英语写作常见错误分析课件.ppt

1、英语写作常见错误分析英语写作常见错误分析 高考作文主要弱点高考作文主要弱点:1.中国式英语多中国式英语多;2.语法概念模糊语法概念模糊,语用失误多语用失误多;3.拼写错误多拼写错误多;4.词汇量少词汇量少,词汇概念不清词汇概念不清;5.句子不完整及累赘；句子不完整及累赘；6.审题马虎审题马虎,叙述不着点子叙述不着点子;教师心目中的好文章教师心目中的好文章:1.书写工整漂亮。书写工整漂亮。2有内容有内容,涉及基本要点涉及基本要点;3.句子没毛病句子没毛病,无语法错误或语用失误无语法错误或语用失误;4.句法上句法上,简单句与复合句或复杂句相间简单句与复合句或复杂句相间;5.连贯性好连贯性好;6.词

2、汇档次较高词汇档次较高;7.表达功能或意念时表达功能或意念时,用语得体用语得体,有骨头有骨头,且有血有肉且有血有肉.书写分，（书写分，（15）评分标准中明确规评分标准中明确规定，书写差，以致影响交际要将分数定，书写差，以致影响交际要将分数降一个档次，一个档次为降一个档次，一个档次为5分分。英语书法英语书法,过好英语书写关这个话题过好英语书写关这个话题.可可能有人认为我这个高中老师谈这个问能有人认为我这个高中老师谈这个问题也太小儿科了题也太小儿科了.且慢且慢,待我说了一个实待我说了一个实际情况你再作结论际情况你再作结论.英语书写的规范整洁漂亮英语书写的规范整洁漂亮,应该是一个老话题应该是一个老话

3、题.但自从但自从2007年我年我们地区的市级考试实施网上阅卷以来们地区的市级考试实施网上阅卷以来,其重要性显得尤为明显其重要性显得尤为明显.所谓的所谓的网上阅卷网上阅卷.就是把学生的试卷扫描以后就是把学生的试卷扫描以后,进入电脑进入电脑.以互联网的形式以互联网的形式,让让阅卷老师在电脑上打分阅卷老师在电脑上打分,于统计工作带来很大的便利于统计工作带来很大的便利.一份字迹清楚饱一份字迹清楚饱满漂亮的试卷满漂亮的试卷,其在电脑显示屏上看上去是很清晰的其在电脑显示屏上看上去是很清晰的.阅卷老师阅卷时阅卷老师阅卷时看了觉得心情舒畅看了觉得心情舒畅.分数稍微给高点是在情理之中的事分数稍微给高点是在情理之

4、中的事.但一份书写差但一份书写差劲的试卷就糊了劲的试卷就糊了.所以所以.在我们江苏省英语高考的新的试卷评分标准中在我们江苏省英语高考的新的试卷评分标准中对书面表达的细则规定对书面表达的细则规定:书写模糊不清可降一个等级计分书写模糊不清可降一个等级计分.一个等级就一个等级就是是5分分.这种无须多少智力因素去左右的分数这种无须多少智力因素去左右的分数,失了岂不可惜失了岂不可惜.一份字迹模糊的试卷一份字迹模糊的试卷,即使考即使考生的实际水平很高生的实际水平很高,很有可能很有可能要吃亏的要吃亏的.即使容许你查分即使容许你查分,到时也是哑巴吃黄连有苦说到时也是哑巴吃黄连有苦说不出的不出的.何况仲裁老师又

5、不是何况仲裁老师又不是你亲娘舅你亲娘舅.是亲娘舅可能要申是亲娘舅可能要申请回避的哦请回避的哦.2、our school is very beatiful.3 The house is being buit now.1、Our monter is very hard-working,and he is always the frist to come to our classroom and the last to leave.monitor firstbeautifulbuilt4、I am very glad to recive your letter.5、Last Thusday ,we

6、had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.6、Thank you for your litter asking about the rebuilt primary school.receiveThursdayletter例例1如翻译这句如翻译这句“我们学校将要建我们学校将要建造一个植物花园，学校将种植不同造一个植物花园，学校将种植不同种类的树木和花草。很多学生将这种类的树木和花草。很多学生将这句翻译为句翻译为”Our school wants to improve our environment and o

7、ur school will build a botanical garden。提示提示：当句子主语不好表达时：当句子主语不好表达时用被动语态或者灵活变换主语，用被动语态或者灵活变换主语，如上句改为如上句改为We will plant different kinds of trees ,flowers and grass in and around our school ,A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in.例例2Today,Money to everybody is very importance,

