自考英语专升本作文技巧点拨课件.ppt

1、Writing的结构1.Introduction2.Body3.Ending写作的基本原则 四、短语优先原则四、短语优先原则五、多变句式原则五、多变句式原则范文欣赏Para 1 My View on Fate Different people have different views on fate.Some people think that fate is predestined and nobody can change it,while others argue that everybody is the master of his fate and he can change it

2、with his own hands.Para 2 As far as I am concerned,I agree with the latter opinion.For one thing,I firmly believe all men are born equal and nobody is destined to always succeed or fail in his life.For another,if a person is diligent and determined,he will realize his dream no matter how poor,humble

3、 or unlucky he may be.Just think of Nobel,who invented dynamite after countless experiments during which lost his brother and got seriously injured himself.Para.3 Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that there is no such thing as destined fate in our life

4、.Only if we hold on to our dream can we turn it into reality,just as the saying goes,“Everybody is the architect of his own fortune.”观点论述类议论文模板导入：第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题1.提出主题提出主题 （开头）（开头）The topic of（主题）（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently.There is a widespread concern over the issue thath

5、as attracted extensive（广泛的）广泛的）attention of the society.There is no consensus(一致一致)of opinion among people as to the view ofWith the economic development/the improvmen of living standards,.主体主体展开展开转折转折Firstlysecondly(besides)thirdly(finally)For one thingfor anotherwhats moreOn one handon the other h

6、andmoreoverOn the contraryhowever,a coin has two sidesYou cant take your cake and eat it.自己的看法自己的看法In my opinion As far as I am concerned From my point of view,With reference to my standpoint,I think/I firmly support结尾结尾“总而言之总而言之”：Obviously(此为过渡短语)，we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise

7、from politeness and respect for others.更多过渡短语：更多过渡短语：to sum up，in conclusion，in brief，on account of this，thus更多句型：更多句型：Thus，it can be concluded that，Therefore，we can find that结尾结尾喊口号喊口号 Only throughcan we建议 Obviously，it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.字数不够怎么办？字数不够怎么办？一、举

8、实例一、举实例 思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！To take as an example，One example is，Another example is，for example二、做比较二、做比较方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；相似的比较：in comparison，likewise，similarly，in the same manner相反的比较：on the other hand，conversely，whereas，while，instead，nevertheless，in contrast，on the con

9、trary，compared with，三、换言之三、换言之没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复！I love you！I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say，I love you.I am wild about you.In other words，I have fallen in love with you.衔接词衔接词 A.表举例的 For example，for instance，as a case in point，in the case of，as a i

10、llustration，such as，like，that is，say.B.表示比较的 Similarly，likewise，in the same manner，the same as，like，both，equally important C.表示对照的 On the contrary，on the other hand，by contrast，unlike，whereas，rather than，conversely，instead，the opposite is true.D.表示让步的 Although，though，nevertheless，however，but，yet，adm

11、ittedly，it is true but，in spite of，even though.E.表示原因的 Because，as，since，for，owing to，due to，as a result of，on account of F.表示结果的 Thus，so，hence，consequently，therefore，accordingly，for this reason，as a consequence G.表示结论的 In conclusion，in short，on the whole，finally，lastly，to sum up，to conclude，in any e

12、vent.英语学习中遇到的问题英语学习中遇到的问题和解决办和解决办法法问题及对策问题及对策听：listening问题：too fast/quick,many new words对策：do more exercise,listen to the radio,listen to English songs,watch English movies;learn from English website说 speaken/oral English 问题：feel scared/afraid to sepak Englsih;wrong pronunciation and intonation对策spe

13、ak more/as much as possible in class/with classmates;make foreign friends,imitation,read after the radio读 reading know the meaning of the word,but dont know the meaning of the sentence对策：read more,begin with reading some English magazine or novels写 writing问题grammar errors;small vocabulary,not native

14、 English 对策：memorize more words every day,write a diary,recite beautiful articlewrite your own composition又来了！鼠小弟的小背心 我再也不借给别人了！小背心真漂亮。让我穿穿好吗？不行。反正我穿了也不会好看。不，不会的！我借给你吧。还是不好看吧？小蛇真可怜！小背心真漂亮。让我穿穿好吗？不行。可以吧，就穿一下。不行，不行，绝对不行。鼠小弟，你穿得有点大吧？让我穿穿好吗？不行。可以吧，就穿一下。不行，不行，绝对不行。鼠小弟，你穿得有点大吧？让我穿穿好吗？不行。可以吧，就穿一下。不行，不行，绝对不行。就因为是背心，所以 我给你织件别的吧。鼠小妹给我织的帽子。挺好看吧。不好看，不好看。不好看，不好看。不好看，不好看。小蛇，你带上一定很好看。真的，正合适。好漂亮的小背心！怎么，怎么搞的，又成背心了！