初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张-)课件.pptx

1、中考英语作文快速提分 英语作文有多难？难于上青天？！初三学生英语作文调查问卷1:你的英语作文得分通常是：A.18 B.1517 C.1013 D.510 E.10 2：你觉得英语作文 A.难 B.还好 C.简单 D.很难 E.很简单 3：你最常用的句子有哪些？As we all know，It is+adj.+for sb+to do sthif 条件句I think.sothat 4：你最常用到的形容词有哪些？beautiful wonderful good happy important easy popular careful 5：你最常用的动词有哪些？think learn help

2、have be like love make watch read know get play see 6：你最常用的的逻辑词是哪些？优秀：Therefore,because,although,however,further more,In a word中等：because,but,if,or,and,so,first,next,after,then7：你的作文中用到过名言警句吗？如果有，用过哪些？有：Failure is the mother of success.Good medicine tastes bad.Nothing is impossible to a willing hear

3、t.A friend in need is a friend indeed.Practice makes perfect.Where there is a will,there is a way.All roads lead to Rome.8：你希望获得写作中哪些方面的帮助？优秀：句型、易错点、结构中等：句型、词汇、逻辑稍差：句型、内容：扣分制（8分）1.记叙文：6w+时态2.议论文：分清要求写的是How？还是Why？语言：扣分制（8分）1.拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。2.语法：每错扣0.5分，同上3.标点：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。4.大小写：每两处错误扣0

4、.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。5.词数：50-59词之间者,每少5个词扣0.5分，词不成句不给分。组织结构（4分）8+8+348+7+237+7+126+6+0.51.56+5+0分值分布分值分布作文表达：在娱乐和获取信息的方式多种多样的今天,我们还有必要阅读吗?书本会消失在人类历史发展的长河吗?开头第1句：开门见山，表明观点。Theres no doubt that be one of the+a.最高级+n.复数+状语（毫无疑问）e.g.Theres no doubt that reading is one of the mostimportant things in the world.

5、There is no denying that+S.+V.(不可否认.)e.g.There is no denying that reading is one of the mostimportant things in the world.第2句：简单明了，引出话题。1.不用说不用说 It goes without saying that eg：It goes without saying that there is no end to learning2.我认为，我认为，In my opinion，=From my point of view，eg:From my point of vi

6、ew，reading can never disappear even though the society has developed so fast in recent years.3.我个人认为，我个人认为，As far as I am concerned,reading can never disappear with the fast development of society.逻辑清晰，层次渐进。逻辑清晰，层次渐进。正文逻辑过渡词排序关系first of all;secondly;last but not least,并列关系and;too;as well as;along wi

7、th;together with.举例关系for example;for instance;like;such as，转折关系but;however;while;though;on the contrary，因果关系because;since;thanks to;as a result;thus;therefore，归纳总结in a word;in short;to sum up;in conclusion,递进关系as a consequence;whats worse;worse still;furthermore；moreover；in additionFirst of all,read

8、ing gives us some places to go when we have to stay where we are.The more pages you read,the harder it is to shut the book.观点观点1，另辟蹊径。，另辟蹊径。First of all,观点1（ving 作主语）.展开 21观点观点2，升华高度，升华高度 Whats more,观点2（被动语态）.展开eg:Whats more,its generally considered that reading do a lot of benefit to our students.i

9、t not only can make our after-school life more meaningful,but also it can expand our horizons.As a result,with reading more,we would grow into a better person.21前后照应万能呼应结尾结尾31结尾第一句：To sum up,only by doing can we第二句：if everyone tries his best to do sth,the world will become much more peaceful and har

10、monious.化妆篇化妆篇技巧技巧1：妙用形容词：妙用形容词技巧技巧2：妙用副词：妙用副词技巧技巧3：妙用动词：妙用动词技巧技巧4：被动语态：被动语态技巧技巧5：妙用从句妙用从句技巧技巧6：名言警句：名言警句技巧技巧7：学霸句型：学霸句型技巧1：妙用形容词勤奋的勤奋的 hard-workingdiligent聪明的聪明的cleverintelligent重要的重要的importantessential美丽的美丽的beautifulattractive开心的开心的happydelightful有害的有害的badbe harmful to有意义的有意义的meaningful独立的独立的indep

11、endent有责任的有责任的responsible有效果的有效果的effective 有效率的有效率的efficient技巧2：妙用副词 几乎几乎almost 尤其尤其especially 立即立即immediately宁静地宁静地peacefully 完全地完全地completely 耐心地耐心地patiently有效果地有效果地effectively令我惊讶的是令我惊讶的是To my surprise技巧3：妙用动词 知道knowcome to realize/understand 解决solvedeal with 给giveprovide with 提高improvemake progr

12、ess 期待expectlook forward to doing sth.能够canbe able to do sth 满意satisfybe satisfied with 使用usemake full use of 扮演actplay an important part in 注意focuspay attention to doing sth 做到succeed in doing sth 采取措施take measures to do sth技巧4：被动语态Some shop owners use Christmas songs during the festive season to m

13、ake us more careless with our money.=Christmas songs are used to make us more careless with our money during the festive season.He interviewed some neighbors of hers in order to get information.=He interviewed some neighbors of hers so that he can get information.He was so excited that he realized h

14、is father arranged this for him.技巧5：妙用从句 初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)健康：健康：One apple a day,keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。一天一苹果，医生远离我。友情：友情：A fiend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。患难见真情。学习：学习：Never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。活到老，学到老。毅力：毅力：Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。熟

15、能生巧。方法：方法：All roads lead to Rome.条条道路通罗马。条条道路通罗马。As an old saying goes,“Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者，事竟成。有志者，事竟成。.”技巧6：格言警句初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)4211.妙用插入语妙用插入语Luckily,in fact，,as I see it,for example,however,which is so essential for us,技巧7：学霸句型2.妙用同位

16、语妙用同位语He himself.They themselves should.We students should concentrate on.We teenagers must do.初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)213.妙用倒装句妙用倒装句Only by doingcan we do sth4.主语从句主语从句What I have learnt is that nothing is i

17、mpossible to a willing heart.What attract me most is that 5.定语从句定语从句He is the most honest person that I have ever seen.初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)补妆:修改瑕疵拼写正确动词时态名词单复标点无误书写美观初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-

18、作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)The Way to Keep Healthy Its important for us to be healthy in our life.We cant study or work well without a healthy body.Therere many ways to keep healthy.First of all,we should keep taking exercise every day.We can walk t

19、o school instead of taking a bus.After school,we can spend an hour playing ball games.If we live in a high-rise,we can walk upstairs or downstairs.Secondly,we should have a balanced diet.Finally,we must remember:Early to bed,early to rise is the way to keep healthy,wealthy and wise.初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)Thank you!初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)初中中考英语冲刺-作文书写思路详细讲解(共27张 PPT)