高考英语书面表达体裁分类必背 Type03 求助信.doc

1、 Type 03 求助求助信信 1.have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth. 做某事有困难 2.do sb. a favor/give sb. a hand 给某人帮助 3.ask for help/seek for help 寻求帮助 4.encounter some problems 遇到一些问题 5.be busy/occupied/engaged in doing sth.忙于做某事 7.make preparations for.为某事做准备 9.put.in use 学以致用 10.let sb. down 让某人失望 11.overcome th

2、e fear 克服恐惧 12.be anxious/eager to do sth./long to do sth.渴望做某事 13.take the trouble to do sth. 费心地去做某事 14.offer some constructive guidance 提供一些有益的指导 15.be grateful/thankful/appreciative to sb.for sth.因某事感激某人 首段：请求帮助首段：请求帮助 1.Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.

3、 现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。 2.Iam writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor. 我希望你能帮我一个忙。 3.I wonder if you could do me a fvour, this is the first time that my uncle visits us. 我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙，这是我叔叔第一次来访，所以我希望你能到机场接他。 4.Iwonder if you some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red si

4、lk threads, cloth and otherbmaterials. 我想知道你是否能帮我出售一些中国结，这是我自己用 红丝线、布等材料做的 5.Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished? 你愿意帮我润色草稿吗？ 中间段：中间段：描述具体困难描述具体困难 1.1am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, Whats more, What troubles me most is 我遇到的三个间题很困扰我，首先 另外最困扰

5、我的是 2.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard to do with(使用形式宾语) 不幸的是，我觉得做某事十分/非常难。 3.lt is difficult/challenging for me to do sth. 做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。 4.Thave trouble/difficulty/problems (in)doing sth. 我做某事有困难。 5.Domg sth.is another terrible headache for me.(使用动名词做主语） 做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。

6、 6.I find myself struggling with sth.(使用 find 复合结构） 我发现自己做某事有困难。 7.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on.? 面对上述问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。 结尾段：希望得到帮助：结尾段：希望得到帮助： 1.Iwonder if can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you

7、 could help me ? 我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我，我真的很感激。 2.I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help(give/lend me some practical/valuable advice) 如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助（给我一些实用的/有价值的建议） 。我会很感激。 常见困难：常见困难： 【生活方面】 与人相处 get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my p

8、arents. 和我的同学/新老师/父母相处 把握时间 arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things. 安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情 明确目标 know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life eve ryday. 知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活 【学习方面】 不懂语法 have trou

9、ble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing. 进步太慢 find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time. 精力有限 cant be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid. 模板

10、Dear _ , I am writing to formally request to _ （ 请 求 的 内 容 ） .The reason for _is that_（给出原因）. I_ , so I _（给出细节）.I would also like to request _ （提出进一步的要求） . I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to co

11、ntact me at _（电话号码）. I look forward to a favorable reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 模板 Dear_, My name is _(自我介绍). Im writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _(求助内容). First, I find _(困难 1). Besides, _(困难 2). Whats more, _(困难 3). Faced with so much difficulty, I have to a

12、sk you for some help. Would you like to _(委婉提出请 求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that _(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求 内容). Im sure that I can make great progress in _(表达期待). Yours, Li Hua 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。 首段：表明写信目的，请求帮助； 中间段：要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容； 结尾段：希望得到帮助。 注意：语气委婉、

13、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。 典例 01 （2016 年新课标全国卷 I）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历 （resume） 。给外教 Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） 。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ 【写作思路】 该题虽然也是文字提示，属于书信体应用文写作，但它同往年的命题形式大不相同。写作要点没有单 独罗列出来，而是包含在题目要求中，这对考生审题和构思提出了较大的挑战，这是前所未有的创新。 经过认真审题，我们可以确定本文的写作要点有： （1）简单介绍自己、解

14、释缘由； （2）说明写信的目的修改文字和格式； （3）提示所附材料在哪里； （4）表示感谢。 试题的情景是考生日常生活中熟悉的事情，题目要求明确、清晰，开放性很强，给考生留下了很大的自主 发挥的空间。 【满分范文】 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I

15、 am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I dont even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you

16、 the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me. Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful. Yours, Li Hua 典例 02 假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院，目前已经花光了家 里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bone marrow transplant)，需要 20 万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如 下： 1.对病人的简单介绍；

17、2.目前的困难； 3.希望得到捐助。 联系电话：白天 5221600；晚上 5221610。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends, Im very sad to tell you that_ _ _ _ _ _ Yours truly, Li Hua 【写作指导】 该写作根据要求可分为三部分来写，即先说明王强患病的情况，再简单介绍王强目前所处的困境，最 后写出求助要求和帮助方式。可用第一人称写，时态可以一般现在时为主。 【范文赏析】 Dear friends, Im very sad to tell y

