英语应用文写作的几点思考及课例课件.pptx

1、英语应用文写作的几点思考英语应用文写作的几点思考 应用文应用文写作写作格式格式只是最起码的要求，只是最起码的要求，信息信息是否完全关系到文章是否完整，是否完全关系到文章是否完整，结构结构的合理的合理安排才能让文章层次分明，而安排才能让文章层次分明，而语言语言使用的准使用的准确性和丰富性关系到文章的内容是否饱满。确性和丰富性关系到文章的内容是否饱满。金考卷金考卷45套浙江省杭州地区套浙江省杭州地区2019届高三上学期四校联考届高三上学期四校联考 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter下个月要来你校进行下个月要来你校进行短期游学，因此他发邮件询问你该如何准备。请你给他回一短

2、期游学，因此他发邮件询问你该如何准备。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：封邮件，内容包括：1.表示表示欢迎欢迎；2.从衣、食、住、行四个方面给出从衣、食、住、行四个方面给出建议建议。注意：注意：1.词数词数80左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。体裁结构的认知和篇章结构的构思体裁结构的认知和篇章结构的构思学生习作学生习作第一段并没有开门见山写出写信目的：建议第一段并没有开门见山写出写信目的：建议Part 1Part 2Part 3书信申请信Purpose:to apply for/to Reasons/advantagesHope/wishes推荐信Pu

3、rpose:to recommendReasons/advantagesHope/wishes感谢信Purpose:to express thanksReasons(what sb.did)Thanks again建议信Purpose:to give suggestionsDetailed suggestions and reasonsHope/wishes询问信Purpose:to inquire informationWhat you want to knowYour expectation投诉信Purpose:to complainYour dissatisfactionWhat you

4、 require邀请信Purpose:to inviteDetailed informationYour expectation通知background/purposeD e t a i l e d i n f o r m a t i o n a n d requirementsHope/wishes报道leadbodycomment倡议书background/purposeD e t a i l e d i n f o r m a t i o n a n d requirementsDetermination/wish发言稿purposedetailed informationrestate

5、 the prpose说明文对比选择型说明文表明一方或双方观点-表明另一方观点具体阐述理由问题解决型说明文提出问题分析问题解决问题现象解释型说明文提出现象分析原因得出结论记叙文beginningdeveloping-climaxending议论文类型1论点论据结论类型2分论点结论类型3论点论据新高考英语写作体裁与常见结构新高考英语写作体裁与常见结构 话题词块有效提高学生语言资源信息处理的效率，话题词块有效提高学生语言资源信息处理的效率，从而减少了限时写作的压力从而减少了限时写作的压力 更符合英语语言习惯，提高了写作语言的准确性、更符合英语语言习惯，提高了写作语言的准确性、地道性和流畅性地道性和

6、流畅性 符合中国学生的认知规律和学习特点，从而能够增符合中国学生的认知规律和学习特点，从而能够增强其英语写作学习的成就感和学习信心强其英语写作学习的成就感和学习信心话题词块的积累话题词块的积累话题词块的习得与运用是写作的重点难点之一话题词块的习得与运用是写作的重点难点之一,决定决定了写作内容的深度和宽度了写作内容的深度和宽度高频率出现的大于单词的高频率出现的大于单词的语言现象语言现象，融合了，融合了语法语法、语语义义和和语境语境的优势的优势 写作教学中话题词块处理的课堂片段写作教学中话题词块处理的课堂片段话题：语言学习（话题：语言学习（language learning）Do you like

7、 learning English?Why do we have to learn English?What have you done to improve your English?take/show great interest in;be fond of;keep sb spellbound;appeal to;express oneself in English fluently;go abroad for further education;broaden ones horizon;demands of modern society;increase our knowledge i

8、n various fields;allow sb more opportunities to;benefit from.;have a good command of;spare no effort to;attend English lectures;increase/develop ones interest in;attitude to learning;the effective ways to do sth;make full use of;enlarge/expand ones vocabulary;build up ones confidence;attitudeimporta

