高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导(19张)课件.ppt

1、高考英语开放式作文高考英语开放式作文用自己的语言对画面进行简明、清楚叙述 紧承叙述，引出观点（话题）（力求自然、准确）联系实际，摆事实，讲道理（力求深度、力度）综合上文，再申主旨（力求完整、有力）开放作文的四个步骤：开放作文的四个步骤：起起承承转转合合描图描图-解图解图-议图议图-圆图圆图In your spoken English class,your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.Some peop

2、le look confident,but what they actually have in their head is far from enough.一篇好的开放性作文什么样的？一篇好的开放性作文什么样的？As is shown in the picture,a half-empty bottle is going to stick a label of“full”on its body,feeling proud and confident.The picture seems to be reflecting a kind of social phenomenon.We might

3、often meet some people who look confident,trying to impress others with their“rich”knowledge.However,just like the bottle in the picture,what they really know is just a little.What they actually have in their head is far from enough.As an old saying goes,empty bottles make the loudest noise.Therefor

4、e,its wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our head full.起起承承转转合合描图描图（结合图）议论（结合图）议论 如何如何“起起”？1.As is shown in the picture,.2.As we can see from the picture,.4.In the picture we can see that.5.From the picture we can see that.3.As can be seen from the picture,.6.As the picture indi

5、cates,there is/are sb.doing.描图描图如何描图？如何描图？如何如何“承承”？1.The picture seems to.2.The picture tries to.3.The picture conveys a message that.4.It is a common phenomenon in our daily life.5.It is quite a common scene in the society.6.Such a situation seems common in our society.图中含义图中含义如何表达？如何表达？如何如何“转转”？1.

6、However,just like the in the picture,.2.If,.注意注意:“转转”的方式非常灵活，难以有固定的方式非常灵活，难以有固定的的 模式，关键与前文逻辑一致。模式，关键与前文逻辑一致。1、然而，真实的情况是、然而，真实的情况是.2、如果不这样、如果不这样,会有啥结果会有啥结果 如何如何“合合”？1.Therefore，.结论结论 2.Thus，.3.So.4.In conclusion，.5.Only in this way can.漫画理解作文审图立意三步骤漫画理解作文审图立意三步骤 一审细节（抓要点）一审细节（抓要点）二审角度（找可能性）二审角度（找可能性）

7、三审优选立意（拓展主题句）三审优选立意（拓展主题句）漫画的漫画的画面画面 细节细节漫画的漫画的夸张夸张 寓意寓意 (与现实的矛盾之处）与现实的矛盾之处）细节细节夸张夸张寓意寓意Dont copy others way of solving the problem.Do everything in the right way.读图与立意读图与立意细节细节类型：现象型类型：现象型特点：有人有物特点：有人有物要素：人，门，要素：人，门，“拉拉”细节细节2：汗水代表什么？汗水代表什么？门呢？门呢？“拉拉”呢？呢？细节细节1：脸朝外没看标示脸朝外没看标示审 图抓细节 揭寓意要素：人，门，要素：人，门，“

8、拉拉”门门-目标、理想、工作、学习、困难，具体的某目标、理想、工作、学习、困难，具体的某一件事等一件事等标示标示“拉拉”-方法、建议、指令、措施、策略、方法、建议、指令、措施、策略、规则等规则等例：例：In my opinion,the door refers to a problem needed to be tackled,while the sign“Pull”is just like the suggestions we can get in our daily life.人细节：汗人细节：汗-努力、能力、经验、态度等努力、能力、经验、态度等 没看见标示没看见标示-问题所在：问题所在：

9、“睁眼瞎睁眼瞎”、“盲盲目行事目行事”、“固执蛮干固执蛮干”、“急于成事急于成事”等现等现象象评分标准：评分标准：文章是否扣题文章是否扣题-描述与主题一致，自圆其说描述与主题一致，自圆其说结构是否完整结构是否完整-三部分三部分内容是否健康内容是否健康-乐观向上乐观向上逻辑是否清晰逻辑是否清晰-议论要有逻辑性议论要有逻辑性语言是否准确语言是否准确-用词恰当，无语法错误用词恰当，无语法错误交际是否得体交际是否得体-情境，身份等情境，身份等正确的立意正确的立意：1、方法决定成功和失败。、方法决定成功和失败。Sometimes,it is the method you apply that deter

10、mines your success or failure.In my opinion,this conveys the message that one should always make clear of the right way to reach ones goal before devoting oneself to it,otherwise,you might go in the completely wrong direction and will not succeed no matter how hard you try just as the man does.To my

11、 understanding,what holds the most significant key to success is the way we do things,rather than how hard we throw ourselves in.From what the picture illustrates,we could realize that even if we try hard for our goal,we may still fail if we neglect the way to work on it.And it is from the picture t

12、hat we know doing something with the wrong method can never lead us to success we desire,even if we work hard.正确的立意正确的立意：2、有能力没方法无法成功。Although we possess great abilities,if we always stick to the wrong methods,not only will it restrict our thinking but it will prevent our further development.The pic

13、ture has a profound significance in our daily life,which indicates the fact that we succeed not because of our ability but our ways to solve the problems we encounter.正确的立意正确的立意：3、具体问题具体分析。、具体问题具体分析。People sometimes do things without any further thinking.4、做事应目标明确方法正确、做事应目标明确方法正确。The picture indicat

14、es that we should use an appropriate way to realize our aim and goals.The message conveyed is that we should always find the correct approach to things.From my point of view,what the picture conveys to us is that before going for something or pursuing your goals,it is very important to make sure tha

15、t where your dream lies or if you are on the right way that leads to your goals.正确的立意正确的立意：5、遇事要学会变通，方法要应时改变。、遇事要学会变通，方法要应时改变。In my opinion,they should not always follow their past experience;they should observe the situation each time and make proper reaction.6、不要急于求成，而应冷静反思。、不要急于求成，而应冷静反思。In reali

16、ty,we also need to think over before we deal with a problem in order to find the best solution.7、劲要使在刀刃上。、劲要使在刀刃上。With persistent endeavor/hard work in the right direction,we are bound to make a success.正确的立意正确的立意：8、不要盲目自大，要善于听取建议。、不要盲目自大，要善于听取建议。We,teenagers,shouldnt make light of the suggestions g

17、iven by others on the way to success.What the picture tends to get across to us is that we should follow someone elses suggestions.9、认清形势找到正确的方法。、认清形势找到正确的方法。The picture vividly conveys the message that whenever we do something,we are supposed to be sensible of the situation first and then select th

18、e right way to finish it.One possible version:As is shown in the picture,there is a man who is trying to open a door by pushing it very hard.Without doubt,he will fail because the door is supposed to be pulled open.He is getting into a wrong way.Just like the case in the picture,sometimes when we fa

19、ce some difficulties or meet some challenges,it is in such a hurry that we get down to solving them without thinking twice about the right means.As a result,we cant get them done at all.Therefore,once a problem comes,it is more important for us to analyze it first and find out how to solve it.Only i

20、n this way can we reach our target.After all,attitude is not everything.1.学习学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。2.不论不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需

21、要你与之心灵相通。读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。3.动物也有着自己的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。4.议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。5.记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言，无法

22、体现出一个学生高中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中的水平，令人汗颜。6.大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。7.由由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。8.提炼提炼中心法。这是写

23、新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多最多。9.抓抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。