2020版高考英语复习名师写作辅导课件：写作技巧大全 .pptx

1、第第4 4部分部分 写作技巧写作技巧u专题22 书面表达目目录录l 600分考点 真题例解Writing 1Writing 2l 700分考法 完美应对考法1 应用文考法2 记叙文考法3 议论文考法4 说明文 l 600分考点 真题例解Writing 1Writing 2假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Writing 1课标全国2018【写作要点】1.本文为邮件类应用文，文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以写作时要注意格式，

2、包括称呼语、正文以及结束语等。2.在写作时，先列出写作要点：（1）点明写信目的；（2）到达时间；（3）合适的礼物；（4）餐桌礼仪。全文以第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。Writing 1课标全国2018【精彩词句】好词 relevant,traditional,meaningful,hopefully,confidence,inform of,not only but,as well,be of great help to 等。好句It is traditional for sb.to do；“祈使句+or+陈述句”等。【参考范文】Dear Terry,How are you

3、doing?In your last letter,you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friends home.Now,I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.First,it is traditional for you to arrive early so that you can help the family prepare the dinner.Besides,youd better bring some meaningful gifts,such as a bo

4、ok or a Chinese knot.Finally,avoid making noises while chewing food,while chewing food,or youwill lose not only your happiness but your luck as well.Hopefully,these suggestions would be of great helpto you.I have the confidence that you will have a happy time.I am looking forward to your good news.B

5、est wishes!Yours,Li Hua 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms.Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ Writing 2课标全国2016【写作要点】1.本文为书信类应用文，文章没有给出开头和 结尾，所以写作时要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语、正文以及结束语等。2.在写作时，先列出写作要点：（1）点明写信目的；（2）详述求助内容；（3）表示感谢。全文以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。Writing 2课标全国2016【精彩

6、词句】好词 ask for寻求；apply for申请；have a very busy schedule日程繁忙；go through审阅。好句 Id appreciate it/be very grateful if you could 如果你能我将不胜感激。【参考范文】Dear Ms.Jenkins,Im Li Hua from your English writing class last term.Im writing to ask for your help.Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my cit

7、y during the summer vacation,and I have just completed my application letter and resume.However,I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used.I know you have a very busy schedule,but Id be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes.Please fi

8、nd my application letter and resume in the attachment.Thank you for your kindness!Yours,Li Hual 700分考法 完美应对考法1 应用文考法2 记叙文考法3 议论文考法4 说明文 考法考法1 1 应用文应用文1.书信、电子邮件类 书信和电子邮件类应用文已经成为近年来书面表达的热门考查形式，常以提纲式要点作文的形式出现，话题内容也紧紧围绕学生的实际生活。此类考查形式绝不是要求考生简单地对要点进行逐条翻译，而是要求将所给的几个要点组织成通顺的语句，形成亮点鲜明的高分作文。考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 此类作

9、文常见的写作格式如下：第一部分，文章开头，即称呼(通常已给出)；第二部分，寒暄语句，引出写信的目的(寒暄句和主题句可以是同一个句子)；第三部分，根据提纲扩展主体段落(主题句扩展句1+扩展句2+扩展句3)；第四部分，表明自己的观点或提出殷切期望，并结束书信主体段落；最后是落款。考法考法1 1 应用文应用文此类作文的常用句式如下:I am writing to you toHow happy I am to receive your letter ofHow nice to hear from you again!Thank you for your letter ofIt is a pleasu

10、re for me to invite you on behalf of to accept考法考法1 1 应用文应用文Thanks so much for your letter,which arrivedI am writing to you with reference toI am writing to you in connection withI would be grateful if you could/would考法考法1 1 应用文应用文I would like to know some information onIt will be appreciated if you

11、 can/couldI would also like to know if you can/couldPlease give my best regards toRemember me to your parents.考法考法1 1 应用文应用文Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes.I look forward to hearing from you.假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以

12、使行文连贯。_例课标全国2017【写作指导】1.命题形式：提纲式作文。2.体裁：书信类应用文。3.以第一人称为主；以一般现在时和一般将来时为基本时态。4.写作要点：（1）介绍展览时间、地点；（2）介绍展览内容；（3）发出邀请。例课标全国2017【参考范文】Dear Henry,There will be an exhibition on paper-cutting in our school,which will start on June 21 and last for a week.The exhibition is a collection of works including some

13、 papercuts from famous artists.Among the papercuts will be some works from us students.Anyone who is interested in it is welcome to visit it.I know you have muchinterest in Chinese culture and youre good at paper-cutting.This is surely a good chance for you to enjoy yourself.Id like to invite you to

