大学英语四级作文写作策略课件.ppt

1、四级作文写作策略1.本题满分为15分。2.阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷1至2份。3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）;若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加1分（即9分）或减1分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。4.评分标准:2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子 均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分基本切题。表达思路不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思路清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14

2、分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。用英文或中文给出提纲（outline），要求按提纲写作，这种提纲经常是以三段的形式给出，又称三段式作文 审题 Benefits of Sports How university graduates find work 开门见山：单刀直入，直截了当。不要兜圈子，绕弯子，第一句话最好就采用“topic sentence”，点明主题，重点突出 根据中、英文提纲，选取素材 书写一定要工整，卷面力求整洁1.“如今，人们普遍认为但是我怀疑”2.Nowadays，it is generally/commonly believed t

3、hat.,but I wonder that.3.“近来，的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。”4.Currently,the issue of.has been brought to public attention.5.“随着的快速增长，在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。”6.Along with the rapid growth of.,.has become increasingly important in our daily life.7.文章结尾句型文章结尾句型“因此，不难得出结论”Accordingly/Consequently/As a result,it is not diffic

4、ult to draw the conclusion that.“综上所述，我们能得出如下结论”From what has been discussed above,we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that.“这一难题，是任何人都不可能避免的。但只要处理得当，我们就会”The dilemma is something no one can avoid.Properly handled,however,we will.“总之，全社会都应该密切关注，只有这样我们才能”All in all,the whole society should pay

5、 close attention to the problem of.Only in this way can we.“考虑到所有的因素，我们意识到”Taking into account all of these factors,we have reached the realization that.1.individuals,characters,folks 替换 people,persons 2.positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替

6、换 good。3.dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad，如果bad做表语，可以用be less impressive替换。E.g.：An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games,enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation,as a result,they find their academ

7、ic records are less impressive.4.an ocean of,a sea of,替换many。用many,if not most 时一定要小心，many后一定要有词。例如：Many individuals,if not most,harbor the idea that.同理 可用most,if not all,替换most。5.a slice of,quite a few,several替换some。6.harbor the idea that/take the attitude that/hold the view that/it is widely share

8、d that/it is universally acknowledged that替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)。7.affair,business,matter替换thing。8.shared替换common。9.reap huge fruits替换get many benefits。10.for my part,from my own perspective，from my point of view 替换in my opinion。11.increasing(ly),growing替换more and more（注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用in

9、creasing/growing,修饰形容词，副词用increasingly。）例如：sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything,或little or nothing替换hardly。13.beneficial,rewarding替换helpful。14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer。15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely 替换

10、very。16.hardly necessary,hardly inevitable.替换 unnecessary,avoidable。17.sth appeals to sb,sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in/sb.be interested in。18.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention。19.be supposed to 替换should。20.be indicative of,be suggestive of,be fearful of

11、代indicate,suggest,fear。21.give rise to,lead to,result in,trigger替换cause。22.There are several reasons behind sth替换.reasons for sth。23.desire替换want。24.pour attention into替换pay attention to。25.bear in mind that替换remember。26.enjoy,possess替换have（注意process过程）。27.interaction替换communication。28.frown on sth替

12、换be against,disagree with sth。29.to name only a few,as an example替换for example,for instance。英文的主语一般只能是四部分组成:名词（含代词）、动名词ving、动词不定式to及句子。主语是上述四部分之一吗?谓语动词是一个吗?（每句话一个，从句也算一句话）这个动词时态、语态、语气正确吗?若是在shall，will，must，may，can等情态或助动词后，用原形了吗?除了这个谓语之外的其它动词消掉了吗?（是否用成动词的非谓语形式）主语与谓语一致吗?及物动词或介词后，使用宾语的形式了吗?（主、系表除外）定语或状语的位置放的合理吗?从句的引导词使用恰当吗?单词有没有拼写错误?冠词该用a还是an There be 句型该不该用？审题并列出提纲（约5分钟）开始写:（1）切题（2）干净（3）少犯错误（4）开门见山（5）闪光点（约20分钟）交卷前检查（1）拼写错误（2）语法错误等（约5分钟）