2020年7月浙江省高考读后续写精讲课件.pptx

1、2020年7月浙江省高考读后续写精讲whowhowhatwhatwhenwhenwherewhereQ:What was taking pictures of polar bears like?One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at are research camp outside the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pi

2、ctures of polar bears is.Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a y

3、oung male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified.Elli and I tried all

4、the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit potshard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He

5、 told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spr

6、ay burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.Q:What was taking pictures of polar bears like?One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photo

7、graph polar bears.We were staying at are research camp outside the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face

8、with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose

9、 to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified.Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit potshard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes lo

10、ud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇

11、)I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in

12、 the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.Q:What does“that”refer to in this sentence?thatOne fall,my wife and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manito

13、ba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one

14、of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our spaghetti and garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high,wire fence.He clawed,bit,and shoved the wire mesh.He stood on his hind l

15、egs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,banged pots,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear-he just growled and went back to trying to

16、tear down the fence with his massive paws.I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter,I snapped some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minut

17、es of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I crept up to our uninvited guest and,though the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar,the bear ran back to the lake to wash his eyes.Q:What does“those times”ref

18、er to in this sentence?those timesOne fall,my wife and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like

19、all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a

20、nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our spaghetti and garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high,wire fence.He clawed,bit,and shoved the wire mesh.He stood on his hind legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense

21、 actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,banged pots,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear-he just growled and went back to trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me

22、 a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter,I snapped some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns

23、 the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I crept up to our uninvited guest and,though the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar,the bear ran back to the lake to wash his eyes.those timesThis time,it was going to be dangerous!Orientationsetting the sceneOne fall,my wife and I had a single g

24、oal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im fa

25、ce to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.a dangerous encounter with polar bearsComplication series of eventsWhat happened?How was it going to be solved?As Elli and I cooked dinner,a you

26、ng male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified.Elli and I tried all th

27、e bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit potshard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He t

28、old me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray

29、 burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.our dinner attracted a young polar bearActions of my wife and IActions of my wife and IReactions of the

30、 polar bear Reactions of the polar bear 1try bear defense actions23yell at;hit potshard;fire blank shotgun shellsmaking loud noises to scare bears offkeep trying to tear down the fenceradio sb for helpa helicopter,30 m to arriveuse pepper sprayapproach slowly,spray in the facean angry roar,run to wa

31、sh his eyesOrientationsetting the scenea dangerous encounter with polar bearsComplication series of eventsWhat happened?How was it going to be solved?our dinner attracted a young polar bearwe tried many ways but in vainOrientationsetting the scenea dangerous encounter with polar bearsComplication se

32、ries of eventsWhat happened?How was it going to be solved?our dinner attracted a young polar bearwe tried many ways but in vainparagraph 1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to ourcamp.ResolutionHow was the problem solved?paragraph 2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.What character tr

33、aits of my wife and I do you find in the passage?provide clues from the text.adventurousone single goal to photograph polar bears-amazing but dangerousdeterminedMaking the best of this close encounter I took some pictures of the bear.kindto scare bears off;the spray burns the eyes,but doesnt hurt th

34、emWhat would be the possible reason(s)that lead the bears to the camp?1.sniff and smell our garlic bread2.follow his nose3.sometimes loud noises will scare bears off-but not this oneThe polar bear was in desperate need of food.Why would a polar bear living in its natural habitat be so hungry?1.clima

35、te change lead to food shortage2.Lose its way to its home3.Illness prevents it from hunting for food4.two adventurous and kind fans of photographya hungry and angry bearThey both wanted to protect themselves,one from hunger,the other from the attack.Can the situation be solved peacefully?Theme:can a

36、nimals and humans live harmoniously with each other?He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.With an angry roar,the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.Vivid descriptionsVivid descript

37、ionsThen,finally,the bear got angry,rose up on his hind legs,and began to growl.The bear began to chase him and Keesh ran away.But as Keesh ran,he dropped a little round ball on the ice.The bear stopped and smelled it,then swallowed it.This continued,and then the bear suddenly stood upright and roar

38、ed loudly in pain and ran around wildly,beating its paws madly against its body.After a while the bear grew weak and tired,for he was very heavy and had been jumping around violently.Finally he went off to the ice along the shore,shaking his head slowly from side to side,and sitting down now and the

39、n to squeal and cry.-Keesh by Jack LondonThe sun caught the ends of the hairs along his back.Shining black and silky the bear stood on its hind legs,half up,and studied Brain,just studied him,then lowered itself and moved slowly to the left,eating berries as it rolled along,wuffling and delicately u

40、sing its mouth to lift each berry from the stem,and in seconds it was gone.Gone,and Brian still had not moved.His tongue was stuck the top of his mouth,the tip half out,his eyes were wide and his hands were reaching for a berry.-Hatchet by Gary PaulsenBut then she stopped,turned,and charged straight

41、 for me.She was on top of me,biting my arms,shoulders,and backpack.The force of each bite was like a sledgehammer with teeth.Over and over she bit me.After what felt like hours but was merely minutes,she disappeared.She slammed down on top of me and bit my shoulder and arms.Suddenly she stopped.Ther

42、e was dead silence except for the sound of her heavy breathing and sniffing.I could feel her breath on the back of my neck and her front claws digging into my lower back below my pack,where she stood.I could smell the terrible,pungent odor she emitted.For 30 seconds,she stood there crushing memy che

43、st smashed into the ground,my forehead in the dirt.And then she was gone.-The Unbelievable True Story of the Hiker Who Survived Back-to-Back Grizzly Bear AttacksA few minutes later,the bear came back.With two bloodshot and swollen eyes,he let out a deafening roar,charged at the fence and shoved the

44、mesh with his full strength.The fence couldnt help trembling.Moaning and groaning,which deeply wrung our heart.It would have devastated anything in its way and attack us in a few minutes.We have no aternative but to anxiously wait for the helicopter.With a cracking noise,the bear rushed in,approachi

45、ng us rapidly.We tried pepper spray again,but in vain.Elli and I were forced to flee separately to escape the outrageous claws.At the very moment,the helicopter arrived.With the bear chasing behind,“Elli,come on,”I yelled,attracting the bear to an opposite direction,but unfortunately,I was trapped t

46、o a narrow corner,where I could almost hear the gasps of it.At the very moment,several gunshots echoed to scare it off.The bear lifted his face and stared at the giant figure of the helicopter.Slowly,he flinched.Relieved yet enhausted,I climbed into the helicopter,hugging tightly with Elli.It was su

47、ch a breathtaking experience,but as I developed the film later,it all just became worthwhile.点评：本文通过细腻的描写勾画出了千钧一发之际的惊险，（字数超出规定，不忍删减，当然也会跟学生探讨这个问题）；最后“洗出的照片”很完美地回照了前文！A few minutes later,the bear came back.Nose twitching andmouth wide opening,he slammed on the broken fence with his powerful paws.We c

48、ould even saw the sharp teeth insideand heard the deep voice from the bottom of his throat.He was absolutely on edge.We paced back,looked straight into hiseyes and pretended not to be afraid.On the vast snowfield,nothing could be heard except our rapid heartbeats with the cracks from the fence.Sudde

49、nly,a huge shadow pounced on us without mercy.A chill spreading down my spine,what we could do was lying down and praying.At the very moment,the helicopter arrived.An arrow with special medicine was shot,which came into effect immediately.The bear fainted onto the ground just several meters away fro

50、m us.We quickly packed our baggage,boarded the helicopter and finally breathed a sigh of relief.Looking outside,the massive bear seemed helpless especially in this frozen island.The manager explained that it was the climate change that forced polar bears into such hungry situation.We raised our came