9、ncemethods 写作任务写作任务 假设你是高三学生李华，你班与高一假设你是高三学生李华，你班与高一(2)(2)班是班是友好班级。毕业之前，高一学生邀请你向他们介绍友好班级。毕业之前，高一学生邀请你向他们介绍英语学习的方法。请用英语写一份发言稿，内容包英语学习的方法。请用英语写一份发言稿，内容包括括:1.1.英语学习的重要性英语学习的重要性2.2.英语学习方法英语学习方法 注意：词数注意：词数8080左右左右 不得出现真实学校，姓名不得出现真实学校，姓名写作教学中话题词块处理的课堂片段写作教学中话题词块处理的课堂片段9+19+1联考联考假定你是李华，你的美国朋友假定你是李华，你的美国朋友T

10、omTom对中国茶文化很感兴趣，对中国茶文化很感兴趣，发邮件来向你了解相关信息。请你给他回复邮件。内容包发邮件来向你了解相关信息。请你给他回复邮件。内容包括：括：1.1.中国茶文化的简介；中国茶文化的简介；2.2.喝茶的好处喝茶的好处;3.3.邀请他来中国体验。邀请他来中国体验。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数8080左右左右;2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。分析：分析：结构清晰结构清晰内容不饱满，语言匮乏内容不饱满，语言匮乏a long historybe beneficial to our health/build up our bodies传统文化词块

11、传统文化词块with the history of./dating back to about.years ago;have a long and splendid history;plays a significant role in Chinese culture;cream of our traditional culture;a vivid representative of Chinese culture；.身心健康词块身心健康词块1.raise ones spirit/refresh ones mind/refresh oneself2.strengthen ones memory

12、/sharpen ones memory3.keep/stay young;slow the aging process4.extend ones life/prolong ones life5.remove/get rid of tiredness；rid oneself of tiredness6.enhance the immune system7.学生习作学生习作思维的训练思维的训练任何类型的写作都离不开思维，写作的过程任何类型的写作都离不开思维，写作的过程就是复杂的思维过程。从审题、构思结构、就是复杂的思维过程。从审题、构思结构、语言的组织语言的组织和表达，每一个环节都少不了思和表达

13、，每一个环节都少不了思维的活动。维的活动。假如你是李华，下周瑞典某中学师生团将访问你校，请你给将接假如你是李华，下周瑞典某中学师生团将访问你校，请你给将接待的瑞典学生待的瑞典学生Peterson写封电子邮件，内容包括：写封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示热烈欢迎；表示热烈欢迎；2.告知活动安排；告知活动安排；3.询问有何要求。询问有何要求。Based on time order1.a welcome ceremoney/party2.shool life/events3.tourist attractions假定你是李华，学校英语俱乐部负责人。俱乐部计划举行经典英文电影赏析会假定你是李华，学校英语

14、俱乐部负责人。俱乐部计划举行经典英文电影赏析会(Classic English Film Night)，请你给美籍外教请你给美籍外教LizLiz写一封电子邮件邀请她参加。内容包括：写一封电子邮件邀请她参加。内容包括：1 1赏析会时间、地点；赏析会时间、地点；2 2活动内容介绍活动内容介绍；3 3邀请邀请LizLiz并请她推荐电影。并请她推荐电影。Focused on theme1.watch a/an.English Film2.film-review salon 假设你是新华中学的学生李华假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去约好下周末

15、去北京旅游北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写封电子邮件但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写封电子邮件:1.表示款意表示款意:2.解释原因解释原因;3.另约时间；另约时间；According to cause and effect Much to my sadness,my mom had an car accident last night whenriding her bike on the way back home.Fortunately,she was sent tohospital at once for timely medical treatment

16、while the doctor stated that Mom need to stay in hospital for nearly two weeks before recovery.Therefore,I have no choice but to attend to her.yesterday I received a message saying our school art festival will be held next weekend.Being a member of the school band,I will be involved in a performance