18、ou that my classmate Wang Qiang, a Senior Three student, suddenly felt faint when he was preparing for the coming College Entrance Examination. He is suffering from a serious illness “leukemia“. He has been in hospital for about three months and spent all the money his parents saved. His parents, bo

19、th farmers, tried every means to save him. Wang Qiang is a top student in our class, but he is in hospital now. He is in urgent need of a bone marrow transplant. However, his family is too poor to afford the expenses, which total 200,000 yuan. How can a poor family afford such high expenses? But tim

20、e is life. We cant wait to see such a sunshine boy lose his life. So your help is badly needed. Lets do what we can to save our fellow student. The life of a lovely boy is in your hand. Your love can save a life. You can contact 5221600 in the daytime and 5221610 at night. Yours truly, Li Hua 【范文亮点】

21、 该范文结构合理，层次分明，语言表达地道，行文流畅。内容涵盖了所有的要点，运用了较多的高级 语法结构和词汇，如 which 引导的非限制性定语从句，when 引导的时间状语从句等。 Writing 1 假定你是李华，你的朋友 Tom 因为和父母之间有一些分歧，给你写了封求助信。他的烦恼有：1. 他 周末想看电视，可是父母除了学习，什么都不让他做。2. 父母不理解，觉得他每门功课都应该是班上最好 的，还经常看他的日记。请你根据以上情况给他回信并提出建议（至少两条） 。 注意：1. 短文应包括所提供的所有内容，也可以适当发挥。 2. 词数：100 词左右。 Dear Tom, _ _ _ _ _

22、Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Tom, You told me that you feel unhappy recently, for you disagrees with your parents about what you should do or what you shouldnt do. You do well in Maths and Chinese, while you finds English and physics difficult to learn. Youre is under great pressure from studies. However

23、, your parents dont understand you and insist that you should be the best at every subject in your class. Whats more, they often read your diaries. Besides, you feel like watching TV at weekends, but your parents allow you to do nothing but study. Worst of all, youre so annoyed that you shows no int

24、erest in your study at all. I think, first of all, you should communicate with your parents, telling them your trouble. And you should cheer up as soon as possible, working hard to quality yourself for a job in the future. Additionally, youd better turn to your teachers for advice and make a plan on

25、 how to improve your English and physics. Yours, Li Hua Writing 2 为了帮助中学生健康成长， 某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。 假设你是该栏目的编辑 Jim， 收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和 生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。 注意：1词数 100 左右；2信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n脾气，情绪 Dear Worried, _ _

26、 _ _ _ _ _ Yours truly, 【范文】 Dear Worried, Im sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so there is no need to worry too much. What matters most is to learn to control your temper so that y

27、ou may not do or say anything that youll regret. Here are three useful tips. First of all，talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Besides, it also helps to go outdoors and play team games with your friends as phy

28、sical exercise is an effective way to get rid of angerLast but not least，remain optimistic about your futureSuch a positive attitude toward life can be helpful in lifting your spirits I feel that my suggestions would be of great benefit if you stick to them. Yours truly, Writing 3 假设你是李华,你的家乡剪纸艺术负有盛

29、名,你写了一篇英文宣传稿,想请外籍教师 Mike 帮助润色。请根 据提示,用英语给 Mike 写一封求助信。内容包括: 1. 求助事由; 2. 求助内容; 3. 表达感激。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike, Im writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor. _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Mike, Im writing in the hope that you will be kind

30、enough to do me a favor. When it comes to papercutting,there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. For a long time I have been longing to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far fr

31、om satisfactory. As far as Im concerned, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot. Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished? I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience. I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration. Yours,

32、 Li Hua Writing 4 假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院,目前已经花光了家里 的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bone marrow transplant),需要 20 万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如下： 1.对病人的简单介绍； 2.目前的困难； 3.希望得到捐助。 联系电话：白天 5221600；晚上 5221610。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends, Im very sad to tell you that _ _ _ _ Your

33、s truly, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear friends, Im very sad to tell you that my classmate Wang Qiang, a Senior Three student, suddenly felt faint when he was preparing for the coming College Entrance Examination. He is suffering from a serious illness “leukemia“. He has been in hospital for about three months an

34、d spent all the money his parents saved. His parents, both farmers, tried every means to save him. Wang Qiang is a top student in our class, but he is in hospital now. He is in urgent need of a bone marrow transplant. However, his family is too poor to afford the expenses, which total 200,000 yuan.

35、How can a poor family afford such high expenses? But time is life. We cant wait to see such a sunshine boy lose his life. So your help is badly needed. Lets do what we can to save our fellow student. The life of a lovely boy is in your hand. Your love can save a life. You can contact 5221600 in the daytime and 5221610 at night. Yours truly, Li Hua