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如何用英语写建议信如何用英语写建议信【写作任务】【写作任务】假定你是李华,你的外国笔友 Larry 最近刚升入一所高中,他给你发来一封邮件,询问你如何尽快适应新的环境。请根据所给提示,给他回复一封邮件。内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出合理建议;3.希望所提建议有所帮助。注意:注意:1.词数 100 左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:参考词汇:适应 adapt toDear Larry,_Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】【写作指导】一、审题定调一、审题定调本写作任务要求写一封建议信,属于应用文。建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或看法。内容包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出这种建议的理由等。除此之外,建议信要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。建议信通常以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主。二、谋篇布局二、谋篇布局建议信的格式和普通信件一样,因本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出,所以我们只需写出正文部分即可。建议信的正文部分可分为三部分:第一部分:表明写信目的;第二部分:提出合理的建议及理由;第三部分:希望所提建议有所帮助。三、组织语言三、组织语言第一部分:表明写信目的。第一部分:表明写信目的。Im happy/glad to receive your letter and know.Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble in/you find it hard to.Learning that you have trouble in.,Im writing to provide you with some advice.I would like to give you my advice on.I understand how you are feeling now and Id like to offer you some advice.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on.I am writing to express my views concerning.第二部分:提出合理的建议及理由。第二部分:提出合理的建议及理由。Here is my advice on how to.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.Here are my suggestions./Below are my suggestions.In my personal view,it is wise of you to take the following actions.It is important for you to.,as you will be able to.It also helps to.whenever possible.Youd better.In this way you will.If I were you,I would.I think it would be better if you could.I strongly recommend that you.第三部分:希望所提建议有所帮助。第三部分:希望所提建议有所帮助。I hope my advice will be helpful/of some help to you.I hope you will find my advice/suggestions useful/helpful.Dont hesitate(犹豫)to turn to me/ask me for help.I will be ready to discuss this matter further.【范文欣赏】【范文欣赏】Dear Larry,I am so sorry to know that you find it hard to adapt to your new school.Many students have the same problem when they go to a new school,so dont worry about it too much.Here are some tips.Firstly,work out a detailed plan for your studies,which will be helpful for you to adapt to the new studying environment as soon as possible.Secondly,it is a good idea to get along with your classmates.You can study together and help each other.More importantly,I advise you to take an active part in some group activities so that you can make some friends and get rid of loneliness.I hope you will find the suggestions helpful.Yours,Li Hua如何用英语写旅行计划如何用英语写旅行计划【写作任务】【写作任务】假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jim 给你发来电子邮件,请你根据邮件内容给他回一封电子邮件。Dear Li Hua,How time flies!Im planning to go on a trip to Hangzhou or Wuhan next month.Could you get around with me if possible?By the way,could you please help me make travel plans?Im longing for your early reply.Sincerely,Jim注意:注意:词数 100 左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。Dear Jim,Im so glad to hear from you!_Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】【写作指导】一、审题定调一、审题定调本写作任务要求给英国笔友 Jim 回复一封电子邮件介绍旅行计划。旅行计划通常包括旅行的重要景点以及旅行安排等。介绍旅行计划多用一般现在时和一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主。二、谋篇布局二、谋篇布局本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出,所以我们只需写出正文部分即可。正文可分为三部分:第一部分:表明写信目的;第二部分:具体介绍旅行计划;第三部分:表达期待。三、组织语言三、组织语言第一部分:表明写信目的。第一部分:表明写信目的。Im eager to take on the exciting trip to.with you soon.Im happy/longing to take on the exciting trip with you.I cant wait to travel with you in.Im writing to tell you about the travel plans.Im writing to share the travel plans with you.Im writing to introduce the travel arrangements to you.第二部分:具体介绍旅行计划。第二部分:具体介绍旅行计划。