17、 at the festival.In other words,I cant fail to be present atthe performance to make it a success.假如你是李华假如你是李华,高二分班后高二分班后，请你用英文给你，请你用英文给你原来原来的英语老师张老师写一份的英语老师张老师写一份Thank-you Note。主要内容包括：。主要内容包括：1.表达对老师的感谢；表达对老师的感谢；2.陈述老师对你的陈述老师对你的帮助和影响帮助和影响；3.表达对老师的祝福。表达对老师的祝福。In the past year,you have helped me a lot

18、 with my English as well as my character shaping.There is no doubt that without your timely help I couldnt have made such rapid progress in my English study.You really make a big difference to my life and Ill follow your example to be ready to help those in need.There was a time in Senior One when I

19、 was less confident and shy so that I dared not speak in front of class.It was your support and encouragement that helped me work up my courage to overcome the difficulties in English study and now English is one of my favourite subjects.Whenever one student was in trouble,you were always the first

20、to lend a helping hand,which sets a good example to guide me to be generous and warm-hearted.Connected to real life翻转话题，一题多用翻转话题，一题多用巩固词汇，训练思维巩固词汇，训练思维假如你是学生会的一员，请用英语写一份关于诗歌朗诵比赛的假如你是学生会的一员，请用英语写一份关于诗歌朗诵比赛的书面通知书面通知(80字左右字左右)。1.时间地点：时间地点：下周三下午下周三下午3点到点到5点；音乐厅点；音乐厅2.参加人员参加人员：全体高二学生和：全体高二学生和10位老师（裁判）位老师

21、（裁判）3.活动目的和意义：？活动目的和意义：？4.注意事项：注意事项：准时参加和参赛；保持安静准时参加和参赛；保持安静;不带零食进会场不带零食进会场 Notice Aimed at enriching our school life and arousing students interest in poetry,a poetry recitation competition will be held from 3:00pm to 5:00pm next Wednesday in the music hall.Apart from the student competitors,the re

22、st of senior two students will all get actively involved as audience and 10 teachers working as judges.Please be present on time an be quiet.No snacks are allowed in.The Students Union A variety of classic poems with concrete language and vivid images will be a feast for your ears.Not only will the

23、activity serve as a grand platform for some gifted students to showcase their talents but also it will give all students a sweet taste of poem appreciation.假如你是学校校报记者，请用英语写一份关于上周你校举行的假如你是学校校报记者，请用英语写一份关于上周你校举行的诗歌朗诵比赛的诗歌朗诵比赛的报道报道(80字左右字左右)。1.时间地点：时间地点：下周三下午下周三下午3点到点到5点；音乐厅点；音乐厅2.参加人员参加人员：全体高二学生和：全体高二

24、学生和10位老师（裁判）位老师（裁判）3.活动目的和意义：？活动目的和意义：？Aimed at enriching our school life and arousing students interest in poetry,a poetry recitation competition was held from 3:00pm to 5:00pm last Wednesday in the music hall.Apart from the student competitors,the rest of senior two students all got actively invol

25、ved as audience and 10 teachers working as judges.A variety of classic poems with concrete language and vivid images was definitely a feast for your ears.Not only did the activity serve as a grand platform for some gifted students to showcase their talents but also it gave students a sweet taste of

26、poem appreciation.假定你是李华，校读书俱乐部负责人。俱乐部将在下周三下午假定你是李华，校读书俱乐部负责人。俱乐部将在下周三下午三点在音乐厅进行诗歌朗读比赛。请你给外教三点在音乐厅进行诗歌朗读比赛。请你给外教Tom 写一封邮件。写一封邮件。内容如下：内容如下：1.邀请邀请他担任比赛评委；他担任比赛评委；2.问他届时是否有空出席；问他届时是否有空出席；3.请他向学生推荐一些有价值的经典诗歌。请他向学生推荐一些有价值的经典诗歌。注意：注意：1、80词左右；词左右；2、可适当增加内容，使行文连贯。、可适当增加内容，使行文连贯。Dear Mr.Tom,Im writing to inv

