中考英语作文指导课件(共38张).ppt

1、中考英语作文中考英语作文一 写作步骤1.先审题：弄清题目要求，确定体裁，拟写提纲；2.圈要点：仔细观察，将情景中给出的要 点逐条列出3.定基调：确定时态，人称，开头，结尾4.写全文：运用熟悉的句型表达，使用恰当的过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯而流畅。二词和句子的表达1词和词组的运用：使用课本上学过的，最有把握的词和词组，不会表达的单词用同义词代替。例如：“不知所措”-dont know what to do“偶像”-favorite singer or player“风和日丽”-Its fine./Its a nice day.2.句子的表达 (1)尽量使用简单句；（2）学会使用意译法，将语义

2、表达出来即 可，切忌与汉语提示一一对应，否则会写出中式英语；例如：我非常喜欢英语。误 I very like English.正 I like English very much.（3）语态，时态要准确无误，主谓要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致；例如：我们应当尊敬父母，帮助他们做家务。Eg.We should respect our parents and help them do some housework.三.文章的结构1.开门见山的开头；2.条理清楚的主体；3.点明主题的结尾四.成文之后的检查1，一般语法项目的检查：人称：Ms Li is my English teacher,he

3、helps me to learn English.时态：At first,I have many difficulties.主谓一致：They always speaks English with me.习惯用法:And Ill never stop learn it.2.字数是否达要求，有无遗漏要点。中考作文一般要求80字左右。近近3年中考年中考作文试题回顾作文试题回顾 2014年：广东正在创建教育强省，学校需要年：广东正在创建教育强省，学校需要改善办学条件。你所在的学校正在就如何改改善办学条件。你所在的学校正在就如何改善学校现有的设施设备条件征求学生的意见。善学校现有的设施设备条件征求学

4、生的意见。请你在学校的官方微博上留言，内容包括：请你在学校的官方微博上留言，内容包括：1你喜欢学校哪个场所的设施设备以及喜你喜欢学校哪个场所的设施设备以及喜欢的原因；欢的原因；2选取学校现有的两个场所谈谈设施设备选取学校现有的两个场所谈谈设施设备的不足：的不足：这两个场所里还缺少哪些设施设备或物品；这两个场所里还缺少哪些设施设备或物品；这些设施设备或物品的缺乏所带来的负面这些设施设备或物品的缺乏所带来的负面影响；影响；如何改善。如何改善。2015年：每年夏天，溺水事故频发。年：每年夏天，溺水事故频发。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。内容包括：内容包括：1.我们应

5、该如何防止此类事故的发生？我们应该如何防止此类事故的发生？（两点建议）（两点建议）2.如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何施救？施救？3.呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。Every coin has two sides.What is a successful article?Enjoy an articleGroup learning 1:Read the article and find out:1 Whats the main idea of each paragraph?（每一段的主要内容是什么？）（每一段的主要内容是什么？）2 Wh

6、ats the writers opinion?What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？）（作者的观点是什么？理由？）3 Is the experience typical for the topic?（作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？）（作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？）4 Are there any good phrases or sentences?Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）（有好词好句吗？请划住。）Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?Different

7、 students have different opinions.As for me,middle school students shouldnt use the mobile phones.It is a waste of time.Besides,its bad for the mind and the body.你的观点你的观点 2至至3条理由条理由 Last term,my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present.After that,I often used it to chat with my friends,e

8、ven some strangers.It wasted me much time,my eyesight became worse.And because of leaking(泄露泄露)some personal information,I often got many unwanted calls.自己的亲身经历自己的亲身经历 All in all,as middle school students,we should be far away from the mobile phones,and pay much attention to our study.总结全文总结全文Write

9、your own article！在生活中遇到问题时，我们常常有两种解在生活中遇到问题时，我们常常有两种解决方式：自己独立解决、与他人合作解决。当决方式：自己独立解决、与他人合作解决。当你遇到生活中的问题时，怎样解决更好呢？针你遇到生活中的问题时，怎样解决更好呢？针对这一话题，九年级二班同学们展开了辩论。对这一话题，九年级二班同学们展开了辩论。假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出2至至3条理由条理由来说服同学们（只选择一方观点表达即可）。来说服同学们（只选择一方观点表达即可）。要求：要求：1.词数不

10、少于词数不少于80词；词；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。Group learning 2:Have a discussion:1 How many parts should we write?And whats the main idea of each part?（我们应该（我们应该分几部分来写？每一部分的内容是什么？）分几部分来写？每一部分的内容是什么？）2 For Part 1 and Part 3,what words or sentences can we use?（在第一和第三部分，（在第一和第三部分，我们可以用哪些词或句来表达主题？）我们可以用哪

11、些词或句来表达主题？）3 For Part 2,what experiences can we write about?（在第二部分，我们可以写哪些经历？）（在第二部分，我们可以写哪些经历？）第一部分：观点及理由观点：in my opinion as for me in my view.（开门见山，点明主题）（开门见山，点明主题）Everyone may have problems.So do I.When I meet problems,I often deal with them by myself.Different people deal with their problems in

12、different ways.As for me,when I meet problems,I like to deal with them with others.第一部分：观点及理由理由：on the one hand,on the other handbesidesalso.（开门见山，点明主题）（开门见山，点明主题）第一部分：观点及理由（开门见山，点明主题）（开门见山，点明主题）God helps those who helps themselves.During the process of solving problems,I can improve myself a lot an

