人教八年级上册英语Unit5写作课件.pptx(课件中不含音视频素材)

1、Unit 5Do you want to watch a game show？八年级英语上 新目标 人I want to introduce（介绍）（介绍）a movie to you.The name of the movie is Go Brother.It is a comedy movie.It tells a story about a brother and a sister.The brother Shi Fen liked playing jokes on his sister Shi Miao.Shi Miao hated Shi Fen at first.Then she

2、made a wish that she wouldnt have a brother and her wish came true.After that she found out the truth that her brother loved her and wanted to protect（保护）（保护）her.Both the actor and the actress act well.The movie shows Shi Fens love for his sister.Its a touching（感人的）（感人的）movie.I love it.If you want t

3、o see something enjoyable,choose it!人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）思 路 点 拨思 路 点 拨第第1步：步：写作提纲写作提纲开头：开头：点名写点名写作目的作目的the name of the moviethe kind of movie主体：主体：简述电简述电影故事影故事情节情节1.What is the movie about?2.What do you think of the movie/stars?结尾：结尾：发表感发表感想想what do you think of the m

4、ovie?小贴士：小贴士：1.主要人称：主要人称：第一人称；第一人称；2.主要时态：主要时态：一般现在时一般现在时人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）Fill in the blanks in the movie review.Use the words in the box to help you.fantastic shows action want comes from played about like exciting plan Mulan is an movie.It _ an old Chinese story.

5、The movieis a village girl,Mulan.She dresses up like a boy and takes her fathers place to fight in the army.about comes fromexciting action人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）I think the actress _ Mulans role well.The other actors are also and they did a good job in the movie.I Mulan

6、 very much.The movie her love for her family,friends and country.If you to watch a movie this weekend and you to see something enjoyable,choose Mulan!playedfantasticlikeshowsplan want人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）Answer the questions.(1)What is the name of the movie?(2)What kin

7、d of movie is it?(3)What is the movie about?(4)What does the writer think of the stars?(5)What does the writer think of the movie?(6)What tenses does it use?The simple present tense and the simple past tense.Mulan.Its an action movie.It is about a village girl.She dresses up like a boy and takes her

8、 fathers place to fight in the army.The actress played Mulans role well.The other actors are also fantastic and they did a good job.The writer likes Mulan very much.The movie shows her love for her family,friends and country.人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）Write a movie review.Th

9、e name of the movie:The kind of movie:What the movie is about:What do you think of the movie/stars:Go Brother!comedy movie The brother Shi Fen liked playing jokes on his sister Shi Miao.Shi Miao hated Shi Fen at first.Then she made a wish that she wouldnt have a brother and her wish came true.After

10、that she found out the truth that her brother loved her and wanted to protect（保护）（保护）her.Both the actor and the actress act well.The movie shows Shi Fens love for his sister.人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）写 作 任 务写 作 任 务推荐电影推荐电影快把我哥带走快把我哥带走给朋友给朋友Mike。要求：要求：1.要点齐全，结构完整，语意连贯。2.80词左

11、右（开头，结尾已给出，不计入总词数）评分原则：评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。各要素的权重大体为：卷面书写（1分），内容9分（其中要点5分，语意连贯4分），语法结构、单词拼写、标点（4分），词数（1分）。人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）【各档次的给分范围和要求各档次的给分范围和要求】第一档（第一档（13-15分）分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面的错误，少数错误主要是由于较高级词无语法和词汇方面的错误，

12、少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致。词数达到要求。基本无单词拼写及标汇或复杂结构所致。词数达到要求。基本无单词拼写及标点错误。点错误。第二档（第二档（10-12分）分）：写出大部分要点类容。语句较流畅。：写出大部分要点类容。语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。有少量单有少量语法和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。有少量单词拼写及标点错误。词拼写及标点错误。第三档（第三档（7-9分）分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。第四档（第四档（4-6分）分）：写出少量内

13、容要点，语句不通顺。语法、：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。第五档（第五档（0-3分）分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。一些单词，不知所云。人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）谋 篇 布 局谋 篇 布 局这篇写作务要求推荐一部电影，我们可以从以下三这篇写作务要求推荐

14、一部电影，我们可以从以下三个方面展开：个方面展开：首先，简单介绍这部电影的类型、主要演员、导演首先，简单介绍这部电影的类型、主要演员、导演等。等。其次，简述电影情节（交代故事发生的时间，地点，其次，简述电影情节（交代故事发生的时间，地点，人物以及部分情节）。人物以及部分情节）。最后，对电影进行评价。可以评价故事情节、演员、最后，对电影进行评价。可以评价故事情节、演员、电影配乐、服装等，也可以谈谈自己观影后的感悟。电影配乐、服装等，也可以谈谈自己观影后的感悟。人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）思 路 点 拨思 路 点 拨第第1

15、步：步：写作提纲写作提纲开头：开头：点名写点名写作目的作目的the name of the moviethe kind of movie主体：主体：简述电简述电影故事影故事情节情节1.What is the movie about?2.What do you think of the movie/stars?结尾：结尾：发表感发表感想想what do you think of the movie?小贴士：小贴士：1.主要人称：主要人称：第一人称；第一人称；2.主要时态：主要时态：一般现在时一般现在时人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张

16、PPT）教材解读教材解读1.She dresses up like a boy and takes her fathers placedress up装扮装扮;乔装打扮。乔装打扮。He dressed up as a cowboy.他装扮成一个他装扮成一个牛仔牛仔。人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）take sb.s place代替。代替。Whos going to take your place at the meeting?谁将替你出席那个会议谁将替你出席那个会议?2.and they did a good job in the movie.do a good job干得好干得好,做得好做得好,用于夸奖某人的工作或用于夸奖某人的工作或演技。演技。Im sure you can do a better job next time.我相信我相信你下次会做得更好。你下次会做得更好。Youve done a good job of it.你干得太漂亮了你干得太漂亮了!人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）人教八年级上册英语Unit5-写作（共18张PPT）