高考英语读后续写教学策略探究课件.pptx

1、A Wise Deer&A Cowardly Tiger 浙江省十校联盟浙江省十校联盟2019年年10月高三联考读后续写月高三联考读后续写富阳中学富阳中学 王璐王璐 Analysis of the textLiterary genre(文体文体):Fable 寓言故事寓言故事Features(特征特征):Tell a short story using simple words and sentences,from which you can learn a lesson.The character can be a person or an animal.续写材料的文体和文体特征小说、童话、

2、寓言、故事语言特征语言的协同性语言表达：主要时态和语态：主要句式摘记：各类描写：修辞：语言表达：语言简洁，表达不复杂（简单句较多）；含一些对话；故事叙述主要时态和语态：一般过去时；主动语态主要句式摘记：The deer was frightened because.(原状从)Fortunately,the tiger was not.(adv,+句子)The deer was trying to.when she heard.(时状从）The cunning jackal was now sure the tigher was.(宾从）各类描写：动作：The young ones wander

3、ed haply here and there.心理：The deer was frieghtened.环境：There were bones of dead animals all over the cave.修辞：拟人(把动物当作人来描写，赋予有生命的动物以人的禀性，使之像人一样地说话，行动，有思想，有感情。)WhoWhere Task I:Read for plotsMother deer and her fawns;a tiger;a jackalin the tigers caveHer reaction?stayed calm and thought of a planMother

4、 deer was trying to lead her fawns out of the cave when she saw the tiger coming back.What happenedto scare the tiger away by pretending to be a fierce animal waiting to kill it for food.Did the plan work?The tiger got frightened and ran away Mother deer clever/smart/intelligent,brave,stay calm in d

5、angerWhile escaping,the tiger came across a jackal,who suggested they go back to the cave to find out the truth.What happenedAgree?didnt want to take a chance;afraid of being left alone to dieJackals proposal?knot their tails together;never leave Agree?agreed unwillinglyWhy?frightened;didnt trust th

6、e jackal.cowardly,timidthe tigerthe jackalcunning(狡猾的)，not reliable in the eyes of the tiger整体阅读，确定故事基本情节who,when,where,what happed,how would the story continue whowhenwherewhat happenedsummarize the storywhoMother deer and her fawns;a tiger;a jackalwhenwhen the mother deer was trying to lead her yo

7、ung ones out of the cavewherein the tigers cavewhat happenedMother deer saw the tiger coming towards the cave.She thought of a plan to scare the tiger away.The tiger came across a jackal who suggested they go back to the cave to find out the truth.In order to convince the tiger,the jackal tied their

8、 tails in a not and walked towads the cave together.summarize the storyOne day when mother deer was trying to lead her young ones out of the cave she saw the tiger coming towards it.Staying calm,she thought of a plan to scare the tiger away.While escaping,the tiger came across a jackal who suggested

9、 they go back to find out the truth.In order to convince the tiger,the jackal tied their tails in a not and then went towards the cave togethe.人物性格分析1.从人物的动作中2.从人物的言语中3.从他人的评价中whotraitswhotraitsMother deerclever/smart/intelligent,brave,stay calm in dangerthe tigercowardly,timidjackalcunning,not reli

10、able in the eyes of the tigherPara.1 The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together.Para.2 The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him.Task III:What to write?What did the deer say that shocked the tiger and convinced him he was cheated by the jackal?Think abo

11、ut what the jackal did to the tiger just now?persuade the tiger to return to the cave;knot their tails together How would the jackal cheat the tiger by doing so?the tigerclever/smart/intelligent,brave,stay calm in dangercowardly,timidMother deer the jackalcunning(狡猾的)，not reliable in the eyes of the

12、 tigerHow frightened would the deer feel when seeing the tiger and the jackal coming?Would the tiger have a peaceful talk with the fierce animal since he was afraid to be eaten by him?Was he easily fooled?If he heard he would be eaten,would he believe it and get scared?Para.1 The deer saw the jackal

13、 and the tiger coming together.Para.2 The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him.Task II:What to write?How did the tiger feel and what would he do?What would happen to the tiger,the jackal and the deer in the end?Theme:intelligence can save one from dangerous situa

14、tions续写情节发展1.1.情节合理、上下文衔接连贯；情节合理、上下文衔接连贯；2.2.已知情节已知情节+第二段开头句推断第二段开头句推断第一段可能的情节发展；第一段可能的情节发展；3.3.人物性格和情节创设要吻合；人物性格和情节创设要吻合；4.4.渲染、升华主题渲染、升华主题 （寓言、心（寓言、心灵鸡汤类的文本）。灵鸡汤类的文本）。sout out the ten wordssout out the ten wordsmain charactersdeer,tiger,jackalwherecavenounsvoice,tails,cowardverbscapture,escapeadje

15、ctivepowerfulQuestions for the continued plotspara 1para 2Questions for the continued plotspara 1para 2The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together.The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him.1.What did the deer say that shocked the tiger and convinced him

16、that he was cheated by the jackal?1.How did the tiger feel and what would he do?2.What the jackal did to the tiger just now?2.What would happen to the tiger,the jackal and the deer in the end?3.How would the jackal cheat the tiger by doing so?关于语言那些事儿1.1.句式单一，只会简单句；句式单一，只会简单句；2.2.语法错误严重，句不成句；语法错误严重，

17、句不成句；3.3.词汇严重缺乏，词不达意；词汇严重缺乏，词不达意；4.4.中式英语，缺乏地道表达；中式英语，缺乏地道表达；5.5.标点混乱，往往一逗到底。标点混乱，往往一逗到底。1.1.地道的语言输入，阅读地道的语言输入，阅读原文、原文、原著，原著，培养语感和文学修养；培养语感和文学修养；2.2.语言微技能训练；语言微技能训练；3.3.好词好句摘抄，分类整理；好词好句摘抄，分类整理；读写续地道的语言输入，阅读地道的语言输入，阅读原文、原文、原著，原著，培养语感和文学修养；培养语感和文学修养；语言微技能训练语言微技能训练语言微技能训练语言微技能训练语言微技能训练语言微技能训练语言微技能训练语言微

18、技能训练语言微技能训练语言微技能训练高考英语读后续写教学策略探究-(共64张PPT)免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt高考英语读后续写教学策略探究-(共64张PPT)免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt语言微技能训练语言微技能训练从句子仿写说起高考英语读后续写教学策略探究-(共64张PPT)免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt高考英语读后续写教学策略探究-(共64张PPT)免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课

19、ppt基本学情基本学情语法基础很差，句子结构意识薄弱平时很忙，没时间看好书好文章肚子里没货，积累量少，流于表面高考英语读后续写教学策略探究-(共64张PPT)免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt高考英语读后续写教学策略探究-(共64张PPT)免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费课件优秀ppt公开课ppt基本操作：基本操作：选取典型句子作为仿写对象分析句子，划出句子主要成分用该句子框架完成给定语言的翻译翻译句子，完成句子框架结构式用该句子框架学生自主完成新句子的创造高考英语读后续写教学策略探究-(共64张PPT)免费课件下载免

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