13、d gain much progress.I should depend on myself instead of others.I can learn a lot when I deal with problems by myself.正正方方反反方方It is good for me to learn something from others.It can help me get along well with others.Its easier for me to get out of the trouble.第二部分：自己的亲身经历（用一般过去时记叙一件过去的事）（用一般过去时记叙一

14、件过去的事）Last year,I had a problem in English.When I was in Grade 7,I got into trouble learning math.When I entered middle school,I found it was difficult to get along with my classmates.Several months ago,I had so much pressure that I felt really stressed out.正方：正方：Last year,I got into trouble learnin

15、g math.I got poor grades on math and I was really worried.However,I believed that I could deal with it by myself.I looked over my mistakes and found out what I didnt understand in math.Soon,I found a way of learning math by correcting mistakes and getting experience.At the end of the term,I made gre

16、at progress in math.I was so proud of myself!反方：反方：When I entered middle school in Grade 7,I found math difficult to learn and nearly lost heart.I asked one of my classmates who was good at math for help.She told me some good ways to learn math.She also helped me with my homework.And whenever I want

17、ed to give up,she encouraged me a lot.Thanks to her help,I became interested in math and got good grades.We also became really good friends.第三部分：结尾（总结全文，重申观点）（总结全文，重申观点）in a word in short all in all .正方正方：All in all,it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves.It can make us more

18、 independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.反方：反方：In a word,dealing problems with others is very good.Cooperation is really necessary and you can be successful more easily with other peoples help.Write your own article！在生活中遇到问题时，我们常常有两种解在生活中遇到问题时，我们常常有两种解决方式：自己独

19、立解决、与他人合作解决。当决方式：自己独立解决、与他人合作解决。当你遇到生活中的问题时，怎样解决更好呢？针你遇到生活中的问题时，怎样解决更好呢？针对这一话题，九年级二班同学们展开了辩论。对这一话题，九年级二班同学们展开了辩论。假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出2至至3条理由条理由来说服同学们（只选择一方观点表达即可）。来说服同学们（只选择一方观点表达即可）。要求：要求：1.词数不少于词数不少于80词；词；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。第一部分：观点及理由（开门见山

20、，点明主题）（开门见山，点明主题）Everyone may have problems.So do I.When I meet problems,I often deal with them by myself.Different people deal with their problems in different ways.As for me,when I meet problems,I like to deal with them with others.第一部分：观点及理由（开门见山，点明主题）（开门见山，点明主题）God helps those who helps themselv

21、es.During the process of solving problems,I can improve myself a lot and gain much progress.I should depend on myself instead of others.I can learn a lot when I deal with problems by myself.正正方方反反方方It is good for me to learn something from others.It can help me get along well with others.Its easier

22、for me to get out of the trouble.第二部分：自己的亲身经历（用一般过去时记叙一件过去的事）（用一般过去时记叙一件过去的事）正方：正方：Last year,I got into trouble learning math.I got poor grades on math and I was really worried.However,I believed that I could deal with it by myself.I looked over my mistakes and found out what I didnt understand in m

23、ath.Soon,I found a way of learning math by correcting mistakes and getting experience.At the end of the term,I made great progress in math.I was so proud of myself!第二部分：自己的亲身经历（用一般过去时记叙一件过去的事）（用一般过去时记叙一件过去的事）反方：反方：When I entered middle school in Grade 7,I found math difficult to learn and nearly los

24、t heart.I asked one of my classmates who was good at math for help.She told me some good ways to learn math.She also helped me with my homework.And whenever I wanted to give up,she encouraged me a lot.Thanks to her help,I became interested in math and got good grades.We also became really good frien

25、ds.正方正方：All in all,it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves.It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.第三部分：结尾（总结全文，重申观点）（总结全文，重申观点）反方：反方：In a word,dealing problems with others is very good.Cooperation is really necess

26、ary and you can be successful more easily with other peoples help.Show yourself!Homework 初三学生中考前的学习非常紧张，同学们之间的初三学生中考前的学习非常紧张，同学们之间的竞争也很激烈。班会课上，班长建议大家抽出一节竞争也很激烈。班会课上，班长建议大家抽出一节自习时间，利用书报杂志、网络信息、电视节目等自习时间，利用书报杂志、网络信息、电视节目等拓展学习渠道进行学习。班长的建议可不可以采纳，拓展学习渠道进行学习。班长的建议可不可以采纳，九年级一班的同学们就此展开了辩论。九年级一班的同学们就此展开了辩论。假

27、设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点。假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点。结合自己的亲身经历，说出结合自己的亲身经历，说出2至至3条理由来说服同学条理由来说服同学们（只需选择一方观点即可）们（只需选择一方观点即可）要求：要求：1.词数词数80词左右；词左右；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。自评（自评（check by yourself）Read your passage aloud,then check it byyourself.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？大声朗读文章并自

28、查是否符合以下要求。大声朗读文章并自查是否符合以下要求。Post-writing(10 minutes)第一档：第一档：12-15分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖所有所有的要点，表达清楚，的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有几乎没有语言错误。语言错误。第二档：第二档：11-12分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖所有所有的要点，表达清楚，的要点，表达清楚，但有但有少量少量语言错误。语言错误。第三档：第三档：8-10分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖大部分大部分要点，表达要点，表达尚尚清楚清楚,但有但有一些一些语言错误。语言错误。（以上为及格线）（以上为及格线）第四档：第四档：4-7分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖部分部分要点，写出少量句子，要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。第五档：第五档：0-3分分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。清楚。评分档次和要求：查（查（check by yourself）Read your passage aloud,then check it byyourself.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求 展示展示（show your passage）