I plan a four-day trip,which starts on.On the first day,.The next day,.The last day,.After arriving there by.,we can visit.The second day will be spent at.On the last day,we can go on/make a tour around the city.I prefer to go there by.because.We can set off.and come back on.as scheduled.Compared with.,travelling by.can be more comfortable and relaxing.Wed better wear.and take.in case.第三部分:表达期待。第三部分:表达期待。Im looking forward to our dream trip/your coming.If you have better ideas,let me know.Im looking forward to meeting you soon.I cant wait for the holidays to come and meet you.Im sure youll have a good time in.【范文欣赏一】【范文欣赏一】Dear Jim,Im so glad to hear from you!Im eager to take on the exciting trip to Hangzhou with you soon.Im writing to tell you about the travel plans.After arriving there by high-speed train,we can visit the West Lake to see its natural beauty,which was listed as a world cultural heritage site by UNESCO in 2011.On the second day,we will go to the Longjing Village,where we can join the locals to pick tea,make tea and have a taste of Longjing Tea.On the last day,we can go on a tour around the city to enjoy delicious food like Dongpo Meat and buy something made of silk.Sounds great?If you have better ideas,let me know.Im looking forward to meeting you.Yours,Li Hua【范文欣赏二】【范文欣赏二】Dear Jim,Im so glad to hear from you!I cant wait to travel with you in Wuhan.Im writing to share the travel plans with you.Well set off to Wuhan by train,and our first destination will be Hubei Provincial Museum,where we can learn about some local history.The second day will be spent at the Yellow Crane Tower,which is famous in Chinese poems.From the top,you will get a good view of the city.On the last day,we cant miss the largest city lake in China the East Lake.It is popular and attracts a great number of visitors each year.There we can enjoy the beautiful scenery while walking or jogging.Im sure youll have a good time in Wuhan.Yours,Li Hua如何用英语写对比类文章如何用英语写对比类文章【写作任务】【写作任务】你校英语报 Wellness 栏目现面向全校学生征文,主题为“运动给你带来的变化”。请你用英语写一篇 120 词左右的短文投稿。【写作指导】【写作指导】一、审题定调一、审题定调本写作任务要求用英语写一篇短文,介绍运动给你带来的变化,属于对比类文章。主题语境为人与自我,倡导健康的生活方式、积极的生活态度。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。二、拟定提纲二、拟定提纲本写作可分为三部分:第一部分:总体介绍;第二部分:运动前后的你;第三部分:你的感想。三、搜集素材三、搜集素材 单词:单词:hiking,change,benefit,overweight,sickly(带病的,不健康的),anxious,confident,positive,happy.短语:短语:have a strong preference for,junk food,outdoor activities,make up my mind,build myself up,pick up,lose weight,play an important role in,bring about.句子:句子:Ive benefited much from.I loved junk food and spent little time doing exercise.I became overweight and sickly.I didnt pass the 800-metre race.It made me anxious.I made up my mind to build myself up.It has made great changes in me.I realize the importance of doing exercise.衔接词衔接词 表因果关系:because,as,so,thus,therefore,as a result.表时间顺序:first of all,firstly;then,secondly;finally,in the end,at last.表递进关系:whats more,worse still,besides,moreover,furthermore,in addition.表转折关系:but,yet,however,on the contrary.四、撰写草稿四、撰写草稿按照列出的提纲,使用搜集的素材扩展每个部分,完成初稿。第一部分:总体介绍。第一部分:总体介绍。Ive benefited much from hiking.It has changed my life.第二部分:运动前后的你。第二部分:运动前后的你。While at junior high school,I loved junk food and spent little time doing exercise.I became overweight and sickly.I didnt do well in the 800-metre race.It made me anxious.I made up my mind to build myself up.I decided to hike.It has changed me a lot.Ive become confident and happy.第三部分:你的感想。第三部分:你的感想。I realize the importance of doing exercise.I enjoy the changes and will keep going.五、修改润色五、修改润色初稿完成后,为了使文章表达准确、逻辑清楚,需对初稿进行修改润色。如:1.使用复合句,用which引导定语从句将两个句子合并,如首段改为Ive benefited much from hiking,which has made a big difference to me。2.用短语代替单词,如 make a big difference 代替 change,have a strong preference for 代替 love,play an important role in 代替 importance 等。3.增加衔接词使上下文更加连贯,如 so、worse still、then、months later、moreover 等。4.使用句式,增强文章的感染性,如使用强调句 It was then that I made up my mind to build myself up,凸显做出改变的决心。5.适当添加细节,充实内容,使文章更有说服力,如 like losing weight and getting stronger 等。六、检查定稿六、检查定稿 经过修改润色之后,需要再读一遍,以便发现并改正拼写、标点符号和语法上的错误,最后定稿,完成写作。