广州中考英语作文训练.ppt

1、广州中考英语作文训练写作提示：1.时态：一般现在时2.人称：第一人称We为主3.布篇：P1：读书的好处P2：倡议的行动P3：结尾关键词提示：tell what is right and what is wrong；Its+adj.+for sb.to do sth.句型；form a good habit of doing sth.;连接词：besides,whats more 等的使用Its a good way to help your learn knowledge.Through reading,you can tell what is right and what is wrong.

2、Reading can also bring us a lot of joy and peace.Ils necessary for us to read.We should read good books which can help us learn more.Besides,its important to form a good habit of reading every day.What s more,we can go back home and read a good book together with our parents.It s a good chance for u

3、s to improve our knowledge as well as our relationship.After reading,you can try to write down vvhat you think.Its also helpful for you to improve your writing skills.Come on and join us in reading!作文专项训练（二）作文专项训练（二）你校准备举行“绿色城市，健康生活的英语征文比赛，请你以A Green City,A Healthy Life为题，根据以下表格的内容写一篇英语短文，并适当发表自己的建议

4、。主题绿色城市，健康生活1.分类垃圾，保持城市整洁2.保护环境，公共场所禁烟3.均衡饮食，每天多做运动你的建议（你的2-3个建议）注意：参考词汇：分类垃圾so the recyclables2.词数80个左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）；3.内容应包括所有要点；4.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。A Green City,A Healthy LifeAs citizens Of Guangzhou,its our duty to 写作提示：1.时态：一般现在时2.人称：第一人称We为主3.布篇：P1：已知要点P2：个人建议P3：结尾提示：In order to ,we sh

5、ould/shouldnt 句型的使用We can so that 句型的使用；sort the recyclables；build a green city The Green City,the Healthy life As citizens of Guangzhou,its our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life.Its a good habit for us to sort the recyclables and put them into the right rubbish bins

6、.In this way,we can keep our city clean.In order to keep our city clean,we should start out small to protect the environment and people mustnt smoke in public.If we want to keep fit,we should have a balanced diet.Its important for us to do more exercise to keep healthy every day.In my opinion,we wil

7、l try our best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful.We can plant more flowers and trees to protect the natural environment.In order to make us healthier,we shouldnt stay up late,we should have enough sleep.Everyone can do something to make a difference.作文专项训练（三）作文专项训练（三）现今，越来越多的人喜欢网上点餐外卖服务，你所

8、在的学校学生会就“你对网上点餐的看法”进行了问卷调查。请根据调查结写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。注意：（1）参考词汇：塑料包装 plastic packaging;（2）词数：80个左右（文章的开头己给出，不计入词数）（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Online food delivery is booming in China.The student Union in our school has made a survey about it.Here are the result写作提示：1.布篇：P1：现状，已给出。P2：正面看法P3：反面看法P4：自己看法提示：

9、convenient;various choices;35%of students consider that its convenient for them to order online anytime,anywhere.Meanwhile,30%of students appreciate various choices for food,which can meet different peoples needs.However,25%of students worry about the pollution caused by increasing amount of plastic

10、 packaging.Moreover,10%of students point out delivery food is usually high in fat or sugar and this may cause health problems.As for me,Im not a fan of it.I would rather cook for myself though it takes time.Therefore,we should make every effort to eat in a healthier way.作文专项训练（四）作文专项训练（四）科学技术日新月异，新发

11、明给人们的生活带来了很多便利。假定你家就有一台智能家用 电器(smart appliance),扫地机器人(robot cleaner),请你根据以下写作内容提示，写一篇关于 它的英语短文，给同学们介绍一下它，让更多人受惠。注意:（1）请适当拓展，不要直译内容：（2）词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Many inventions have changed peoples life.My robot cleaner is one of them.Its a round smart appliance,just like a big

12、 cake/UFO with wheels at the bottom of it so that it can move freely.Its as smart as a human being because it can clean the floor itself in a house.Whats more,it works with electricity,so it will not pollute the air.Above all,its more convenient for us to use it because we can control it by using ou

13、r mobile phones.In my opinion,the robot cleaner is a great invention and our good friend.It saves time and helps us live a better life.Why not have a try and buy one for yourselves?作文专项训练（五）作文专项训练（五）近年，有一些地区提出把游泳纳入中考的体育考试，并在学生中做了一次问卷调查。下面是一个学校的调查结果，请你根据调查情况写一篇英语短文阐明调查结果及表达自己的观点。赞成的学生人数占：57%不赞成的学生人数占

