高考英语书面表达体裁分类必背 Type02 道歉信.doc

1、 Type 02 道歉道歉信信 必背词汇 make up 和解 keep promise 信守诺言 be absent/present from 缺席/出席 apologize to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 show an apology to sb.for sth.因某事向某人道歉 make an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 say sorry to sb. 对某人说抱歉 beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅 cause inconvenience 造成不便 miss/cancel the appointment

2、 错过/取消约会 make up for.弥补 express my regret 表达我的道歉 be considerate of 体谅 accept my apology 接受我的道歉 conflict with. 与冲突 have no choice/option but to do sth.除了做某事别无选择 make a choice 选择 必背句式必背句式 1. 道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话 I am writing this letter to express my regret 我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾 I am writing to apolog

3、ize for 我写信是为道歉。 I would like to give you my apology for 我想向你道歉。 I am very sorry to say that 我很抱歉 I must apologize about (not) doing sth 对于做了/没做，我必须道歉。 Please accept my sincere apology for 请接受我对于的真诚道歉。 I am writing to say sorry for 我写信是想对说抱歉。 I am terribly sorry, but 我很抱歉，但是 2.中间段：陈述理由中间段：陈述理由+补救措施补

4、救措施 陈述理由陈述理由: 理由： I should have been able to attend your lecture, but due to the fact that something urgent happened, Ill have to take the place of my mother to pick my aunt up at the airport, whose flight happens to arrive on Saturday night. And its the first time that my aunt has returned to my ho

5、metown since she studied abroad several years ago. So I have no choice/option but to cancel the appointment with you. 我本应该参加你的讲座，但由于发生了紧急的事情，我要代替母亲到机场接我阿姨，她的航班在周六晚抵 达，这是阿姨自从几年前去留学第一次回国。我别无选择只好取消和你的约会。 补救措施：补救措施： 1.I want you to know how bad we feel about it and to assure you that it will happen agai

6、n. 我想让你知道我们有多难过，我向你保证这不会再发生了。 2.I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience. 我希望这不会给你带来太多的不便。 3.It would be very kind( considerate)of you to give me another chance to do sth. I promise it will never happen again. 你太好了，再给我一次机会做某事。我保证不会再发生这种事情。 4.If it is convenient for you, lets have a

7、nother appointment to do sth. 如果方便的话，我们再约去做某事。 5.Would you mind if I change the appointment time? 你会介意我改变约会的时间吗? 6.By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week? 顺便说一下，我们在下周的某个时间一起吃晚饭好吗? 7.ls it possible that I make up for the loss by doing sth.? 可能让我做某事来弥补损失吗? 3.道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套道歉信中结尾段常用

8、句式和套话话 Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。 Please allow me to say sorry again. 请允许我再一次说抱歉。 Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. 希望你们能够接受我的道歉，理解我的处境。 I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies. 我真诚的

9、希望你能够站在我的位置想一想，并且接受我的道歉。 I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now. 我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。 I am sorry that I cant but trust that you will be able to understand. 很抱歉我不能，但我相信，你会理解的。 必背模块必背模块 模板模板 Dear _(对象), I am truly sorry that _(道歉的原因). The reason is that _(介绍原因). Once again, I am sorry for

10、any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 模板模板 Dear _, I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that _ (直接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定). Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret_ (表达歉意). Please accept my sincere apo

11、logy_(诚恳希望对方能接受道歉). I fear you are displeased at _(表达出自 己的心情，并请求对方原谅).I hope you will understand me and excuse me for_(过渡句). Let me explain(开始介绍道歉的原因). The reason for my delay/absence was that _(阐述自己当时的处境和 情况). I had no way out because _ (总结自己道歉的原因). Therefore its not in my power to _(希望下次再次实现愿望). N

12、aturally, I want to suggest _. I shall be glad if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you_(约定下次约会的时间和地点) We may meet again and I hope to see you soon. Sincerely Yours, Li Hua 思路点金思路点金 道歉信的写法 日常生活中难免会出现一些差错，如失约、损坏东西等。遇到这种情形，应及时写信致歉，以消除不必 要的误解，维系正常的关系。道歉信除应及时写之外，还必须写得诚恳，歉意应发自内心，决不可敷衍塞 责。再

13、则，事情的原委要解释清楚，措辞应当委婉。 写好道歉信的关键在于措辞要朴实、委婉，语气要诚恳、真挚，解释要详细明了。例如Im excessively sorry、sincere apology、deep regret等都是致歉之词，这就恰如其分地表达了写信人的真诚歉意。 道歉信通常包括三部分内容：道歉信通常包括三部分内容： 1.表示歉意，道歉的原由； 2.出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施； 3.请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。 4.补充说明。客套话。 好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。 典例 01 （2016新课标卷 III）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书

14、店，因故不能赴约。请给他写 封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ 【思路分析】 题目要求写一封道歉信，李华因不能和 Bob 一起去书店而向 Bob 道歉，文章应使用第一人称和一般现 在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。 【范文赏析】 Dear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I hav

15、e just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the sc

16、hool gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours, Li Hua 亮点说明： 范文包括了所有要点内容， 做到了语意连贯。 范文使用了宾语从句 that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon 和 the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句 so that well hav

