2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文教学课件.pptx

1、目录Contents续写构思积累素材、美化词句真题再现124成品欣赏5课件导读解析文本、明确主题33一、真题再现一、真题再现：2020年7月新高考全国卷1 山东第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community,As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends

2、meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she t

3、old her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy-his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,John,Har

4、ry,and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn some money.”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”“So do 1,”said Harry.

5、“We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）.”The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good on

6、e.“I tell you what we can do,”said John.“You know that big box of com Uncle John sent us？Well,we can make popcorn（爆米花）,and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a

7、good one,too.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.-About Mrs Meredith 1.篇章结构 二、解析文本、明确主题_backgroundAbout _Talking about _The children are considering _Mrs MeredithBernards family how to help Bernard二.解析文本、明确主题 The Meredith family lived in a small community,As the economy was

8、 in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Main idea of part 1:background of the story:The economy was _ and people were _ badsuffering2.段落大意 Mrs.Meredith was a most kind a

9、nd thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.Main idea of part 2:about Mrs Meredith:Mrs Meredith was _ and _ people in need.kindhelping（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1

10、读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy-his name was Bernard-had interested her very

11、much.“I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,John,Harry,and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dont see what he can do.”Main idea of part 3:talking about Bernards family:Mrs Meredith _ her children about Bernard and his family.told（教学提纲

12、）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn some money.”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”“So do 1,”said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”F

13、or some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）.”The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good one.“I tell you what we can do,”said John.“You kno

14、w that big box of com Uncle John sent us？Well,we can make popcorn（爆米花）,and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”Main idea of part 4:considering how to help Bernard:The children were ready to help and John _.found a solution（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费

15、下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）二.解析文本、明确主题3.线索整理 Plot明线Feelings暗线whatwhyOne morning in the room,the children were thinking about how to help Bernard earn money.Bernards dad was so sick that his mother had to care for him and couldnt go out to work.whoand howMrs Meredith,a most kind and thoug

16、htful woman,told her children-John,Harry and Clara,all warm-hearted and willing to help,about the poor little boy,Bernards family problem.After some consideration,John thought out an idea to make popcorn for Bernard to sell.Theme:_Love among the neighbors（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）202

17、0年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.n 1.What did Mrs Meredith do?n 2.What did the children do to help Bernard?n 3.How did they let Bernard know their idea?How did Bernard feel?With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business

18、.n 4.How did Bernard sell popcorn?n 5.How did neighbors help and how was the business?三：续写构思第二段首句第一段首句Mrs Meredith took out that big box of corn.They paid a visit to Uncle John,borrowed the popcorn machine and learned how to make the most delicious popcorn.Mrs Meredith brought Bernard back,they told

19、 the idea to him and he was so moved and thankful.Bernard carried the popcorn on his little bike and went from door to door to sell it.Neighbors were surprised to see Bernard but eventually almost all bought a bag or two.Thanks to everybody,all things went well.1.根据首句设问（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件

20、（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）三.续写构思2.整合答案、形成初稿When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.So Mrs Meredith took out that big box of corn.The children were very happy.They paid a visit to Uncle John,borrowed the popcorn machine and learned how to make popcorn.T

21、he children were busy popping the corn while Mrs Meredith went out to buy the paper bags.She brought Bernard back.They told the idea to him and he was so excited and thankful.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.Bernard carried the popcorn on his little bike and went from do

22、or to door to sell it.Neighbors were surprised to see Bernard but eventually almost all bought a bag or two.Thanks to everybody,all things went well.补充信息、充实内容、完善逻辑细节补充、整合单句、优化句型（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）四.积累素材、美化词句1.相关心理、动作、场景类表达积累(汉译英英译汉练习)感激：_兴奋：_开心：_F

23、eel on the top of the world_Float on air_;wild with joy_A flood of joypleasure welled up in him._Then came a voice far from where we were,bathing us in extreme joy._Stepping out not only helped a brother in need,but also gave our kids the sweet taste of helping others._appreciatebe thankfulgrateful

24、to sb for sth be filled with gratitudeexcitedthrilledexcitementthrilljoyhappinesspleasuredelightpleasedcheerfuloverjoyedenjoyabledelighted欣喜若狂洋洋得意飘飘然欣喜若狂一股喜悦感涌上他心头接着一个声音从远处传来，让我们沉浸在极度的欢乐中此次外出不仅帮助了需要帮助的人，还让我的孩子们品尝到了助人为乐的幸福滋味（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）2.句子翻

