中考英语作文练习：建议类作文课件.ppt

1、suggestions建议类作文写作思路（1231）第一段：很高兴收到来信 针对问题回答或体谅别人的感受 主动提出给别人建议 第二段：3条具体建议及原因 建议一和原因 建议二和原因 建议三和原因 第三段：提出希望和祝愿一句祝愿一句祝愿一句问候一句问候 两句问题两句问题三条建议三条建议建议类句型 You are supposed to do.Youd better do.Why not/dont you do.Its a good idea to do.If I were you,I would do.suggestionshow to deal with study problemshow t

2、o balance study and hobbyhow to deal with the problems with parentshow to keep healthysimilar 谐音：洗米了，把类似大米的沙粒挑出来。similar+ly（副词词缀）：同样地be similar to 与.相似share similar values 分享共同的价值观share similar interests 分享共同的兴趣爱好高分例句-开头句表达同情理解I understand your feelings because I once had the similar problem as you

3、do now.Its very common for students to dislike memorizing and many students have the same problem like you.例句仿写：.offer 去去卧佛卧佛寺是求个寺是求个offer （offer的中文音译正好和“卧佛”接近）offer sb 主动提供（job,chance,help 等）offer letter录用信、录取通知 重点拓展：offer sb sth=offer sth to sb给某人提供某物offer to do sth 主动提出做某事 特价；特价；特卖特卖高分例句-主动提建议 Le

4、t me offer you some useful advice.Heres my advice.My suggestions are as follows.例句仿写：.Study Problemscompetition stresslots of homework and courseslow gradesno interestsanxiety about examspractice and confidenceattitudeeffective study before,in and after classask help from parents,teachers,fridends S

5、olutions of the Study Problemsorganize organ（器官）+ize（动词词缀）：组织各个器官为主人服务！高分例句 First of all，it is important for you to plan and organize your study.例句仿写：.attitude 联想记忆：联想记忆：at-在;ti-“提”;tu-“兔”;de-“的”在提到兔子的时候,他的态度态度就变了。重点词组：take an opposite attitude采取积极态度emotional attitude 情感态度高分例句：First and foremost,you

6、 should try our best to keep a right and positive attitudes toward your study instead of giving it up,because it is the attitude that matters most.(用于学习)例句仿写：。effort 谐音“爱抚他”：爱抚他，努力使baby长大。ef(爱)+fort（类似ford福特）：爱福特，就努力买一辆福特车！put efforts in sth 在某世上花费精力 make efforts to do sth 努力花精力做某事高分例句 Besides,you s

7、hould spare no efforts（make every effort to do）to practice English as much as possible.As we know,practice makes perfect.例句仿写：.confident 联想记忆：con“看”的谐音;fid(kid)的近似拼写,ent蚂蚁(ant)的近似拼写;看,这个小孩很有自信自信地在卖蚂蚁。(第二种方法)看废蛋时看废蛋时特自信自信高分例句：In order to improve your spoken English,you can take every chance to speak

8、English confidently in front of your classmates and teachers.例句仿写：.mistake mis-前缀“错误的”mistake=mis错误+take拿 错误错误 mislead=mis错误+lead引导误导误导 misunderstand=mis错误+understand理误解误解高分例句Whats more,we should not be afraid of making mistakes when learning English,for from the mistakes we made we can learn what i

9、s right.例句仿写：.possible -高分例句：In additon,you should listen to your teacher carefully and take part in class activities as much as possible,which can help you have a better understanding of what you have leant.例句仿写：.2022-11-19 carefullyadvadjwrongadvwrong高分例句After class,you are supposed to go over you

10、r lessons as carefully as you can.例句仿写：.manage联想记忆:man“男人”;age“年龄”男人要有一定的年龄才能像经理（经理（manager）一样坐在管理管理者的位置。高分例句：We should learn to manage time for different subjects and make good use of it.例句仿写：.important It is important to save water.高分例句：English teacher(/Friends/Parents)plays an important role in o

11、ur study,so why not ask our English teacher for some suggestions?例句仿写：.有关学习的谚语 No pains，no gains.一分耕耘一分收获 Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母 Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧作文练笔【例一】根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已经给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内。假如你叫Zhang Fang，是美国中学生Lucy的笔友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。