17、e more time to read and select books；条件句 If its convenient for you；省略句 If not 等，长短句结合，使内容显 得更加丰富。 【名师点睛】 此作文是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的 同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时应注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文 的连贯性。 典例 02 你给英国朋友 Chris 写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划 7 月份一同去云南旅游； 2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往； 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到 8 月份。 注意

18、： 1.词数 100 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Joe 【思路分析】 本题考查学生应用文写作，是一封书信，但开头和签名都已给出，学生只需写出要点即可。书信一般 开头应有寒暄的句子，然后过渡到想要表达的内容。最后要有结束语。本文的得分点分布在五个内容上： 寒暄、三件事和结束语。 【范文赏析】 Dear Chris, How is everything going? I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now becau

19、se my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. Im sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Joe 典例 03 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友 Tom 一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但 你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮

20、件： 1.未及时回信的原因； 2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等） 注意： 1. 词数：120-150； 2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 【思路分析】 本题要求写的书面表达为书信类型，而为了考查考生审题能力，命题人并没有把如感谢、道 歉、建议、申请等明显的字眼放在题中，而是通过考查学生对题干的审题能力暗示学生此书信 体作文应大体包含道歉和告知两个方面。因此文章的主干部分要先表示歉意、解释原因，后写假期的打算。 从写作要点和得分点来看，考生应在宏观上把握书信体写作的要求，如格式、文体等，写作段落以三 段式为宜，首段体现问候、写信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可询问

21、 Tom 暑假里的打算，体现书信体的交际 性；而中间段具体交待未及时回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微观层面上应具体把握写作的内容和语言， 做到句子之间有效的连接，长短句结合，多用 doing 及物做主语，句子加半句原因、结果、目的等具体细节 的解释、利用简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。考生若能在写作部分做到内容充实符合要求、语言精 彩与众不同、结构清晰一目了然，相信这样的文章能让考生获得一个相对满意的成绩。 【经典套路】 第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的 第二段：道歉部分(相当于写信背景) 第三段：假期安排部分 第四段：补充说明+客套话 【范文赏析】 Dear Tom, How is eve

22、rything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, Ive been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details. Ove

23、rall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots su

24、ch as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, whats your plan to spen

25、d your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 必背范文必背范文 Writing 1 假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望。 请 用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下: 1. 向他表示道歉; 2. 表达你对此事的认识; 3. 请求他的原谅。 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Dylan， _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua

26、 【范文】 Dear Dylan, I apologize for not arriving on time to pick you up from the bus station yesterday. I have no excuse for keeping you waiting for so long. Next time, Ill make sure to leave early enough in order to arrive as scheduled, or even ahead of schedule. I humbly ask your forgiveness. I hope

27、 my mistake wont prevent you from seeking my help in the future. Im always happy to be of service. Yours, Li Hua Writing 2 假如你是李华，上周在外教 Mr.Jackson 的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。请给外教写一 封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点： 1.表示歉意； 2.解释上课使用手机的原因； 3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。 注意：1.可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数 100 左右； 2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr.Jackson, _ _

28、 _ _ _ _ _ Yours , Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Mr. Jackson, Im really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week. Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student. I know any word might sound a made-up excuse. But I didnt use the mobile phone for no reason. I was trying to a

29、pply to some American universities last week and that day, I got an offer and they needed my further information immediately. Therefore, I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered. I promise it will never happen aga

30、in. But I do need my phone back to get in touch with others. Will you be kind enough to give it back to me? I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation. Yours, Li Hua Writing 3 假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将于下周五下午 3:00 在二楼报告大厅举办舞会（prom） 。你是服务志愿 者，但因故不能按时参加，请你用英语给组织者 Mr.White 写一封道歉信，内容包括：

31、 1.表示歉意 2.解释原因 3.已将志愿者工作安排他人完成 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr.White， Im Li Hua, volunteer of the English Club. _ _ _ _ _ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua, volunteer of the English club. Im writing this letter to express my sincere apology to you for being absent

32、 from the prom to be held next Saturday. Now I give you an explanation. The reason why I cant take part in the prom is that I suddenly fall ill. My parents sent me to hospital, and I have to stay there for a week. Therefore, I cant attend the prom. As for my volunteer work, I have appointed my class

33、mate Tom to serve as a volunteer. I sincerely hope that you can consider my situation and accept my apologies. Yours, Li Hua Writing 4 假如你是李华，外教 Peter 布置了一篇作文作为家庭作业，你抄了别人的作业交了上去，事后觉得自己 不诚实，很后悔。请写一封道歉信向外教表达你的款意，要点如下： 1. 你抄作业的原因； 2. 你的补救措施。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear peter, _ _ _ _ _ _

34、Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Peter, Hows everything going? Im writing to make an apology for not being honest and having cheated you. Last week, you assigned an essay about the universe to us as our homework. Much to my regret, I copied one from others and handed it in. The reason why I did so was that I

35、 knew nothing about it. Besides, due to my mothers illness, I was too busy to search for some information. Having handed in my copied essay, however, I felt conscience-stricken. Ill try to make up for my fault. I have referred to the internet and finished my own one. Enclosed is my essay. I sincerely hope that you can forgive me. Once again, please accept my apology. Yours, Li Hua