【范文欣赏】【范文欣赏】Ive benefited much from hiking,which has made a big difference to me.While at junior high school,I had a strong preference for junk food and spent little time doing exercise,so I became overweight and sickly.Worse still,I became the only one who did not finish the 800-metre race in my class,which made me anxious.It was then that I made up my mind to build myself up.To do this I chose to hike.Months later,it has made great changes in me,like losing weight and getting stronger.Moreover,Ive become confident and happy rather than worried.The experience has helped me realize doing exercise plays an important role in ones health.I enjoy the changes hiking has brought about and will keep doing it.【Reflection】你还会从哪些方面对初稿进行修改润色呢?如何用英语写新闻摘要如何用英语写新闻摘要新闻摘要写作是对一篇新闻主要内容的提炼和浓缩,要求学生通过阅读,能理解新闻的主要内容、提炼其关键信息并能概括归纳其要点。这种写作方式既要求学生有准确的理解能力,又要求学生具有高度的概括能力。新闻摘要写作一般分为以下四个步骤:第一步:阅读新闻,摘选关键信息。通过对新闻内容的仔细阅读,掌握新闻的主要内容和篇章结构,摘出新闻中事件发生的时间、地点、起因、结果以及可能的后续活动等。第二步:总结新闻各段主旨大意。概括总结新闻每段的中心意思,按照顺序列出要点,只保留新闻中的主要事实,省略不必要的事实细节和事例。第三步:组织语言。列出详细的写作提纲,拟出初稿。尽可能用自己的语言进行表达,可以借鉴使用原文的某些词语和句子。摘要的长度往往是原文本的三分之一,内容只包括文本中重要的信息或事例。摘要不需要加入自己的感情色彩和评论。第四步:修改内容,定稿作品。对初稿的修改包括:1.看要点是否齐全,观点是否一致;2.精简摘要中出现的不必要的词汇、短语或长句子;3.确认拼写、语法和标点符号无误。【写作任务】【写作任务】阅读下面新闻,然后写一篇摘要。Volcanic eruption in CongoPeople are checking the damage caused by lava(熔岩)from the eruption of Mount Nyiragongo in Buhene,on the outskirts of Goma,Congo in the early hours of Sunday,May 23,2021.The volcanic eruption in eastern Congo last night has killed at least 32 people.With little warning,Mount Nyiragongo turned the dark sky fiery(似火的)red on Saturday night and then sent out lava into villages,destroying more than 500 homes,officials and survivors said.The volcanic eruption caused about 5,000 people to move from one neighborhood of Goma,a city of about 2 million people,across the nearby border into Rwanda.Another 25,000 sought refuge(寻求避难)to the northwest in Sake,the U.N.childrens agency said.Great sadness,disbelief and fear hung over the area.More than 170 children were still feared missing,and UNICEF officials said they were organizing transit centers(临时收容中心)to help children who were reportedly separated from their families in the wake of the disaster.“The population of Goma must avoid unnecessary travel,and also avoid visiting places that have been hit by lava from the volcano because the lava is harmful.”Joseph Makundi,head of Civil Protection for the North Kivu Province said.He also said the volcano remains active and earthquakes are being recorded,calling on the population to remain alert.【写作指导】【写作指导】该新闻报道了刚果戈马市郊的尼拉贡戈火山夜间喷发导致多方受灾的事件。通过分析,我们可以发现第一段清晰地列出了火山喷发的时间(5 月 22 日)、地点(刚果戈马市郊的尼拉贡戈火山)、起因(几乎无任何征兆)、结果(至少32 人死亡、500 多座房屋毁于一旦,损失惨重)。第二段介绍了火山喷发造成了大约 5,000 人逃离戈马市入境卢旺达,25,000 人逃亡西北部避难,悲伤、怀疑和恐惧笼罩着这个地区。第三段阐述了火山喷发也造成了儿童失踪的悲惨事实。第四段阐述了政府官员对当地民众的呼吁。本新闻摘要可分以下三部分来写:第一部分:交代事件发生的时间、地点和起因;第二部分:火山喷发带来的后果;第三部分:政府官员的呼吁。【范文展示】【范文展示】Mount Nyiragongo,on the outskirts of Goma,Congo erupted overnight on May 22,2021 with little warning.The volcanic eruption killed at least 32 people and destroyed more than 500 houses.It also caused about 5,000 people to move from one neighborhood of Goma into Rwanda.Another 25,000 sought refuge to the northwest in Sake.Whats worse,there were still more than 170 children who were likely to have been lost.One of the officials said people there needed to keep cautious about the volcano and avoid unnecessary travel.如何写关于英语学习的博文如何写关于英语学习的博文【写作任务】【写作任务】假定你是李华,在某英语学习交流网站看到你的网友发帖,寻求提高英语写作能力的建议。请你写一篇回帖,提出一些你在这方面的建议。注意:注意:词数 100 左右。【写作指导】【写作指导】一、审题定调一、审题定调本写作任务要求用英语写一篇回帖的博文,就如何提高英语写作能力提出自己的建议。博文是人们在网络交流平台分享自己所见、所闻、所感的短文,是人们在日常生活中经常使用的一种新媒体语篇。它属于非正式文体,分享者可以以文字、图片、视频等形式实现信息的分享、传播以及问题的交流与互动。博文要求语言简洁、用词灵活。二、谋篇布局二、谋篇布局本写作任务可分为三部分:第一部分:发帖目的;第二部分:自己的建议;第三部分:希望自己的建议对别人有帮助。