12、针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，并表达对她的祝愿。Dear Zhang Fang,I have been in this school for two years.My schools not too bad.But I havent got used to it.Some of the teachers are very good,especially my science teachers.They try to make lessons interesting.I like to have their classes and spend much time on it.So

13、 I usually get A in science exams.But I dont like having English and history classes.There are too many things to memorize and theyre so boring.Besides,it seems that the teachers can only read again and again.They dont try to make lessons interesting.Whenever the lessons start,I feel sleepy.I often

14、get C in the exams,sometimes D.The final exam of this term is coming.What shall I do?Could you give me some advice?Yours，Lucy参考范文Dear Lucy,Im very happy to hear from you.Dont worry too much.Its very common for students to dislike memorizing and many students have the same problem like you.Heres my a

15、dvice.First of all,you had better preview the new lessons and write down the difficult points before lessons,which can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class.Whats more(Besides),you should listen carefully and try to take part in the class activities.Youll find that English and

16、 history are not as boring as you think.Last but not least,you also need to review the lessons regularly after class.In this way,you can understand better and memorize more quickly.If you still feel unhappy,why not have a talk with your teacher and ask for help?I really hope my advice can help you m

17、ake great progress with your study.Yours,Zhang Fang how to balance study and hobby study and hobbymuch study pressureafford no time for hobbiesYou can.keep a balanceorganize your time find a suitable relaxation method(listen to music,collect stamps.)stick to your study schedule hold重点拓展hold on 坚持住；等

18、一会，别挂断hold tight to抓紧.hold up 支持，支撑高分例句：To talk about whether students in Grade9 should keep their hobbies,different people hold different ideas.例句仿写：.point 只要只要指指明方向，就能明方向，就能 跑赢他（音似）跑赢他（音似）指指（指指（v.v.）点点（）点点（n.n.）重点拓展：重点拓展：make a point of doing sth make a point of doing sth 认为做某事重要或有必要认为做某事重要或有必要 po

19、int at/to sb/sth point at/to sb/sth 指出某人指出某人 某事物某事物 或其位置或方向或其位置或方向there is no point in doing sth there is no point in doing sth 做某事是没有意义的做某事是没有意义的 高分例句：From my point of view,it is important to keep a balance between study and hobby.As an old saying goes,all study and no play make Jack a dull boy.例句仿

20、写：.organize organ（器官）+ize（动词词缀）：组织各个器官为主人服务！高分例句：First and foremost,you are suppposed to take your study seriously and then organize your time for your study and your hobby.例句仿写：.method 音似：“妈说的”“妈说的”都是方法方法 高分例句 Whats more,you need to find a suitable relaxation method,which can not only make you rela

21、xed and refreshed,but also help you succeed in your study.例句仿写：.press 音似“拍死”按按/压压press pressure/stress 压力 stressed 高分例句：Listening to music is a good way for you to relieve stress and get relaxed.例句仿写：.collect 音似“可like 它”可like 它 收藏/收集 correct 只需把ll改正改正成rr就是正确的正确的 collect高分例句：Its also a good idea to c

22、ollect stamps in your spare time.Not only can it get you more fun but also can increase your knowledge and enrich your life.例句仿写：.contact 康泰克t 接触接触/联系联系过感冒的人要用 contact with sb 与某人接触be in contact with sb/sthlost contact with sb 失去与某人的联系 高分例句：If you want to free yourself from heavy study pressure,clim

23、bing/travelling is a good choice.例句仿写：physical 非常渴（音似）身体上的身体上的损害 非这课死 physics physical 物理的物理的 重点拓展：physical contact身体接触physical activity 体育活动高分例句：Last but not least,stictly stick to your study schedule,find time to enjoy your hobby and do some exercise regularly.Only in this way,can you get benefits

24、 both mentally and physically.例句仿写：.写作真题 中学生学习时间长、压力(pressure)大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。为此，不同的同学有不同的放松方式，有的看电视，有的听音乐，有的做运动,请你谈谈你通过哪些方式放松自己并说说原因，谈谈你的感受。提示词语：relax,TV,music,thinkhow to deal with the problems with parentsdeal with the problems with parents keep calm/be polite make a schedule keep your p