14、 visit the exhibition with me.Id appreciate it if you could come.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua考法考法1 1 应用文应用文题型指导 申请信一般以提纲式应用文的形式出现，要求就所给的内容和情境写一封申请信，是考生比较熟悉的题材。要想写好申请信，除了包括要求的信息外，掌握一定的写作模式往往能起到事半功倍的效果。（2）申请信考法考法1 1 应用文应用文常见的写作内容包括:开门见山地说明想申请的职位；介绍自己相关的特长，引起对方注意；强调自己符合要求，加强印象，附带介绍自己的教育背景

15、、相关经历，表明自信心，加强对方对自己的信任，希望被考虑录用。在写作过程中还要注意行文流畅，言简意赅。考法考法1 1 应用文应用文常用写作模板 【模板一】Dear_(称呼),Id like to apply for the job as _(职位)in your company.One of my reasons for applying is that _(理由一).The second reason is that _(理由二).Besides,_(理由三).考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 All in all,I think _(进一步总结).I shall be much obliged

16、 if you will give me an opportunity for an interview.Im looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours respectfully,_(署名)考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 【模板二】Dear_(称呼),I am applying for the position of _(职位)advertised in the newspaper.I major in _(专业).My training in _(专业技能)definitely meets your qua

17、lifications.Ill graduate on _(毕业时间)from_(毕业院校).In addition to the requirements of this job I have _(成绩).考法考法1 1 应用文应用文I also have some experience in _(适合的职位).I believe with my training and experience,you will find me qualified.Id be very grateful if you would offer me a precious opportunity for an i

18、nterview.考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Yours sincerely,_(署名)假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读该启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应聘邮件。Volunteers Wanted Our annual English Festival,which will be held on June 1517,2018,is now

19、 looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English Debate.If you are interested,please send an application e-mail at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at .例例写作要点：1.表达写信意图；2.陈述应聘原因；3.说明应聘条件(性格、能力等)。写作要求：1.邮件词数不少于100；2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增加细节,以使行文

20、连贯；4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear Ms.Chen,Im Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua例【写作指导】1.命题形式：提纲式作文。2.体裁：书信类应用文。3.以第一人称为主；以一般现在时为基本时态。4.写作要点包括：首先表达写作意图，即应聘志愿者；然后陈述应聘原因，并说明应聘条件(性格、能力等)；最后提出期望。例【参考范文】Dear Ms.Chen,Im Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.Im writ

21、ing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,I will be able to improve my organizational skills,communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.As an outgoing girl,I get along well wi

22、thmy classmates.Besides,I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly li

23、ve up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua考法考法1 1 应用文应用文题型指导 邀请信是写信人对收信人的邀约,一般分为正式和非正式两种，格式与其他信函相同。具体写作步骤如下：第一段：说明写信意图。第二段：交代具体信息，包括受邀请的人、邀请朋友要干什么、地点以及具体的时间等内容。（2）邀请信考法考法1 1 应用文应用文第三段：表示期待朋友的回复。就本质而言，正式与非正式

24、的邀请信并没有太大区别,只是正式的邀请信比较注重文采,而且往往需要表现出写信人的热情。邀请信的情境一般为邀请朋友参加聚会、共度假期或者访问自己的家乡等。考法考法1 1 应用文应用文常用写作模板Dear_(称呼),How is everything with you?I am writing to tell you that there will be a(n)_(内容)at/in _(地点)on _(时间).I sincerely hope that/We would be honored to have you there with us.考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 The occasio

25、n will start at _(具体时间).This will be followed by a(n)_(进一步的安排)At around _(具体时间),_(另一个安排)Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not,will you?考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 I really hope you can make it.My phone number is _.Looking forward to your reply.Yours respectfully,_ (署名)假定你是某中学英语社团团长李华,拟在寒假期间举行中学生英语口

26、语大赛。你想邀请你校外籍教师Mr.Thomas参加。请根据以下内容,给Mr.Thomas写一封邀请信。1.诚邀Mr.Thomas做裁判;2.介绍口语大赛的目的和形式。注意:1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。例山东泰安一模Dear Mr.Thomas,How are you doing lately?I am writing to _ Yours sincerely,Li Hua例山东泰安一模【写作指导】1.以第一人称和第二人称为主;以一般现在时和一般将来时为基本时态。2.内容包括：开门见山提出活动;提出邀请;介绍口语大赛的目的和形式；提出热

27、切的期望。例【参考范文】Dear Mr.Thomas,How are you doing lately?I am writing to tell you that our English club plans to hold an oral English contest during this winter holiday.I sincerely hope that you could attend this competition as the referee.This contest aims to improve the students spoken English,which go