三、常用表达三、常用表达除了教材第 67 页中所提供的表达外,我们还为同学们提供了如下相关表达:Problems1.be poor in.2.have difficulty with.3.My biggest headache is.4.is my biggest problem.5.is hard for me.6.I find it difficult for me to.7.I have met some trouble in.Methods1.read widely2.think in English3.keep a diary in English4.use the words properly5.learn lexical chunks rather than single words6.learn something about word formation7.read simplified classic works8.guess the meaning of an unfamiliar word9.memorise grammar rules and do a lot of exercises10.From my point of view,to improve.,there is no better way than.11.One way to do that is.The other way is to.12.Firstly,you should.Also,you should.13.One of the best ways to.is to.14.is a good way of learning English.15.take part in the English Corner Results1.develop ones interest 2.improve ones reading ability 3.form the/a habit of reading 4.enlarge/expand ones vocabulary 5.practise ones oral/spoken English 6.express oneself in English fluently 7.improve writing skills 8.Its of great importance to.9.I benefit a lot from.10.have a good command of.11.have a good knowledge of English 12.make great progressAsk for advice1.Would you like to.so that.?2.Would you mind.?3.Would you be so kind to tell me.?4.Could you please.?5.I would appreciate it if.6.I would be grateful if you could send me information concerning.范文欣赏一范文欣赏一Knowing that you are asking for advice on how to improve your English writing,Im more than glad to offer you some suggestions.A good way to improve your writing is to read some good articles,through which,not only can you broaden your horizons,but also enlarge your vocabulary.To keep a journal is another useful way to improve your writing.It is natural for beginners to make mistakes in writing,but dont worry.Finding out the reason why you make these mistakes will help you avoid the same mistakes and enable you to write better.Hopefully,my advice will be helpful to you.范文欣赏二范文欣赏二Many teenagers are faced with the problem of improving their English when they are writing.The problem is easy to solve if you take my advice.To begin with,it is necessary to enlarge your vocabulary,because it will lay a good foundation for writing.Next,you can practise writing on topics that interest you.Because you are interested in the topic you can deal with the difficulties more easily.Last but not least,never be afraid of making mistakes.Language learning is a process built around making and correcting mistakes.Hope that my advice will be of some service to you.如何用英语写自我介绍如何用英语写自我介绍写作任务写作任务假定你是李华,将参加英语爱好者协会组织的中学生交流活动。请根据所给提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍自己。1.个人基本情况;2.自己的性格和爱好;3.未来的打算。注意:注意:1.词数 100 左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_写作指导写作指导一、审题定调一、审题定调本写作任务要求写一篇短文介绍自己。在做自我介绍时,以第一人称为主,时态主要用一般现在时。二、谋篇布局二、谋篇布局本写作任务可以分为三部分:第一部分:个人基本情况说明(姓名、年龄、性别、年级、学校等);第二部分:自己的性格和爱好;第三部分:未来的打算。三、个人介绍的常用表达三、个人介绍的常用表达Personalitypatient,warm,confident,independent(独立的),humorous,talkative,serious,outgoing,kind,friendly,strong,active,generous,shy,sociable,cheerful,responsible.Hobbies dancing,singing,climbing,skating,cooking,gardening,playing football,listening to music,watching English movies,taking photos,reading books,playing chess.form the habit of,be good at,be interested in,be fond of,be crazy about,put ones heart into.Future plans and dreamsMy dream is to.I plan to become.in the future.I dream of/have been dreaming of becoming.I am looking forward to making my dream come true/achieving my dream.范文欣赏范文欣赏My name is Li Hua,a 15-year-old girl who is studying in grade one at Yuying Senior High School.I am quite outgoing and very sociable,so I have lots of friends.I am also very hard-working and responsible.Besides,I have a wide range of hobbies,including reading,watching English films,and listening to music,but not rock or heavy metal.And Im happy to do things on my own Im very independent,so my parents dont really have to worry about me.Having been dreaming of becoming a scientist since I was a child,I have made up my mind to study physics when I am at college.I am looking forwa
