2022新人教版（2019）《高中英语》必修第一册读后续写初讲 （ppt课件）.pptx

1、高中新题型高中新题型读读后后续续写写storyplot sentence1.1.从内容、词汇语法、篇章结构三个维度进从内容、词汇语法、篇章结构三个维度进行给分。行给分。2.2.创造内容的质量，续写完整性，与原文情创造内容的质量，续写完整性，与原文情境融洽度。境融洽度。3.3.使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性多样性（不要求）（不要求）。4.4.上下文衔接和全文的连贯性。上下文衔接和全文的连贯性。评分时，先根据作答整体情况初步确定其所评分时，先根据作答整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或

2、调整档次，最后给分。确定或调整档次，最后给分。注意：词数少于注意：词数少于120120，酌情给分；单词拼写，酌情给分；单词拼写和标点符号规范和标点符号规范,评分时视其对交际的影响评分时视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑；不能因为书写较差扣分。程度予以考虑；不能因为书写较差扣分。读后续写的评分原则读story读原文确定基本信息（5W1H）Who What When Where Why How续plot根据提示语构建故事情节确定主题积极向上正能量写sentence句间衔接很重要体现篇章结构句法正确很重要体现词汇语法读写协同很重要语言风格内容 黄丝带代表平安归来、接纳、关怀与协助。黄是一种安全的祝福，黄黄

3、丝带代表平安归来、接纳、关怀与协助。黄是一种安全的祝福，黄丝带代表的则丝带代表的则“平安归来平安归来”。1971年10月14日纽约邮报刊登了一篇小说：长途车上坐着一位沉默不语的男子，在同车的年轻游客的盘问下终于开了口。原来他刚从监狱出来，释放前曾写信给妻子：如果她已另有归宿，他也不责怪她；如果她还爱着他，愿意他回去，就在镇口的老橡树上系一根黄丝带；如果没有黄丝带，他就会随车而去，永远不会去打扰她汽车快到目的地了，远远望去，镇口的老橡树上挂了几十上百条黄丝带，车上的乘客都欢呼起来。这个动人的故事被作成了歌曲，伴着歌声这个故事也传遍了全世界。黄丝带也成了美国“欢迎被囚禁的人重获自由”的标志。黄丝带

4、象征的意义不同，主要用于等待久违的亲人归来。或象征反战，期待远赴战场的亲人早日归来。或是原谅有前科的罪犯，再次接纳，给予其机会。黄丝带的含义：哀悼、思念、祈福、希望、盼望亲人平安。黄丝带，是黄丝带的含义：哀悼、思念、祈福、希望、盼望亲人平安。黄丝带，是亲人离散后的求助标志，也是为亲人祈祷的祝福标识。据了解，汶川地震亲人离散后的求助标志，也是为亲人祈祷的祝福标识。据了解，汶川地震后，福建都市生活广播电台筹集了万余条黄丝带，并于当天将数千条黄丝后，福建都市生活广播电台筹集了万余条黄丝带，并于当天将数千条黄丝带派发出去。带派发出去。Three boys and three girls were go

5、ing to the beach.When they boarded the bus,they were carrying sandwiches and wine,dreaming of golden beaches.Suddenly,they noticed Vingo.He sat in front of them,eyes fixed upon a photo,completely in silence.Deep into the night,the bus pulled into Howard Johnsons,a service area,and everybody got on e

6、xcept Vingo.The young people began to wonder about him.When they came back,one of the girls sat beside him and introduced herself.“Want some wine?”she said.He smiled and took a swig from the bottle.He thanked her and became silent again.The next morning,they awoke outside another Howard Johnsons,and

7、 this time Vingo went in.The girl insisted that he join them.He ordered black coffee and some cookies.When they returned,the girl sat with Vingo again.After a while,slowly and painfully,he began his story.He had been in prison for the past four years,and now he was going home.“Are you married?”“I do

8、nt know.”“You dont know?”she said.“Well,when I was in prison I wrote to my wife,”he said,“I told her that I was going to be away for a long time,and that if she couldnt stand it,if the kids kept asking questions,and if it hurt her too much,she could just forget me.Id understand.Get a new guy,I said.

