高考英语作文写作技巧详解课件.pptx

1、2018年一卷 介绍（中国做客礼仪）二卷 通知（通知观看英文短片）三卷 介绍（校体育运动情况）2016年一卷 求助信（请外教修改申请函）二卷 邀请函（请英国朋友为摄影展提供稿件）三卷 道歉信（因故不能和留学生朋友去书店）2015年一卷 约稿件（“外国文化”栏目向美国朋友约稿）二卷 邀请函（邀请外教去养老院）三卷 约稿件（“外国文化”栏目向美国朋友约稿）2017年一卷 通知（下次汉语课安排）二卷 邀请函（请外教参观剪纸展）三卷 邀请函（同上）2019年一卷 申请函（做志愿者）二卷 通知（参加比赛）三卷 邀请函（英国朋友参加音乐节）应用文154236 感谢信 建议信 邀请函 通知 道歉信 申请函1

2、写作要点：人们在交往中常需要相互致谢，收到别人赠送的礼物，得到别人的帮助、受到别人的慰问，都应该表示感谢。感谢信是人们常用的一种感谢方式。感谢信最主要的特点是真诚。缺乏真挚的感情答谢他人，收信人将对你的谢意产生怀疑，感谢的目的也就失去了。因此，写感谢信首先得真心诚意。感谢信另一个特点是具体。写感谢信切忌泛泛而谈，而应着重于具体的感谢事由。其次一个特点是及时。收到别人礼物、得到别人帮助，应及时写信予以答谢。否则，人家会对你的谢意大打折扣。收到他人赠送的礼物应当及时写封感谢信，感谢信除了应写得真诚、具体、及时外，还应当特别提及所收礼物的具体内容，否则，泛泛而谈，使人觉得你不够真诚。为此，当你写感谢

3、信时，应这样写：“thank you for your beautiful roses.”(谢谢您送的美丽的玫瑰花。)；而不要笼统地写上“thank you for your beautiful gift.”(谢谢您送给我的漂亮礼物。)，这样，使人觉得你既礼貌，又诚心，从而真正达到交往的目的。结 构第一段第二段第三段表达感谢之情并说明原因细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望假如你是高一学生李华，通过半年的学习，你的英语有了一定的提高，想对你的老师Mr.Li表示感谢，并提出自己在学习上存在的问题，同时也想给你的英语老师提些建议，所以在放假前发一个E-mail给Mr.Li。信的内容应

4、包括以下几个方面：1）感谢英语老师半年来的辛勤工作2）你在英语学习上的进步3）自己在学习中的问题，如单词记不住，语法怎么学等4）对老师的教学建议，如尽可能用英语授课等注意：1）不要逐条翻译，应适当发挥 2）字数为120左右 To begin with,I want to thank you to your helping.You have teached me a lot of things about English.In this term,I feel interested in EnglishTo begin with,I want to thank you for your help

5、ing.You have taught me a lot of things about English.In this term,I feel more interested in English.To begin with,I want to thank you sincerely for your devoted teaching and considerate guidance.You have taught me so much about English that I become more interested in English in this term.Can you he

6、lp me to work out this problems so that I can improve my English.First.I cant write words exactly.In many times,I can read the words but I cant spell it.Then I dont know how to learn English grammers.If you can help me to work out these questions,my English will have a great progress.Can you help me

7、 to work out my problems so that I can improve my English.First.I cant write words correctly.For many times,I can read the words but I cant spell them.Then I dont know how to learn English grammar.If you can help me to work out this questions,my English will have greater progress.However,I do have s

8、ome puzzles which urgently need your help.First.I cant write words correctly.For many times,I can read the words but cant spell them correctly.Besides,English grammar is another challenge to me,which always makes me confused.With your help,my English will make greater progress.All in all,may I give

9、you some advice about teaching?If I were you I will say more English in class.All in all,may I give you some advice about teaching?If I were you I will say more English in class.All in all,may I give you some advice about teaching?If I were you I would speak more English in class.By the way,may I ha

10、ve the honor to give you my humble suggestion about teaching?It seems to me that it would be more effective and constructive if you could speak English more often in class,by which we will get more opportunity to improve our listening skills.Dear Mr.Li,How time flies!I have been your students for ne

11、arly half a term.To begin with,I want to thank you sincerely for your devoted teaching and considerate guidance.You have taught me so much about English that I become more interested in English in this term.However,I do have some puzzles which urgently need your help.First,I cant write words correct

12、ly.For many times,I can read the words but cant spell them correctly.Besides,English grammar is another challenge to me,which always makes me confused.Only with your help will my English make greater progress.By the way,may I have the honor to give you my humble suggestion about teaching?It seems to

13、 me that it would be more effective and constructive if you could speak English more often in class,by which we will get more opportunity to improve our listening skills.Your sincerely LiHua 1.I havent seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very very much.I am writing to e

14、xpress my sincere thanks/gratitude for.2.Thank you so much for 3.I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for.4.Im grateful to you for.5.I truly appreciate your.6.Words fail to convey my gratitude to you.Useful sentence structures2建议信写作攻略写作攻略建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告

15、。建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要礼貌当先。理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此，建议信要写的简明扼要，目的明确，具有合理因此，建议信要写的简明扼要，目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。性和说服力。建议信的写作：这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。这