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如何用英语写建议信如何用英语写建议信【写作任务】【写作任务】假定你是李华,你的外国笔友 Larry 最近刚升入一所高中,他给你发来一封邮件,询问你如何尽快适应新的环境。请根据所给提示,给他回复一封邮件。内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出合理建议;3.希望所提建议有所帮助。注意:注意:1.词数 100 左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:参考词汇:适应 adapt toDear Larry,_Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】【写作指导】一、审题定调一、审题定调本写作任务要求写一封建议信,属于应用文。建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或看法。内容包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出这种建议的理由等。除此之外,建议信要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。建议信通常以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主。二、谋篇布局二、谋篇布局建议信的格式和普通信件一样,因本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出,所以我们只需写出正文部分即可。建议信的正文部分可分为三部分:第一部分:表明写信目的;第二部分:提出合理的建议及理由;第三部分:希望所提建议有所帮助。三、组织语言三、组织语言第一部分:表明写信目的。第一部分:表明写信目的。Im happy/glad to receive your letter and know.Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble in/you find it hard to.Learning that you have trouble in.,Im writing to provide you with some advice.I would like to give you my advice on.I understand how you are feeling now and Id like to offer you some advice.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on.I am writing to express my views concerning.第二部分:提出合理的建议及理由。第二部分:提出合理的建议及理由。Here is my advice on how to.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.Here are my suggestions./Below are my suggestions.In my personal view,it is wise of you to take the following actions.It is important for you to.,as you will be able to.It also helps to.whenever possible.Youd better.In this way you will.If I were you,I would.I think it would be better if you could.I strongly recommend that you.第三部分:希望所提建议有所帮助。第三部分:希望所提建议有所帮助。I hope my advice will be helpful/of some help to you.I hope you will find my advice/suggestions useful/helpful.Dont hesitate(犹豫)to turn to me/ask me for help.I will be ready to discuss this matter further.【范文欣赏】【范文欣赏】Dear Larry,I am so sorry to know that you find it hard to adapt to your new school.Many students have the same problem when they go to a new school,so dont worry about it too much.Here are some tips.Firstly,work out a detailed plan for your studies,which will be helpful for you to adapt to the new studying environment as soon as possible.Secondly,it is a good idea to get along with your classmates.You can study together and help each other.More importantly,I advise you to take an active part in some group activities so that you can make some friends and get rid of loneliness.I hope you will find the suggestions helpful.Yours,Li Hua如何用英语写旅行计划如何用英语写旅行计划【写作任务】【写作任务】假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jim 给你发来电子邮件,请你根据邮件内容给他回一封电子邮件。Dear Li Hua,How time flies!Im planning to go on a trip to Hangzhou or Wuhan next month.Could you get around with me if possible?By the way,could you please help me make travel plans?Im longing for your early reply.Sincerely,Jim注意:注意:词数 100 左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。Dear Jim,Im so glad to hear from you!_Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】【写作指导】一、审题定调一、审题定调本写作任务要求给英国笔友 Jim 回复一封电子邮件介绍旅行计划。旅行计划通常包括旅行的重要景点以及旅行安排等。介绍旅行计划多用一般现在时和一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主。二、谋篇布局二、谋篇布局本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出,所以我们只需写出正文部分即可。正文可分为三部分:第一部分:表明写信目的;第二部分:具体介绍旅行计划;第三部分:表达期待。三、组织语言三、组织语言第一部分:表明写信目的。第一部分:表明写信目的。Im eager to take on the exciting trip to.with you soon.Im happy/longing to take on the exciting trip with you.I cant wait to travel with you in.Im writing to tell you about the travel plans.Im writing to share the travel plans with you.Im writing to introduce the travel arrangements to you.第二部分:具体介绍旅行计划。第二部分:具体介绍旅行计划。I plan a four-day trip,which starts on.On the first day,.The next day,.The last day,.After arriving there by.,we can visit.The second day will be spent at.On the last day,we can go on/make a tour around the city.I prefer to go there by.because.We can set off.and come back on.as scheduled.Compared with.,travelling by.can be more comfortable and relaxing.Wed better wear.and take.in case.