高三英语写作指导(共26张)课件.ppt

1、Writing PracticeFor Senior ThreeWr i t i n g P r a c t i c e F o r S e n i o r T h rpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingLearn the writing processPractice using writing strategies123Learn the good structure of a passageObjectivesp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-wr

2、itingpost-writing123456You can give it to whomever you choose.You can give it as often as you choose.It is always appreciated and may do more good than you will ever know.It costs you nothing to give it,absolutely free.You can give it to many people at the same time.It requires no special equipment.

3、Can you Guess?p r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingAppreciationA poem:Let Us SmileWhich sentence is repeated in the poem?Why?p r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r

4、i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingLet Us SmileThe thing that goes the farthest toward making life worthwhile,That costs the least and does the most,is just a pleasant smile.The smile that bubbles(冒出冒出)from the heart that loves its fellow men,Will drive away the clouds of gloom(朦

5、胧朦胧)and coax(收获收获)the Sun again.Its full of worth and goodness,too,with manly kindness blend(融合融合);Its worth a million dollars,and it doesnt cost a cent.There is no room for sadness when we see a p r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writing某英语报社拟成立某英语报社拟成

6、立“微笑俱乐部微笑俱乐部”，现向全，现向全球球征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。注意：注意：根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯；根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯；词数：词数：120左右左右Writingp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingI want to

7、 smilep r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingBase breadFillingsTop breadBody/contentConcluding paragraph(Conclusion)How to make the junk food healthy?What makes a good writing?Hamburger writingTopic paragraph(Introduction)p r e-w r i t i n g w h i l

8、e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingProper linking wordsAdvancedvocabularyVaried sentencepatternsVegetables,salad,butter,meatHamburger writingp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingLayout(Arrangement)Para.4ConclusionPara.1Int

9、roductionThe advantages of smilingI want to smile at my(the reasons)Para.2BodyPara.3BodyI want to smile at myself(the reasons)In a wordPlanningp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingBrainstormingAdvantagesof smilingraise confidencerelieve our burdens

10、escape the pressurecut downthe distanceclear up misunderstandingkick sorrow awayp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingNote-writingI want to smile at my parents or friends orThe reasons:First,Second,I want to smile at myselfThe reasons:Besides/In add

11、ition help me out of many difficulties comfort me when Im upset stand by me and care about me .live a better life be much more energetic lead me to success give me courage to get over all difficultiesp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingGood ending

12、s1)End with a summaryIn a word,I want to smile.Only in this way can I 2)End by restating the main idea in another wayIn a word,a smile is.So I want to smile.3)End by calling for actionIn a word,I want to smile.My fellow students,.please.4)End with wishesIf everyone smiles at,our world will bep r e-w

13、 r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingWriting Tips1.Try to use advanced vocabulary.2.Try to use some varied sentence patterns.3.Try to use proper linking words.Draftingp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writin

14、gChecking and polishingASSESSMENTStructureIs the essay divided into parts?Does each part have a topic sentence?ContentAre all the details stated?Is everything to the point(切题切题)?LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words?Are there any mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary?Are there any good s

15、entence patterns?p r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingWhats more,Smile at my parents or friends isimportant.It can make you getting onwell with your parents and friends,no argues and no fightings.Smiling is amake friendss way.getSmilingIts of great

16、 importance to smile at help you to get with no arguments or fightsmeans of communication,by which I can make more friends.How to improve it?p r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingChecking and polishingASSESSMENTStructureIs the essay divided into par

17、ts?Does each part have a topic sentence?ContentAre all the details stated?Is everything to the point(切题切题)?LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words?Are there any mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary?Are there any good sentence patterns?Displaying and evaluatingp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e

18、-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writing1.The good structure of a passage2.Writing process3.Practice using writing techniques:paragraph planning;brainstorming;note-writing;drafting;checking;polishingSummaryp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writ

19、ingpost-writingp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingFinish writing and develop it into a complete passage in about 120 words.Homeworkp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingGood beginnings1)Begin wit

20、h a saying or a proverbAs an old saying goes,a smile makes a young man.There is an old saying goes,youll be young if you always smile.2)Begin with a questionDo you think a smile will make people beautiful?Would you like to smile?As we all know,we can benefit from smile a lot.p r e-w r i t i n g w h

21、i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingGood beginnings3)Begin with a generalizationIts universally acknowledged that smiling is of great benefit to our daily life.4)Begin with an exampleThere are many advantages of smiling.For instance,smiling can help me to have a happy fe

22、eling.It is good for us to smile.For example,smiling can release the pressure from study and life,which helps us.p r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingAs is generally acknowledged,smiling plays a really significant part in our life.First of all,it s

23、hows that you are friendly and will bring you others appreciation.Besides,it can relieve our burden and make ourselves more confident,thus ensuring us high spirits and enough enthusiasm to face difficulties.An excellent compositionp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile

24、-writingpost-writingSo I want to smile,and there at least exist several people at whom I will smile.Firstly,I will smile at my parents for their sacrificing a lot to bring me up.In addition,my friends deserve my smile because they are the ones who believe in me and help me out of many problems.Last

25、but not least,I will smile at my teacher for their constant encouragement and great devotion to my progress.An excellent compositionp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-wpre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingAnd I will also smile at myself for it certainly will benefit me quite a lot.Given a big smile,Ill be much more energetic to finish my work.In a word,I want to smile at everyone around me to bring everyone a smiling day.An excellent compositionp r e-w r i t i n g w h i l e-w r i t i n g p o s t-w