2020年江苏中考英语写作指导-话题3-学校生活.ppt

1、2020年江苏中考英语写作指导话题3-学校生活分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近6年中考真题的书面年中考真题的书面表达可知，与表达可知，与“学校生活学校生活”这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度：介绍校园活动，如度：介绍校园活动，如2019淮安；如何丰富校园生活，如淮安；如何丰富校园生活，如2019盐城；对学校规章制度的看法，如盐城；对学校规章制度的看法，如2017淮安；介绍学校特色课淮安；介绍学校特色课程。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：介绍初中程。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：介绍初中校园

2、生活的收获与遗憾等。校园生活的收获与遗憾等。命题探索教材链接 (2019盐城盐城)你校将组织英语作文比赛，请根据所给提示，以你校将组织英语作文比赛，请根据所给提示，以“Live a Colourful Life”为题，写一篇短文参赛。为题，写一篇短文参赛。审主题：使生活丰富多彩的建议审主题：使生活丰富多彩的建议审文体：说明文审文体：说明文审时态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称典例剖析典例剖析一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句审要点：除了以上审要点：除了以上3点外，根据左下点外，根据左下角省略号可知另外需要自由发挥角省略号可知另外需要自由发挥1点点内容，且已给

3、出的内容，且已给出的3点内容需要适当点内容需要适当补充细节补充细节一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句注意事项：注意事项：1.词数：词数：100词左右词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。Live a Colourful LifeLife is a gift.We should do what is interesting and meaningful to _一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好

4、句1.You can make more friends.(扩写做法扩写做法)You can make more friends by taking part in all kinds of school activities.2.We can join in the painting club in our school.(扩写原因扩写原因)We can join in the painting club in our school because drawing pictures is not only interesting but also relaxing.如何丰富校园生活如何丰富校

5、园生活角度角度1扩写范例扩写范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.You can learn new skills.(扩写例子扩写例子)You can learn new skills.For example,you can learn to play the musical instruments.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.You can become healthier.(扩写做法扩写做法)_ 2.We can join in the English Corner every Friday.(扩写原因扩写原因)_ _ _You can become health

6、ier by doing sports you like every day.We can join in the English Corner every Friday because it can not only help us make more friends but also be good for our English learning.句句 子子 扩扩 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.You can take up some hobbies.(扩写例子扩写例子)_ _You can take up some hobbies.For example,you ca

7、n learn how to dance or how to play the violin.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4.On September 21st,we have a school trip in the afternoon.5.On the 12th and the 15th,we have two ball games,soccer and volleyball.6.Yesterday Kittys teacher Mr Wu invited me to join their school trip to the World Park.八八(上上)Unit 3 P

8、32 介绍校园活动介绍校园活动角度角度2好句范例好句范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4.下周我们将有一场演讲比赛。下周我们将有一场演讲比赛。_5.我们通常下午四点到五点之间有一些课外活动。我们通常下午四点到五点之间有一些课外活动。_ _6.我最好的朋友邀请我参加下个月的足球比赛。我最好的朋友邀请我参加下个月的足球比赛。_ _Next week,we are going to have a speech competition.We usually have some afterschool activities from 4：00 pm to 5：00 pm.My best fri

9、end invites me to take part in the soccer match next month.句句 子子 仿仿 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句7.I like sports very much.I have a great interest in playing basketball.Of all the special courses,I like sports best.The reason is that I have a great interest in playing basketball.8.It opens up our eyes.And

10、it also brings us a lot of fun.It not only opens up our eyes but also brings us a lot of fun.介绍学校特色课程介绍学校特色课程角度角度3升格范例升格范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句7.I like science very much.I can learn about more science knowledge.(用形容词最高级和表语从句升格用形容词最高级和表语从句升格)_8.It gives you a chance to learn more about different cultu

11、res.And it also helps you have a right attitude towards them.(用用not only.but also.句型升格句型升格)_ _Of all the courses,I like science best.The reason is that I can learn more about scientific knowledge.It not only gives you a chance to learn more about different cultures,but also helps you have a right at

12、titude towards them.句句 子子 升升 格格一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句9.All students are not allowed to talk loudly in the school library.10.We should obey the school rules so that we can behave well at school.11.Although the school rules are strict,they are good for students.12.Thanks to our school rules,we can grow

13、up safely and happily.对学校规章制度的看法对学校规章制度的看法角度角度4好句范例好句范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句9.我们不被允许在课堂上吃任何东西。我们不被允许在课堂上吃任何东西。_10.我们不能随意扔垃圾，以便我们在干净的环境中学习。我们不能随意扔垃圾，以便我们在干净的环境中学习。_We are not allowed to eat anything in class.We can not drop litter so that we can study in a clean environment.句句 子子 仿仿 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二

