中考英语书面表达写作训练记叙文写作课件(35张).ppt

1、记叙文的篇章结构：记叙文的篇章结构：开头开头the beginning-交代必要交代必要的背景，如：时间，地点，人物的背景，如：时间，地点，人物等。等。中间中间the middle-交代故交代故事情节（事情的主体）。如：事事情节（事情的主体）。如：事件的发生，发展和前因后果件的发生，发展和前因后果结尾结尾the ending-事情的事情的结果或感想，愿望等（结果或感想，愿望等（the result or feeling）根据下根据下列图画中列图画中 Tom Tom 骑自骑自行车的经行车的经历，用英历，用英语写一篇语写一篇故事。故事。短文要写短文要写得连贯、得连贯、完整。完整。Sample 1

2、1.主题主题:2.时态：时态：3.人称人称:1.Go over the requirementA story（a traffic accident)past tenseTom,he Tom/ride a bike Along the street/road A few days ago/the other day/one day2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)The driver/frightened/run away 2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)A

3、woman/remember the number of the car The police The driver/catch2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Cooperation and discussion Contents:1、讨论写作思路、讨论写作思路.1点题（时间、地点）点题（时间、地点）2事件的起因事件的起因3事件的发展事件的发展/过程过程4事件的结事件的结果果5扣题扣题2、交流所需句型、词汇、交流所需句型、词汇.My presentation The other day,Tom was riding alon

4、g the street when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately,a woman happened

5、to see it and remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman and told him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.Passage 13.Writing a passage Key wordsKey wordssentencessentencesA woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car.She cal

6、led the police.The driver was caught.ride a bike/run fast tosee the accident/remember the number/call the police /be caught be frightened /run awayhit him/fall off his bikeWhen Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast to him.The car hit him.And he fell off his bike.The driver was so frightened

7、 that he ran away.2004年辽宁年辽宁 下面下面4幅图片描述的是幅图片描述的是星期天上午星期天上午在在中山公中山公园园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的息用英语为你校的“英语园地英语园地”写一篇短文。写一篇短文。注意：注意：短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整；短文的内容要连贯、完整；短文单词数：短文单词数：100左右（已给句子中的单左右（已给句子中的单词不计入总词数）；词不计入总词数）；参考词汇：货摊参考词汇：货摊stand(n.);抢夺抢夺 snatch(v.);逮捕逮捕

8、arrest(v.)星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊 One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan Park.；At an ice-cream stand 年轻妇女的包被抢年轻妇女的包被抢 snatch her handbag away 人们追赶抢包者人们追赶抢包者 run after the snatcher 在附近长排椅上坐着一位老人在附近长排椅上坐着一位老人 There be sb.sitting on the bench nearby提纲提纲 从老人身旁跑过从老人身旁跑过 Run past the old man 拿起伞；将伞放在他两

9、腿之间；拿起伞；将伞放在他两腿之间；pick up his umbrella;put it between the two legs of the snatcher;摔一大跟斗摔一大跟斗 fall down on the ground heavily 两名警察来到并逮捕抢劫者两名警察来到并逮捕抢劫者 Came in a police car;arrest sb.感谢老人的帮助感谢老人的帮助 Thank sb.for his help 称赞老人的机智称赞老人的机智 Praise the old man for his clevernessOne Sunday morning,many peopl

10、e went to Zhongshan Park.As it was very hot,some people got thirsty and were trying to buy some ice-cream.Suddenly a woman at the stand shouted because a young man behind her snatched her handbag away.Seeing this,immediately a few people began to run after him.However,the snatcher ran so fast that i

11、t was not easy to catch him.Luckily,there was an old man sitting on a bench nearby.As the snatcher was running past him,the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs.The young man cried and fell down on the ground hard.At the end,a police car came and arrested the

12、snatcher.The woman thanked the old man for his help.And all the people Praise the old man for his cleverness.Go over the requirement（person,tense,style）Summary:How to write a picture story?Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Write a passage（using connectives and adding details and speci

