最新高考英语写作新题型备考技巧并列句+亮点词汇（一）.docx

1、高考英语写作新题型备考技巧高考英语写作新题型备考技巧 并列句并列句+亮点词汇亮点词汇（一一） 顾名思义，并列句是用连词或分号把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来。 一并列句的类型和并列连词 并列（递进）关系 and, bothand, not onlybut (also), neithernor 转折关系 but, yet, 选择关系 or, otherwise, or else, eitheror, notbut 因果关系 for, so, therefore, thus 对比关系 while, whereas 注意注意: . therefore，thus 引导的句子前需要用分号或 and 才能

2、引导并列从句，如: It rained; therefore the game was called off. . 连接并列主语时，需要注意 “就近原则”，如： Neither he nor I am going to attend the ceremony. 1. The choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event. (2019 浙江高考书面表达) 2. Some compromises were

3、unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. (2017 北京高考书面 表达) 3. I plan to go for an outing, and I would like to invite you to participate. (2017 浙江高考书面 表达) 4. I know you are very enthusiastic about ping-pong, so I really hope you can join our school team. (2017 全国三卷书面表达) 5. As middle school stude

4、nts, were not familiar with foreign cultures, while Chinese culture isnt fit to appear in an English newspaper. (2014 上海高考作文) 二并列句在高考写作中的运用： 1. bothand, 既既又又 On the Internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a 备考技巧 1 discount as well, which is both time-savin

5、g and economical. (2017 江苏高考书面表达) 2. eitheror, 或者或者或者或者 People can either give them as gifts or hang them in their houses. 3. neithernor, 既不既不也不也不 In autumn, its neither too cold nor too hot. (2014 年天津高考书面表达) 4. not onlybut also, 不仅不仅而且而且 I would really like to interview him because he is not only t

6、he first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. (2015 安徽高考书面表达) 注意：此句型中，注意：此句型中，not only 可以放句首倒装，为写作加分，如可以放句首倒装，为写作加分，如: I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent, but also you can offer us guidance.(2018 全国一卷书面表达) 5. not

7、but, 不是不是而是而是 From my perspective, the son refuses to communicate with his mother not because he has no time but because hes unwilling to. 6. while/whereas, 而而/却却 Some of the studies show positive results, whereas others dont. 7. 祈使句祈使句/名词词组名词词组 + and/or/otherwise + 陈述句陈述句 Keep it in mind, and we ca

8、n gain this good learning habit and benefit from it. (2013 四川高 考书面表达) It is really risky. One more step, and the baby will fall into the well. Study hard, otherwise you will fail in your exams. More healthy food, or youll break down sooner or later. 8. when, 这时这时 . sb. was doing sth. when , 某人正在做某事某

9、人正在做某事, 这时候这时候 We were having a conference when he broke in. . sb. was about to do/sb was on the point of doingwhen, 某人正要做某事某人正要做某事, 这时这时 I was about to give up when my father came and inspired me to keep going.(2014 福建 高考书面表达) . sb had just done sth. when., 某人刚做完某事某人刚做完某事., 这时这时 I had just finished

10、 sweeping the floor when the telephone rang. 注意注意: 并列句型并列句型 8 可经常用于记叙文续写写作，需要掌握透彻并学会运用。可经常用于记叙文续写写作，需要掌握透彻并学会运用。 提升训练提升训练 一用适当的并列连词填空 1. _ will all kinds of paper-cutting works created by famous artists of this field be on show that day, _ a lot of useful and interesting activities will be held as w

11、ell. 2. Seize the chance, _ youll regret some day. 3. Another try, _ youll fulfil your dream. 4. The young man had wanted to help the dog, _ as he approached, it started to bark. 5. We were about to set off _ it suddenly began to pour down. 6. Some people believe smoking is harmful to health_ others

12、 consider it is helpful in reducing working pressure. 7. It is not what you had done _ what you had said that annoyed your classmates. 【答案】 ： 1. Not only; but (also) 2. or/or else/otherwise 3. and 4. but 5. when 6. while/whereas 7. but 二用并列句完成下列句子。 1. 他刚走就有人敲门。 _ 备考技巧 2 2. 你不但要和他们分享你的学习经验，而且一定要向他们敞开