27、ite you to be present at the poetry recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesday afternoon in the lecture hall.If available then,could you do us the favor?And we would appreciate having you as a judge.By the way,it would be very nice if you can recommend some classic poet

28、ry works suitable for us students.Thanks for considering our request.Im looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience!Yours sincerely,Li Hua假如你是李华，是你校京剧社假如你是李华，是你校京剧社（Beijing Opera Club）的社长。你知道你校外籍的社长。你知道你校外籍学生学生RuthRuth对京剧也很感兴趣，请你用英文给她写一封对京剧也很感兴趣，请你用英文给她写一封 Email Email，邀请邀请她参加本周她参加本周的社

29、团活动。内容包括：的社团活动。内容包括：1 1、时间、地点；、时间、地点；2 2、活动目的；、活动目的；3 3、活动内容。、活动内容。假设你校俱乐部要招收新的成员，假设你是假设你校俱乐部要招收新的成员，假设你是“Beijing Opera Club”社长李华，社长李华，请你根据下列要点用英语写一则请你根据下列要点用英语写一则招新启示招新启示，鼓励学生积极报名。要点提示：，鼓励学生积极报名。要点提示：1.介绍社团主要活动；介绍社团主要活动；2.说明参加社团的益处；说明参加社团的益处；3.报名事项：报名事项：10月月1日前发送邮件至日前发送邮件至。Welcome to Beijing Opera

30、Club .假设你校俱乐部假设你校俱乐部“Beijing Opera Club”要招收新的成员，你对此感兴趣并很想要招收新的成员，你对此感兴趣并很想成为其中一员，请给社团负责人写封成为其中一员，请给社团负责人写封email，申请申请加入。要点如下加入。要点如下1.自我介绍；自我介绍；2.参加意图；参加意图；3.希望获批。希望获批。假设你校俱乐部假设你校俱乐部“Beijing Opera Club”要招收新的成员，你想要招收新的成员，你想推荐推荐你的室友你的室友TOM成为其中一员，请给社团负责人写封成为其中一员，请给社团负责人写封email。要点如下：。要点如下：1.推荐理由；推荐理由；2.表达

31、希望。表达希望。谢谢各位的聆听谢谢各位的聆听审题谋篇：审题谋篇：para.1 beginnig:para.2 body:para.3 endingpurpose of writing:to recommendreasons hopewishes Dear Jack,I am so pleased to learn that you are to spend some time in China,and I am writing to recommend you stay in Beijing.As the capital and cultural center of China,Beijing

32、 enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture,which represents the traditional local lifestyles./And there are also plenty of museums where precious relics of historical interest are waiting for you to explore./Besides,the exceptional Peking Opera performances there are also wh

33、at you cant miss.I wish you a very happy and meaningful time in China!Yours sincerely,Li Hua审题谋篇：审题谋篇：para.1 beginnig:para.2 body:para.3 endingpurpose of writing:to recommendreasons hopewishes Para.1 purpose of writing:to recommend1.I am writing to recommend sth to you.2.Knowing/Learning that,I stro

34、ngly recommend you to 3.I am writing to recommend for Im sure he is the right person for the job.Para.3 hope and wishes1.Id appreciate it if you would take my recommendation into consideration/account.2.I hope my recommendation will be of great help to you.3.In a word,he would be a good choice.I wou

35、ld be grateful if you could consider my recommendation.Dear Steven,Having learned from your last e-mail that you are at a loss what optional course to choose,I take the pleasure in recommending Mr.Bais Tang Poems to you for the reasons below.First,Tang poetry,a combination of rhyming charm and liter

36、ary beauty,is the cream of Chinese classical literature.A taste of it will surely spark your interest in learning Chinese./In addition,Mr.Bai has a special way to make his classes lively and interesting./Therefore,I assure you his Tang Poems is your good choice for you.I hope my recommendation will

