高考英语作文专题读后续写一公开课3课件.pptx

1、读后续读后续写专题写专题一一Continuation Writing读后续写读后续写 提供一段提供一段350350词以内的语言材料，要词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料所给段落求考生依据该材料所给段落开头语开头语和所标和所标示示关键词关键词进行续写（进行续写（150150词左右），将其词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。和结构完整的短文。-考试说明考试说明01 读后续写高考评分标准读后续写高考评分标准一一.评分原则：评分原则：1.1.本题总分为本题总分为2525分，按分，按5 5个档次给分。个档次给分。2.2.评分时，先根据

2、所续写短文的评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容内容和和语言语言初步确定其所属档次，初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.3.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：（1 1）与所给）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；（2 2）内容的）内容的丰富性丰富性和对所标出和对所标出关键词语关键词语的应用情况；的应用情况；（3 3）应用语法结构和词汇的）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性丰富性和准确性；（4 4）上下文的）上下文的连贯性连贯性；4.4.拼写与标点符号是

3、语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。对交际的影响程度予以考虑。5.5.如书写较差，以至影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次如书写较差，以至影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。6.6.词数少于词数少于130130的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2 2分。分。第五档第五档（2125）与所给短文与所给短文融洽度高融洽度高，与所提供，与所提供各段落开头语各段落开头语衔接合理衔接合理。内容丰富内容丰富，应用了，应用了5个以上短文个以上短文中标出的关键词语。中标出的关键词语。所使用所使用语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇丰富、准丰富、准

4、确，可能有些许错误，但完全不确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。影响意义表达。有效使用了有效使用了语句间的连接成分语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文使所续写短文结构紧凑结构紧凑。二二.评分标准评分标准内容（丰富合理）语言（准确生动）思维（严密连贯）02续写体裁：记叙文续写体裁：记叙文记叙文怎么读记叙文怎么读一一.读记叙文要素读记叙文要素5W和和1H“who,what,where,when,why,how”Who is it about?What happens?Where does it happen?When does it happen?Why does it happen?How do

5、es it happen?高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】案例案例1 1：2019 2019期末考读后续写期末考读后续写 5W和和1H A light drizzle(毛毛雨毛毛雨)was falling as my sister Jill and I ran out of the Church,eager to get home and play with the presents that Santa Claus had left for us and our baby si

6、ster,Sharon.Across the street was a gas station where the bus would stop.It was closed for Christmas,but I noticed a family standing in the rain,huddled(挤挤)together.I wondered briefly why they were there,but soon forgot about them.When we got home,there was hardly time to enjoy our presents because

7、we had to go off to our grandparents house for our big dinner.As we drove by the closed gas station,I noticed the family were still there.My father was driving very slowly.Suddenly,he U-turned in the middle of the road and said,“Those people at the gas station have got children.Its Christmas!I cant

8、stand it!”When my father pulled into the gas station,I saw there were five of them:the parents and three children-two girls and a small boy.Jill,Sharon,and I stared at the children.and they stared back at us.“You waiting for the bus?”my father asked.The man said that they were going to Birmingham,wh

9、ere he had a brother and prospects(希望希望)of a job.“Well,youre getting wet.There is a cover and some benches(长长凳凳)in the next bus stop in Winborn,”my father said,“Ill drive you up there.”They climbed into the car.They had no luggage,only the clothes they were wearing.My father asked the children if Sa

10、nta Claus had found them yet.Three sad faces gave him the answer.“Well,”my father said,winking(眨眼眨眼)at my mother,“when I saw Santa this morning,he told me he was having trouble finding all kids and he asked me if he could leave your presents at my house.Well just go and get them before I take you to

11、 Winborn.”高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】WhoWhoWhenWhenWhereWhereWhatWhatWhyWhyHowHow案例案例1 1：2019 2019期末考读后续写期末考读后续写 5W和和1H We&a familyWe&a family-My father&the man-My father&the manChristmasChristmasat the gas station;at our house;in the carat the gas stat

12、ion;at our house;in the carstopped to help the familystopped to help the familyParagraph 1:When we stopped at our house,the three children ran through the front door.Paragraph 2:Back in the car,on the way to Winborn,my father asked the man if he had money for the bus to Birmingham.themetheme?高考英语作文专