25、romise have a good conversation/communication with your parents ask your teacher for help2022-11-19助记:sit 坐 u 你 at 在 I 我 on上你坐在我的头上，情况不妙OR：situ师徒；a挨；tion审师徒挨在一起审时度势 situationsitcom高分例句：First of all,when facing this kind of situation,its very important for you to keep calm instead of arguing with you

26、r parents,which can only make things worse.例句仿写：.polite联想记忆：联想记忆：和警察和警察police近似近似,t-“特”警察都特别有礼貌的有礼貌的impolite 没有礼貌的没有礼貌的重点拓展 politeness：n.礼貌 be polite to sb:对某人有礼貌高分例句：Dont quarral with your parents,becuse being polite is the first and most important policy to treat our parents.Believe it or not,what

27、 they do is all for us.例句仿写：.solve 解决solve=so（如此）+love（爱）：如此相爱，什么问题都能解决高分例句：First of all,to solve the problems,youd better make a schedule,set up a goal for each day and show them to your parents.例句仿写：.promise 许诺，答应pro（前面，向前）+mise（发出，送出）：做事前面放出的话：承诺谐音：“跑，没事！”怀着这个承诺，一直向前！重点词组 promise to do sth 承诺做某事

28、make a promise 许下承诺 keep a promise 遵守承诺 break a promise 违背诺言高分例句：Promise is debt.一诺千金.Whats more,tell your parents study plan and keep your promise,which can let them feel that you can take some responsibility about your own study.例句仿写：.conversation con-(共同的)+verse（诗文）+ation（名词词缀）：这个交谈是共同讨论诗文。con-(看

29、)+vers（我死）+sation（谁胜）：他们在谈论“看我死了谁会胜利”。高分例句：Whats more,you can have a good conversation with your parents,telling them all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.例句仿写：.2022-11-19communicate重点拓展：communication：n.通讯，交流communicate with sb与某人交流高分例句：Besides,we are supposed to try to have a heart-to-heart c

30、ommunication with our parents in order to get their understanding and support.例句仿写：.argue 第一种方法：ar“啊”;gue-“孤儿”啊，有一群孤儿在争吵争吵/吵架吵架 第二种方法：阿哥争油-吵起来了吵起来了 重点拓展argue with sb about sth:与某人争论 高分例句：Last but not least,why not ask your teacher for help instead of arguing with your parents?Your teacher may have s

31、ome good ideas.例句仿写：。agree disagree agreement 协议;同意重点拓展：agree to do sth 同意做某事agree with sb 同意某人的看法agree on sth 在某事上达成一致高分例句：The last thing is to have a talk with your teacher for help when you cant reach an agreement with your parents.例句仿写：.写作真题 假如你是韩梅，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信

32、。与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。提示词语：listen to,mothers love,care about,communicate with,get along with,smileDear Han Mei,Im afraid Ive got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me,“Be careful while crossing the street.”“Put on more clothes.”“Did you do a good job at school?”and so o

33、n.Im annoyed(烦恼).What shall I do?Can you give me some ideas?Alice how to keep healthyhow to keep healthy pay attention to our health develop a good habit say goodbye to fast food have a good rest dont stay up too late dont drink and smoke do exersise regularly common 共同的共同的 common sense 共同的感觉共同的感觉 常

34、识常识 重点拓展：have sth in common 有.的共同之处common sence 常识common practice普遍的实践高分例句：Nowadays,cases like various kinds of dieases hitting young people to death are common aound us,so its time for us to pay more attention to our health.例句仿写：.avoid 拆分法：a（一个）+vo（我）+id（ID）：一个我不认识的ID，避免加好友。啊！歪的！快避开！avoidable=avoid

35、（避免）+able（能够.的）可避免的.高分例句：To avoid being caught by various dieases,we should first of all realize the importance of developing a good habit of doing exercise and diet.例句仿写：hurry n.匆忙匆忙，赶紧 v.匆忙匆忙，催促，催促重点拓展in a hurry 匆忙地hurry up 快点 高分例句：First of all,say goodbye to fast food,because it does lot of harm