14、：43%理由：1.强身健体，预防疾病2.训练求生技能3.休闲娱乐，放松身心理由：1.害怕水2.有危险性3.气温低时容易感冒你的观点与理由？要求：词数80左右。（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。In recently years,some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education.And they made a survey about it in some schools,Heres the result from one sc

15、hool.写作提示：1.主要时态：一般现在时2.布篇：P1：支持观点P2：不支持观点P3：自己看法关键词提示：build up our body；guide against(prevent)illness；survival skill；In recently years,some districts are planning to include swimming in the examination of physical education.And they made a survey about it in some schools.Heres the result from one s

16、chool.About 57 per cent students like to have swimming lessons at school.Because it can help build up our body and guide against(prevent)illness.Besides,swimming is a survival skill when we face some natural disasters.It is also a good choice to go swimming lo relax ourselves when we are free.Howeve

17、r,43 percent students are against this plan for some reasons.First,some of them are afraid of getting in the water.Second,it may be dangerous because we may drown.Then,when it is cold,we may catch a cold.In my opinion,its a good idea lo have swimming lessons.I can improve my health,and relax myself

18、after classes as well.(In my opinion,its not a good way to have swimming lessons at school.Because its expensive to build a swimming pool,and sometimes its difficult to keep the water clean because there are many students at school.)作文专项训练（六）作文专项训练（六）同学们，初中生活即将结束，考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计划，可以结

19、合自己的实际发挥。写作内容：1.和家长一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。3.读自己喜欢的书。4.远离危险的地方。5.(自己补充)写作要求：1.80词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。Myjuniorhighschoolyearsarecomingtoanend.Thesummerholidayisontheway.Herearemyplansforthelongexcitingholidays.写作提示：1.时态：一般将来时2.人称：第一人称为主3

20、.布篇：P1 已给出P2 写具体计划P3 结尾4.重点词汇提示：go on a trip,take part in,help sb.do sth.,keep away from 范文：BecauseIhaveabusylifeinschooldays,Iwillgetclosetonatureandrelaxmyselfwithmyparents.Iwillvolunteertodosomethingforothers.Iwillstaywithmyparentsandhelpmyparentstodosomehouseworkinmyfree.Iwillalsoreadeverymornin

21、g.Fromthebooks,Icangetmoreknowledgetofulfillmyself.Ialsodecidetohaveagoodsleepduringthevacation.Idecidetotakepartinsomesocialactivitiesinordertoknowabouttherealsociety.Iwillstayawayfromdangerousplaces.Besides,Iwillkeepadiaryandthentakeittoschoolforsharingwithmyclassmates.ImsureIllhaveaninterestingan

22、dmeaningfulsummerholiday.作文专项训练（七）作文专项训练（七）如今越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来了极大的危害。春节期间多地交通部门提出了“道路千万条，安全第一条”的口号。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？假如你是学生会的干部，请根据以下提示，对学校同学写一篇有关交通安全的倡议书。要点如下：要点如下：1.外出时要遵守交通规则；2.步行要走人行道，不能闯红灯；3.骑自行车时，不能和朋友聊天；4.劝父母不能酒后驾车，也不能开车时使用手机；5.你的其他建议。参考词汇：参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道人行道写作提

23、示：1.注意情态动词的使用2.注意连接词的使用：first of all,secondly,moreover,last but not least3.布篇：P1 指出现状P2 提出建议P3 结尾,已给出4.重点词汇提示：the traffic rules,across the street,run the red light,when,if,youd better,wear safety belts。范文：But unluckily,it has also brought many problems,such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.As

24、teenagers,we should always keep safety in mind.Here are some of my suggestions.First of all,we should pay attention to the traffic rules when we go out.We should walk on the sidewalk and always look carefully before we walk across the street.Dont run the red light.Secondly,if we ride a bike with a f

25、riend,its dangerous to talk and ride at the same time.Moreover,we had better tell our parents not to drink before they drive and it is not allowed to use a mobile phone while driving.Last but not least,we must always wear safety belts when sitting in a car.Without belts,both the drivers and the pass

26、engers may be badly hurt in a sudden accident.作文专项训练（八）作文专项训练（八）假设你是广州日报青少年栏目主编Aunt Linda。Grace来信对你诉说，她上初三后感到压力很大，和父母不时吵架，向你寻求帮助。你回信给Grace,提一些建议帮助她处理压力，并和父母好好相处。包括以下要点：写作提示：1.注意情态动词和祈使句的使用2.注意连接词的使用：3.布篇：P1 陈述现状P2 分析原因P3 给出建议P4 个人建议，结尾4.重点词汇提示：suffer from,may,should,whats more,besides,in my opinion,

