人教新课标高中英语必修五：unit4-Writing课件+高考）.ppt-(课件无音视频)

1、人教课标人教课标高二高二 必修必修 5 Unit 4新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜的事情的报道或评述的事情的报道或评述,写好一篇高质量写好一篇高质量的新闻报道应注意以下的新闻报道应注意以下两个方面两个方面:即新闻的题目。它是文章的眼睛，既即新闻的题目。它是文章的眼睛，既要体现鲜明的个性，又要生动、形象、要体现鲜明的个性，又要生动、形象、有美感，才能引人入胜。有美感，才能引人入胜。是新闻报道内容的概括和浓缩，包括是新闻报道内容的概括和浓缩，包括五大要素：时间，地点，人物，起因五大要素：时间，地点，人物，起因和结果。导语是新闻报道的精华，也和结果。导语是新闻报

2、道的精华，也是信息传递的集中体现。是信息传递的集中体现。是导语之后的新闻展开，补充更加是导语之后的新闻展开，补充更加充实。充实。新闻报道由于是反映最近所发生的重要新闻报道由于是反映最近所发生的重要而新鲜的事，所以时态以现在时，过去而新鲜的事，所以时态以现在时，过去时为主；篇幅一般不长，内容短小精悍，时为主；篇幅一般不长，内容短小精悍，多用动词，长短句交错使用。多用动词，长短句交错使用。5 5月月1 1日，高二日，高二(3)(3)班的学生志愿者去班的学生志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动(送水果、送水果、打扫、聊天等打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校报的英语。假如你是校报的英语记者

3、，请按下列要点用英语写一则记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120100-120个词的新闻报道。个词的新闻报道。要求：要求：1.时间，地点，人物，活动。时间，地点，人物，活动。2.老人们的反应。老人们的反应。3.简短评论。简短评论。第一步第一步 认真审题认真审题(analyze the requirements)第二步第二步 谋篇布局谋篇布局(draw up an outline)第三步第三步 联句成篇联句成篇(organize the sentences)第四步第四步 锦上添花锦上添花(get the article polished up)第五步第五步 查漏补缺查漏补缺(check t

4、he mistakes)审主题审主题 审体裁审体裁 _ 审人称审人称 _ 审时态审时态 _ 审要求审要求students,_ time,place,persons,activitiesreaction of the elderlybrief evaluationdid voluntary worka letterthe thirdthe past tense标题标题(headline)(headline)Student Volunteers Brought SunshineWhat would be the headline of this composition?导语导语 (lead)(le

5、ad)Li Yue and Zhang Hua,students from Class Three,Grade Two,_ Sunshine Nursing Home and _.went todid some voluntary work 正文正文 (body)(body)They _ the elderly _ flowers and fruits.Then they started working at once,_ and _.Everything done,they sat in the yard _.presented withcleaning the windowssweepin

6、g the floorchatting with the elderly people 评语评语 (evaluation)(evaluation)What they did has brought _ to others and _ their own lives.joy enriched逻辑角度逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序时间顺序 空间顺序空间顺序first,second,then,finally/at last,soon immediately,suddenlyhere,there,on one side on the other side,in front of,at

7、 the back of,next to逻辑角度逻辑角度 合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇对称顺序对称顺序转折顺序转折顺序for one thing,for the other thing,on one hand,on the other handbut,however,while,though,otherwise逻辑角度逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇因果顺序因果顺序条件顺序条件顺序because,since,as,thanks to,as a result(of)as long as,so long as,on condition that,if,unless逻辑角度逻辑角度合适的

8、过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇让步顺序让步顺序递进顺序递进顺序though,as,even if/though,whether,who(what,when,where)everwhats more,besides,to make the matter worse,whats worse逻辑角度逻辑角度 合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇表示总结表示总结in a word,altogether,all in all,in generalThey gave flowers and fruits to the elderly.They _ the elderly _ flowers and fruits.

9、高级句式离不了高级句式离不了presentedwithThey said the students had done so much for them and they would never forget them.They said it was _ a beautiful day _ they would remember it forever.suchthat高级句式离不了高级句式离不了When they arrived _ their arrival短语远比从句俏短语远比从句俏Upon1.They started working at once,_ the windows and _

10、 the floor.2._,they sat in the yard _ with the elderly people.巧用分词巧用分词cleaningsweepingEverything done chatting 名词性从句要用得妙名词性从句要用得妙 What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.They presented the elderly with flowers and fruits._ they started working at once,cleaning the window

11、s and sweeping the floor._,they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.合理过渡离不了合理过渡离不了Then Everything done On May Day,Li Yue and Zhang Hua,students from Class Three,Grade Two,went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival,Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcom

12、ed,and respectfully,they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then they started working at once,cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done,they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When It was time for the volunteers to leave,the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.LiYue and ZhangHua are very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.20201919POWERPOINTSUCCESS2022-11-620201919THANK YOUSUCCESS2022-11-6