2020年中考英语写作- 活动与计划课件.pptx

1、2020 四川英 语眉山眉山：2018命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵写作技巧写作技巧话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划分析绵阳、宜宾、眉山近分析绵阳、宜宾、眉山近3年中考真题的书面表达可知，年中考真题的书面表达可知，与与“活动与计划活动与计划”这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度：这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度：活动介绍活动介绍(注：多用一般过去时注：多用一般过去时)，如：，如：2018眉山。结合四川其眉山。结合四川其他地市及全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：假期他地市及全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：假期或节假日计划或节假日计划(注

2、：多用一般将来时注：多用一般将来时)。命题探索话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划教材链接话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划典例剖析典例剖析(2018眉山眉山)为了学习和弘扬东坡文化，为了学习和弘扬东坡文化，你们学校举办了东坡文你们学校举办了东坡文化艺术节化艺术节，请你根据以下要点，用英语写，请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇报道一篇报道。要点：要点：1.时间、地点：时间、地点：5月月23日日(星期三星期三)，上午，上午9点，学校音乐厅；点，学校音乐厅；2.形式：形式：东坡文化讲座、东坡诗词诵读、学生才艺表演东坡文化讲座、东坡诗词诵读、学生才艺表演；3.感受：感受：审文体：说明文审文体：说明文要点要点2

3、：这次活动的感受需要学生自由发挥：这次活动的感受需要学生自由发挥审时态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时要点要点1：活动的具体过程：活动的具体过程 审时态：一般过去时审时态：一般过去时一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划参考词汇：参考词汇：lecture讲座讲座develop弘扬弘扬注意：注意：1.所写内容必须包含所有提示要点，并作适当发挥；所写内容必须包含所有提示要点，并作适当发挥；2.词数：词数：80词左右词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数)；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。Meishan is

4、a great place with colorful and traditional Dongpo Culture._一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划1.The opening ceremony was held in the school music room on the morning of Wednesday,May 23rd,at 9：00.2.We decided to put up signs around the school and hand out notices to tell students about the book sa

5、le.八八(上上)Unit 2 P12 3.I would like to invite you to the opening of our new library at No.9 High School.八八(上上)Unit 9 P711 1角度角度活动介绍活动介绍好句好句 范范 例例 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划1.聚会将于六月二十六日早上在我们教室里举行。聚会将于六月二十六日早上在我们教室里举行。_2.我们决定在田地里采摘水果和蔬菜。我们决定在田地里采摘水果和蔬菜。_3.我愿意尽最大的努力使表演更好。我愿意尽最大的努力使表演更好。_The pa

6、rty will be held on the morning of June 26th in our classroom.We decided/decide to pick up fruit and vegetables in the fields.I would like to try my best to make my performance better.句句 子子 仿仿 写写 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划4.I visited my grandparents in the countryside.(扩写感受扩写感受)I visited m

7、y grandparents in the countryside.It was excellent.七七(下下)Unit 11 P625.We climbed the mountains there.(扩写具体行为扩写具体行为)We climbed the mountains there and saw a lot of flowers.七七(下下)Unit 11 P63 2 2角度角度假期或节假日计划假期或节假日计划扩写扩写 范范 例例 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划6.Im going to bring my new camera.(扩写目的扩写

8、目的)Im going to bring my new camera to take lots of photos！九九(全全)Unit 7 P50一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划句句 子子 扩扩 写写 4.I watched a football match on weekends.(扩写感受扩写感受)_5.We ate our lunch under some trees.(扩写具体行为扩写具体行为)_I watched a football match on weekends.It was really exciting/interesting.W

9、e ate our lunch under some trees and played some games after that.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划6.Im going to go to Shanghai this weekend.(扩写目的扩写目的)_7.I often do some reading during the summer holiday.(扩写目的扩写目的)_I often do some reading during the summer holiday to relax myself.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二

10、阶写好句Im going to go to Shanghai to visit my old friends this weekend.话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划练语段练语段There was an art festival in our school.The opening _(时间地点时间地点).There were various performances.Some students who were interested in music _(活动活动1).Besides,a few students _(活动活动2).We all _ _(收获收获)was on the pla

11、yground on 5th,May/was on the morning of last Monday in the school music room/.sang songs together/played the guitar/.gave a speech/recited poems/had beautiful dances/.活动介绍活动介绍语语 段段 练练 习习 1 1took a lot of meaningful pictures/enjoyed ourselves very much/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划 Its Fathe

