2021年中考重庆专用英语人教版题型突破7书面表达课件.pptx

1、书面表达1考点综述2真题剖析3真题演练考点综述1写作前仔细审题。考生在写作之前首先要理清题目要求，根据所给提示和题目，确定要写的题材、话题、格式及行文内容等。准备写作。考生在写作之前先列提纲，写出文章的大致要点，并核对提示和要求，查看是否有遗漏或需增补的需要。解题技巧2写作中根据提纲要点，逐一遣词造句。要用最熟悉的、最有把握的词汇和基本句型；语言表达要流畅，符合英美人士的表达习惯，避免使用中式英语。注意英汉语法方面的差异、词的形式变化；还要注意全文在人称、时态、语态的一致性和运用是否正确。如果在写作中遇到不会的单词、词组或句子，可以找同义词或同义句来代替。用连词成句的方法将要点的英文词语扩展成

2、句子，然后再用连词成文的方法来组织语言，形成短文。要书写工整、规范，保持卷面整洁。3写作后通读全文，检查复核。在写好短文后，根据题目要求对全文进行检查和修改。要注意词数是否符合要求；体裁、格式是否正确；内容要点是否全面；语言表达上是否有错误，大到主谓一致、时态呼应、习惯用法，小至单词拼写、大小写及标点符号，都要一一检查。真题剖析(2020重庆A卷)国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以“Some Advice on Developing

3、Labor Education in Our School”为题，写一篇短文参赛。要求：1.80120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.劳动教育的意义(学习生活技能、养成良好习惯)；2校内劳动教育建议(开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛)；3Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our SchoolIts reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary scho

4、ols in China._【审题指导】本篇书面表达是一篇话题作文，要求学生就“劳动教育的意义及如何开展”这一话题展开论述。写作时，人称主要为第一、第三人称；时态使用一般现在时态。注意文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整、表述准确，语句符合语法结构和英语表达习惯。【写作指导】要点提示素材串联开头：阐明观点劳动教育很重要，能够让学生学到生活技能、养成良好习惯(learn some life skills and form good habits)要点提示素材串联正文：重点介绍如何开展劳动教育的建议学校可以开设教授学生如何做清洁和种植的课程(offer classes to teach us how to

5、do the cleaning and grow plants)学校可以设置一些劳动俱乐部(set up some clubs)学校可以组织一些劳动比赛(hold competitions)结尾：表达愿望和期待期待在新学期上这门课(look forward to taking the course)相信我会做得很好(do well in)【参考范文】Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our SchoolIts reported that Labor Education will be included in the education o

6、f middle schools and primary schools in China.I think its important.We can learn some life skills and form good habits.Both will help us a lot in the future.As for how to run the course in our school，I have some ideas.The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants.Wh

7、ats more，the school can set up some clubs，such as cooking club and papercutting club.The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes.Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term.I believe

8、 I will do well in it.真题演练1话题作文(一)(2020青海)人生的每一次经历都是一种学习和提升。2019年新型冠状病毒在中国和全球蔓延，我们见证了全国人民居家隔离，医务人员驰援武汉，学生停课不停学等战“疫”行动，这些都带给我们许多思考和启发。请以“A Life lesson I Learned”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.观点明确，内容完整，逻辑清晰，书写规范；2词数100左右。A Life Lesson I LearnedIn 2019，the COVID19 has affected China and the world in different ways.

9、People in our country had to stay at home and the doctors and nurses rushed to help Wuhan，the students started having online lessons.During the event，all the Chinese are great and they have set a good example for the world，especially the doctors and nurses.They went to the front to fight against the

10、 COVID19.They didnt care of their own lives.They just worked hard day and night in order to try their best to save peoples lives.From them，the whole world has seen Chinas strength，Chinas spirit and Chinas efficiency.We Chinese are proud of them!As a student，I should learn to face difficulties and ch

