初中英语写作课课件.pptx

1、My Best FriendObjectives:At the end of the class,students are able pare two persons in different ways;write about Best Friend.2.realize the value of friendship and cherish their friends.What should a best friend be like?A best friend should be canPre-writingA:.should be the same,.B:.isnt necessary.C

2、:I dont care.Wang LinglingLiu LiliPre-writing3aWang Lingling and Liu Lili are best friends.Look at the chart below and compare them.Wang LinglingLiu Lilitalltalllong straight hairshort straight hairlikes readinglike sportspopularpopularoutgoingoutgoingseriousfunnyhard-workingsmartLooksPersonalitiesI

3、nterestsPre-writingBoth Wang Lingling and Liu Lili are tall with straight hair,but they look different.Wang Lingling has longer hair,while Liu Lili has shorter hair.3aWang LinglingLiu Lilitalltalllong straight hairshort straight hairlikes readinglike sportspopularpopularoutgoingoutgoingseriousfunnyh

4、ard-workingsmartPersonalities(more details)She often goes to the school library,and always talks much about the things she reads.InterestsBoth Wang Lingling and Liu Lili are tall with straight hair,but they look different.Wang Lingling has longer hair,while Liu Lili has shorter hair.Friends are very

5、 important in our life!Everyone must have his own best friend.Wang Linglings best friend is Liu Lili.They are similar in some ways,but different in some other ways.BeginningTransition3bWho is your best friend?Introduce your best friend by comparing you two.My best friendMe.While-writing1.Who is your

6、 best friend?2.Is your friend similar to you or different?Describe your best friend.3.What do you think a best friend should be like?My Best FriendBeginningBody part EndingWhile-writingMarking Criteria评价标准 Content to the point 内容切题(5)Clear structure结构清晰(4)Grammatical errors语法错误少(3)Excellent Expressi

7、ons亮点表达(2)Clean handwriting书写整洁(1)Post-writing-Peer Assessment.练习：1.汤姆很擅长音乐，而他的弟弟在画画方面更有天赋。_ 2.我是急性子，很容易生气，然而我的好朋友却更有耐心。hot-tempered急性子 _连词，表连词，表示对比示对比Tom is good at music,while his brother is more talented in drawing.I am hot-tempered and easy to get angry,while my friend is more patient.原句:Wang Lingling has longer hair,while Liu Lili has shorter hair.王玲玲留着长发，而刘莉莉留着短发。