27、respect,spend time doing sth.,worry about,communicate with sb.范文：In your letter,you mentioned that you suffered from great pressure,and that you often quarreled with your parents.I am sorry to hear that,but many teenagers share similar trouble with you,so you are not alone.Your pressure may result f

28、rom many things,such as too many exams or the high expectation from both your parents and yourself.Realizing the source of pressure,you may find it easier to get rid of it.Here are my suggestions.To begin with,as a child,you should respect your parents and try to communicate with them more often,whi

29、ch is very helpful to avoid arguments.Whats more,you had better learn to control yourself better.Dont spend too much time playing computer games,so that your parents will be more satisfied with you instead of worrying about you.Besides,its a good idea for you to do some exercise,such as climbing the

30、 Baiyun Mountain at weekend.This will help you relax and forget your pressure for a while.In my opinion,part of growing up is learning to live with pressure and trying your best to deal with it.I believe you can overcome all the difficulties and lead a happy life.Yours TrulyAunt Linda 作文专项训练（九）作文专项训

31、练（九）马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School”主题班会，邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。美好的回忆1.与同学融洽相处：2.得到老师的帮助：3.获得交换生机会：4.参加志愿者活动。不开心的事情1.好朋友李华转学：2.不擅长语文写作。未来展望1.升上理想的学校：2.能结识更多朋友：3.请你补充（至少两点）写作提示：1.时态：一般过去，一般将来2.注意过度句3.布篇：P1 回忆美好P2 不开心的事P3 未来展望P4 结尾4.重点词汇提示：get on well with,get a chance to,take part

32、 in,be good at,make friends 1.1.高考作文不同于高考作文不同于“自由写作自由写作”高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要“根据要求写作根据要求写作”，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏脚。，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏脚。2.2.而要既符合要求，又要有张扬个性的出彩的地方。所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有

33、考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作。而要既符合要求，又要有张扬个性的出彩的地方。所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作。3.3.一篇议论文如果能有几个联系密切并具有较强论证力度的主体段，那就会增加论证的深度、广度和厚度，颇具层次感，使议论文富有说服力。因此，同学们写好议论文的主体段至关重要。一篇议论文如果能有几个联系密切并具有较强论证力度的主体段，那就会增加论证的深度、广度和厚度，颇具层次感，使议论文富有说服力。因此，同学们写好议论文的主体段至关重要。4.4.出现大量的叙述文字，而缺少相应的议论性语言点睛，给人以罗列事

34、例或者啰嗦叙事的感觉，并且暴露自己欠缺说理能力的缺点。出现大量的叙述文字，而缺少相应的议论性语言点睛，给人以罗列事例或者啰嗦叙事的感觉，并且暴露自己欠缺说理能力的缺点。5.5.空洞乏味的议论，缺乏必要的理论和事实支撑，车轱辘话绕来绕去，论述肤浅无力。空洞乏味的议论，缺乏必要的理论和事实支撑，车轱辘话绕来绕去，论述肤浅无力。6.6.段落中有事例有论述，但却水是水，油是油，没有分析融合，论点就如同生硬地贴在论据上面的标签，缺乏说服力。段落中有事例有论述，但却水是水，油是油，没有分析融合，论点就如同生硬地贴在论据上面的标签，缺乏说服力。7.7.这是一则新材料运用作文，先是列举了古往今来中外青年成人礼仪和节日的沿革；接着从国际和国家层面，对青年提出了明确的希望和要求；最后指出这是一则新材料运用作文，先是列举了古往今来中外青年成人礼仪和节日的沿革；接着从国际和国家层面，对青年提出了明确的希望和要求；最后指出“你们你们”成年，青年们前赴后继，成就自我人生，勇作社会脊梁。成年，青年们前赴后继，成就自我人生，勇作社会脊梁。8.8.在运用部分，则指出结合材料进行联想和思考，致即将成年的自己。整道题条理明晰，从现象到本质，逐一得到揭示，很好地拓展了考生的写作思维。在运用部分，则指出结合材料进行联想和思考，致即将成年的自己。整道题条理明晰，从现象到本质，逐一得到揭示，很好地拓展了考生的写作思维。