11、allenges more bravely!(二)(2020济宁)某英文报正面向中学生征文，题为“My First School Day after the Longest Vacation”。请用英语写一篇100词左右的稿件，介绍你的所见、所闻、所做和所感。注意：1.标题和首句已给出，不计入总词数；2文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的信息，如，真实姓名、学校等。参考词语：take ones temperature，wear masks(戴口罩)，keep one metre away from each other，epidemic(疫情)My First School Day after

12、the Longest VacationAfter the longest vacation I ever had，_My First School Day after the Longest VacationAfter the longest vacation I ever had，I was back at school at last！I was so excited to see my teachers and classmates again after such a long time.Since COVID19 broke out，our government has taken

13、 many measures.In order to protect us from the epidemic，we had to wear masks when going out.We must take our temperature before entering school and before having classes.And when we entered the school，we were expected to keep one metre away from each other.Maybe these requires seem boring，I believe

14、nobody would refuse to follow them.Many hands make light work.I believe we will beat the epidemic in the near future with many peoples working together.(三)(2020山西)教育就是善意的干预。在我们的成长过程中时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，有的甚至会有过激的反应。如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题，需要我们认真、理性地思考，并做出合理应对，这正是教育要达到的目的。请针对以上现象，结合生活中的经历，写一篇短文。内容包括：you

15、r opinion about this phenomenon(现象)an experience you had/heard/sawwhat you have learned from it要求：1.词数不少于80词；2参考词汇仅供参考；3文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。WORD BANKremind v提醒criticize v批评objective adj.客观的calm adj.冷静的reasonable adj.理性的As far as Im concerned，it is of great importance to stay calm and reasonable when our

16、parents and teachers blame or criticize us，which is beneficial for our lifelong development.I still remember the day that I had an English class.Seeing Li Ming falling asleep，our teacher，Miss Hu，woke him up and reminded him to listen to her carefully.To my surprise，Li Ming rushed out of the classroo

17、m without permission.It was so impolite and rude to do so.Later，I talked with him and he realized that the teacher expected to help him develop a good habit and he wasnt so calm at that time.Therefore，he picked up his courage and said sorry to Miss Hu in front of the whole class.Its a good idea to k

18、eep calm and think about it for a moment whenever being blamed or criticized.Sometimes a small change of yourself may lead to a big difference to your life.(四)(2020上海)Write at least 60 words on the given situation(根据以下情况填写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)雕刻家Willard的成长经历告诉我们：人无完人，但每个人都有自己的独特之处，在Willard的主页上有一个留言区

19、，每位浏览者都可以写下自己的故事和感想。请以“Everyone can be special(天生我才)”为题，在留言区分享你的经历或见闻。(注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。)Everyone can be specialWhen it comes to the heroes during the pandemic，many people will think of selfless medical workers.I want to talk about a person who made his normal work special.One day when

20、we went back to our neighborhood，a volunteer was standing at the gate.With the mask making breathing difficult，he kept measuring everyones body temperature carefully and patiently.Furthermore，he thanked people after examination for their cooperation.His work seemed ordinary and quite simple，but it w

21、as crucial during this critical/special moment.It was his simple and dull work that made our neighborhood safer.Id like to show sincere appreciation and respect to him.He is a living example of the old saying that everyone can be special.(五)(2020广东)为了鼓励人们积极向他人传递关爱，某青少年英文网站“The Link of Love”(爱的链接)专栏开

22、展征文活动。请你给该专栏投稿。内容包括：(1)你想向谁表达你的关爱？为什么？(2)你打算做些什么来表达你的关爱？作文要求：(1)不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。We are growing up in love and care from people around.It is important to love and care for others.Here and now，Id like to express my gratitude and love to my parents.They not only

23、 try their best to give me a happy and worryfree childhood，but also make me a better person by showing me how to get along with people around.Without them，I would never become such a friendly，outgoing，confident and brave boy.I will spare no effort to do well in all my subjects to make them proud of

