北师大英语必修4unit-11-Communication-Workshop-Writing-(32张)课件.ppt--（课件中不含音视频）

1、课题：课题：Unit 11 Communication Workshop Writing Practical Writing(应应用文写写作)a letter&an email Obejectives(学习目标学习目标)To attach great importance to practical writingTo appreciate some compositionsTo learn some skills to beautify our essaysTo write a beautiful composition 应用文是应用文是每年高考考查频率最高的体裁之一每年高考考查频率最高的体裁

2、之一，其中，其中以以书信、电子邮件书信、电子邮件最为常见。从内容上看，近几年高考最为常见。从内容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、书信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读者请求的解答信投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。写作时应注意及其答复读者的信等。写作时应注意:格式正确，语言格式正确，语言简练地道，语气要因人、因事而异简练地道，语气要因人、因事而异。Practical Writing应用文写作Introduction 假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引假定你

3、是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）有关情况（箭头所指内容）历届高考书面表达回顾注意：注意：1 1词数词数100100左右；左右；2 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3 3参考词汇：住宿参考词汇：住宿-accommodation-accommodation咨询信咨询信Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school

4、 during the vacation.Ive seen your ad,and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the

5、course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua历届高考书面表达回顾咨询信咨询信 假定你是李华，你校英文报假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化外国文化”栏目拟刊栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得彼得写信约稿写信约稿，要点如下：，要点如下：1.栏目介绍；栏目介绍

6、；2.稿件内容；稿件内容；3.稿件长度：约稿件长度：约400词；词；4.交稿日期：交稿日期：6月月28日前日前。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3.开头语已为你写好。开头语已为你写好。历届高考书面表达回顾约稿信约稿信Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among

7、 us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the历届高考书面表达回顾约稿信约稿信United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,a

8、nd the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua约稿信约稿信 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（申

9、请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）.注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。历届高考书面表达回顾求助信求助信Dear MS Jenkins,Im Li Hua from English writing class last lesson.Im writing to ask for your help.Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company

10、 in my city during the summer vacation,and I have just completed my application letter and resume.However,I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used.I know you求助信求助信have a very busy schedule,but Id be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary ch

11、anges.Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.Thank you for your kindness!Yours,Li Hua 求助信求助信 What is the structure of a letter?A letterBeginningBody Ending1、告知对方你的身份、告知对方你的身份（假如对方不认识你）（假如对方不认识你）Dear Sir/Mr.Smith,I am a student at your college,majoring in English Department.I

12、am a high school student from Ningbo.My name is,I amBeginningDear Tom,How time flies!How are you doing these days?I hope everything is fine.How are you getting along with.?Beginning2、问候收信人、问候收信人（假如他（假如他/她是你的朋友）她是你的朋友）3、说明写信原因说明写信原因 The reason why I am writing to you is that(写写信原因信原因)I am writing to

13、complain about the poor service at your dining-room.I am writing to draw your attention to.I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in _(报纸名称报纸名称)of _(广广告发布时间告发布时间)BeginningBody Beautiful content:All the details should be stated(内容要完整内容要完整)and everything should be to th

14、e point(切题切题).How to Get Your Composition Advanced(高级)？Body1.Proper linking words（1）表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容 what is more;besides;moreover;in addition（2）表示转折关系表示转折关系 however;on the other hand;on the contrary（3）表示因果关系表示因果关系 since;because(of);thus;therefore;as a result（4）表示条件关系表示条件关系 if;on condit

15、ion(that);as long as;unless（5）表示时间关系表示时间关系 when;while;until;as soon as;ten hours later;recently;from then onBody-Proper linking words（6）表示特定的顺序关系）表示特定的顺序关系 首先，最主要的首先，最主要的:above all 其次其次:secondly 然后然后:then;next 最后最后:finally;in the end（7）换一种方法表述）换一种方法表述 换句话说换句话说:in other words;that is to say;（8）进行举例说明

16、）进行举例说明 for instance;for example;such as（9）用于陈述事实）用于陈述事实 in fact;actually;as a matter of fact 跟你说实话跟你说实话:to tell you the truth（10）对一个话题进行总结）对一个话题进行总结 on the whole;in short;all in all;in general;in a wordBody2.Beautiful sentences(1)How happy I was when I received your letter!感叹句感叹句 (2)It was this you