16、类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。篇章结构：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌是读者能接受。注意事项：语言要委婉，礼貌，顾及对方感受。建议信开头常用句式（照应材料，表明写作意图）1.After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that.2.I am very glad to hear that you want to.3.I kno

17、w you have trouble in.after reading your letter.4.I am writing to you for the purpose of.5.You have asked me for my advice with regard to.and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions.表达建议：连词first,firstly,secondly,then,after that,besides,whats more,meanwhile,last but not least1.I think it would be

18、 more beneficial if you could.2.I would like to suggest/recommend that.3.If I were you,I would.4.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.5.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you can.建议信结尾常用句式：1.I believe you will take my advice into consideration/accou

19、nt.2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions useful/helpful/practical3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.(就这一点而言）4.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.5.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.审题很重要！假如你是李华，你的美国笔友MikeMike来信表达了对

20、中国古诗的浓厚兴趣，并询问有关学习方法。请给MikeMike写一封建议信。注意：1.1.词数不少于100 100 2.2.可适当增加细节，使内容丰富，行文连贯Dear Mike,Im glad to know that you have developed a keen interest in classical Chinese poetry.Its my pleasure to share with you some advice about poetry learning.I hope you will find these suggestions practical and useful

21、.Looking forward to your good news.Yours,Li Hua假定你是李华。你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你给主编(Editor-in-Chief)写信，建议刊登指导英语学习的文章。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Editor-in-Chief,Im a regular/loyal Chinese reader of your newspaper.Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror.I hope that you c

22、an take my suggestions into consideration.Thank you!Yours Sincerely.Li HuaDear Jack，Sorry to hear that you have some problems with your parents.Hope my suggestion will help you.Wish you a pleasant summer.Your Li Hua假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。De

23、ar_,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on .First,it is important to .As youll .Then,it also helps if you .Besides,it should be a good idea to .Because .Last but not the least,I think it would be more beneficial if you could .In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions usefu

24、l.Looking forward to your early reply.yours,One possible version：Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fel

25、low students.Then,it also helps to watch TV programs and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also make more Chinese friends.The

26、y will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua3邀请函文章结构文章结构1.（自我介绍）活动名称（自我介绍）活动名称+发出邀请发出邀请2.活动具体内容和安排活动具体内容和安排3.参加活动能给受邀人（邀请人）带参加活动能给受邀人（邀请人）带来的好处来的好处4.表明期待以及联系方式表明期待以及联系方式1.首先表明邀请对方参加的意图以及会议或活动的名称、时间、地点;2.然后要对被邀请者的威望和学术水平等表示推崇和赞赏

27、，表明如果被邀请者能够接受邀请，会给会议或者活动带来很好的影响;3.接着要说明会议或活动的相关事宜，最好是能引起对方兴趣的事宜;4.最后不能忘了表达希望对方能够参加的诚意;最后还要请收信人对发出的邀请做出反馈，如确认接受邀请。常用句型常用句型1.The.will be held on.2.The activity is in honor of.3.You can also bring.together with you.4.May I have the honor of your accompany at dinner?5.We sincerely/faithfully hope you ca

28、n attend.6.You will be my most respected guest to come to.7.Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.8.Please let me know soon if you decide to come.9.I shall be much obliged by a reply at your convenience.假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）请给外教露西写

29、封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间年；2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。2015年高考二卷有高度，有深度、有温度；结构紧凑，衔接紧密。有高度，有深度、有温度；结构紧凑，衔接紧密。范文优化背诵多样性的方法1-句型的积累 感谢的句型thank sb for sth give/express/voice thanks to sbbe thankful to sb for sth sb appreciate sthgive ones appreciation to sb for sthbe grateful to sb for sthshow gratitude to sb for sth

30、be indebted to sb对某人感激的 owe a debt of gratitude to sb for sth 因某事欠某人的情I am happy to hear that you are interested in Chinese classical poetry.I am delighted take interest in are glued to 目不转睛地盯着 对.感兴趣are fond of fall in love with are crazy about 长时间玩网络游戏：Playing computer games for a long time Spendin

31、g a long time in playing computer games Applying too much time to playing computer games Being addicted to computer games Being exposed to computer games for a long time 语言多样性的方法 2 -Paraphrase:1.替换为单词替换为单词 替换为短语替换为短语上网 surf the internet同义替换 surf the web 位置替换 on the internet同源替换 get online具体例子 watch

32、movies play gameshave access to the internet use internet servicehave internet connection 多样性的方法3同义词、近义词的积累 important vital essential significant crucial think believe claim consider figure outNowadays currently at present now these days recently different various variety多样性的方法3替换为解释性的句子不忘初心remain t

33、rue to our original purposeNever forget the founding missionsNever forget why you startStick to your original goals 句式的多样性1.主动语态和被动语态的互相替换Several computer programs can be used to solve this problem.2.使用“there be”变体句型，含有定语从句或者分词的复杂句There are several computer programs that can be used to solve this problem.3.定语从句，分词和插入语的互相替换You had better read more poems.Without this,you will never know what they mean.You had better read more poems,without which,you will never know what they mean.4.倒装句 only 倒装5.词汇并列，增加容量 Not only but also as well as