24、me.And I will try to be a considerate son at home，helping them with the housework when I can.(六)(2020鄂州)你的偶像是谁？你崇拜谁？下表是腾飞中学一些学生的回答，假如你是该校的一位学生，请根据下表的文字提示，谈谈你校同学的偶像观，并适当发表自己的观点。写一篇英语短文。过去的偶像：歌星、影视明星1.明星有酷的发型和服饰，他们很时尚；2他们有天赋，会表演有趣的节目；3他们的表演让人放松，让我们的生活丰富多彩。如今的偶像：科学家、医护人员等1.科学家发明高科技产品来保卫国家安全，提高人们的生活水平；2

25、医生和护士拯救人们的生命，帮助人们摆脱痛苦，恢复健康；3当国家和人民处于困境时，他们用智慧、勇气、辛勤的工作来帮助人们。你的观点那些在危难中帮助我们的人们更值得我们尊重和崇拜，作为学生的我们要求：1.80100词。(开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内)2文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则，不予评分。参考词汇：idol偶像fashionable时尚的wisdom智慧respect尊重Last week，our school did a survey about“Who is your idol？”Here are our answers.In the past，we_Las

26、t week，our school did a survey about“Who is your idol？”Here are our answers.In the past，we thought singers and movie stars were our idols.They always have cool hairs and clothes.They are fashionable.Also，they are talented and can put on funny shows.Their performances are so relaxing that it makes ou

27、r life colorful.But now we think scientists and medical workers are our idols.Scientists invent hightech products to protect national security and improve peoples living standard.Doctors and nurses save peoples lives and help them get out of pain and back to health.When our country and people are in

28、 trouble，they use their wisdom，courage and hard work to help people.In my opinion，those who help us when we are in need deserve our respect and admiration.As students，we should learn from them and study hard to be a useful person to the country and society.(七)(2020南充)今年受新冠(COVID19)疫情影响，我市中小学开展了线上教学。

29、假如你是李华，你的美国网友Eric即将进行线上学习，他发来邮件向你了解相关情况。请你结合自身经历和以下提示，向Eric回复邮件，介绍线上学习的利弊，并针对线上学习的不足，提出至少一条建议。Online LearningAdvantages1.convenient2different resources(资源)3.Disadvantages1.influence eyesight2easily distracted(分心)3.要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；3文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4词数：100词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

30、)。Dear Eric，Im so glad to hear from you._I hope this will be helpful to you.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua Dear Eric，Im so glad to hear from you.Because of COVID19，weve studied online for several months.I benefit a lot from learning online.This new way of learning is very interesting

31、and there are many different resources shared online，which are very useful to use.Besides，studying at home is both comfortable and convenient.We can study at our own pace.However，spending too much time online is bad for our eyesight and we can be easily distracted by computer games.Whats worse，with

32、less communication with teachers，its hard for us to solve problems in our study.So I suggest you contact your teachers more to get help.I hope this will be helpful to you.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua(八)(2020镇江)技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华，参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息，谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由，并

33、对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息；2对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由，并提出你认为的不足；3文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；4语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；5文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。With the development of modern technology，the way of learning is changing.I think_With the development of modern technology，the way of learning is changing.I think I still

34、 prefer the traditional learning in a classroom.First，there is a fixed timetable.A clear plan is often made by a school，so I dont need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects.Second，we can have the facetoface communication with both teachers and classmates.Third，there are colo

35、rful activities in class.In this way，I can learn the new knowledge happily.Whats more，learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit，so I can learn how to get along with others.However，when I study in the classroom，sometimes I cant follow my teacher.And learning in the classroo

36、m cant provide enough resources for me to choose from.(九)(2020丹东)生活中我们有很多东西需要与人分享，比如：好书、美食、经验、快乐。请你以“Id like to share _ with you”为题写一篇短文。要求：1.请将题目补充完整；2介绍与该主题相关的个人经历，说明分享原因，谈谈个人感悟；3语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，书写工整、规范；4词数70左右；5文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。Id like to share _with youOf all the movies I have seen，I like Amazing

37、 China best.Id like to share it with you.It is a 90minute documentary.The film focuses on the main achievements our country has made.It helps people to know our country better.I am very proud of our country.How exciting and educational it is！It became popular as soon as it was first put on in 2018.I

