雅思写作开头结尾写法探讨课件.ppt

1、雅思写作开头、结尾写法【探讨】【主讲：牙哥】环球英语网校直播课堂 eng24TR=Task ResponseCC=cohesion and CoherenceLR=Lexical ResourceGRA=Grammar&Accuracy雅思写作评分标准雅思写作评分标准3As an international tourist,one should always adhere to the local customs as a rule while the traveling.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Traveling=?Adhere to=

2、?Customs=？Cultural diversity=cultural mosaic=cultural legacy n traveling=Tourism/journey/vacation/holiday/n Adhere to=abide by/comply with/conform to/cling ton Customs=traditions/hobbies/personal habits什么是好的开头什么是好的开头 nClear,simplenLess memorization,higher band scorenWithin 5 minutesnParaphrase惨不忍睹版的

3、开头惨不忍睹版的开头-各种想吐各种想吐 Countrys health budget as a part of government budget is more and more concerned by government.Government spent much money or countrys health,like the public health service.In my opinion,rather than put enormous money to cure people,it is better to spend money on prevention how t

4、o get away from some disease.2022-11-23题目：exposure to international media,e.g.films,tv and magazines,has an impact on the local culture.to what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?开头段：With the development of the global media industry,traditional custom has been influenced u

5、ndeniably.Some people suggest that the information from other countries bring us much profitability to our current culture.Sample:Sample:开头写法开头写法-A-A Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom.Do you thi

6、nk the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?利弊提问方式利弊提问方式A A地主版开头地主版开头 For the last thirty years or so,more emphasis has been placed on the way of offering qualifications,and it has been argued that acquiring qualification through distant learning from Internet will be more attra

7、ctive than through studying in classroom.However,compared with professors,the Internet cannot communicate with students sufficiently.A A贵族版开头贵族版开头 Qualification is linked to a persons academic performance.In the past,people had to spend much time in attending classes to pass the examination such as

8、lawyer and architect vocational qualification .Nevertheless,It seems that a large number of people acquire relevant professional qualification via classes online easily at present.The advantages of this practice far exceed the disadvantages in my opinion.A A平民版平民版 Nowadays,the distant learning throu

9、gh internet is progressing rapidly on various fronts.Yet at the same time,whether we should offer qualification through distant learning has sparked much debate.Some people think studying in classroom is better,while others disagree.Personally,I am in favor of the former view.n1.Definitionn2.Past2.P

10、astn3.Now3.Now好的开头好的开头有有逻辑，逻辑，无无模板！模板！对比：对比：时间对比时间对比past,now,future 关系对比关系对比 individual,society开头写法开头写法-B-B Learning a foreign language offers an insight into how people from other cultures think and see the world.The teaching of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools.To what

11、 extent do you agree or disagree with this view?Agree or Disagree提问方式提问方式B B地主版地主版 The recent years has seen a heated discussion over whether learning a foreign language is necessary.Some people suggest that all primary schools are obligated to include foreign language as an indispensable part of cu

12、rriculum.This allegation is flawed,as far as I am concerned.B B贵族版贵族版 Language is linked to the identity of a nation,and speakers of a common language share many things,but does this give governments the right to restrict the way language is used or taught?nDefinitionnHowevernQuestionB B平民版平民版 In th

13、e present age,foreign languages are becoming increasingly essential in peoples daily life.But in the meantime,whether the teaching of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools has aroused spirited discussion.Some people say that we should teach a foreign language in schools,whil

14、e others disagree.As I see it,I find this view ill-founded.开头写法开头写法-C-C Should parents be obliged to immunize their children against common childhood diseases？Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?AD=agree or disagree类型C C地主版地主版 More emphasis,in recent years,has b

15、een placed on health problems for children.However,people are still at crossroads whether parents are obligated to immunize their children in order to prevent various medical complaints or they are blessed with the right not to.C C贵族版贵族版 The issue of whether we should force parents to immunize their

16、 children against common diseases is,in my opinion,a social rather than a medical question.Since we are free to choose what we expose our bodies to in the way of food,drink,or religion for that matter,why should the question of medical treatment be any different？nDefinitionn因因&果果nQuestionC C贵族版贵族版2

17、2 Some people argue that the state does not have the right to make parents immunize their children.However,I feel the question is not whether they should immunize but whether,as members of society,they have the right not to.nParaphraseParaphrasen转折转折&对比对比C平民版 With the rapid development of science an

18、d technology,children are playing important roles in our lives.However,when it comes to whether parents should be obliged to immunize their children against common childhood diseases,people hold divergent views.Some people think the government should make parents do this,while others disagree.Speaki

19、ng for myself,I agree with the latter view.开头写法开头写法-D-D In many major cities of the world,you will find large public buildings,both new and old.Do the advantages exceed its disadvantages?利弊提问方式利弊提问方式D D地主版地主版 As the century continues,an increasing number of public constructions are being established

20、 in megacities globally.In this essay,I intend to compare the benefits and drawbacks of this development.D贵族版 A public building is a building that belongs in some way to the state./The number of public buildings in any town or village will depend on the size of that community and its needs./For exam

21、ple,you will usually find a town hall of some sort,a school and a place of worship at the least.In larger communities there will be a police station,law courts,a library and maybe a theatre funded by the state.nDefinitionn定性定性nFor ExampleD D平民版平民版 When involved in a dilemma of whether we should buil

22、d so many public buildings or not,quite a few would deem that building public buildings is a good thing,but others,on the other hand,harbor a notion that this is a bad thing.Among numerous ingredients which influence the decision,there are several conspicuous aspects as follows.烤鸭烤鸭-对号入座对号入座贵族版:备考时间

23、充足或6分及以上基础地主版:备考时间不足或4.5分-5.5分基础平民版：准备时间不充分，基础非常差，建议背诵模板。开头开头关键：关键：n在在5 5分钟内写完分钟内写完nparaphraseparaphrase题目题目改写练习改写练习【1】题目题目 Personal happiness is closely related to economic success.改写练习改写练习【1】题目题目 Personal happiness is closely related to economic success.改写后的改写后的 Individual happiness is determined

24、by the wealth he or she owns.改写练习改写练习【2】题目题目 Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program.改写练习改写练习【2】题目题目 Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program.改写后的改写后的 It is justified for high schools to include voluntary work as an indispensable

25、 component of curriculum.High school students are encouraged to participate in voluntary work as a necessary part of courses.题目改写训练题目改写训练【3】题目题目 Schools should select their pupils according to their academic ability.题目改写训练题目改写训练【3】题目题目 Schools should select their pupils according to their academic a

26、bility.改写后的：改写后的：It is reasonable for schools to take academic performance as the only criterion for enrolling students.2022-11-23 in summary,to sum up,in the end,at last,finally,taking all the factors into consideration,with all the aspects carefully considered,judging from all the evidences offere

27、d Im convinced that,.雅思写作结尾雅思写作结尾2022-11-23 According to the facts outlined above,one understands that For these reasons,I feel strongly that、Personally,In the final analysis,Based on the facts outlined above,one can understand that 普通结尾普通结尾2022-11-23 In conclusion，To conclude,As shown above,As suggested above,It seems obvious that Ultimately,Undoubtedly,Evidently,优秀版结尾优秀版结尾微博：牙哥微博：牙哥spensor