读后续写 高考英语作文新题型16课件.pptx

1、Going Home打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Interpretation of the Text 文本解读A storyhowwherewhenwhywhowhat打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Interpretation of the Text 文本解读(Who)VingoWife Three boys and three girlsHusbandStrangers打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Interpretation of the Text 文

2、本解读(When)1.When the young people boarded 1.When the young people boarded the bus,they noticed Vingo;the bus,they noticed Vingo;上车后，他们注意到主人上车后，他们注意到主人公公VingoVingo晚上汽车作短暂停靠时，其晚上汽车作短暂停靠时，其中一女孩想与他交谈，却并中一女孩想与他交谈，却并未得到回应。未得到回应。2.Deep into the night2.Deep into the night，one of one of the girls started to t

3、alk with the girls started to talk with him but failed.him but failed.3.The next morning,Vingo told 3.The next morning,Vingo told his story at the young peoples his story at the young peoples insistence.insistence.第二天，在年轻人们的坚持第二天，在年轻人们的坚持下，下，VingoVingo与他们坐在一起与他们坐在一起并谈起了自己的故事并谈起了自己的故事打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题

4、型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Interpretation of the Text文本解读(How)Vingos Vingos love for his love for his wifewifeif the kids kept asking if the kids kept asking questions,and if it hurt her too questions,and if it hurt her too much,she could just forget me.much,she could just forget me.Id understand.Get a n

5、ew guy,I Id understand.Get a new guy,I said.Shes a wonderful woman.said.Shes a wonderful woman.(para 7)(para 7)eyes fixed upon on a photo,eyes fixed upon on a photo,completely in silence;became completely in silence;became s i l e n t a g a i n;s l o w l y a n d s i l e n t a g a i n;s l o w l y a n

6、 d painfully,he began his storypainfully,he began his story (para 1)(para 1)打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读(G-N策略）1.Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para.1 Looking at the photo,the young people found a young woman and th

7、ree children in it.Given Information1.1.“Well,when I was in prison I wrote to my“Well,when I was in prison I wrote to my wifewife,”Shes a wonderful woman,”Shes a wonderful woman.(Para(Para.7)7)2.2.We used to live in We used to live in BrunswickBrunswick,and theres,and theres a big a big oakoak（橡树）tr

8、eetree just as you come into just as you come into town.If she didnt want me,forget it-town.If she didnt want me,forget it-no handkerchief and Id go on through.”no handkerchief and Id go on through.”(Para(Para.9)9)打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Interpretation of underlined words and given inf

9、ormation划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）1.Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para.2 Vingo sat there amazed,staring at the oak tree.3.We used to live in 3.We used to live in BrunswickBrunswick,and theres a,and theres a big big oakoak（橡树）treetree just as you come into town.I just as you come into town.I told he

10、r that if she didnt have a new man and if told her that if she didnt have a new man and if shed take me back,she should put a yellow shed take me back,she should put a yellow handkerchiefhandkerchief on the tree,and Id get off and on the tree,and Id get off and come home.If she didnt want me,forget

11、it-no come home.If she didnt want me,forget it-no handkerchief and Id go on through.”handkerchief and Id go on through.”(P Paraara.3)3)Given Information打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）New Information Whats the young peopl

12、es reaction Whats the young peoples reaction towards the photo?towards the photo?How did Vingo comment on his wife?How did Vingo comment on his wife?How did the young people and Vingo feel How did the young people and Vingo feel when the bus gradually approached the tree?when the bus gradually appro

13、ached the tree?What was his wifes choice?Was there What was his wifes choice?Was there a yellow handkerchief on the tree?a yellow handkerchief on the tree?1.Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para.1 Looking at the photo,the young people found a young woman and three children in it.打包-读后续写-高考英语作

14、文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）New Information 1.Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para.2 Vingo sat there amazed,staring at the oak tree.If the handkerchief is there,whats the young If the handkerchief is there,whats the young

15、peoples reaction?peoples reaction?What about Vingo?How did he feel when he saw What about Vingo?How did he feel when he saw the yellow handkerchief?the yellow handkerchief?What did Vingo do then?Did he go home finally?What did Vingo do then?Did he go home finally?How did the young people feel at las