第三部分:表达期待。第三部分:表达期待。Im looking forward to our dream trip/your coming.If you have better ideas,let me know.Im looking forward to meeting you soon.I cant wait for the holidays to come and meet you.Im sure youll have a good time in.【范文欣赏一】【范文欣赏一】Dear Jim,Im so glad to hear from you!Im eager to take on the exciting trip to Hangzhou with you soon.Im writing to tell you about the travel plans.After arriving there by high-speed train,we can visit the West Lake to see its natural beauty,which was listed as a world cultural heritage site by UNESCO in 2011.On the second day,we will go to the Longjing Village,where we can join the locals to pick tea,make tea and have a taste of Longjing Tea.On the last day,we can go on a tour around the city to enjoy delicious food like Dongpo Meat and buy something made of silk.Sounds great?If you have better ideas,let me know.Im looking forward to meeting you.Yours,Li Hua【范文欣赏二】【范文欣赏二】Dear Jim,Im so glad to hear from you!I cant wait to travel with you in Wuhan.Im writing to share the travel plans with you.Well set off to Wuhan by train,and our first destination will be Hubei Provincial Museum,where we can learn about some local history.The second day will be spent at the Yellow Crane Tower,which is famous in Chinese poems.From the top,you will get a good view of the city.On the last day,we cant miss the largest city lake in China the East Lake.It is popular and attracts a great number of visitors each year.There we can enjoy the beautiful scenery while walking or jogging.Im sure youll have a good time in Wuhan.Yours,Li Hua如何用英语写对比类文章如何用英语写对比类文章【写作任务】【写作任务】你校英语报 Wellness 栏目现面向全校学生征文,主题为“运动给你带来的变化”。请你用英语写一篇 120 词左右的短文投稿。【写作指导】【写作指导】一、审题定调一、审题定调本写作任务要求用英语写一篇短文,介绍运动给你带来的变化,属于对比类文章。主题语境为人与自我,倡导健康的生活方式、积极的生活态度。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。二、拟定提纲二、拟定提纲本写作可分为三部分:第一部分:总体介绍;第二部分:运动前后的你;第三部分:你的感想。三、搜集素材三、搜集素材 单词:单词:hiking,change,benefit,overweight,sickly(带病的,不健康的),anxious,confident,positive,happy.短语:短语:have a strong preference for,junk food,outdoor activities,make up my mind,build myself up,pick up,lose weight,play an important role in,bring about.句子:句子:Ive benefited much from.I loved junk food and spent little time doing exercise.I became overweight and sickly.I didnt pass the 800-metre race.It made me anxious.I made up my mind to build myself up.It has made great changes in me.I realize the importance of doing exercise.衔接词衔接词 表因果关系:because,as,so,thus,therefore,as a result.表时间顺序:first of all,firstly;then,secondly;finally,in the end,at last.表递进关系:whats more,worse still,besides,moreover,furthermore,in addition.表转折关系:but,yet,however,on the contrary.四、撰写草稿四、撰写草稿按照列出的提纲,使用搜集的素材扩展每个部分,完成初稿。第一部分:总体介绍。第一部分:总体介绍。Ive benefited much from hiking.It has changed my life.第二部分:运动前后的你。第二部分:运动前后的你。While at junior high school,I loved junk food and spent little time doing exercise.I became overweight and sickly.I didnt do well in the 800-metre race.It made me anxious.I made up my mind to build myself up.I decided to hike.It has changed me a lot.Ive become confident and happy.第三部分:你的感想。第三部分:你的感想。I realize the importance of doing exercise.I enjoy the changes and will keep going.五、修改润色五、修改润色初稿完成后,为了使文章表达准确、逻辑清楚,需对初稿进行修改润色。如:1.使用复合句,用which引导定语从句将两个句子合并,如首段改为Ive benefited much from hiking,which has made a big difference to me。2.用短语代替单词,如 make a big difference 代替 change,have a strong preference for 代替 love,play an important role in 代替 importance 等。3.增加衔接词使上下文更加连贯,如 so、worse still、then、months later、moreover 等。4.使用句式,增强文章的感染性,如使用强调句 It was then that I made up my mind to build myself up,凸显做出改变的决心。5.适当添加细节,充实内容,使文章更有说服力,如 like losing weight and getting stronger 等。六、检查定稿六、检查定稿 经过修改润色之后,需要再读一遍,以便发现并改正拼写、标点符号和语法上的错误,最后定稿,完成写作。