高中英语概要写作指导过程性概要写作(共19张)课件.ppt

1、过程性概要写作 summaryWhat is a summary?A summary is a brief statement that gives only the main points of the whole passage,not the details.牛津高阶英汉双解词典1写作特点2考纲要求1.考纲要求概要写作。概要写作。提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。Workaholics live for their work,often spending many extra hours at work,and often taking work

2、 home to complete.Its fine to live in a work-hard culture,but when work becomes the only reason for a persons existence above more important things(such as family and friends),the issue becomes critical.Thats the problem more and more Americans are faced with.Americans are working more hours per wee

3、k than in years past,and with many companies reducing employees,more and more workers are worried about their own jobs.Some studies show that as many as 40 percent of American workers dont even bother to take vacations,partly because of fears they may not have a job to come back to if they do.Beside

4、s,it is obvious that part of the matter is financial.More and mgre people begin to define success in terms of financial measures.The higher ones income is,the more respect one gets.Finally,people nowadays live and work in a connected environment-e-mails,instant messaging,fax machines,and cell phones

5、-making hard for them to truly get time away from their work,even when they are on holiday.When work becomes the only reason for being-when it becomes the only thing people think about,the only thing that truly makes people happy,many Americans find that they are no longer close to their kids.Divorc

6、e rate jumps and serious stress-related health problems come up.Undoubtedly,it is time to do something.To reduce workaholism,you must stay away from work once in a while.There are many ways to do that:Spend time with family and friends:Call home often to stay connected;Learn to say no to new assignm

7、ents Consider exercises to get your body back to a healthy shape:Fight the urge that everything you do must be perfect.It will take some effort,but for yourself and those you love,you really should make the effort.Have a try and you wont regret it.Writing Style:A.NarrationB.ArgumentationC.Exposition

8、Exposition1 Read for style Topic:workaholic phenomenonThis exposition tells us a social phenomenon 2Read for Read for topic and predicttopic and predict Reading tip 1:pay attention to the most frequently-appeared words,or similar words.Workaholics live for their work,often spending many extra hours

9、at work,and often taking work home to complete.Its fine to live in a work-hard culture,but when work becomes the only reason for a persons existence above more important things(such as family and friends),the issue becomes critical.Thats the problem more and more Americans are faced with.Workaholics

10、problem4Paragraph 1 Key point:More and more Americans are faced with the problems of.The number of workaholics in America is.Writing tip 1:Some similar sentence structures can help you to restate.Americans are working more hours per week than in years past,and with many companies reducing employees,

11、more and more workers are worried about their own jobs.Some studies show that as many as 40 percent of American workers dont even bother to take vacations,partly because of fears they may not have a job to come back to if they do.Besides,it is obvious that part of the matter is financial.More and mo

12、re people begin to define success in terms of financial measures.The higher ones income is,the more respect one gets.Finally,people nowadays live and work in a connected environment-e-mails,instant messaging,fax machines,and cell phones-making hard for them to truly get time away from their work,eve

13、n when they are on holiday.4Paragraph 2 Reading tip 2:Liking words can help you to find the key points.going after money;Key points:Americans are working more hoursSupporting reasons:fears losing the job;The reason why.are.connected techonogyWriting tip 2:You can try to combine the key points togeth

14、er by changing part of speech(转变词性转变词性).damage our health When work becomes the only reason for being-when it becomes the only thing people think about,the only thing that truly makes people happy,many Americans find that they are no longer close to their kids.Divorce rate jumps and serious stress-r

15、elated health problems come up.Undoubtedly,it is time to do something.4Paragraph 3 Undoubtedly,it is time to do something.not only.,but also.Key point:extreme workaholic Results:break the family;Writing tip 3:Some linking words can be used in the sentence.Reading tip 3:transitional sentence can help

16、 you to predict the following passage.To reduce workaholism,you must stay away from work once in a while.There are many ways to do that:Spend time with family and friends;Call home often to stay connected;Learn to say no to new assignments;Consider exercises to get your body back to a healthy shape;

17、Fight the urge that everything you do must be perfect.It will take some effort,but for yourself and those you love,you really should make the effort.Have a try and you wont regret it.4Paragraph 4 Aiming at.,you can make efforts to take various ways,which will be worthwhile.Reading tip 4:Punctuation(

18、标点符号标点符号)can help you to find the key points.Key Points:take efforts worthwhileTo reduce workaholism,you must stay away from work once in a while.many ways Writing tip 4:some advanced sentence structures will be helpful.Para.Key points1 The number of workaholics in America is increasingrapidly.2The

19、reasons why Americans work more hours are fears losing job,going after money and connected environment.3Extreme workaholics not only break the family,but also damage health.4Aiming at reducing workaholism,you can make efforts to take various ways,which will be worthwhile.4key pointskey pointsPara.1:

20、Para.2:Para.3:Para.4:workaholic phenomenon three reasonsproblems/harmful effectsways/suggestions5 Structure of the passage 6some linking wordssome linking words 表并列、递进：表并列、递进：not only.but also,.表原因：表原因：because(of),the reason why.,表结果：表结果：as a result,consequently,.表总结：表总结：therefore,in conclusion,.The

21、 number of Americans(who are)becoming workaholic is increasing.(要点一)The reason why Americas work more hours are avoiding losing jobs,going after money as well as communication technologies.(要点二)Not only will workaholism break peoples families,but also damage their health.(要点三)Aiming to solve the pro

22、blem,you can make efforts to take a series of measures,which is worthwhile.(要点四)表结果：表结果：as a result,consequently,.表总结：表总结：therefore,in conclusion,.The number of Americans(who are)becoming workaholic is increasing.(要点一)The reason why Americans work more hours are fears losing jobs,going after money a

23、s well as communication technologies.(要点二)Not only will workaholism break peoples families,but also damage their health.(要点三)Aiming to solve the problem,you can make efforts to take a series of measures,which is worthwhile.(要点四)therefore7 A possible version A possible versionAssignment:Finish your article,and then polish them.Finally,please review the steps to write a summary in your best handwriting.Thank You So Much!