37、be of great help to you.Yours,Li HuaDear_,I take the pleasure in recommending to you _(被推荐的人或物).I hope you will be interested in _（him/her）.There are several reasons why I think _ is a good choice.Firstly,_(理由一).Secondly,_（理由二）.Last but not least,_（理由三）.In a word,_（总结）.I would be most grateful if yo

38、u would like to consider my recommendation.Yours truly,试题：假如你是王林，李明是你的好友，他对布朗先生的公司感兴趣，打算到该公司谋职（apply for a position）。请根据下面李明的简历表，用英语为他写一封推荐信。词数110左右。姓名 李明 性别 男 国籍 中国出生地 重庆 婚否 已婚 出生日期 1980.8.21通讯地址 重庆市人民路148号 电话 023-63335550职业 律师 学历 大学毕业外语水平 擅长英语，懂一些日语、德语其他有三年工作经历，办事认真，待人诚恳，与人和睦相处注意：1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增

39、加细节，以使行文连贯 3.书信开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。推荐人的经典句型推荐人的经典句型(1)He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects.He has been given the title of the“excellent student”.(2)As a boy with great potential,he is good at solving difficult problems.(3)Li Ming,a graduate from Peking University,majors in

40、 computer software design.(4)He has enjoyed the reputation/title of the Excellent Graduate.Dear Brown,It is my pleasure to recommend Li Ming,my good friend,for his application to work in your company.Li Ming graduated from Beijing Industry University.His major is Computer Software.During the four ye

41、arsstudy he has done a good job.Every year he got the first grade scholarship.And he also has got the title of the Excellent Graduate.He is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with high potentiality.He is not only quick at learning but also good at solving difficult problems with logical mind.

42、I am sure that it will benefit your company if he can work for your company.I strongly recommend him to your company.Yours Wang Lin Dear Mr.Brown,Id like to introduce my friend to you,Mr.Li Ming,who is going to apply for a position in your firm.He graduated from college three years ago and has worke

43、d as a lawyer ever since.He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German.He works hard and is careful in everything he does.He is honest,kind and easy to get on with.He was born on August 21st,1980 in Chongqing,China.He is married and lives at No 148 Renmin Road,Chongqing city.His telephone

44、 number is 023-63335550.He shows great interest in your firm.If he is accepted,he will do his best.Im sure he will be fit for the position.Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours,参考词汇:推荐 recommend(V.)英汉/汉英词典 The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary(ECCED)新华字典 Xinhua Dictionary(XD)假设你是李越,你

45、的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典.根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.Dear Steve,Im so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.Id like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners.It has 18,000 Englis

46、h words and 20,000 Chinese words.Besides plenty of examples,it has many notes telling you how to use a word.Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary,and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words.It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese.Of the two,ECCED is the more expensi

47、ve,costing 52 yuan,and XD costs 11 yuan.Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.Yours,Li Yue审题谋篇：审题谋篇：para.1 beginnig:para.2 body:para.3 endingpurpose of writing:to recommendreasons hopewishes Dear Jack,I am so pleased to learn that you are to spend some time in China,and I am wr

48、iting to recommend you stay in Beijing.As the capital and cultural center of China,Beijing enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture,which represents the traditional local lifestyles./And there are also plenty of museums where precious relics of historical interest are waiti

49、ng for you to explore./Besides,the exceptional Peking Opera performances there are also what you cant miss.I wish you a very happy and meaningful time in China!Yours sincerely,Li Hua审题谋篇：审题谋篇：para.1 beginnig:para.2 body:para.3 endingpurpose of writing:to recommendreasons hopewishes Para.1 purpose of

50、 writing:to recommend1.I am writing to recommend sth to you.2.Knowing/Learning that,I strongly recommend you to 3.I am writing to recommend for Im sure he is the right person for the job.Para.3 hope and wishes1.Id appreciate it if you would take my recommendation into consideration/account.2.I hope