8、ours eat,cloth,live,go etc.改为改为：Today,money to everybody is very important.Including our eating,wearing,living,going etc.1.不一致不一致所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致，它还包括了数的不一致，时态不一致及时态不一致及代词不一致等代词不一致等例、When one have money,he can do what he want to.(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么就干什么)剖析：剖析：one是单

9、数第三人称，因而是单数第三人称，因而本句的本句的have应改为应改为has;同理，同理，want应改为应改为wants.本句是典型的本句是典型的主谓不一致主谓不一致改为：改为：Once one has money,he can do what he wants(to do)例2.1.To do well in college,good grades are essential.剖析：句中不定式短语剖析：句中不定式短语“to do well in college”的逻辑主语不清楚的逻辑主语不清楚改为：To do well in college,a student needs good grade

10、s .2.Be ill ,she had to look after her sick mother at home.(使用非谓语动词时，非谓语动词的逻使用非谓语动词时，非谓语动词的逻辑主语和句子主语要保持一致辑主语和句子主语要保持一致)。例例3They started working at once,clean the windows and sweeping the floor.（并列词要保持一致）（并列词要保持一致）例例4，They said it is such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.（主从句的时态要保持

11、一致）（主从句的时态要保持一致）例例5，After graduate from high school,he went to work in a small company.cleaningwasgraduating 1、There is no need worried about it.改为：改为：There is no need to worry about it 2、We may think that our parents are not believe in us.改为改为We may think that our parents do not believe in us.3、We

12、should try to spend more time to talk with them.改为改为,We should try to spend more time talking with them.4 Everything was done,they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.改为：改为：Everything done,they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people 5 The old womam has three sons,all of them a

13、re doctors.(句句法错误法错误)改为：改为：The old womam has three sons,all of whom are doctors。三三.句子不完整（句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）例例 There are many ways to know the society.For example by TV,radio,newspaper and so on.剖析：本句后半部分剖析：本句后半部分“for example by TV,radio,newspaper and so on.”不是一不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不个完整的句子，仅为一

14、些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句能独立成句改为改为：There are many ways to know society,for example,by TV,radio,and newspaper.2.考生在尝试写一些从句和复杂的考生在尝试写一些从句和复杂的 句子结构。但往往忘记了写主句句子结构。但往往忘记了写主句从而导致句子的不完整从而导致句子的不完整1).Hang Kang which has many beautiful places of interest and is famous for its theme park.改为：改为：.Hang Kang which has many b

15、eautiful places of interest is famous for its theme park.2)It is known to us all,so we must seize the time and cherish our life.（改法较多）（改法较多）3)Jane Austin who was born and brought up in a village .She wrote many famous novels。改为：Jane Austin who was born and brought up in a village wrote many famous n

16、ovels。例例2，We believe you will success in passing the driving examination.四四.词性误用词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)“词性误用词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等词当副词用；名词当动词用等 例例例例 None can negative the importance of money.剖析：剖析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。系形容词，误作动词。改为：改为：None can deny the importance of mone

17、y.改为：改为：We believe you will succeed in passing the driving examination.例例3，Id like to wish her a happily birthday to express my thanks to you for your hard working.改为改为;Id like to wish her a happy birthday to express my thanks to you for your hard work.例例4,We all think its our duty to protection and

18、 beautiful our environment.改为改为;We all think its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.本句的本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同位语从句，系同位语从句，我们按照上述我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句能用词组的不用从句”可以改为：可以改为：In spite of his laziness,I like him.五五.累赘累赘(Redundancy)言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词；写段言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词；写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的

19、不用词组；落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组；能用词组的不用从句或句子。如：能用词组的不用从句或句子。如：例例1In spite of the fact that he is lazy,I like him.例例2 For the people who are diligent and kind,money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。改为：剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。改为：Diligent,caring people use money only to buy what t

20、hey need.例例3 My name is Li Hua and I am a student who study in Xing Hua Middle School.改为改为:My name is Li Hua and I am a student of Xing Hua Middle School.Welcome to the column:”English Writing”!In order that improve your English writing skills and learning well,we expext all of you to post your arti

21、cles on the column.You can write anything that you are famliar to and send them to us.Afterwards,teachers can give you some advices on what you written online.In this way,Im sure you can make more progresses.The students whose writing are excellent will be awarding.The first prize:an MP4,for the second prize,you can get an English dictionery and the third one:an exercise book.If you happen to know the news,please inform your classmates to it.I hope all of you can learn a lot in this activity.tolearnexpectwithadvicewroteprogressofawardeddictionary