中考英语写作专题指导-记叙文课件.pptx

1、中考中考作文作文考查考查范围范围话题话题类型类型文章文章类型类型写作写作技巧技巧评分评分标准标准范文范文赏析赏析有话有话可说可说教教育育类类实践实践生活生活类类记记叙叙文文议议论论文文说说明明文文五五档档五大写作五大写作小技巧小技巧不同类不同类型文章型文章一、考查范围 根据新课标和中考说明，作文考查的范围基本上与学生日常生活、学习生活息息相关。做到有话可说。例如：Live a life without much pressure.How to improve English?美丽校园，健康生活（2020年陕西英语中考）二、话题类型 1、教育类话题 如：如：How to improve Engl

2、ish?How to deal with the books and notebooks?(2019年陕西中考英语年陕西中考英语)2、实践生活类 如:暑假计划、周末旅行、走亲访友的经历等 （2018年陕西中考英语）3、热点话题 如：新型冠状病毒、环保 （2020年陕西中考英语)三、文章类型 1.记叙文记叙文:2018年陕西中考作文 2.说明文：说明文：3.议论文：议论文：2019、2017年陕西中考作文四、评分标准 第一档第一档（14-15分）分）符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误，大小写及标点运用得当。全文结构严密、完

3、整，语言无误，大小写及标点运用得当。全文结构严密、完整，语言流畅。流畅。第二档第二档（10-13分）分）符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理清晰，语句较通顺，语符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。有语法或标点错误，但句子较为顺畅，文章思言基本无误。有语法或标点错误，但句子较为顺畅，文章思路清晰，逻辑推理正确，结构完整。路清晰，逻辑推理正确，结构完整。第三档第三档（7-9分）分）基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺。语法或标点错误较多。文章结构不严密，但表达疑似清顺。语法或标点错误较多。文章结构不严密，

4、但表达疑似清楚。楚。第四档第四档（4-6分）分）基本符合题意要求，表达不清楚，语法或表达错误过多，词基本符合题意要求，表达不清楚，语法或表达错误过多，词数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑混乱。数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑混乱。第五档第五档（0-3分）分）能传达给读者少许信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均能传达给读者少许信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。五、写作小技巧写作小技巧写作小技巧学生例句学生例句更改例句更改例句1.用两个词而不用一个用两个词而不用一个词。词。My family and I had a good

5、trip.My family and I had a good and relaxing trip.2.适当添加副词或者介适当添加副词或者介词短语。词短语。Students like chatting on the phone.Most students like chatting on the phone after school/in the free time.3.同义替换，避免重同义替换，避免重复。复。I like reading books.I love reading.I enjoy reading.4.使用关联词表示文章使用关联词表示文章的逻辑。的逻辑。I should talk

6、 with my good friend,and I should listen to music.I fail in the math.I am upset.First,I can talk with my good friend.Second,I can listen to music to relax myself.I fail in math so I am upset.5.学会使用简单的句学会使用简单的句子，子，避免过度重复。避免过度重复。We should improve pronunciation as well by listening to the conversation

7、in English movies.We should improve pronunciation by listening to the conversation from English movies.学生：老师，我还是不会写作文怎么办啊？1记叙文2议论文记叙文写前“4W+1H”:what,who,where,when,how人称、时态subject,tense头脑风暴:brainstorming列提纲:组织、提取信息写中组织信息添加内容选取信息自我检查写后检查内容（主要信息）检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构等审题书写检查假如你是李华，上周你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容

8、，写一篇短文。(2018年陕西中考作文)活动活动上午上午讲故事，唱歌讲故事，唱歌,中午中午煮面煮面(cook noodles),休息休息(have a seat),下午下午玩游戏，玩游戏，看动画片看动画片(watch cartoons),感受感受 要求：1.参考表格内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，疑似连贯，书写工整；3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等）4.词数：不少于70个词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at

9、home._whowhenwhatwhere记叙文whatlooked after my sister Nanawho my sister Nana and I whenlast weekwhereat homeStep 1写前审题记叙文whatlooked after my sister Nanawho my sister Nana and I whenlast weekwhereat homeStep 2写前第一人称一般过去时审题记叙文whatlooked after my sister Nanawho my sister Nana and I whenlast weekwhereat h

10、omeStep 3写前第一人称一般过去时read bookshappy,tiredclean the rooma sense of responsibility审题写前上午上午/中午中午/下午下午in the morning/afternoon/evening讲故事、唱歌讲故事、唱歌told stories,sang songs煮面、休息煮面、休息玩游戏、看动画片玩游戏、看动画片cooked noodles,had a rest played games,watched cartoonsbrainstormingread books,cleaned the roomfeelinghappy,t

11、ired,a sense of responsibilityStep 4搜集、提取信息 Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.In the morning,I told stories to my sister.We sang songs.In the afternoon,I cooked noodles for my sister.I had a rest.In the evening,We played games and watched car

12、toons.I was very tired but very happy.写中组织信息Step 1draftPOINT9技巧1和技巧2添加信息和技巧2 Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.In the morning,I told_stories to my sister._ We sang songs_.In the afternoon,I cooked noodles for her._ _ _We had a rest_.In the ev

13、ening,We played games,_,and watched cartoons_ I was very tired but really happy,写中many interesting and funnyAfter thattogetherShe said the noodles were very delicious,so I felt very happy.After a while,for about an houruntil my parents came back home.read books 添加信息（写作技巧）Step 2Because I could look a

14、fter my little sister by myself andI had a sense of resposibility.brainstorming和添加信息技巧3，添加信息 Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.In the morning,I told many interesting and funny stories to my sister.After that we sang songs,together.In the afte

15、rnoon,I cooked noodles.She said the noodles were very delicious,so I felt very happy.After a while,we had a rest for about an hour.In the afternoon,we played games,read books and watched cartoons until my parents came back.I was very tired but really happy,because I could look after my little sister

16、 and I had a sense of responsibilty.写后 检查主要内容 检查词数 检查语法 拼写、标点、结构Step3Self-check最终呈现 Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.In the morning,I told many interesting and funny stories to my sister.After that we sang songs,together.In the afternoon,I c

17、ooked noodles.She said the noodles were very delicious,so I felt very happy.After a while,we had a rest for about an hour.In the afternoon,we played games,read books and watched cartoons until my parents came back.I was very tired but really happy,because I could look after my little sister by myself and I had a sense of responsibility.八年级八年级上册的上册的难度难度POINT15