【范文欣赏】【范文欣赏】Ive benefited much from hiking,which has made a big difference to me.While at junior high school,I had a strong preference for junk food and spent little time doing exercise,so I became overweight and sickly.Worse still,I became the only one who did not finish the 800-metre race in my class,which made me anxious.It was then that I made up my mind to build myself up.To do this I chose to hike.Months later,it has made great changes in me,like losing weight and getting stronger.Moreover,Ive become confident and happy rather than worried.The experience has helped me realize doing exercise plays an important role in ones health.I enjoy the changes hiking has brought about and will keep doing it.【Reflection】你还会从哪些方面对初稿进行修改润色呢?如何用英语写新闻摘要如何用英语写新闻摘要新闻摘要写作是对一篇新闻主要内容的提炼和浓缩,要求学生通过阅读,能理解新闻的主要内容、提炼其关键信息并能概括归纳其要点。这种写作方式既要求学生有准确的理解能力,又要求学生具有高度的概括能力。新闻摘要写作一般分为以下四个步骤:第一步:阅读新闻,摘选关键信息。通过对新闻内容的仔细阅读,掌握新闻的主要内容和篇章结构,摘出新闻中事件发生的时间、地点、起因、结果以及可能的后续活动等。第二步:总结新闻各段主旨大意。概括总结新闻每段的中心意思,按照顺序列出要点,只保留新闻中的主要事实,省略不必要的事实细节和事例。第三步:组织语言。列出详细的写作提纲,拟出初稿。尽可能用自己的语言进行表达,可以借鉴使用原文的某些词语和句子。摘要的长度往往是原文本的三分之一,内容只包括文本中重要的信息或事例。摘要不需要加入自己的感情色彩和评论。第四步:修改内容,定稿作品。对初稿的修改包括:1.看要点是否齐全,观点是否一致;2.精简摘要中出现的不必要的词汇、短语或长句子;3.确认拼写、语法和标点符号无误。【写作任务】【写作任务】阅读下面新闻,然后写一篇摘要。Volcanic eruption in CongoPeople are checking the damage caused by lava(熔岩)from the eruption of Mount Nyiragongo in Buhene,on the outskirts of Goma,Congo in the early hours of Sunday,May 23,2021.The volcanic eruption in eastern Congo last night has killed at least 32 people.With little warning,Mount Nyiragongo turned the dark sky fiery(似火的)red on Saturday night and then sent out lava into villages,destroying more than 500 homes,officials and survivors said.The volcanic eruption caused about 5,000 people to move from one neighborhood of Goma,a city of about 2 million people,across the nearby border into Rwanda.Another 25,000 sought refuge(寻求避难)to the northwest in Sake,the U.N.childrens agency said.Great sadness,disbelief and fear hung over the area.More than 170 children were still feared missing,and UNICEF officials said they were organizing transit centers(临时收容中心)to help children who were reportedly separated from their families in the wake of the disaster.“The population of Goma must avoid unnecessary travel,and also avoid visiting places that have been hit by lava from the volcano because the lava is harmful.”Joseph Makundi,head of Civil Protection for the North Kivu Province said.He also said the volcano remains active and earthquakes are being recorded,calling on the population to remain alert.【写作指导】【写作指导】该新闻报道了刚果戈马市郊的尼拉贡戈火山夜间喷发导致多方受灾的事件。通过分析,我们可以发现第一段清晰地列出了火山喷发的时间(5 月 22 日)、地点(刚果戈马市郊的尼拉贡戈火山)、起因(几乎无任何征兆)、结果(至少32 人死亡、500 多座房屋毁于一旦,损失惨重)。第二段介绍了火山喷发造成了大约 5,000 人逃离戈马市入境卢旺达,25,000 人逃亡西北部避难,悲伤、怀疑和恐惧笼罩着这个地区。第三段阐述了火山喷发也造成了儿童失踪的悲惨事实。第四段阐述了政府官员对当地民众的呼吁。本新闻摘要可分以下三部分来写:第一部分:交代事件发生的时间、地点和起因;第二部分:火山喷发带来的后果;第三部分:政府官员的呼吁。【范文展示】【范文展示】Mount Nyiragongo,on the outskirts of Goma,Congo erupted overnight on May 22,2021 with little warning.The volcanic eruption killed at least 32 people and destroyed more than 500 houses.It also caused about 5,000 people to move from one neighborhood of Goma into Rwanda.Another 25,000 sought refuge to the northwest in Sake.Whats worse,there were still more than 170 children who were likely to have been lost.One of the officials said people there needed to keep cautious about the volcano and avoid unnecessary travel.如何写关于英语学习的博文如何写关于英语学习的博文【写作任务】【写作任务】假定你是李华,在某英语学习交流网站看到你的网友发帖,寻求提高英语写作能力的建议。请你写一篇回帖,提出一些你在这方面的建议。注意:注意:词数 100 左右。【写作指导】【写作指导】一、审题定调一、审题定调本写作任务要求用英语写一篇回帖的博文,就如何提高英语写作能力提出自己的建议。博文是人们在网络交流平台分享自己所见、所闻、所感的短文,是人们在日常生活中经常使用的一种新媒体语篇。它属于非正式文体,分享者可以以文字、图片、视频等形式实现信息的分享、传播以及问题的交流与互动。博文要求语言简洁、用词灵活。二、谋篇布局二、谋篇布局本写作任务可分为三部分:第一部分:发帖目的;第二部分:自己的建议;第三部分:希望自己的建议对别人有帮助。