13、题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】02续写体裁：记叙文续写体裁：记叙文二二.读情读情节节BeginningClimaxEndingDevelopmentInciting incident：引起故事矛盾或冲突引起故事矛盾或冲突(conflict)的事件的事件;Rising action：围绕冲突故事主人公采取一系列的行动围绕冲突故事主人公采取一系列的行动;Falling action：冲突向得以解决的方向发展冲突向得以解决的方向发展;Resolution：冲突得到了解决冲突得到了解决;Develo

14、pment:高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】案例案例2 2：During a bullfight,a drunk suddenly wandered into the middle of the ring.The crowd began to shout,but the drunk was unaware of the danger.The bull was busy with the matador at the time,but it suddenly caught sigh

15、t of the drunk who was shouting rude remarks and waving a red cap.Apparently sensitive to criticism,the bull forgot all about the matador and charged at the drunk.The crowd suddenly grew quiet.The drunk,however,seemed quite sure of himself.When the bull got close to him,he clumsily stepped aside to

16、let it pass.The crowd broke into cheers and the drunk bowed.By this time,however,three men had come into the ring and they quickly dragged the drunk to safety.Even the bull seemed to feel sorry for him,for it looked on sympathetically until the drunk was out of the way before once more turning its a

17、ttention to the matador.高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】During a bullfight,a drunk suddenly wandered into the middle of the ring.The crowd began to shout,but the drunk was unaware of the danger.The bull was busy with the matador at the time,but it suddenly c

18、aught sight of the drunk who was shouting rude remarks and waving a red cap.Apparently sensitive to criticism,the bull forgot all about the matador and charged at the drunk.The crowd suddenly grew quiet.The drunk,however,seemed quite sure of himself.When the bull got close to him,he clumsily stepped

19、 aside to let it pass.The crowd broke into cheers and the drunk bowed.By this time,however,three men had come into the ring and they quickly dragged the drunk to safety.Even the bull seemed to feel sorry for him,for it looked on sympathetically until the drunk was out of the way before once more tur

20、ning its attention to the matador.BeginningBeginning高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】During a bullfight,a drunk suddenly wandered into the middle of the ring.The crowd began to shout,but the drunk was unaware of the danger.The bull was busy with the matador a

21、t the time,but it suddenly caught sight of the drunk who was shouting rude remarks and waving a red cap.Apparently sensitive to criticism,the bull forgot all about the matador and charged at the drunk.The crowd suddenly grew quiet.The drunk,however,seemed quite sure of himself.When the bull got clos

22、e to him,he clumsily stepped aside to let it pass.The crowd broke into cheers and the drunk bowed.By this time,however,three men had come into the ring and they quickly dragged the drunk to safety.Even the bull seemed to feel sorry for him,for it looked on sympathetically until the drunk was out of

23、the way before once more turning its attention to the matador.developmentdevelopment高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】During a bullfight,a drunk suddenly wandered into the middle of the ring.The crowd began to shout,but the drunk was unaware of the danger.The

24、bull was busy with the matador at the time,but it suddenly caught sight of the drunk who was shouting rude remarks and waving a red cap.Apparently sensitive to criticism,the bull forgot all about the matador and charged at the drunk.The crowd suddenly grew quiet.The drunk,however,seemed quite sure o

25、f himself.When the bull got close to him,he clumsily stepped aside to let it pass.The crowd broke into cheers and the drunk bowed.By this time,however,three men had come into the ring and they quickly dragged the drunk to safety.Even the bull seemed to feel sorry for him,for it looked on sympathetic

26、ally until the drunk was out of the way before once more turning its attention to the matador.climaxclimax高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】During a bullfight,a drunk suddenly wandered into the middle of the ring.The crowd began to shout,but the drunk was unaw

27、are of the danger.The bull was busy with the matador at the time,but it suddenly caught sight of the drunk who was shouting rude remarks and waving a red cap.Apparently sensitive to criticism,the bull forgot all about the matador and charged at the drunk.The crowd suddenly grew quiet.The drunk,howev

