor countries believe that the main obstacle to third-world development is lack of capital and that giving poor countries cash t

7、o invest can spur rapid grow.(growth) The host country provides many social settings for language acquisition to be taken place.(take place) We are not surprising (surprised) to see that in the coming decades, English language learners will account for the majority of the entire school-aged populati

8、on in every part of the world. There can be little doubt that the people who are fluent bilinguals outperform monolingual speakers in the workplace, as the world is increasingly global(globally) connected. The effect globalization has had on culture is immense and diversity.(diverse) During (the) la

9、st decade, there has been much discussion and controversy over the impact of global economic integration. Globalization poses both opportunities and problems for every industry in (on) a world-wide scale. There is an inescapable trend that those economic(economically) developed areas are in the vang

10、uard of a cultural change. The government and the local people have to preserve the original appearance of the local cultures, customs and etiquettes, even though their purpose is meeting (to meet) the expectation of the tourists from all over the world. The easy(ease) of communication and the sprea

11、d of information increase the proportion of economic activity that can operate beyond national borders. Those who speak English as the native language have overt advantage, in large part because they have not (no) difficulty in communicating in the business, scientific and educational worlds. This i

12、s a fast changing world, which(in which) English monolinguals are in danger of being left behind. Globalization accelerates the development of English as (a) global language and vice versa. Community solidarity is being loss (lost) as a result of power concentration in global media companies. An eco

13、nomic recovery can be attained by enlarge (enlarging) the government spending and create (creating) more jobs. There is no denying that universities are required (require) a large amount of funding to increase, maintain and upgrade facilities. There are lots of good, basic reasons that (why) we shou

14、ld build a sustainable moon base. Widespread literacy is fundamental to both social and economical (economic) development of any society. Not surprising(ly), poverty is a problem worthy of concern in every country. The most simple approach to closing the gap between haves and have-nots is applying d

15、ifferent tax rates according to income levels. As (With) the continued development of the charity, more people are concerned whether their donations have reached the right destinations. There has been considerable opposition against making military service compulsory among young people. Internationa

16、l aid provide(provided) to the poor countries will cause those countries to lose their morale and dignity. Health care providers provide excess (excessive) services to those who can pay, and limited services at all to those who are unable to pay. Education in modern knowledge-based economy is one of

17、 the conditions to achieving (achieve) economic growth, when it increases skills. In many western countries, students are exempt from tuition fee(s) over the course of their compulsory education. Because financial hardship is the real source of many family problems, so (去掉because 或so)the government

18、should protect family benefit first. Beneath the streets of a modern city exist (exists) the network of cables, pipes and tunnels required to satisfy the needs of its inhabitants. Cities are investing heavily in public transport, including subway system, in a bid to cut pollution. Having a social en

19、vironment conductive to the creature (creation) and utilization of knowledge is believed to be the key to enhancing the competitiveness of a country and realizing an affluent and comfortable society. Situations might occur which (where) a person who seeks to pursue further education cannot afford it

20、. It remains a problem that in countries such as India, public education in many areas are (is)not available for free due to budget constraints. Although (Despite) the progress in the healthcare sector, there is much scope to develop the accessibility of the service. Evidence suggests that the poor

21、are(去掉 are) fail to seek medical treatment because of the cost. It has been argued that donor countries direct donation creates dependency and corruption, and(that) it has an adverse effect on local production. People are concerned that the persistence of high levels of unemployment has undermined p

22、eoples confident in the economys ability to create employment. Hospitals (that) are under-resources are not in a good position to make health care services readily available to the public. Space exploration enables (us to)broaden our horizon, study our planet from different perspectives and know our

23、 planets better. There are lots of good, basic reasons that (why) we should build a sustainable moon base. Widespread literacy is fundamental to both social and economical (ecomomic)development of any society. If students pay full fees, it will increase (raise) enough finance for universities. Not s

24、urprising (surprisingly), poverty is a problem worthy of concern in every country. The most simple (simplest) approach to closing the gap between haves and have-nots is applying different tax rates according to income levels. As (with) the continued development of the charity, more people are concer

25、ned whether their donations have reached the right destinations. There has been considerable opposition against (to) making military service compulsory among young people. International aid provide (Providing International aid)to the poor countries will cause those countries to lose their morale and

26、 dignity. Health care providers provide excess (excessive)services to those who can pay, and limited services at all to those who are unable to pay. Education in modern knowledge-based economy is one of the conditions to achieving economic growth, when (as)it increases skills. In many western countr

27、ies, students are exempt from tuition fee (fees)over the course of their compulsory education. Because financial hardship is the real source of many family problems, so (去掉 because 或 so)the government should protect family benefit first. Beneath the streets of a modern city exist (exists)the network

28、 of cables, pipes and tunnels required to satisfy the needs of its inhabitants. Cities are investing heavily in public transport, including (the) subway system, in a bid to cut pollution. Having a social environment conductive to the creature(creation) and utilization of knowledge is believed to be