28、t zealous advocacy from numerous teachers.There will be two rounds as we plan.The first round requires participants to make a two-minute speech on specific topics.In the second round,participants are requested to give a talent show in English.Meanwhile,I sincerely hope that you could make some sugge

29、stions for this contest,which is of vital importance.I truly wish you could make it.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua考法考法1 1 应用文应用文题型指导 建议信是向收信方就某事提出自己的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给个人的,也有可能是写给某个组织或机构的。建议信要包括写信的原因、建议的内容以及提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。（3）建议信考法考法1 1 应用文应用文一般采用“三段式”,主体部分通常以firs

30、tly,secondly,thirdly或to begin/start with,then,later,last but not least等依次陈述建议,具体为：第一段：表明写信意图。简单介绍自己，陈述事由，注意语气。第二段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。注意千万不要让对方以为你是在投诉。第三段：对提出的建议进行总结，言辞礼貌恳切，使对方容易接受。常用写作模板Dear_(称呼),I am _.Your collection of suggestions on _ is _.As is known,_(指出不足之处).My suggestion

31、s are:First,_.(People can _.)(建议一)考法考法1 1 应用文应用文Second _,(to make economic profits,)_.(建议二)Third,_.(As many of them _.)(建议三)I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more detail.考法考法1 1 应用文应用文/Your kind consideration of my suggestions will be

32、 highly appreciated.Good luck with your _.(祝愿)Yours sincerely,_(署名)考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 假定你是李华，你的笔友Mike现在上高二，由于在高一一年的时间中，他没有下功夫学习，导致有些学科成绩不是很理想。为此他感到有些迷茫，想学但不知该怎样做。高二是高中学习生活中很重要的阶段，这个阶段的学习对高三很重要。请你给他写封信，提出合理的建议，以便他能顺利完成高中的学业，并考上理想的大学。注意:1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。例Dear Mike,I have known t

33、hat you are having difficulty with your study._ Yours,Li Hua例【写作指导】1.以第二人称为主;以一般现在时为基本时态。2.内容包括：开门见山提出主题；具体建议；表达祝愿。例【参考范文】Dear Mike,I have known that you are having difficulty with your study.I understand you very much.I would like to give you some advice.Firstly,dont worry too much about it.If you

34、study harder than before,you can improve a lot.Secondly,you must concentrate all your energy on your study.And you should listen to the teacher carefully in class and finish your homework on time.In your spare time youd better review what you have learned in Senior One.When you meet some problems,tu

35、rn to your teachers or friends.They will help you.Thirdly,if you insist on doing what I tell you above,you can improve your study.I believe in you.You can do it well.Hard work will pay off.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua题型指导 在生活中经常会发生一些事情,比如消费者利益受损、正常生活和工作受到干扰等令人伤脑筋的事情,有时写封投诉信不失为一个解决烦恼的好办法。投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容

36、：说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾;（4）投诉信考法考法1 1 应用文应用文实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过,切记不要夸大其词;指出该问题引发的后果;提出批评及处理的意见，或敦促对方采取措施，或者提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。组织提纲时要遵循“三步走”的写作模式：第一段：表明写信所要投诉的问题,尽可能做到客观礼貌,给读者留下好印象,应该记住读信人不一定就是责任人,他的合作对问题的最终解决有着非常重要的作用。考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 第二段：写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果。可以说具体的理由,也可以说问题的具体体现方式。第三段：提出解决方案,无须展开。这段应体现书信写作的礼貌原则,可以用类似“如果

37、你能,我将十分感激”这样的话。考法考法1 1 应用文应用文常用写作模板 Dear_(称呼),I am _(自我介绍).I feel bad to trouble you but Im afraid that I have to make a complaint about _.The reason for my dissatisfaction is _ (总体介绍).In the first place,_(投诉的第一个方面).In addition,_(投诉的第二个方面).考法考法1 1 应用文应用文Under these circumstances,I find it _(个人感受)to

38、_(问题产生的后果).I would appreciate it very much if you could _ (提出建议和请求).Thank you for your consideration and I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,_(署名)考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 假定你是李华，和父母在国外旅游期间于3月24日至28日入住Pearl Hotel，但对酒店提供的服务不满意，请根据以下提示给酒店的经理写一封信进行投诉。要点如下：1.入住时间。2.问题投诉：(1)行李箱送到房间时破损；(2)卫生间漏水；(3)楼下酒