16、t?How did the young people feel at last?打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16 2.Interpretation of underlined words下划线词解读：Vingo，photo，the young people，sat，home，married，wife，Brunswick，oak tree，handkerchiefCharactersPlacesObjectsActionsVingo,the young people,wifehome,Brunswickphoto,oak tree,handkerchi

17、efsat,marriedInterpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16VingoInterpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读Wife and kidsLook at the photosNervous oak treeStare at handkerchief 打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16The Micro-skills Training in writ

18、ing 表达微技能：之准确动作神态描写：紧张篇 读后续写的评分原则之一是“内容的丰富性”。所谓“内容的丰富性”，就是要求续写部分详细、生动地描述情景、态度和感情等。After a while,slowly and painfully,he began his story.(para.3)打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16I.词的积累形容词：nervous,uneasy,tense,excited名词：tension,nerves,anxiety动词：tighten ones face,tremble,shake,stress out我们可以通过对人物的

19、动作、语言、心理活动、表情和环境等细节的描写以及修辞等多种方式来丰富内容，增强画面的叙述感，使得文章血肉丰满，厚实动人。平时注重积累相关的词汇、句子的积累。The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：之准确动作神态描写：紧张篇打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16II.句的积累1.Tension slowly creeps upon him.2.His face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.3.A flood of tension welled up in him

20、./Tension flooded over him.4.His heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.5.He shook all over,feeling like sitting on pins and needles.6.He tightened his face,as if protecting himself against another disappointment.7.His heart beat wildly and his legs trembled.8.He felt so nervous

21、that he felt his throat tightened.9.He felt so nervous that he couldnt move an inch.10.Scared and nervous,she was frozen to the spot.打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换1.1.随着汽车逐渐靠近随着汽车逐渐靠近Brunswick,VingoBrunswick,Vingo内心紧张不已。内心紧张不已。As the bus got closer and

22、closer to Brunswick,_.(运用sothat句型)With the bus getting closer and closer to Brunswick,_.(运用非谓语动词)Vingos heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocatedVingo shook all over,feeling like sitting on pins and needles打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型161.1.随着汽车逐渐靠近随着汽车逐渐靠近Brunswick,VingoBrunswic

23、k,Vingo内心紧张不已。内心紧张不已。With Brunswick approaching,_.(运用as if的非虚拟用法)_,Vingo tightened his face,_.(运用as引导时间状语从句)Vingo tightened his face,as if protecting himself against another disappointmentAs Brunswick approachesas if protecting himself against another disappointment打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新

24、题型162.看到橡树上挂满了黄手帕，他们都兴奋地跳了起来。看到橡树上挂满了黄手帕，他们都兴奋地跳了起来。(On)Seeing the oak tree full of yellow handkerchiefs,_.(运用非谓语动词)_ at the oak trees which was filled with yellow handkerchiefs.they all jumped up from their seats,dancing and screaming with joyTheir eyes shone/beamed with joy3.他正要反应，突然感觉自己舌头打结，手心出汗。

25、他正要反应，突然感觉自己舌头打结，手心出汗。He was about to respond_.(运用be about towhen句型)when he felt his tongue tied and palms sweating打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型164.当他们仍旧气喘吁吁，心跳飞快时，突然意识到刚刚所发生的事都是真实的。_,they were consequently convinced that what happened just now was true.(运用as引导时间状语从句)_,they were consequently

26、convinced that what happened just now was true.(运用独立主格结构)As they were still out of breath and their heart beat wildlyAs they were still out of breath,their heart beating wildly打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型165.他伸手去抓她的手，不料却发现她的手指冰冷，手在冒汗又颤抖着。他伸手去抓她的手，不料却发现她的手指冰冷，手在冒汗又颤抖着。He reached up to grab he

27、r hand,_.(运用only to do作结果状语)only to find her freezing fingers,sweating and trembling6.紧张又害怕，我盯着父亲，试图从他那儿找到解决问题的办法。紧张又害怕，我盯着父亲，试图从他那儿找到解决问题的办法。_,I stared at Dad and tried to seek a solution for the trouble from him.(运用伴随状语)_,I stared at Dad,_.(运用非谓语动词)Nervous and frightenedNervous and frightenedtryin