14、阶写好句11.尽管你们不能带手机去学校，但那有利于你们的学习。尽管你们不能带手机去学校，但那有利于你们的学习。_ _12.多亏了图书馆管理条例，我们能在安静的环境中看书。多亏了图书馆管理条例，我们能在安静的环境中看书。_ _Although you can not go to school with mobile phones,it is good for your study.Thanks to the library rules,we can read books in a quiet environment.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句

15、练语段练语段Im glad to give you some advice about your new school life.In order to make your school life colorful,I suggest _(做法做法1),such as _(举例举例1).Also you should _(做法做法2).For example,you can _ _(举例举例2)taking part in all kinds of activities/taking more school activities actively/.语语 段段 练练 习习 1 joining

16、in some clubs/doing some voluntary work/.take up a ball game as a hobby/develop your interests and hobbies/.take part in the basketball/football games/join in the painting club/go to the old peoples home/.如何丰富校园生活如何丰富校园生活一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句There are many interesting and fun activities in our school

17、,_(举例举例).These activities make my school life colorful.Among all of them,I like _(自己喜欢的自己喜欢的活动活动)which lets us_(原因原因1).For this reason,it becomes my favorite activity.Besides,it can _(原因原因2)such as ball games and school trips/such as sports meeting and singing festival/.语语 段段 练练 习习 2介绍校园活动介绍校园活动sing

18、ing festival/school trips/.show our abilities in singing and dancing/have a chance to get close to nature/.build up our confidence and our teamwork spirit/make us close to each other/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Our school asks us _(学校规章制度学校规章制度).I think _(看法看法1).The rules are _(看法看法2)and they can help us _

19、(看法看法3).With the help of our school,we can learn happily and grow up safely.to go to school on time and not to take mobile phones to school/to protect flowers and trees in our school and not to throw litter around/.语语 段段 练练 习习 3对学校规章制度的看法对学校规章制度的看法its important for us to follow these school rules/we

20、 should obey the school rules strictly/.good for our growth/learning/.get over disadvantages/behave well at school/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章Live a Colourful LifeLife is a gift.We should do what is interesting and meaningful to live a colourful life.First,read more books.Its beneficial to broaden o

21、ur horizons by reading a bit every day.Second,learn new skills.For example,we can learn how to take photos or how to play the guitar,which will make our life much happier.Whats more,we can learn to know about art.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Enjoying different art forms helps to cultivate our ability to appr

22、eciate beauty.At last,we should participate in various activities like sports activities to strengthen our body.In conclusion,we can all live a colourful life.And we should try our best to make our life more colourful and meaningful.(2019泰州改编泰州改编)为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请你根

23、据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍次社会实践活动。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。要点：要点：1.上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2.下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变；年巨变；3.活动中老师提供了很多帮助，对老师充满感激；活动中老师提供了很多帮助，对老师充满感激；4.倍受鼓舞倍受鼓舞(自主发挥，至少两点自主发挥，至少两点)。写作练兵写作练兵参考词汇：市民广场参考词汇：市民广场Civic Squa

24、re注意事项：注意事项：1.词数词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。写作练兵写作练兵In order to enrich Junior 3 students afterschool life,our school organized a social practice activity last weekend.All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it._写作练兵写作练兵In the mornin

25、g,we visited the Peoples Park and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.We got together,singing and dancing.We also took a lot of photos.In the afternoon,we visited the Civic Square and watched the picture show.We learnt about the great changes in our country and our hometown over the past 70 years.During t

26、he activity,our _写作练兵写作练兵teachers helped us a lot,so all of us is thankful to our teachers.We were also greatly inspired by all these achievements.I decide to work harder than before to get a better grade in the coming High School Entrance Exam.Besides,Ill work hard for our country in the future.巧用定

27、语从句在定语从句中，从句在句子中作定语，修饰先行词。初在定语从句中，从句在句子中作定语，修饰先行词。初中阶段要掌握简单的由中阶段要掌握简单的由which,that,who引导的定语从句。先行引导的定语从句。先行词为人：词为人：who/that引导；先行词为物：引导；先行词为物：which/that引导。引导。巧用定语从句句式连接范例句式连接范例 1.先行词为人：先行词为人：(1)I know the girl who/that has curly hair.(2)A nurse is a person who looks after sick people.(3)He is the one w

28、ho has given me a lot of help.2.先行词为物：先行词为物：(1)I like sports which/that are safe for me.(2)This is the best gift that I have ever received.巧用定语从句小试牛刀小试牛刀 1.This is a book.It can tell a lot of stories._2.I like to make friends.They give me courage._ 3.Some things happened yesterday.Tom told them to h

29、is mother._ This is a book which/that can tell a lot of stories.I like to make friends who/that give me courage.Tom told some things that happened yesterday to his mother.巧用定语从句4.I asked Miss Li for help just now.She is a teacher._5.I really like the family photo.We took it on my grandfathers 80th birthday._ _Miss Li is the teacher who/whom I asked for help just now.I really like the family photo(that/which)we took on my grandfathers 80th birthday.