9、Shes a wonderful woman.I told her she didnt have to write me.And she didnt.Not for three and a half years.”“And youre going home now,not knowing?”“Yeah.Well,last week,we was sure the parole(假释)was coming through,I wrote her again.We used to live in Brunswick and theres a big oak(橡树)tree just as you

10、come into town.I told her that if she didnt have a new man and if shed take me back,she should put yellow handkerchief on the tree and Id get off and come home.If she didnt want me,forget itno handkerchief and Id go on through.”“Wow,”the girl exclaimed,“Wow,”She told the others,and soon all of them

11、were in it.Paragraph 1:Looking at the photo,the young people found a young woman and three children in it Paragraph 2:Vingo sat there amazed,staring at the oak tree.sentence suddenly看到手帕Sentence ending家人团聚 动作Sentence 描述画面和feelings 对话Sentence 由看树到看到人 心理 Looking at the photo,the young people found a y

12、oung woman and three children in it.“What a lovely woman and kids!”Vingo felt of previous misconduct.Vingo sat there silently and rubbed the photo .Staring into the distance,he the joyful or unpleasant incidents before.Guilty Vingo in no time.How he regretted he had ruined his family life!With Bruns

13、wick approaching,Vingo felt his heart beating .All the people on the bus looked out of the window as if a miracle was awaiting.Suddenly,they all jumped up from their seats,screaming except Vingo.Fill in the blanks with proper words and expressionsPara.1adorableashamedunconsciouslyrecalledoverwhelmed

14、wildlyeagerly Looking at the photo,the young people found a young woman and three children in it.“What an elegant woman and lovely kids!”they said spontaneously(自发地，无意识地).Staring at the picture and the young guys,Vingo couldnt help pouring out the secret hidden in mind.Four years ago,it was a sunny

15、afternoon when my family were bathed in the sunshine under the oak tree.All of a sudden,a man,with a gun in hand,jumped out and shouted to us to give all their money to him.Scared,but more calm,I followed his order and soon afterwards threw myself upon/at him.On grabbing the gun,I shot at his head.I

16、t right hit his brain.With these words,the bus came to a stop opposite the oak tree.Para.1丰富了oak tree的故事，插叙（insert narration）使得情节更加丰满 Vingo sat there amazed,staring at the oak tree.It was covered with scores of yellow handkerchiefs waving in the wind as if they were welcoming him back home.All of a

17、sudden,Vingo rose from his seat.There came a beautiful lady followed by 3 children.All the young people jumped high cheering for him.He was fully aware that family was the bay when you needed love and forgiveness most.With tears streaming down,Vingo ran towards them and held them four tightly in arm

18、s.Para.2 Vingo sat there amazed,staring at the oak tree.Twenty or thirty yellow handkerchiefs,maybe hundreds,(映入眼帘).Beside the tree stood a slim figure who he had missed day and night.Though separated for four years,he still recognized her at first sight.As the young people (保持兴奋),Vingo slowly rose

19、from his seat and made his way to the oak tree.The two stood face to face,(看着彼此).All of a sudden,the woman let out a loud cry,breaking the silence.Vingo reached out his (颤抖的)hands and (拥抱)her tightly.With joyful tears streaming down,he patted her on the back lovingly.The yellow handkerchiefs were fl

20、ying merrily with the wind.Para.2 Fill in the blanks with proper words and expressionscame into sightremained thrilledstaring at each othertremblingembraced修辞手法修辞手法 Rhetorical devicesRhetorical devicessimilesimile(明喻明喻)like)like，asas，seem/appearseem/appear，as if as if，similar tosimilar toas strong a

21、s a horseas strong as a horse/l like a red sunike a red sun rising in the east.rising in the east.metaphor metaphor(暗喻）暗喻）Life is an unexplored riverLife is an unexplored river，full of twists and turnsfull of twists and turns，great great beauty and dangerous surprises.beauty and dangerous surprises.personification personification(拟人拟人)The flowers The flowers noddednodded in the breeze.in the breeze.The gentle The gentle breeze caressed breeze caressed(kres(kres 爱抚爱抚)my cheeks my cheeks and and soothed my anger.soothed my anger.