28、er,seemed quite sure of himself.When the bull got close to him,he clumsily stepped aside to let it pass.The crowd broke into cheers and the drunk bowed.By this time,however,three men had come into the ring and they quickly dragged the drunk to safety.Even the bull seemed to feel sorry for him,for it

29、 looked on sympathetically until the drunk was out of the way before once more turning its attention to the matador.endingending高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】03情节的构思情节的构思一一.根据记叙文要素根据记叙文要素二二.根据故事线索根据故事线索三三.根据中心矛盾根据中心矛盾案例三案例三：It was one of the hottest days o

30、f the dry season.We had not seen rain in almost a month.The crops were dying.Cows had stopped giving milk.The streams were long gone back into the earth.If we didnt see some rain soon,we would lose everything.It was on this day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the only miracle

31、(奇迹奇迹)I have ever seen in my life.高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】I was making lunch for the family in the kitchen when I saw my six-year old son,Billy,walking toward the woods.I could only see his back.He wasnt walking in his usual way.He was obviously walk

32、ing with a great effort,trying to be as still as possible.Minutes after he disappeared into the woods,he came running out again toward the house.I went back to making sandwiches,thinking that whatever he had been doing was completed.Moments later,however,he was once again walking in that unusual way

33、 toward the woods.This activity went on for an hour.Finally,my curiosity got the best of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked,being very careful not to spill the water he carried.I followed him secretly as he went into the

34、 woods.Branches slapped(拍打拍打)his little face but he did not try to avoid them.He might have a much higher purpose,I thought.As I came closer,I saw the most amazing sight.Several large deer stood in front of him.Billy walked right up to them,at the sight of which I almost screamed for him to get away

35、.A huge buck(雄鹿雄鹿)was dangerously close.But the buck didnt threaten him nor even move as Billy knelt down.And then I saw a tiny baby deer lying on the ground,obviously suffering from thirst and heat,lift its head with great effort to drink the water in my boys hands.高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件

36、【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】Para.1 When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house._Para.2 Instead of lecturing him like his father,I decided to help him._注意注意:1.1.所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150150词左右；词左右；2.2.应使用应使用5 5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键短语个以上短文中标有下划线的关键短语;3.3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

37、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.4.请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Continue the story with the beginning of the first sentence of the following paragraphs.高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】When&WhereWhoWhat/howWhyPara.4When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run b

38、ack to the house._Para.5Instead of lecturing him like his father,I decided to help him._ I Billyhot day without rain for a long timekitchen woods make lunch,see Billyfollow himcuriouswalk towardscupped waterfeed baby deersuffering from thirst and heat一一.要素分要素分析析高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】高

39、考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT-3（22页）-PPT执教课件【推荐】PlotStory beginningdevelopmentclimax(When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.)ending(Instead of lecturing him like his father,I decided to help him.)One of the hottest days of the dry season，I saw Billy walk towards the woods.I followed Bi

40、lly and saw how Billy overcome difficulty to feed water to baby deer.二二.情节分析情节分析 What did Billy run back to the house?What happened next?How did his father lecture him?How did Billy feel?Central conflict How did I comfort and help Billy?Whats the final ending?Did it rain in the end?Why?Para.When&Whe

41、reWhoWhat/howWhyPara 4Para.4When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house._Para.5Instead of lecturing him like his father,I decided to help him._ father Billyhot day without rain for a long timekitchenlecture Billyblame Billylack water,waste water,annoyedhang his head,crysad三三.情节构

42、思情节构思Para.When&WhereWhoWhat/howWhyPara 5Para.4When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house._Para.5Instead of lecturing him like his father,I decided to help him._hot day without rain for a long timekitchenwoods I Billycomfort Billy,find a bucketgo into woodsfeed deer/When the wat

43、er was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.I followed him back to a tap.He knelt there,letting the drip slowly fill up his cup.Just at that moment his father entered the kitchen.What are you doing here?His father asked,frowning.I want to save a baby deer in the woods and need more water.As soon as Billys voice died down,came a louder voice of his father,Ridiculous!The deer can find the water by themselves.Dont waste water!Without looking at Billy,his father walked out angrily,leaving Billy tearing in the kitchen.四四.范文赏析范文赏析THANKS