托福作文-让步段写法课件.pptx

1、让步段的写法注意 必須指出 让步段是问题的次要方面 或者有解决方案 学生是否应该兼职？Thesis：Students should take part-time jobs.Point 1:Students can make some money.Point 2:Students can get some working experience.Concession:Admittedly,taking a part-time job may have some disadvantages.For instance,if students spend excessive time on part-t

2、ime jobs,their academic performance might drop.However,I still think the benefits of part-time jobs overweigh the negative effects.公共交通应該收費么？不应該:1.Traffic jams will be relieved.2.Living costs of the city residents will be cut down.3.Making public transportation free will reduce/relieve air pollution

3、.Concession:但是不收費可能會使一些公司破產（給出解決方案）However,as long as these companies can obtain more governmental subsidies,the problem will be solved.公共交通收费不？Thesis：As far as Im concerned,public transportation should be free.Point 1:The traffic jam/congestion will be greatly relieved.Point 2:The living cost of ci

4、ty residents will be greatly cut down.Concession:Admittedly,(诚然)，free public transportation also has some negative effects.For instance,some companies may go bankrupt.However,as long as these companies can obtain enough government subsidies(津贴)，this problem can be solved.Teachers salary should be as

5、 much as that of the lawyers and doctors Agree:attract more talents focus on teaching making a living/support my family increasing teachers salary also has some negative effects.For instance However,as long as schools can get more governmental subsides,the problem will be resolved.Social donation.家長

6、是否应該讓孩子管理零花錢？应該：1.develop ability of management 2.convenient 3.as long as children can get more supervision and guidance from the parents,the problem can be resolved.Admittedly，have some negative effects.For instance,固执己见：However,the benefits of still outweigh its negative effects.解决方案：As long as ca

7、n get the governmental subsides and social donation,the supervision and guidancethe problem can be resolved.学生是否应该玩电脑？Thesis：from my point of view,computer games benefit children in many puter games can help children to release their stress.Plants vs zombies Angry birds Fruit ninja 2.broaden our hor

8、izon 增长见识 Admittedly,playing computer games has lots of negative effects.For instance,if children are addicted to computer games,their academic performance may drop.As long as children can get the supervision and guidance from their parents,the problem can be resolved.户外运动好还是户内运动好？Thesis：from my poi

9、nt of view,it is better to have outdoor activities than to have indoor activities.outdoor activities have lots of kinds.People have many choices to relax Rock climbing parachuting better to our health-outdoor has much fresh air so we can be in good mood(在好的心情下)all the time.Admittedly,outdoor activities have lots of negative effects.Support:for instance,people can meet with dangerous incidents,not as safe as staying at home，such as bungee jumping.Concession:as long as people take more attention to protect themselves,the problem can be resolved.