高中英语基础写作课件-2.ppt

1、Basic Writing对于书面表达的要求：对于书面表达的要求：1.Cover all the language points and given information.覆盖所有的语言要点覆盖所有的语言要点 2.Avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性 3.coherent,tight 上下文的连贯性上下文的连贯性 即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。4.use the words properly 语言的语言的得体性得体性5.

2、Write your article clearly.6.Mind the number of your sentences.To make the article tight,graceful and clear.(1)To avoid using repetitive words or expressions.表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇，避免使用重复的词语，使语表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇，避免使用重复的词语，使语言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。（2）To use some transitional words 恰当选用过渡词，使文章紧

3、凑，流畅。恰当选用过渡词，使文章紧凑，流畅。(3)To use more sentence patterns 适当使用多种句型，注意语言的丰富性，多样化，以适当使用多种句型，注意语言的丰富性，多样化，以 变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。一、使用较高级的词汇一、使用较高级的词汇1、这是件、这是件挺难的挺难的工作。工作。2、感谢你感谢你不辞辛苦地帮助我。不辞辛苦地帮助我。This is a difficult job.challenging/demanding I should thank you for taking so much trouble to

4、help me.I am awfully grateful to you for3.几天前，我碰巧遇到了一个老朋友。几天前，我碰巧遇到了一个老朋友。4.努力使我们的生活变得更好。努力使我们的生活变得更好。We try our best to make our life better.Several days ago,I happened to meet an old friend of mine.A couple of days ago,I came across an old friend of mine./(,it so happened that I ran into )make eve

5、ry effort to spare no effort to better our life 1.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.Thanks to/Owing to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.We all think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me.Or:A

6、good idea suddenly struck me.Practice1:Or:I hit on/upon a good idea.4.Shanghai lies in the east of China.5.As a result,the plan was a failure.6.When she heard he had died,she went pale with sorrow.7.A new railway is being built in my hometown.The plan turned out to be a failure.Shanghai is situated/

7、located in the east of China.At the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.A new railway is under construction in my hometown.方法一方法一.一句多译一句多译 一一就受到欢迎就受到欢迎As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport,they were warmly welcomed.On arriving at the airport,Lien Chan and his wifeLien Chan

8、 and his wife were warmly welcomed the moment/immediately they arrived at the airport.No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were 方法一方法一.一句多译一句多译Practice 一句多译一句多译 这本书花了我这本书花了我300300元。元。I spent 300

9、yuan on the book.I paid 300 yuan for the book.The price of the book is 300 yuan.It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.The book cost me 300 yuan.Practice 一句多译一句多译昨天下午他才来。昨天下午他才来。He came here yesterday afternoon.He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here

10、.It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.方法二方法二.丰富的句式 Describe the character by using Inverted Sentence(倒装句倒装句)Poor as/though he was,he was happy.二、使用较丰富的句式二、使用较丰富的句式1.When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.(使用使用V-ing形式形式)2.To his surpr

11、ise,the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句使用名词性从句)On his arriving,please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.3.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使使用强调句型用强调句型)4.I passed the physics exam because of your

12、help.(用虚拟语气）用虚拟语气）It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.1.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词使用过去分词)2.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用使用V-ing形式形式

13、)Singing and laughing,they went back to school.Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.Practice2:3.I wont believe what he says.(使用状语使用状语 从句从句)4.It is great fun to climb the hill.(用感叹句用感叹句)No matter what he says,I wont believe him.What great fun it is to climb the hill!with+名词名词/代词代词+介词短语

14、介词短语-ing形式形式副词副词/形容词形容词过去分词过去分词不定式不定式5.The old man led the way and we had no trouble finding the house.(用用with结构）结构）With the old man leading the way,we had no trouble finding the house.6.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（用并列句）（用并列句）7.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was

15、sent abroad.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)8.People suggest that the conference be put off.(改被动语态改被动语态)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Study hard,and youll make rapid progress.It is suggested that the conference be put off.Practice此四幅画描述了此四幅画描述了爱鸟周活动中李爱鸟周活动中李明某一天所经历明某一天所经历的事，由此写一的事，由此写一

16、篇文章。篇文章。要求：要求：1 必须使用必须使用5个句子个句子表达图画内容。表达图画内容。2 将将5个句子组成个句子组成连贯的短文。连贯的短文。步骤一步骤一 审题审题narrationpast tensethe third persontime orderwriting style:tense:person:order:caught a birdfixed a string to ita girl look for mothera police comfort her步骤二步骤二 要点要点send her homelost in thoughtset the bird freefeel hap

17、py步骤二步骤二 要点要点步骤三步骤三.扩展成句，连句成篇扩展成句，连句成篇1.One day,Li Mingcaught a bird and fixed a string to it.2.He saw a girl crylooking for her mum and a police-man comfort her.3.The policeman sent the girl home and Li Ming was lost in thought.4.Li Ming set the bird free and felt very happy.步骤四步骤四.仔细检查，认真修改仔细检查，认真

18、修改查是否遗漏要点，信息是否完整，查是否遗漏要点，信息是否完整，尤其是：人物、地点、时间、发生什么事、尤其是：人物、地点、时间、发生什么事、如何发生、怎样进行等方面是否遗漏。如何发生、怎样进行等方面是否遗漏。查体裁格式是否正确。查体裁格式是否正确。查句式使用是否科学得当。查句式使用是否科学得当。查叙述的顺序是否颠倒。查叙述的顺序是否颠倒。查过渡词是否使用合理。查过渡词是否使用合理。查时态、语态是否一致正确。查时态、语态是否一致正确。查书写和标点符号是否规范清晰。查书写和标点符号是否规范清晰。查字数是否符合要求。查字数是否符合要求。One day,Li Ming caught a bird an

19、d fixed a string toit.When playing with it,he saw the girl who was crying couldnt find her mum and a kind policeman tried to comfort her and told her that he would send her home.Seeing them go off,Li Ming was deep in thought.He heard the cry of the bird and suddenly thought that the bird might be missing its mother.So he at once set the bird free,and the bird flew happily into the sky.Please finish the composition after class.