高考英语作文提分策略教学课件-35-.pptx

1、1.Comprehensiveness.全面性全面性:包含所有要求内容。包含所有要求内容。2.Clean and neat.整洁性整洁性:书写工整，卷面整洁书写工整，卷面整洁。3.Differences.多样性多样性:使用较高级词汇和语法结构，使用较高级词汇和语法结构，句式多样。句式多样。4.Logic/Coherence.连贯性连贯性:逻辑清晰，上下文连逻辑清晰，上下文连贯，贯，恰当使用承上启下的词语和连接词，使全文恰当使用承上启下的词语和连接词，使全文流畅连贯，浑然一体。流畅连贯，浑然一体。想要写一篇高分作文，你还要了解评分标准：想要写一篇高分作文，你还要了解评分标准：第五档第五档（很好）

2、：（很好）：（21-2521-25分）分）1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（好）：（第四档（好）：（16-2016-20分）分）1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个词重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全

3、文结构 紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）：（第三档（适当）：（11-1511-15分）分）1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容，但段盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言、基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（较差）：（第二档（较差）：（6 6一一1010分）分）1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内 容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少

4、使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（差）：（第一档（差）：（1-51-5分）分）1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未 理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误、影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】江苏江苏20182018高考作文范文：高考作文范文：As a major channel of consumption in

5、formation,the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption.Interestingly,the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase.Firstly,the higher rating means the higher quality of the produc

6、t,or better service.Based on the ratings,I bought my beloved backpack,saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods.Secondly,ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping.For example,there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from.In that case,it is both c

7、onvenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption.The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related.It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件

8、35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】分析分析：18年作文仍然是读写作文，即先用30词概括阅读材料，然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料，然后进行比较和分析，表明态度，作出价值判断。文章首段要简要介绍两段材料，第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一家人去餐馆吃饭，看了on-line rating，选择去了其中一家，但饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。然后写作者对online rating的看法，表明观点，注意用2-3个论据来支撑

9、自己的看法。首先在概括要点时，本文要抓住要点，语言精炼。本文所给材料是描述某种现象，那么就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象，这篇文章做到了第二步是提出自己的观点并加以论证。首先提出自己的观点，之后用论据来证明自己的观点，结尾总结了要点，与自己的观点句相呼应，使读者对主题有深刻的印象。特殊句式和词汇用法也已标出。这就算第五档作文。高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】二、二、Examing the topic(审题审题)审题，先审内容审题，先审内容：1.列提纲，主要是选一个主题 进行分析 2.看字数，要求字数的20左右。然后

10、审时态然后审时态：确定主要时态，建议不超过2中，时态越多，越容易出错。再审人称再审人称：写作时，不要搞混人称。最后审题材最后审题材：看是议论文，书信，还是图标类作文，每种题材有一定的书写格式。高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】江苏江苏20182018高考作文：高考作文：高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看

11、法。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】我们来看下2018年江苏高考英语作文，它是一篇读写作文，需要你先阅读材料，然后概括出一个现象，再针对消费排名现象写一篇议论文，表明作者的立场，并说明理由。全文用第一人称（I），时态用了一般现在时（may have,there is,tend to等),并且穿插了一般过去时(bought,tasted),简单明了，不容易出错。不同题材常用句式：不同题材常用句式：高考英语作文提分策略

12、PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】图表作文：图表作文：开头：A survey on the topic of -has been carried out which has aroused a heated discussion among.例句：Recently,a survey on the topic of whom do you turn to when in trouble has been carried out in our school which has aroused a heated discussion amon

13、g students.写作过程中，详细描述图表中的数字或百分比高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】书信类书信类书信文体包括三大类：1、单一应用文（只达到一个目的）2、简单述说型（欢迎稿等）3、功能混合型（一封信里可能达到好几个目的）种类：建议信，申请信，感谢信，道歉信，邀请信，求助信，咨询信。建议信开头：Im writing the letter to offer you some suggestions/do you a favor.申请信开头：Im writing to apply for the job/posi

14、tion/opportunity.感谢信开头：Im writing to express my heartfelt gratitude/appreciation to you.道歉信开头：Im writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.邀请信开头：Im writing to invite you to join the.高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】求助信开头：Im writing to ask you to do me a favor./I have no c

15、hoice but to turn to your help.咨询信开头：Im writing to ask your some relevant questions.告知信开头：Im writing to inform you of some relevant details.建议信中间段：Here are several suggestions for you.1.You ought to do sth.2.You are supposed to do sth.3.If i were you,I would do sth.4.Its high time that you did sth.罗

16、列要点，在句子之间加上连接词结尾段：Hopefully,these suggestions would be helpful for you.If theres anything else I can do for you,please let me know.高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】申请信中间段：I have confidence that I can handle the job well.As for the reasons,for one thing,.for another.申请项目通常有：志愿者