三、常用表达三、常用表达除了教材第 67 页中所提供的表达外,我们还为同学们提供了如下相关表达:Problems1.be poor in.2.have difficulty with.3.My biggest headache is.4.is my biggest problem.5.is hard for me.6.I find it difficult for me to.7.I have met some trouble in.Methods1.read widely2.think in English3.keep a diary in English4.use the words properly5.learn lexical chunks rather than single words6.learn something about word formation7.read simplified classic works8.guess the meaning of an unfamiliar word9.memorise grammar rules and do a lot of exercises10.From my point of view,to improve.,there is no better way than.11.One way to do that is.The other way is to.12.Firstly,you should.Also,you should.13.One of the best ways to.is to.14.is a good way of learning English.15.take part in the English Corner Results1.develop ones interest 2.improve ones reading ability 3.form the/a habit of reading 4.enlarge/expand ones vocabulary 5.practise ones oral/spoken English 6.express oneself in English fluently 7.improve writing skills 8.Its of great importance to.9.I benefit a lot from.10.have a good command of.11.have a good knowledge of English 12.make great progressAsk for advice1.Would you like to.so that.?2.Would you mind.?3.Would you be so kind to tell me.?4.Could you please.?5.I would appreciate it if.6.I would be grateful if you could send me information concerning.范文欣赏一范文欣赏一Knowing that you are asking for advice on how to improve your English writing,Im more than glad to offer you some suggestions.A good way to improve your writing is to read some good articles,through which,not only can you broaden your horizons,but also enlarge your vocabulary.To keep a journal is another useful way to improve your writing.It is natural for beginners to make mistakes in writing,but dont worry.Finding out the reason why you make these mistakes will help you avoid the same mistakes and enable you to write better.Hopefully,my advice will be helpful to you.范文欣赏二范文欣赏二Many teenagers are faced with the problem of improving their English when they are writing.The problem is easy to solve if you take my advice.To begin with,it is necessary to enlarge your vocabulary,because it will lay a good foundation for writing.Next,you can practise writing on topics that interest you.Because you are interested in the topic you can deal with the difficulties more easily.Last but not least,never be afraid of making mistakes.Language learning is a process built around making and correcting mistakes.Hope that my advice will be of some service to you.如何用英语写自我介绍如何用英语写自我介绍写作任务写作任务假定你是李华,将参加英语爱好者协会组织的中学生交流活动。请根据所给提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍自己。1.个人基本情况;2.自己的性格和爱好;3.未来的打算。注意:注意:1.词数 100 左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_写作指导写作指导一、审题定调一、审题定调本写作任务要求写一篇短文介绍自己。在做自我介绍时,以第一人称为主,时态主要用一般现在时。二、谋篇布局二、谋篇布局本写作任务可以分为三部分:第一部分:个人基本情况说明(姓名、年龄、性别、年级、学校等);第二部分:自己的性格和爱好;第三部分:未来的打算。三、个人介绍的常用表达三、个人介绍的常用表达Personalitypatient,warm,confident,independent(独立的),humorous,talkative,serious,outgoing,kind,friendly,strong,active,generous,shy,sociable,cheerful,responsible.Hobbies dancing,singing,climbing,skating,cooking,gardening,playing football,listening to music,watching English movies,taking photos,reading books,playing chess.form the habit of,be good at,be interested in,be fond of,be crazy about,put ones heart into.Future plans and dreamsMy dream is to.I plan to become.in the future.I dream of/have been dreaming of becoming.I am looking forward to making my dream come true/achieving my dream.范文欣赏范文欣赏My name is Li Hua,a 15-year-old girl who is studying in grade one at Yuying Senior High School.I am quite outgoing and very sociable,so I have lots of friends.I am also very hard-working and responsible.Besides,I have a wide range of hobbies,including reading,watching English films,and listening to music,but not rock or heavy metal.And Im happy to do things on my own Im very independent,so my parents dont really have to worry about me.Having been dreaming of becoming a scientist since I was a child,I have made up my mind to study physics when I am at college.I am looking forwa
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