38、t touched my heart.a good movie Amazing China also focuses on common people.In the film，you see a young Tibetan woman volunteering in rural areas to help people in poverty.The movie shows that their work is not easy，but their spirit make it possible to achieve their tasks.As a student，it is necessar

39、y to have confidence and the courage of overcoming difficulties.In my opinion，this movie is worth watching.(十)(2020葫芦岛)根据要求完成大作文。词数：80100词。2020年是不平凡的一年，每个人都可能得到过社会的帮助。我们应该懂得感恩与回报。中考结束后，学校计划在7月25日组织一次“走进社区，做一天志愿者”活动。活动地点：新华社区(Xinhua Community)；集合时间：上午8：30；集合地点：学校门口。提示：clear out.，water.，hand out masks

40、，give away.,visit.,take food to.请根据以上信息，以A Oneday Volunteer Job为题写一篇短文谈谈你们的活动安排。要求：语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范；要用到所有提示信息并进行适当发挥；文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名；短文的题目、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。A Oneday Volunteer JobAs middle school students，we should be thankful to people who helped us.After the exam，_I hope this activity will make us lear

41、n to give our love to everyone and society.A Oneday Volunteer JobAs middle school students，we should be thankful to people who helped us.After the exam，our school plans to organize an activity called enter the neighbourhood and do a oneday volunteer job on July 25th.Please attention！Well meet at the

42、 school gate at half past eight in the morning.Please get there on time and dont be late.Then well take the school bus to Xinhua Community and do the volunteer job there.First well clear out the street and water the trees，grass and flowers.Then well hand out masks to all the people living in this ne

43、ighbourhood.After that well give away to raise some money to help the old people without children or the family in trouble.In the afternoon well visit some leftbehind children and their grandparents.Well take some delicious food to them.Im sure well be busy but happy during the activity.I hope this

44、activity will make us learn to give our love to everyone and society.(十一)(2020龙东)本学期，我省中小学采取网上授课的教学方式。有些同学取得很大进步，也有些同学成绩下滑。对此，你有什么看法呢？请以“What do you think of learning online？”为题，谈谈你的切身感受。提示信息：(1)网络直播课是学校避免疾病传播的一种教学方式；(spread传播v.)(2)作业形式丰富多样；(all kinds of)(3)课后可以观看回放；(playback回放n.)(4)一些同学对自己要求不严格、不认真

45、听讲、不按时完成作业；(5)WiFi不好，导致网课不能顺利进行；(go on well)注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。What do you think of learning online?At the beginning of this term，we started having online lessons.Some students made great progress，while others found themselves far behind their classmates.As for me，I think_What do you think of learnin

46、g online?At the beginning of this term，we started having online lessons.Some students made great progress，while others found themselves far behind their classmates.As for me，I think learning online is helpful to avoid spreading the diseaseCOVID19.Most of the classes in our school have lessons on Din

47、gTalk.We can watch the playback if we miss any lessons or simply go over them.And it also offers us different kinds of homework besides traditional ones，like video and voice homework.Of course，the new way of learning brings trouble to those who are not strict with themselves.On the one hand，they don

48、t take online lessons seriously.So they neither listen carefully nor finish homework in time.On the other hand，WiFi is not good enough to make sure the lessons go on well.Those problems worry their parents a lot.In my opinion，its students duty to study hard no matter where you are learning，at school

49、 or at home.(十二)(2020泰安)新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。请根据以下思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述你的看法和建议。要求：(1)语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥；(2)词数：80100(文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；(3)文中不得出现学校、姓名、地名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。参考词汇：网上点餐order food online；减少外出reduce going out；规避风险avoid risks；塑料包装plastic packagesWi

50、th the outbreak of COVID19，many young people prefer ordering food online._With the outbreak of COVID19，many young people prefer ordering food online.On the one hand，this way has lots of advantages.Firstly，it is convenient and fast，which can save our time.Secondly，there are a number of kinds of food