36、our health,though fast food is a good choice when we are in a hurry.例句仿写：。degree 度，学位，程度 谐音：“递给你”相似词：agree老师同意递给你学位证书。a degree in chemistry 在化学方面的学位the degree of Master of Arts(MA)文学硕士学位to a degree 在某种程度上高分例句：Whats more,stick to a good habit of rest.Go to bed early instesd of staying up too late,whi

37、ch to some degree is bad for our health.例句仿写：。prevent 前缀pre“提前”;vent音似“问他”提前问他 预防预防/阻止阻止不好的事情发生重点拓展：prevent sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事 高分例句：Besides,we are supposed to prevent ourselves from staying up too late.Lack of sleep can have an effect on your performance at school，so go to bed as early as pos

38、sible.例句仿写：.harm h（害）+arm（胳膊）：伤害了我的胳膊 harm（伤害）+ful（形容词词缀）:有害处的 harm（伤害）+less（否定形容词词缀）:无害处的 do harm to sth 对.产生害处 be harmful to sth 对.有害 It does sb harm to do sth 做某事对某人是有害处的高分例句：Besides,We are not supposed to drink and smoke too much which is harmful to our health.例句仿写：。train brain（大脑）要经常 train（v.训练

39、,锻炼，培养）t+rain-他在雨天上了火车（n.）高分例句：Last but not least,do exersise regularly.Since our mind and body can be trained by doing sports,why not find some friends to do exercise and have fun together?例句仿写：.结尾句 I hope what I said can be of some help to you.Just have a try.Im looking forward to hearing good new

40、s from you!Try your best,and youll make great progress!THANKS!1.沈从文的创作风格趋向浪漫主义，他要求小说的诗意效果，融写实、纪梦、象征于一体，语言格调古朴，句式简峭、主干突出，单纯而又厚实，朴讷而又传神，具有浓郁的地方色彩，凸现出乡村人性特有的风韵与神采。2.沈从文创作的小说主要有两类，一种是以湘西生活为题材，一种是以都市生活为题材，前者通过描写湘西人原始、自然的生命形式，赞美人性美；后者通过都市生活的腐化堕落，揭示都市自然人性的丧失。3.从作者的描述看，作者的观察敏锐，记忆超强，对现象世界十分倾心，对大自然的声音、气味，社会上的

41、人与事怀有浓厚的兴趣。他把大自然与社会生活称为一本“大书”，他从这本“大书”中学到了许多书本上没有的东西，他在自然和社会中倾心体验，尊重生命本真的做法，并非不爱学习，而是为了更好的学习。4.不少评论家觉得沈从文擅长写景，且晴朗明澈，但是缺少深度。也有评论家认为好就好在没有深度，因为没有深度的“看”风景，其实就不为一般的社会价值所局限，这样也就抛弃了自以为是的优越感和置身事外的位置，而是在宇宙万汇的动静之中“看”。5.一次眼光看风景万物，多了一份包涵和宽容，看到的历史也就不是战争、王朝更迭之类的东西，而是千百年来凡夫俗子们的哀乐、努力和命运。它们代表了更为现实逼真的生存和价值。6.抒发的感情真诚

42、感人，不写自己的品学兼优、勤奋用功，而是如实地展现自己的天生的野性，充满了阅读和学习“生活”这本大书所得到的欢欣鼓舞的生命体验，表现了对自然和生命无比好奇和热爱以及泰然面对一切残忍和苦难的生活观。7.学习了这篇传记让我们了解到了沈从文从小如何“读社会这本大书”，感受到他青春期的悲欢得失。由于传主生活经历的太多苦难，加上作者在回忆中不时融入淳厚的情感，让我们读来有某种沉重与辛酸，也让我们学生受到启发：对于强者，生活中的风霜雨雪也和阳光雨露一样，都从不同侧面或者以不同的方式滋润着我们的生命，现实中的曲折、坎坷、苦难可能拓展人的精神空间，让人能更加以阔大的心胸与坚强的意志，去感受生命，理解生活的意义。