高考英语作文得高分策略29张课件.ppt

1、 Welcome to our Class!Welcome to our Class!高考作文得分策略高考作文得分策略Tips for English Essay Writing 整整体体三三部部分分Introduction DiscussionConclusionThree parts of an essayProcedures for Writing English Essays四 个 步 骤1、审题：内容（要点）体裁，人称、时态、审题：内容（要点）体裁，人称、时态2、要点成句、要点成句:(1)正确正确符合英语语法和英语符合英语语法和英语表达习惯。表达习惯。(2)好好丰富的词汇，丰富而高级

2、的丰富的词汇，丰富而高级的结构句式结构句式.3.联句成文：巧用过渡词和连接词联句成文：巧用过渡词和连接词.4.检查修改检查修改:语法语法,拼写拼写,字母大小写字母大小写,标点符号标点符号.注意：注意：(1)开头的交代句与结尾的总结句开头的交代句与结尾的总结句,增强呼应增强呼应.(2)牢记常识性套话的习惯表达牢记常识性套话的习惯表达.(3)谚语，成语谚语，成语 联合国教科文组织某考察团正在联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小

3、：近大小：近100户人家，约户人家，约500口人。口人。2)变化：过去很穷，变化：过去很穷，78年后变年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。儿童在此免费就读。注意：注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：）词数：100-120之间。之间。Practice 书面表达：书面表达：Ladies and gentlemen,Welc

4、ome to our school.This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.The school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching build

5、ing has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and abou

6、t 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been deve

7、loping very fast.People here live a much richer life than before.书面表达：书面表达：Now it is taking on a new look.In the past,the school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children ca

8、n study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.In the past,the school here was very small and most families couldnt afford to go.But now it has been rebuilt which has 4 storeys,is the most beautiful one in the village.All the school-age children can study here.Whats more,they enjoy free educ

9、ation in it.We hope you enjoy your stay here.and the teaching building,Have a pleasant time!Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978 and has

10、 been developing very fast.People here live a much richer/prosperous life than before.Now it is taking on a new look.In the past,the school here was very small and most families couldnt afford to go.But now it has been rebuilt and the teaching building,which has 4 storeys,is the most beautiful one i

11、n the village.All the school-age children can study here.Whats more,they enjoy free education.I hope youll enjoy your stay here.Have a pleasant time!Thank you.假设你是某种学生英文报的小记者，对中学生假设你是某种学生英文报的小记者，对中学生课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。以下是学生们课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。以下是学生们对上网的看法。请你根据他们的观点写一篇简对上网的看法。请你根据他们的观点写一篇简要的调查报告，并呼吁正确使用互联网。要的调

12、查报告，并呼吁正确使用互联网。使用互联网的益处使用互联网的益处 1.资源丰富资源丰富 2.节省时间节省时间 3.方便交流和沟通方便交流和沟通使用互联网的弊端使用互联网的弊端 1.内容良莠兼有内容良莠兼有 2.沉迷网络沉迷网络游戏会影响学习。游戏会影响学习。3.过多使用会影响健康。过多使用会影响健康。注意：注意：1文章的开头以为你写好文章的开头以为你写好.2词数词数:100左左右右.With the development of computer technology,the internet has become more and more popular.要点突破：要点突破：1.体裁体裁 议

13、论文议论文,调查报告并呼吁正确使用调查报告并呼吁正确使用.一般现在时一般现在时(the third person objective essay)2.三部分三部分:introduction-提出问题提出问题;discussion-正反观点展开讨论正反观点展开讨论;conclusion-总结总结正确使用正确使用.范文展示：范文展示：With the development of computer technology,the internet has become more and more popular.Is the internet good or bad for people?Stude

14、nts dont see eye to eye on this issue.Students who are against the internet believe that the use of internet does harm to people.First,the contents of the internet are not always suitable.Second,it is bad for ones health if one uses the internet too much.Whats more,its harmful for students to devote

15、 themselves to playing internet games but ignore their studies.However,as one swallow does not make a summer,other students believe that it is beneficial to use the internet.As the source of knowledge,the internet not only broadens the outlook but also expands peoples horizons.Moreover,it saves a lo

16、t of time to search for the information.Furthermore,communication becomes more and more convenient with the help of the internet.Every coin has two sides.We have to be aware of the importance of the internet and make best use of it.Being on line,you can save a lot of time.Worse still,the computer ga

17、mes did harm to our studying.I believe it can lead the human beings to a better future as long as we use it in a correct way.The internet supports a new way of communication,making us communicate with friends and families freely.for one thingfor anotherTheir opinions of the internet vary from person

18、 to person.Most of the students agree that the interest is of great use and importance,helping them a lot not only in their life but also in their study.Some students even form the habit of playing the internet games too much instead of studying.But at the same time,it leads to two arguments about t

19、he advantages and the disadvantages of surfing the internet.审题：意译要点，切忌字面翻译审题：意译要点，切忌字面翻译。毕业后他坚持打篮球。毕业后他坚持打篮球。After graduation,he kept on/continued playing basketball.你能向我介绍一名好医生吗？你能向我介绍一名好医生吗？Would you please recommend a good doctor to me?我不特别喜欢没有花园的房子。我不特别喜欢没有花园的房子。I dont really like a house with n

20、o garden.符合语法和英语表达习惯符合语法和英语表达习惯。I like Animal World on the CCTV very much.Not only because animals are friends of human beings,but also because the host does a good job inI like Animal World on the CCTV very much,not only because animals are friends of human beings,but also because the host does a g

21、ood job inI like Animal World on the CCTV very much.Thats not only because animals are friends of .All the preparations are made,were ready to start.With all the preparations made,were ready to start.All the preparations made,were ready to start.All the preparations are made and were ready to start.

