高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文公开课课件定稿.pptx

1、Summary WritingWhat is a summary?A summary is a brief statement that gives only the main points of sth,not the details(牛津高阶英汉双解词典)How much do you know about summary writing?普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数词数少于少于4040的和的和多余多余8080的，的，从从总分中减去总分中减去2 2分分考试说明中评分标准规定

2、概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档（21-25points）：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。complete(内容完整内容完整)coherent(衔接连贯衔接连贯)correct(语言正确语言正确)评分原则concise(用词简洁用词简洁)60词左右词左右complete correct coherent concise “4C”principle(“4C”原则原则)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文P

3、PT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】How to write a good summary?1.Read 2.Paraphrase 3.Polish4.Revisestructure,key pointsrewrite in your own wordsmake it coherentspelling、grammar、vocabulary、words、punctuation（标点）（标点）高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(

4、Para 1)These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush.It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry.However,its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文

5、PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】(Para 2)The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of making mistakes in a rush.When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry,they cant make a sound decision and probably regret later.As the saying goes,“Haste makes waste.”We should th

6、ink carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly.We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.(Para 3)Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.For example,taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane.However,taking

7、 a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends.Besides,it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way.On the contrary,being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】

8、(Para 4)Finally,slower life pace provides better health conditions for us.As is known to all,taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress.People think if they are not in a hurry,they will become a loser and that annoys them.But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and

9、mentally.According to some studies,people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases,tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense,even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter.(Para 5)In short,working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make ou

10、r society more advanced.Yet,much stress cant bring enjoyment,friends and health,which are much more important than money and other material advantages.Therefore,take your time and live your life at a slower pace.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Step 1:Readread for

11、structure Skim the passage and answer the following questions.Q1:Is it the passage a(an)A.narration(记叙文)B.exposition(说明文)C.argumentation(议论文)Q2:How many parts can the passage be divided into?A.3(para1;para2-4;para5)B.4(para1;para2-3;para4-5)C.2(para1;para2-5)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型

12、“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Step 1:ReadSupporting ideas:Conclusion:Topic:Argumentation(议论文）议论文）Para1Para2-Para4Para5高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Step 1:Read read for key pointsUnderline the topic sentence or key points of each paragraphfocus on the first sentenc

13、e and pay special attention to such words as:however,on the contrary,but,yet,therefore高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】(Para 1)These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush.It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry.However,its bet

14、ter for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.Step 1:Read(for key points)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Step 1:Read(for key points)(Para 2)The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry

15、is the possibility of making mistakes in a rush.When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry,they cant make a sound decision and probably regret later.As the saying goes,“Haste makes waste.”We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly.We should not make mist

16、akes by doing work hurriedly.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Step 1:Read(for key points)(Para 3)Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.For example,taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane.However,ta

17、king a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends.Besides,it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way.On the contrary,being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开

18、课课件】Step 1:Read(for key points)(Para 4)Finally,slower life pace provides better health conditions for us.As is known to all,taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress.People think if they are not in a hurry,they will become a loser and that annoys them.But being in a hurry can h

19、urt people both physically and mentally.According to some studies,people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases,tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense,even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文P

20、PT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Step 1:Read(for key points)(Para 5)In short,working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced.Yet,much stress cant bring enjoyment,friends and health,which are much more important than money and other material advantages.Therefore,take your tim

21、e and live your life at a slower pace.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry.However,its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.got accustomed tol

22、ive a slower life策略策略2 2：简化句子：简化句子 Although people have got accustomed to being in a hurry,leading a slower life is better.策略策略3 3：句型转换：句型转换 Although people have got accustomed to being in a hurry,its better to live a slower life.Step 2:Paraphrase策略策略1 1：同义转换：同义转换高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考

23、英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of making mistakes in a rush.Step 2:Paraphraseslow downcommitting errors The main reason for slowing down is to reduce the chance of committing errors.chance高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿pp

24、t【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Step 2:ParaphraseA slow pace of lifeslowing down A slower pace of life allows people to have more opportunities to enjoy lifewin/get/have Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.On the contrary,being in a hurry will make us lose ch

25、ances of enjoying our lives.opportunities More opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace of life.策略策略5 5：合并句子：合并句子策略策略6 6：语态转换：语态转换策略策略4 4：反义转换：反义转换高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Some strategies to use to paraphrase策略1：同义转换策略5：简化句子策略4：句型转换策略2：反义转换策