12、rs Day today.I will _ _(计划计划1),with my thanks and best wishes on it.Then I will _(计划计划2)this afternoon and _(计划计划3)in the evening.Besides,Ill _(计划计划4)after dinner and then _(计划计划5)with him,for he likes it very much.make a beautiful card for my father/.help him wash the car/.假期或节假日计划假期或节假日计划语语 段段 练练

13、习习 2 2cook his favourite food/.take a walk with him/.play chess/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划成篇章成篇章Meishan is a great place with colorful and traditional Dongpo Culture.In order to learn and develop the rich Dongpo Culture,we held the art festival in our school.The opening ceremony was held

14、in the school music room on the morning of Wednesday,May 23rd,at 9：00.First,we enjoyed the exciting lecture on Dongpo Culture.Then there were different kinds of wonderful performances about Dongpo poems,like reading and reciting aloud,acting out and so on.Finally,we were 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动

15、与计划活动与计划 so shocked by the students fantastic talent shows that we cant help cheering for them again and again.Not only did we enjoy ourselves,but also learned more about Dongpo Culture.We really love this festival.And we hope that more and more interesting afterschool activities will be held in our

16、 school.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划写作练兵写作练兵(2019黄石改编黄石改编)假如你是李华，你的同学假如你是李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮写了一封邮件询问你暑期的安排，请你给件询问你暑期的安排，请你给Tom回封邮件，告知你的计划，回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来绵阳游玩。词数并邀请他来绵阳游玩。词数80100，开头和结尾已给出，不，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。计入总词数。话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划写作练兵写作练兵From:TomTo:Li HuaHi,Li Hua.I know the summer holiday is com

17、ing soon.I plan to go to the countryside to live with my grandparents this holiday.How about you?Whats your plan for the coming summer holiday this year?Would you like to share with me？Tom话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划写作练兵写作练兵From:Li HuaTo:TomDear Tom，Im very happy to hear from you.Now Im going to tell you my pla

18、ns for the summer vacation.First of all,I want to read some meaningful and good books.Maybe these books will be helpful to my future study,such as some classic literature works or grammar books.Also,Im going to take part in some social practice activities at the weekend.I think they are useful for m

19、y future work.Then,I want to spend more time helping my parents do some housework.话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划写作练兵写作练兵From:Li HuaTo:LindaDear Linda，YoursLi HuaFinally,I plan to go to the park with my friends every morning or afternoon for exercise.I hope you can come to Mianyang in summer vacation.At that time,

20、I will be your tour guide.话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划在定语从句中，从句在句中作定语，修饰先行词。初中阶在定语从句中，从句在句中作定语，修饰先行词。初中阶段需掌握由段需掌握由which,that,who引导的简单的定语从句。先行词为引导的简单的定语从句。先行词为人：人：who/that引导；先行词为物：引导；先行词为物：which/that引导。引导。写作技巧4巧用定语从句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划1.先行词为人：先行词为人：I know the girl who/that has curly hair.A nurse is a person who/tha

21、t looks after patients well.He is the one who has given me a lot of help.2.先行词为物：先行词为物：I like sports which/that are safe for me.This is the best gift that I have ever received.句式连接范例句式连接范例写作技巧4巧用定语从句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划即学即练即学即练1.I like the kind nurse.She is really patient._2.This is my brother.He likes

22、writing articles in his spare time._3.The girl is Toms sister.She is singing in the next room._I like the kind nurse who/that is really patient.This is my brother who/that likes writing articles in his spare time.The girl who/that is singing in the next room is Toms sister.写作技巧4巧用定语从句话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计

23、划写作技巧44.She is my best friend.She always helps me when I meet difficulties._5.China is a beautiful country.It has a long history and many famous places._She is my best friend who/that always helps me when I meet difficulties.China is a beautiful country that/which has a long history and many famous

24、places.话题话题4 活动与计划活动与计划6.This is the factory.We visited it last week._7.Fishing is a good hobby.It needs much patience._8.Dont always eat junk food.It is bad for your health._This is the factory that/which we visited last week.Fishing is a good hobby that/which needs much patience.Dont always eat junk food that/which is bad for your health.写作技巧4巧用定语从句 老师组卷老师组卷出题范围、题型随需选择，可下载打印一键布置作业，学生在线答题，系统自动评卷 我的班级我的班级系统自动统计班级整体&每位学生的学习情况含学习进度、正确率、错题错因、薄弱环节等老师可随时随地精准掌握，便于针对性教学字音字形小程序（老师版）（老师版）永久免费永久免费学生版教师版微信扫一扫，使用小程序