17、，支教老师，夏令营，记着等申请理由：1、经验类例句：Living in Seattle for half a year as an exchange student,I do well in English speaking and writing.In 2008,I served as a Volunteer in the Beijing Olympic Games,therefor,I was equipped with adequate relevent experience and social skill.2、知识类例句：Once I won the sceond prize in

18、the CCTV national English speaking contest.In my spare time,I used to communicate with my foreign friends through the internet,exchanging ideas on cultural difference and current affairs.3、性格类例句：Im also the vice monitor of my class,which has equipped me with a strong body and the ability高考英语作文提分策略PP

19、T教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】of leadership.Being the team leader of our school basketball team,I get along well with my teammates,enjoying my outstanding awards and a harmonious interpersonal relationship in my team.结尾段：Hopefully,the chance would be offered to me.If so,Iwould devote a

20、ll my effort and wisdom to your company/this activity.感谢信中间段：Whenever I recall these days,I just cant help thinking you.It was so kind of you to do sth.Besides,you did sth,which really moved me.Nothing would be able to erase our wonderful memories and I will cherish them forever.结尾段：Thanks for readi

21、ng my letter.道歉信中间段：How I wish had(not)done.However,I have to.As a result,I have no choice but do sth.I believe that if you were me,you would make the same decision.高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】结尾段：Hopefully,you would accept my apology and understand my situation.邀请信中间段：分3

22、层 1、Here are several relevant details about this activity.The activity will be in.(地点）on the afternoon of.(时间）2、The theme of the activity is.,which is undoubtedly both meaningful and enteraining.3、Not only will we do.,but we will also do.and.结尾段：If you need any futher information,please send an emia

23、l to.or call me at.And Im looking forward to your presence.求助信中间段：I am wondering if you would like to.In great need of.Im eager to.Being lack of.and.Im now in a dilemma that(+同位语）省略号部分就是你要求助的内容。高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】结尾段：Thanks for reading my letter.Im sincerely look

24、ing forward to your early reply.咨询信中间段：I tried to search the internet,but found no clear answer.Would you please be so kind/nice as to tell me.?(公开透明化信息）Besides,I also need some information about sth.How is everything going with sb/sth?(咨询有关人或事物）It is convenient for you,would you please tell me sth?

25、让对方帮助自己一个小忙，这个因信件内容不同而不同。结尾段：Thanks for reading my letter.Im sincerely looking forward to your early reply.告知信中间段：罗列具体要点，这类信件往往比较简单结尾段：If you need any further information,please send an email to.or call me at.书信体：应用为主，传情为辅，开门见山，直奔主题，不简单罗列要点，用好高级连词，分词，倒装，强调，从句等语法点，要灵活运用。高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考

26、英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】三、三、W Writing（写作）写作）全文分为三段三段式，每段之间留有一行一行，每段最好有一个topic topic sentencesentence内容上，写作要求中提到的内容都要写，且写的内容要与主题相关。词法和句法要求：1、使用高级词汇高级词汇，替换低级词汇 2、使用词组词组替换单词 3、句型丰富，非谓语，独立主格，特殊非谓语，独立主格，特殊句式句式 4、连接词，主要以“逗号”隔开的词，或词组高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】2018年江苏高考作文，三段式，

27、且每一段都有中心句：第一段第一句：（As a major channel of consumption information,the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption）第二段第一句：（I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase.）第三段第一句：写作中：可以替换的一些词有：我认为-Low：I think.替换：form my point of view,as far as Im concerned

28、,on a personal level高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】感谢你Low：Thank you for.替换：make sincere thanks and grtitude to sb越来越多的Low：more and more.替换：sth is increasing number/a growing number of sth is 例句：In the recent decades,a growing number of people are using Internet.越来越多的人使用互联网。有

29、机会Low：have a chance to do.替换：own an opportunity to do sth/be in possession of the opportunity to do.高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】例句：I appreciate being in possession of the opportunity to write to you.很高兴有机会给你写信。做。是很重要的Low：doing sth is important(初级表达）/It is important for sb

30、 to do sth(稍微高级）替换：It is of+抽象名词（等同于形容词）to do 例句：It is of great importance o learn English.学习英语很重要。我希望所有人。Low：I hope all the people.替换：My expectation is that individuals例句：My expectation is that individuals can help people who are in trouble.我希望人人都能帮助那些处在麻烦中的人。高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略P

31、PT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】如果Low：If.替换：provided that/assuming that/Given that/on condition that例句：I will lend you the book on condition that you return it on Monday.如果你能在星期一还我，我可以借给你这本书。我（从。）得知Low：I know that.替换：I was informed by.that./I was kept up to date on./sb keep me up date on.例句：I was informed by my do

32、ctor that my leg hurt badly.我的腿伤的严重。因为。（现象），人们。Low：Because./because of,people高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】例句：Thanks to that App I loved reading.多亏了那个app,我才喜欢阅读。我们在。中应该高度重视。Low：we should pay attention to替换：sth is supposed to draw our attention/We are supposed to bear sth in