13、心扉。 _ _ 3. 虽然她是一位普通妇女，但是确实值得尊敬。 _ 4. 别犹豫，否则你将一事无成。 _ 5. 票价正在上涨。因此，电影业应该做出更大的努力来吸引更多的观众。 The ticket price is on the increase. _ _ 6. 呆在完全不同的文化里令人害怕，我甚至想直接打道回府。 Being in a completely different culture was scaring, _ _ 7. 寄宿家庭不仅很友好，和我当时住一起的那个男孩对足球也感兴趣。 _ _, which made my stay more enjoyable and stress-

14、free. 8. 因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的 父母进行推心置腹的谈话。 Therefore, from now on, _ _ 9. 因此，如果你努力学习的话，展览不仅可以帮助你更好地了解中国民间艺术作品， 而且可以帮助你获得一些剪纸技巧。 Therefore, _ _ If you try hard to learn. 10. 音乐不仅在人类社会发展中扮演重要的角色，而且也能丰富我们的精神和文化生活。 _ _ 11. 生活的质量已经提升，而且看电影也被看作是一种娱乐的好方式。 _ _ 【答案】1. He was about to leave/on

15、 the point of leaving when someone knocked at the door. 2. Not only should you share your study experience with them, but (also) you must keep your heart open to them. 3. She is an ordinary woman, but/yet she is really worth respecting. 4. Dont hesitate, or/otherwise youll accomplish nothing. 5. The

16、refore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers. 6. and I event wanted to go straight back home. 7. The homestay family was not only vert kind, but also the boy that I was staying with was keen on football 8. lets not waste our time on insignificant things but have a he

17、art-to-heart chat with our parents on a regular basis. 9. the exhibition can not only help you have a better understanding of Chinese folk art works, but can also help you acquire some paper-cutting skills. 10. Music not only plays an important part in the development of human society, but it also c

18、an enrich our spiritual and cultural life. 11. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. 亮点词汇（一）亮点词汇（一） 平常写作中，学生除了要掌握和运用基本词句的能力外，还要学会遣词造句的技巧。使 用亮点词汇无疑会对考生的写作起着升华的作用。 考生平时一定要多积累地道自然的单词短 语，这样写的东西才会不落俗套和单调。 值得注意的是， 学生要把握好使用高级词汇的度， 不能为了追求“高级”而将复杂甚至

19、偏、 难、怪的词堆砌在写作中，这样反而会适得其反。所以考生在完成写作任务时，要遵循 “恰 备考技巧 3 当、准确、自然”的原则，也要注意使用的场合。 一请将下列句子的划线部分用不同的或更好的单词短语替代。 1. Im busy with my lesson now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near. _; _; _ 2. So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to th

20、e letter. _ 3. The team will hold many activities, some of which will attract you, including many matches. _; _ 4. Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be. _;_ 5. Ive decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Buildi

21、ng 1 at 8 a.m. on Wednesday, which will last two hours. _ 6. We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future. _;_ 7. I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. 8. Second, I am trying my best to get the necessary knowledge a

22、nd skills about my position. _ 9. The craftsman will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot. _ 10. Our class thought of the idea to make better use of old materials. _ 11. The reasons are the following. _ 12. As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at scho

23、ol. _ 13. Theres no harm in your going to bed late sometimes. _ 14. In the coming three years, our school life will become difficult. _ 15. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice. _ 【答案】1. occupied with; of great importance; around the corner/approaching 2. have n

24、o choice but to put you to trouble 3. appeal to; a range of 4. constructed; set up 5. made up my mind to 6. take pains; get prepared 7. owe you an apology for 8. am sparing no effort 9. various 10. came up with 11. as follows 12. are supposed to 13. staying up 14. challenging 15. alternative 二请尝试用高级

25、词汇提升下面的考生作文。 Dear Jason, Im very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou. Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing fast during the past ten years. New bridges and r

26、oads have been built, tall buildings standing in many parts of the city. More and more schools and hospitals are useful to the native people. It is developing into a modern city. But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and bad air pollution, which have a bad effect on peoples life. I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future. 【答案】. more than; . charming . rapidly . decade . set up . high-rise . An increasing number of . of use . severe . As far as Im concerned,