29、the key to enhancing the competitiveness of a country and realizing an affluent and comfortable society. Situations might occur （in） which a person who seeks to pursue further education cannot afford it. It remains a problem that in countries such as India, public education in many areas are (is)not

30、 available for free due to budget constraints. Although (Despite) the progress in the healthcare sector, there is much scope to develop the accessibility of the service. Evidence suggests that the poor are （去掉 are） fail to seek medical treatment because of the cost. It has been argued that donor cou

31、ntries direct donation creates dependency and corruption, and it (可以去掉)has an adverse effect on local production. People are concerned that the persistence of high levels of unemployment has undermined peoples confident （confidence）in the economys ability to create employment. The spread of the Inte

32、rnet has (a) profound influence on education and thought in many countries. The growing use of computers are (is) causing enormous and far-reaching changes in work and the quality of life in both industrialized and developing nations. Automobiles have been mass-produced and sold at a price (an) aver

33、age person could afford. For instance, the washing machine was invented and devised to less (lesson) the drudgery of washing clothes. As the distinctions between home and the workplace fade, more and more people go online from their offices to perform the tasks they are used to doing (used to do)at

34、home. Unemployment in market economies is always a consequence of structural change, which can further trace their(its) root in technological change. Introducing new technologies and replacing old ones is always a highly controversial matter, especially when the cost incur(incurred) is particularly

35、high. Solutions to our problems do not lie in waiting hopefully for new technologies to emerge, but rather (in) using public and private funds to make optimal use of existing technology. The dispose(disposal) of unwanted by-products of industrialization is one of the thorniest problems in developing

36、 countries. In hospitals or on aircraft, mobile phone us is forbidden because (of) its possible interference with communication or other electronic equipments. The use of the Internet is now greater than (that of) television, radio and other media combined. Perhaps one of most far-reaching changes i

37、n the last century is (was) the change from the labor-intense economy to the knowledge-based economy. Despite (Though) television is the dominant entertainment medium across the world, the Internet is gathering momentum. With distance education many working people are possible(likely) to augment the

38、ir careers and personal interests without giving up their jobs. The same as any other mediums(medium), the Internet provides entertainment for people of all ages and tastes. As lifetime employment is dying out and jobs are more scarce(scarcer), people could hardly expect to spend their working lives

39、 at the same company. There are not (no) time and place limitations in online shopping and there are not boundaries, either geographical or political. Because of the rapid evolution of worker skills, training has become a more recurring process than an （a）one-time event. The ultimate financial value

40、 to working at home is that if managed (managing) time well, the homeworker should be able to achieve more during the day than he or she would in a workplace. One of the greatest ironies of the 20 (20th) century is that although many technologies were intended to enhance our well-being, they have un

41、dermined our health over time. The notion that a knowledge-based economy is replacing the industrial economy is not wide (widely) accepted among people. As a general rule, pollution problems increase during the early stages of a countrys industrial development then diminish as(but) increasing indust

42、rial development generates adequate resources to tackle such problems. The allure of computers stems mainly from the fact that it (they)can be used for a wide range of purposes. Of the many machines invented in the last century, none has a great (greater)impact on our daily lives than computers. Man

43、y architects have received wide recognition by fusing classic (classical) architectures with elements of modern art. Given the competitive pressure, not a few young people have fallen into the habit of using drugs, drink (drinking) and smoke(smoking) to relieve stress. Loss of leisure time and famil

44、y disruption are normally recognized as the negative results of extra job hour (hours). When people go shopping, they are not only with desire for consumer goods, but also (with) abstract desires like for the respect or acceptance from other people. It is not (a) coincidence that we now take fewer v

45、acations for shorter periods of time and find the boundaries between work and play increasingly blurred. Despite a growing rate of obesity in developed countries, undernutrition and malnutrition remain the most common nutritional problem(s) in developing nations. Due to work or family commitments, m

46、any people give up exercises habits in mistaken belief (believes)only vigorous exercise or playing sport counts as healthy activity. Fashions may vary significant(ly) within a society according to age, social class, occupation and geography as well as over time. The convenience and widespread availa

47、bility of cars account for its (their)popularity among todays people. When it comes to eating habits, it becomes clear that more is not necessary (necessarily)better. A benefit of eating a balanced diet is (that)you can enjoy your health. Common knowledge is that people are more likely to feel under

48、 stress if they overwork and does(do) not have enough time for rest. Watching films are (is)one of the most popular entertainments and shared by people of different ages, including children, young people, adults or even the old. The benefits of job-hopping are (include)taking on a new challenge, whi

49、ch can be translated into an initiative for self-development, enriched experiences and possibly higher income. Because of economic transform(transformation), many people need immediate reeducation for employment. Overworking links to(is linked to) many adverse health effects, including profound fatigues, back pain, general anxiety, headaches and occupational diseases. At times of rapid change, the quest for (the) latest knowledge is urgent. City dwellers can become more healthy (healthier)if they walk or take public transportation to their destinations and increase their daily exercise