22、Students not being permitted to go to the toilet during class,it may also affect their health./1.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.5.As a result the plan was a f

23、ailure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.怎样使用较高级的词汇怎样使用较高级的词汇We all think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me./A good idea suddenly struck me.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.1 .She left hurriedly,and I didnt have the time to sa

24、y good-bye to her.(Adverbial Clause of Time)2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（Noun Clause）3.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(Participles)4.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news .(Emphatic Structure)5.I passed the physics exam beca

25、use of your help.(Subjective Mood）She left hurriedly before I could say good-bye to her.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.怎样使用较丰富的句式怎样使用较丰富的句式 Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.With many students following her,she walked out of the lab.It was not until

26、 he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for/without your help.用连接词填空用连接词填空 1.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends._,I saved$80.2.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth._,it may make us fat.3.Jack is thought to be smarter tha

27、n the average dog._,Jack is a border collie,a breed known for its mental abilities._,the 9-year-old dog has been trained to fetch toys by their names since the age of nine months.As a result/a consequence/ConsequentlyWhats worseFor one thingFor another/In addition高考英语作文得高分策略29张高考英语作文得高分策略29张英语惯用法，成语

28、，谚语英语惯用法，成语，谚语once in a blue moon千载难逢千载难逢,get cold feet气馁气馁,hold ones horses沉住气沉住气,see eye to eye on this issueRoman is not built one day.Its no use crying over spilt milk.Dont count your chickens before they are hatched.不要打如意算盘。不要打如意算盘。One swallow doesnt make a summer.一一燕不成夏。凡事不可以一偏概全。燕不成夏。凡事不可以一偏概

29、全。Every coin has two sides.高考英语作文得高分策略29张高考英语作文得高分策略29张高考大纲中常用哪些高考大纲中常用哪些连接词连接词1.表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有：and,and then,even,what is more/worse/better,besides,also,moreover,in addition2.表示转折关系表示转折关系 但是，然而，相反：but,however,yet,instead,on the other hand,otherwise,on the contrary.高考英语作文得高分策略29张

30、高考英语作文得高分策略29张3.表示因果关系表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以因为，因此，所以:for,so,therefore,as a result,because of,due to,owing to,thanks to 4.表示解释说明表示解释说明:that is(to say),in other words,namely,such as,for example,for instance,and so on5.表示时间顺序表示时间顺序:at first,then,later,meanwhile,in the end,finally,since then,at last高考英语作文得高分策略

31、29张高考英语作文得高分策略29张6.用于陈述事实用于陈述事实 实际上:in fact,actually,as a matter of fact 跟你说实话:to tell you the truth7.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说:on the whole,in short,all in all,in general,in a word,to sum up,in conclusion高考英语作文得高分策略29张高考英语作文得高分策略29张 8.其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词 personally,more importantly,especially,hopef

32、ully 高考英语作文得高分策略29张高考英语作文得高分策略29张 1.沈从文的创作风格趋向浪漫主义，他要求小说的诗意效果，融写实、纪梦、象征于一体，语言格调古朴，句式简峭、主干突出，单纯而又厚实，朴讷而又传神，具有浓郁的地方色彩，凸现出乡村人性特有的风韵与神采。2.沈从文创作的小说主要有两类，一种是以湘西生活为题材，一种是以都市生活为题材，前者通过描写湘西人原始、自然的生命形式，赞美人性美；后者通过都市生活的腐化堕落，揭示都市自然人性的丧失。3.从作者的描述看，作者的观察敏锐，记忆超强，对现象世界十分倾心，对大自然的声音、气味，社会上的人与事怀有浓厚的兴趣。他把大自然与社会生活称为一本“大书

33、”，他从这本“大书”中学到了许多书本上没有的东西，他在自然和社会中倾心体验，尊重生命本真的做法，并非不爱学习，而是为了更好的学习。4.不少评论家觉得沈从文擅长写景，且晴朗明澈，但是缺少深度。也有评论家认为好就好在没有深度，因为没有深度的“看”风景，其实就不为一般的社会价值所局限，这样也就抛弃了自以为是的优越感和置身事外的位置，而是在宇宙万汇的动静之中“看”。5.一次眼光看风景万物，多了一份包涵和宽容，看到的历史也就不是战争、王朝更迭之类的东西，而是千百年来凡夫俗子们的哀乐、努力和命运。它们代表了更为现实逼真的生存和价值。6.抒发的感情真诚感人，不写自己的品学兼优、勤奋用功，而是如实地展现自己的

34、天生的野性，充满了阅读和学习“生活”这本大书所得到的欢欣鼓舞的生命体验，表现了对自然和生命无比好奇和热爱以及泰然面对一切残忍和苦难的生活观。7.学习了这篇传记让我们了解到了沈从文从小如何“读社会这本大书”，感受到他青春期的悲欢得失。由于传主生活经历的太多苦难，加上作者在回忆中不时融入淳厚的情感，让我们读来有某种沉重与辛酸，也让我们学生受到启发：对于强者，生活中的风霜雨雪也和阳光雨露一样，都从不同侧面或者以不同的方式滋润着我们的生命，现实中的曲折、坎坷、苦难可能拓展人的精神空间，让人能更加以阔大的心胸与坚强的意志，去感受生命，理解生活的意义。高考英语作文得高分策略29张高考英语作文得高分策略29张