13、fic information.)点题（时间、地点、点题（时间、地点、人物、事件人物、事件）事件的起因事件的起因 事件的发展事件的发展/过程过程 事件的结果事件的结果 扣题扣题 记叙文句型优化记叙文句型优化 半个月：半个月：half a month 15 days 半年：半年：half a year 6 months 两个礼拜两个礼拜:fortnight 开始：开始：at the beginning of summer 结束：结束：at the end of winter 有时：有时：sometimes at times 最后：最后：At last eventually 结果：结果：as a

14、result consequently 期间：Within/during the vocation-in the middle of the night 20年后：年后：in 20 years 有一天：有一天：one day the other day 第二天：第二天：the following day 现在：现在：Now at the present time 有一次：有一次：On one occasion 另一次：另一次：On another occasion 一礼拜后：一礼拜后：A week later a week passed/went by 晚上：晚上：In the evening

15、/in the morning/in the afternoon/in towards evening/morning/afternoon 记叙常用链接词记叙常用链接词时间顺序：Early in the morning/In the early morning;In the middle of the day/At noon;Late in the afternoon/In the late afternoon;Far/Deep into the night;My presentation审题审题描述过去描述过去个人经历个人经历第三人称第三人称4.主题：主题：3.人称：人称：1.体裁：体裁：2

16、.时态：时态：记叙文体记叙文体 一般过去时一般过去时1点题（时间、地点）点题（时间、地点）星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊旁星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊旁2事件的起因事件的起因年轻妇女的包被抢年轻妇女的包被抢3事件的发展事件的发展/过程过程人们追赶抢包者人们追赶抢包者；长排椅上坐着一位老人；抢；长排椅上坐着一位老人；抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒4事件的结果事件的结果两名警察逮捕抢劫者：两名警察逮捕抢劫者：5扣题扣题妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智 副词：副词：suddenly,unfortunately,sudd

17、enly,unfortunately,luckily,immediately luckily,immediately as a result as a result so/suchthat so/suchthat two hours later,two hours later,and and 假如昨天下午在你上学的路上，你目睹了一起交通事故。假如昨天下午在你上学的路上，你目睹了一起交通事故。事故的大体经过是这样的：一辆小汽车突然加速事故的大体经过是这样的：一辆小汽车突然加速,把离你把离你不远处的妇女撞倒在地，她还抱着一个孩子不远处的妇女撞倒在地，她还抱着一个孩子,肇事车主不肇事车主不但没有停车

18、反而加速逃跑。最后我把他们送去了医院。但没有停车反而加速逃跑。最后我把他们送去了医院。请就此事件写请就此事件写篇短文。字数：篇短文。字数：l00词左右词左右。1）体裁格式：记叙文叙事格式）体裁格式：记叙文叙事格式 2)中心人称：第中心人称：第人称人称 3)主体时态：主体时态：般过去时般过去时 4)内容要点内容要点 一妇女携小孩被一辆小汽车幢倒一妇女携小孩被一辆小汽车幢倒 妇女和小孩都已受伤严重妇女和小孩都已受伤严重 3）你把伤者送往医院抢救，为她们祈祷；并希望）你把伤者送往医院抢救，为她们祈祷；并希望肇事司机受到惩罚肇事司机受到惩罚A Car Accident The other day on

19、 my way to the school,I happened to involve in a car accident which I would never forget.Some pedestrians/pidestrin/and I were crossing the street when a black car suddenly sped by.Just a few yards in front of me,a lady carrying a baby was knocked down by the wild car.The car didnt stop.Instead,it c

20、ontinued at full speed,leaving the lady and her baby lying in the street.Without any hesitation,I rushed to the poor lady and her child,just then another car stopped beside us.The driver helped me to get the child into the car and drove us to the hospital.We could do nothing but pray for them.The driver who hurt them and then left the spot should be severely punished.Otherwise,it is hard to stop this phenomenon.