25、译与句型转换A.一看到那个大盒子，孩子们高兴地跳起来。The children jumped up and down with joy _(时间状语从句)_,the children jumped up and down with joy.(非谓语)_,the children jumped up and down with joy.(介词短语)B.没过多久，他们便制作出了美味的爆米花。_ they could make the delicious popcorn.(before句型)C.Mrs.Meredith 回来了，后面跟着Bernard.When Mrs Meredith came b

26、ack,_.(复合句)Mrs.Meredith came back,and _.(并列句)Mrs.Meredith came back,_.(非谓语)D.被告知整个popcorn计划后，Bernard如此感动，一句话也说不出来。（非谓语+so倒装）_when they saw the big boxSeeingOn seeing the big boxAt the sight of the big boxIt wasnt long beforeshe was followed by Bernardshe was followed by Bernardfollowed by BernardHav

27、ing been told the whole popcorn plan,so moved and thankful was Bernard that he could hardly speak（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）Para 1整改When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.So Mrs Meredith took out that big box of corn.The c

28、hildren were very happy.They went to see Uncle John,borrowed the popcorn machine and learned how to make popcorn.The children were busy popping the corn while Mrs Meredith went out to buy the paper bags.She brought Bernard back.They told the idea to him and he was so excited and thankful.细节补充、整合单句、优

29、化句型补充信息、充实内容、完善逻辑.At the sight of it,the children jumped up and down with joy.It wasnt long before they could make delicious popcorn.When she came back,she was followed by Bernard.Having been told the whole popcorn plan,so moved and thankful was Bernard that he could hardly speak.（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷

30、1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）E.Bernard用他的小自行车载着popcorn,挨家挨户地销售。（非谓语）Bernard carried the popcorn on his little bike,_ to sell it.F.很快Bernard 带着空篮子回来了，手里拿着一些硬币。他紧紧地拽着这些硬币，泪如雨下。In a short time,Bernard returned with an empty basket,_.He held the coins tightly,_ without control.(并

31、列句)In a short time,Bernard returned with an empty basket,_.He held the coins tightly,_ without control.(with结构)In a short time,Bernard returned with an empty basket,_.He held the coins tightly,_ without control.(独立主格结构)G.是爱使得这个世界维持运行，对这Bernard幼小的心灵深有体会。(强调句型+定语从句)_ makes the makes the world go round

32、,_ Bernard felt deep in his little heart.going from door to doorand some coins were in his handand tears rolled downwith some coins in his handwith tears rolling downsome coins in his handtears rolling downIt is love thatwhich（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）细节

33、补充、整合单句、优化句型补充信息、充实内容、完善逻辑Para 2整改With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.Bernard carried the popcorn on his little bike and went from door to door to sell it.Neighbors were surprised to see Bernard but eventually almost all bought a bag or two.Thanks to everybody,all things we

34、nt well.such a little,poorly-dressed,goingboy selling popcorn at their doors,In a short time,Bernard returned with an empty basket,some coins in his hand.He held the coins tightly,tears rolling down without control.It is love that makes the world go round,which Bernard felt deep in his little heart.

35、（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.So Mrs.Meredith took out that big box of corn.At the sight of it,the children jumped up and down with joy.Then,they paid a visit to Uncle John,borrowed the

36、popcorn machine and learned how to make the most delicious popcorn.It wasnt long before they could make delicious popcorn.Very soon,they were busy popping while Mrs.Meredith went out to buy the paper bags.When she came back,she was followed by Bernard.Having been told the whole popcorn plan,so moved

37、 and thankful was Bernard that he could hardly speak.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.He carried the popcorn on his little bike,going from door to door to sell it.People were surprised to see such a little,poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors,but eventually

38、almost all would buy a bag or two.In a short time,Bernard returned with an empty basket,some coins in his hand.He held the coins tightly,tears rolling down without control.It is love that makes the world go round，which Bernard felt deep in his little heart.五.成品欣赏（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）Step 2再读整理线索主题Step 4答案整合初稿形成Step 1一读获取段落大意Step 3首句研究逻辑设问Step 5词句美化大功告成Summary：续写5步骤（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）（教学提纲）2020年7月新高考全国卷1读后续写作文获奖课件（免费下载）