17、ng boy that helped the old lady.强调句强调句(3)Only in this way can you solve the problem.倒装句倒装句(4)Go to the lab if necessary.省略句省略句Body-Beautiful sentences(5)I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.with短语短语(6)In my opinion,cyber cafes （网吧）（网吧）should be a place where we

18、can find much useful information.定语从句定语从句(7)What impressed me deeply(主语从句主语从句)was that the man devoted his whole life to school（表语从句）（表语从句）.(8)So long as we work harder at our lessons（条件状语从（条件状语从句）句）,well catch up sooner or later.1、发出请求、发出请求（1）I would very much appreciate it ifas soon as possible.（2

19、）Please give this matter your immediate attention.2、提供帮助、提供帮助（1）I hope thesewill be helpful,and please feel free to contact me for more information.（2）If you encounter(遇见遇见)any inconveniences in your life or work,do not hesitate to let me know and Ill be very glad to help you out.Ending3、再次表示歉意或感激、再

20、次表示歉意或感激（1）Thank you for your kind assistance.（2）Please accept my heartfelt thanks and deepest gratitude,now and always.（3）Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.4、期盼回信、期盼回信（1）Im looking forward to your early response.（2）We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.（3）Your

21、early reply will be highly appreciated.EndingBeautiful handwritingbeautiful handwriting 英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛 主题：人与自然（主题：人与自然（Man and Nature）时间：时间：6月月15日下午日下午2 005 00 地点：地点：501教室教室 参赛选手：参赛选手：10名学生名学生 联系人：李华联系人：李华(电话电话44876655)欢迎大家光临欢迎大家光临Practice makes perfect(2010全国卷全国卷)假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校将举办一假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华

22、，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛次英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，希望附近某大学的外籍教师，希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。邀请信邀请信BeginningBodyEndingDear Miss Smith，Im Li Hua，chairman of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School，which is close to your university.Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our E

23、nglish speech contest to be held in our school.First,the contest is arranged on June 15.And it will start at 2 00 pm,lasting for about three hours.Whats more,Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic“Man and Nature”.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient fo

24、r you.Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes.Li Hua佳作点睛佳作点睛定语从句定语从句非谓语动词作后置定语非谓语动词作后置定语非谓语动词作伴随状语非谓语动词作伴随状语宾语从句宾语从句条件状语从句条件状语从句条件状语从句条件状语从句 李华是高二的学生，李华是高二的学生，写信问你如何把握高三这最关键的写信问你如何把握高三这最关键的一年。请你结合自己的经历，从时间安排、饮食、睡眠、锻炼一年。请你结合自己的经历，从时间安排、

25、饮食、睡眠、锻炼等方面，回一封等方面，回一封100120词的信。词的信。_ _ _HomeworkFrom:Mrs.Luo1.根据图中和表格中信息,丁香林地土壤平均含水量整体较高的原因主要从地形地势、坡度、地表径流、树高、郁闭度、密度等方面分析回答。2.自然恢复就是不掺杂人为因素的干扰,自然恢复程度需要考虑该区域的地形、植被等自然因素以及劳动力和成本等人为因素。3.自然恢复投入的劳动力和资金少,成本低,减轻当地的经济负担;自然恢复形成的生态系统丰富、稳定,水土保持效果更好;该流域属于生态脆弱地区,应减少人工干预。4.建立了自然保护区和绿化带,优化了产业结构,减少了对煤炭资源的开采,城市功能区合

26、理调整。5.随着美国西部和南部的新兴产业的发展，美国西部和南部为美国人口提供了更多的就业机会，加上东北部环境的污染，导致人口从东北部迁入西部和南部。引起图中人口迁移的主导因素是社会经济因素.6.高效益的综合发展阶段，第二、三产业在国内生产总值中占到相当大的比重，第三产业的增长速度明显超过第二产业，高科技成为区域发展的主导力量。7.分析赤峰市发生白灾的自然原因，并说明定居后牧业抗灾能力增强的主要原因8.位于半湿润半干旱过渡地带(农牧交错带)，种植业和畜牧业均可发展；种植业为畜牧业提供丰富饲料；种植业和畜牧业为农畜产品加工业提供丰富原料。9.要及时调整产业结构，大力发展新兴产业；发展科技，提高产品质量和生产效率，增强竞争力。