28、g to seek a solution for the trouble from him打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型167.为了避免我的马伤害到这只小野兔，我本能地大喊一声，使劲向后拉马为了避免我的马伤害到这只小野兔，我本能地大喊一声，使劲向后拉马绳。绳。Instinctively,_,_ in order to stop the horse from hurting the little rabbit.(运用非谓语动词)I yelled out loud pulling back the reins hard8.一想到我们可能在这一片未知的黑暗中

29、迷了路，我打了个寒颤。一想到我们可能在这一片未知的黑暗中迷了路，我打了个寒颤。The thought _ sent shivers down my spine.(运用同位语从句)_,I shuddered in the cold.(运用句型“一就”)I shivered inwardly _.(运用短语“一想起”)that we might have got lost in such darknessThe moment I realized that we might have got lost in such darknessat the thought of our/us getting

30、 lost in such darkness打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型169.感觉到我对未知的紧张和担忧，父亲试着逗我笑。感觉到我对未知的紧张和担忧，父亲试着逗我笑。_,Dad tried to make me laugh.(运用非谓语动词)Dad tried to make me laugh _.(运用时间状语从句)Sensing my stress and fear of the unknown10.Rigo感到有些紧张，他低下了头，身体不禁有些发抖，但他迫使感到有些紧张，他低下了头，身体不禁有些发抖，但他迫使自己不要慌张。自己不要慌张。Rig

31、o was a little nervous,_,but he forced himself not to panic.(运用连动句句型)slowering his head and couldnt help tremblingwhen he sensed my stress and fear of the unknown打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Possible version 1Para.1:Looking at the photo,the young people found a young woman and three childre

32、n in it.“What a lovely woman and cute kids.”“Yeah,she is a smart woman who can always make our small house warm and comfortable.”VingoVingo murmured.With BrunswickBrunswick approaching,Vingo stopped staring at thestopped staring at the photophoto,tightening his face,as if protecting himself against

33、tightening his face,as if protecting himself against another disappointmentanother disappointment.The young peopleThe young people took over window took over window seats,waiting for the coming of theseats,waiting for the coming of the oak treeoak tree.Then Brunswick was ten miles,and then five.All

34、the people opened All the people opened their eyes wide,waiting for a miracle.their eyes wide,waiting for a miracle.Suddenly,they all jumped up from their seats,screaming except Vingo.打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16Possible version 1Para.2:Vingo sat there amazed,staring at the oak tree.It was

35、 covered with yellow handkerchiefs,twenty or thirty of them,maybe hundreds,flying in the wind.The oak tree stood like a banner of welcome,blowing in the wind.All the young people were up out of their seats,shouting,crying,doing small dances or shaking fists in triumph.As the young people remained th

36、rilled,Vingo slowly rose from his seat,holding himself tightly,and made his way to the front of the bus to go home.打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16评点：评点：在车越来越靠近家的过程中，Vingo的紧张情绪是逐步加深的。从他停止看照片(stopped staring at the photostopped staring at the photo)，开始绷紧脸(tightening his tightening his faceface)

37、，怕自己又一次失望的动作(as if protecting himself against as if protecting himself against another disappointmentanother disappointment)及情绪描写中，很快就能给人一种画面感，Vingo内心的忐忑不安和期盼回家的心情不言而喻。此处又为下文满树的黄手帕的出现做好了铺垫，从紧张不安到安心雀跃，两种情绪形成鲜明的对比，推动了情节的发展。而年轻人们睁大眼睛，看着窗外，期盼能看到奇迹，此处是从侧面进一步烘托了人物紧张的情感，也对故事的发展起到了推波助澜的作用，使人更期待看到树上挂着黄手帕。第二段结尾处，当Vingo看到了满树的黄手帕时，他缓慢地从座位起身，这时他的紧张带有一种想要飞奔回家又害怕回家的紧张，hold himself tightlyhold himself tightly把他的这种心情形容地恰到好处。打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16打包-读后续写-高考英语作文新题型16