39、吧太吵，影响休息。3.要求道歉并希望改进服务质量。例注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：行李箱suitcase；漏水leak例Dear Manager,My name is Li Hua._ Yours sincerely,Li Hua例【写作指导】1.以第一人称为主；阐述问题时以一般过去时 为基本时态。2.写作要点：(1)写信目的；(2)存在的问题；(3)表达期望。例【参考范文】Dear Manager,My name is Li Hua.I stayed at your hotel,Pearl Hotel,from Mar

40、ch 24th to 28th with my parents.However,the service in your hotel left much to be desired.Im writing this letter to express my complaints.First,we found our suitcases broken after they were carried to our room by one of your porters.Second,water was leaking out of the toilet in the bathroom.Third,th

41、e noise from the bar downstairs went on so late into the night that we couldnt get good rest each night.For the above reasons,I have to say that the service in your hotel is of poor quality.Therefore,Id like to receive a written apology from you.Meanwhile,I hope you can improve your service in the f

42、uture so that none of the above will happen again.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 演讲/发言是进行宣传和思想交流的一种重要方式,为了取得良好的效果,演讲人/发言人常常提前写出文稿。要写好演讲稿/发言稿,必须明确下列几点：（1）明确演讲/发言对象。要了解听众的思想状况和愿望要求等。要认真考虑如何切入最具有说服力,更容易令人接受。2.演讲稿/发言稿考法考法1 1 应用文应用文（2）明确演讲/发言主题。无论是从举例到说理,还是从说理到举例,都要围绕一个中心来讲。（3）明确自我立场。观点要鲜明,是赞成还是反对,不能含糊其辞、模棱两可。要以

43、理服人,举例要恰当、典型。条理要清晰,结构要严谨,首尾要呼应。（4）明确语言特点。演讲稿/发言稿不同于其他文体,要合乎口语的表达习惯,句子不宜太长,以免造成听众的困扰。考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。1.回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；2.谈谈收获或感想；3.表达祝愿与期望。例天津2016 注意：1.词数不少于100；2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends

44、,How time flies!_ Thank you.例天津2016【写作指导】1.以第一人称为主;以一般现在时为基本时态。2.写作要点：（1）回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；（2）谈谈收获或感想;（3）表达祝愿与期望。例天津2016【参考范文】Dear friends,How time flies!The two weeks exchange activity has come to an end.However,looking back on the past days,we have gained a lot indeed.In the past two week

45、s,we have communicated with each other face to face in English.In this way,not only have we improved our oral English,but we have also established the bridge of friendship.Besides,no one will forget the farewell party where we enjoyed the delicious traditional food of your country and your passionat

46、e songs and dances.For many of us,the time we spent together is so unforgettable that I think I will value it forever.I wish we all could keep making progress in studies.In the meanwhile,I do hope to see you again in the near future!Thank you.(1)题型指导 通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等时使用的一种应用文体，通常分为口

47、头通知和书面通知两种。口头通知是面对面地把信息传达给对方。这种通知开头应有称呼语，正式场合用Ladies and gentlemen(女士们、先生们)，3.通知考法考法1 1 应用文应用文有时也可以用Boys and girls或Comrades and friends(同志们、朋友们)等。开头还常有提醒听众注意的开场白,如Attention,please.或May I have your attention,please?或I have an announcement to make.等；结尾常说Thats all.Thank you.或Thank you(for listening).等，

48、以示礼貌。口头通知无须说明发布通知的日期和发布通知的人或单位。考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 写书面通知时,一般情况下,要在首行中央写上Notice或Announcement。通知的发布单位常写在正文结束的右下角,发布通知的日期一般写在Notice或Announcement下一行的左侧，顶格写，也可以省略。考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 口头通知和书面通知都是宣布即将发生的事情及其具体内容,因而多用将来时；一般用祈使句来强调。通知的语言要简洁明了,条理清晰,准确无误,特别是时间很重要,必须写得十分明确。考法考法1 1 应用文应用文（2）常用写作模板口头通知Ladies and gentlemen,

49、Your attention,please.I have something to tell you._ 考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 Please remember:Time:Place:Thank you for listening.考法考法1 1 应用文应用文书面通知Notice In order to_,_ is to be held on _(日期),at _(具体时间)in _(地点).Whoever is interested in it is welcome to attend.Those who want to take part in _ please sign up at

50、 Student Union.Please remember_.Student Union考法考法1 1 应用文应用文 你校学生会将召开选举新主席的大会。假定你是留学生班班长李华，请你用英语在班里宣布一个口头通知，要点如下：1.时间:下周五下午3：005：00；地点:图书馆三层讲座厅；2.参选的同学先自我介绍和五分钟演讲，最后进行投票；3.要求全班同学参加。例注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇：学生会 Student Union；报名参加 enter for；选举 elect；投票 voteBoys and girls,May I have your at