人教版初中英语中考作文课件(共16张).ppt

1、Glad to see you,everybody!Glad to see you,everybody!-The ways to improve your writingactivitiessubjectsclassmatesteachersbusy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantasticboring/terrible/so-soTalk about your school lifePair work:What do you usually do?What do you think of?What/Who is your favorite?How ar

2、e you getting on with?Do you?扩写练习：扩写练习：likes playing sports healthyhealthyHe is a boy.He is a _ boy.He is a _ boy who_.I like music.I like_ music.I like_ music that_.dancedancecan make me excited仿写练习：仿写练习：目的目的原因原因She always_ to _ because_.relaxlistens to some musicmusic is fantasticrelaxstudy better

3、get some knowledgekeep healthyhave a resthave funget good gradesMiss CoolMr.Ball仿写练习：仿写练习：It is _for_ to _.necessaryhimdifficult/easy/exciting/interesting/scaring/strangedangerous/difficult/wonderful/possibleimpossible/unbelievable/unexpectedIt is _ for children to play in the street.read booksdange

4、rousI always_ to _ because_.It is _ for_ to _.who/that 引导的定语从句。引导的定语从句。Use these sentence patterns(句型句型)to describe（描述）（描述）your school life.Group work:activitiessubjectsclassmatesteachersCompare:B is better than A in 08省考试说明范文省考试说明范文How glad I am!I can do many things of my own.I am going to have a t

5、rip to the West Lake with my friend.I will also do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it.Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.Isnt my plan nice?beginningkey sentencelinking words连词连词ending I am going to have a t

6、rip to the West Lake with my friend.I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it.It is necessary for me to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.fluency流畅流畅 consecution条理条理I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend.I will do some

7、studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it.It is necessary for me to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.找出用所学句型写的好句。找出用所学句型写的好句。Choose good words and sentences to improve your writing strategyTitle:_ totogeneral总总specific分分specific分分general总总I have a lot

8、of hobbies and enjoy doing many things in my free time.I am a lover of reading.I am also a music lover.I like sports as well.In short,I enjoy my life in school.Reading books,listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.My hobbiesBeginning:Key sentence B:Key senten

9、ce A:Ending:Main part(正文正文):Key sentence C:(linking words)My hobbies (Beginning):_.(Key sentence A):_.I often read in my free time.I read many kinds of books.And I like the stories that have good endings.(Key sentence B):_.I like all kinds of music.I often listen to the music programs on radio.Altho

10、ugh I cant sing English songs well,I like them a lot.(Key sentence C):_.I often play ping-pong after classes.When I am doing sports,I forge all my trouble and worry.Of course it is necessary for students to play sports.(Ending)_.Can you add a beginning,two other key sentences,some linking words and

11、an ending?Practice:I am a lover of readingTitle:_ Beginning:Key sentence 2:Key sentence 1:Ending:Main part(正文正文):According to your own outline,use some good words and sentences to finish your composition.Writing I alwaysto becauseIt is for to who/that 引导的定语从句。引导的定语从句。Make an outline for the followin

12、g composition:三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。题目自三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。题目自拟拟(80词左右词左右)（2007衢州卷衢州卷)Title:_ Beginning:Key sentence B:Key sentence A:Ending:Main part(正文正文):Use outline提纲提纲 to improve your writing strategyoutline提纲提纲How to improve your writingTips:1.Make an outline.2.Choose good words and sent

13、ences.评价评价:请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。1.fluency流畅流畅 consecution条理条理:(Yes or No)Beginning()key sentences()linking word()ending ()2.Choice of words and sentences:The number of spelling mistakes ()The number of grammar mistakes()Does he write good words or sentence?()3.Others:_ A(13-15 分分):包含内容要

14、点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚B(11-12 分分):基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚基本清楚C(8-10分分 ):内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意D(6-7分分 ):要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达E(3-5 ):只抄了提只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云示词，错误百出，不知所云F(0-2分分):白卷或文不对题白卷或文不对题作者：作者：_得分：得分：_ 评价人评价人:_Homework:我市英我市英语语教学网开教学网开设设了了“中学生中学生论坛论坛”，请请你你结结合自己的初中生活和真合自己的初中生活和真实实感受，以感受，以A good A good teacher in my eyesteacher in my eyes为题为题写一篇写一篇8080词词左右的左右的短文。短文。(You should make an outline first)(You should make an outline first)