26、略6：合并句子策略3：语态转换words(单词层面单词层面)sentences(句子层面句子层面)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Finally,slower life pace provides better health conditions for us.But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally.Step 2:Paraphraseofferspsychologically Finally,bett

27、er health condition physically and psychologically is offered by a slower life pace.slowing down can help Finally,better health condition physically and psychologically is what a slower life pace offers.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Therefore,take your time and

28、live your life at a slower pace.Step 2:Paraphrase Therefore,lets take a slower life from now on高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Step 3:Polish make it coherent by adding some connectives常见连接词：转折：but,yet,however,though因果：thus,therefore并列：firstly/secondly/lastly举例：for

29、 example/such as对比：on the contrary,by contrast结论：in short,in conclusion 高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Althogh people have got accustomed to being in a hurry,leading a slower life is better.Step 3:PolishThe main reason for slowing down is to reduce the chance of

30、committing errors.More opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace of life.Finally,better health condition physically and psychologically is what a slower life pace offers.Therefore,lets take a slower life from now onFirstly,Secondlyly,make it coherent by adding some connectives高考英语新题型“

31、概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Despite being accustomed to being in a hurry,people are recommended to lead a slower life.(要点1)Firstly,slowing down reduces the chance of committing errors.(要点2)Secondly,More opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace of life.

32、(要点3)Finally,better health condition physically and psychologically is also what a slower life pace offers.(要点4)Therefore,lets take a slower life from now on(要点5)(63w)Step 4:Revise4“C”:complete,concise coherent,correct 高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】概要写作（满分25分）阅读

33、下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para 1)Getting rid of dirt,in the opinion of most people,is a good thing.However,there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.Time for practice高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】(Para 2)In the early 16th century,people thought that dirt on

34、the skin was a means to block out disease,as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in.A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538,the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the king of England in 1546.

35、Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry IV,King of France,was famously dirty.Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath,the king ordered that,to avoid the attack of disease,the nobleman should not go out.(Para 3)Though the belief in the

36、 of dirt was long-lived,dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century.Scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt is good to health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet,it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved bey

37、ond science since World War.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea;clothes need to be whiter than white,cloths ever softer,surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt,however,gone too far?(Para 4)Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children

38、 off touching dirt,which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary,Mary Ruebush,an American immunologist(免疫学家),encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter position is gaining some ground.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作

39、”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】(Para 1)Getting rid of dirt,in the opinion of most people,is a good thing.However,there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.Step 1:Read高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】(Para 2)In the early 16th century,people thought that dirt on the skin

40、 was a means to block out disease,as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in.A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538,the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the king of England in 1546.Thus beg

41、an a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry IV,King of France,was famously dirty.Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath,the king ordered that,to avoid the attack of disease,the nobleman should not go out.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题

42、型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】(Para 3)Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived,dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century.Scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt is good to health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing

43、 disease.Yet,it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea;clothes need to be whiter than white,cloths ever softer,surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt,however,gone too far?高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议

44、论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】(Para 4)Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt,which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary,Mary Ruebush,an American immunologist(免疫学家),encourages children to play in the

45、 dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter position is gaining some ground.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】However,there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.Step 2:ParaphraseIn the early 16th century,people thought that dirt on the skin was a mea

46、ns to block out diseaseAttitudes differ hugely nowadaysencourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter position is gaining some ground.dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century.scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt

47、is good to health.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Step 3:Polish常见连接词：转折：but,yet,however,though因果：thus,therefore并列：firstly/secondly/lastly举例：for example/such as对比：on the contrary,by contrast结论：in short,in conclusion 高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议

48、论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】Step 4:ReviseOne possible version:People have mixed opinions toward dirt.In the early 16th century,people of some European countries,France,for example,believed that dirt on the skin could prevent people from getting ill.However,Since the 18th century,people have been told that wa

49、shing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.But now some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help make our immune system strong.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】ConclusionWhat is a summary?What are the steps to write a summary?What strategies can we u

50、se to paraphrase?What is“4C”principle?It is a brief statement that gives only the main points of sth,not the details 策略1：同义转换策略2：反义转换策略3：语态转换策略4：句型转换策略5：简化句子策略6：合并句子高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件】高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ppt【公开课课件