33、 our mind/We are supposed to concern about sth to the great extent.例句：We are supposed to bear this issue in our mind.我们应该牢记这件事。我们将尽最大努力。Low：We will try our best to.替换：We will make every effort to./We will spare no efforts to.例句：We will spare no efforts to help him.我们将尽最大努力帮助他。giveoffer thinkemphsize

34、 wantbe eager to/long for 高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】thanksappreciate/gradtitude goodremarkable/outstanding/fabulous happydelighted/cheerful usefulcontribute to/beneficialbasicessential saveset aside sometimesoccasionall have tocant help but duringin the course of be bus

35、yingbe rushed off ones feet be interested inbe absorbed in/be caught up in连词的巧妙选择：连词的巧妙选择：低级连接词，按照时间先后顺序：and，then中级连接词，按照逻辑顺序：firstly，secondly高级连接词，非谓语动词例句：Hearing this,a few people began to run after him.不同句式地使用：不同句式地使用：高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】It 句式句式1.It is adj for

36、sb to do/It is of+例句：It is vital for us to learn computer well,because it has changed our life.2.It is+被强调部分+that.例句：It is through the internet that we can learn more.3.It 作形式主语的主语从句通常为了避免主语冗长，造成句子结构前重后轻，而选择使用it作形式主语。It is reported that 16 people were killed in the earthquake.倒装句（前面总结过倒装句（前面总结过6中形式中

37、形式,就不一一列举）就不一一列举）Only in this way can learn english well.只有通过这种方式，我们才可以学好英语。定语从句定语从句高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】例句：Donghai is a county,located in the north of Jiangsu province,which is famous for crystal独立主格独立主格常见的由with/without引导/there being+名词./代词例句：Without a word more s

38、poken,she left the meeting room.With his son disappointing,the old man felt unhappy.There being no bus,we had to walk home.固定结构固定结构No sooner.than./Hardly.when./Upon+doing 一。就。例句：No sooner had I reached home than it began to rain.Theres no denying/doubt that.不可否认高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略

39、PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】例句：Theres no doubt/denying that you will have a bright future.We cant emphasize the importance of doing sth too much.再怎么强调。重要性也不为过例句：We cant emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.It is universally acknowledge that./As is known to all 众所周知例句：It is universally ackn

40、owledge that trees are indispensable to us.众所周知，树木对我们不可或缺。It occured/occurs to sb that.It strikes/striked to sb that.某人突然想到例句：It didnt occur to me that he would object.我没想到他会反对。连接词：连接词：1.表示递进，在同一话题上补充内容：另外，还有：and，and then,even,what is more/worse/better,besides,also,moreover,in addition高考英语作文提分策略PPT教

41、学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】2.表示转折关系：但是，然而，相反but,however,yet,instead,on the other hand,otherwise,on the contrary.3.表示因果关系：因为，因此，所以for,so,therefore,as a result,because of,due to,owing to,thanks to 4.表示解释说明:that is(to say),in other words,namely,such as,for example,for instance,and so on5

42、.表示时间顺序:at first,then,later,meanwhile,in the end,finally,since then,at last6.用于陈述事实：实际上 in fact,actually,as a matter of fact 跟你说实话:to tell you the truth7.对一个话题进行总结：总而言之，总的来说on the whole,in short,all in all,in general,in a word,to sum up,in conclusion高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PP

43、T【优质课】8.其它常用到的副词:personally,more importantly,especially,hopefully 高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】四、卷面四、卷面 写作时，一定要一写作时，一定要一笔一划，字迹工整，错笔一划，字迹工整，错误了，直接在上面划一误了，直接在上面划一道，不要多划，也不要道，不要多划，也不要画圈圈，且词与词之间画圈圈，且词与词之间要有空格。要有空格。高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】五、五、Ass

44、essment（评估）（评估）高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】1.才能提高行政水平和工作效率，减少和防止工作失误；2.才能防止滥用权力，防止以权谋私、权钱交易等腐败行为，保证清正廉洁；3.才能真正做到权为民所用，造福于民，从而建立起一个对人民负责、为人民服务、具有权威和公信力的政府。4.是政府及其工作人员要科学决策、依法行政、审慎用权、优化公共服务，完善社会管理，要自觉接受人民监督，与人民群众保持和谐关系。5.政府及其工作人员要有良好业绩。政府工作人员应成为科学发展观的忠实执行者、社会和谐的积极促进者，脚踏实地不断创造经得起实践、人民、历史检验的业绩，切实实现好、维护好、发展好人民的利益。6.政府工作人员要重品行、做表率，坚持权为民所用，情为民所系，利为民所谋。他们应该是社会主义荣辱观的自觉践行者。7.、国际组织是国家、地区或民间组织团体出于各种特定目的，通过签订条约或协议的方式，建立的有一定规章制度的团体高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】高考英语作文提分策略PPT教学课件 35PPT【优质课】