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1、(最新整理)高考书面表达指导2021/7/261来冬梅2015届高考英语书面表达指导2021/7/2622012年高考书面表达回顾 假定你是李华假定你是李华,从互联网（从互联网（the internet)the internet)上得知上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（SingaporeSingapore）举办夏令营，）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：内容主要包括：1.1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）；自我介绍（包括英语能力）；2.2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）参加意图（介绍中

2、国、了解其他国家）3.3.希望获准。希望获准。2021/7/2632013年高考书面表达回顾 假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chinese knot)。给。给开网店的美国朋友开网店的美国朋友TomTom写封写封信信，请他代买，要点包括：，请他代买，要点包括：1.1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）2.2.象征意义象征意义 3.3.价格价格2021/7/2642014年高考书面表达回顾 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的十年后的我我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1.

3、家庭；家庭；2.工作；工作；3.业余生活。业余生活。2021/7/2652015年高考书面表达2021/7/266高考书面表达的题材特点题材贴近现实生活和学生实际生活题材贴近现实生活和学生实际生活学校生活学校生活求职申请求职申请环境保护环境保护人际关系人际关系兴趣爱好兴趣爱好热点话题热点话题文娱体育文娱体育旅游交通旅游交通饮食健康饮食健康文化习俗文化习俗2021/7/267Writing写作水平要提高写作水平要提高科学方法来支招科学方法来支招2021/7/268循序渐进练写作循序渐进练写作 词汇词汇 短语短语 句型句型 谋篇谋篇 漂亮、地道漂亮、地道2021/7/2691.这个工作很这个工作很

4、难难。B.The job is quite _ .A.The job is quite difficult/hard/tough.challenging词汇是基础词汇是基础2021/7/26102.这个这个很很(好）好）。B.The(thing)is very _A.The(person)is very _ clever/bright/smart/handsome/cute/intelligent/easy-going/gentle/.perfect/wonderful/excellent/outstanding/.2021/7/26113.我很喜欢我很喜欢。C.Im fond of A.I

5、like very much.B.I enjoy very much.D.My favorite is2021/7/26124.电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。Computers are very important in our life.Computers play a very important role in our life.Computers are of great importance in our life.2021/7/26131._(众所周知众所周知)，there is a famous saying“Everything dep

6、ends on ones attitude”.As is known to us2._(我认为我认为),Kobe is really a super basketball star.As far as I am concerned句型是关键句型是关键2021/7/26143.不但不但而且而且 In London,you can _ taste delicious food _can visit some famous tourist attractions _.not onlybut as well4.毫无疑问毫无疑问_China is a developing country with a

7、long history.There is no doubt that2021/7/26155.认为认为是重要的是重要的/必要的。必要的。I think(consider)_important/necessary to do something.6.该是该是的时候了。的时候了。_ we took actions to protect and beautify our environment.Its high time that It 的用法不可忽视哦的用法不可忽视哦it2021/7/2616抄抄改改连连扩扩抓抓审审书面书面表达表达书面表书面表达六步达六步法法2021/7/2617六个步骤六个步

8、骤1、审题、审题文字信息文字信息图画信息图画信息题材、人称、时态题材、人称、时态2、抓要点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的要点、抓要点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的要点3、扩展成句：用一些简单句、不同句型、不同句式或、扩展成句：用一些简单句、不同句型、不同句式或 高级词汇将要点扩展成句高级词汇将要点扩展成句4 连句成文：连句成文：注意：注意：主语和谓语主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点等）背景（适当增加时间、地点等）逻辑关系逻辑关系开头与结尾开头与结尾语篇衔接语篇衔接5、检查修改、检查修改6、规范抄写、规范抄写 （单词拼写、大小写、标点、时态、语态、主（单词拼写、大小写、标点、时态、语态、主

9、谓一致等）谓一致等）2021/7/2618大家来判断、给分大家来判断、给分Which composition feels more attractive,why?2021/7/26192021/7/2620漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面2021/7/2621影响给分的因素之二：影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B.句型结构运用灵活多变；2021/7/2622影响给分的因素之三：影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词202

10、1/7/2623Tom was ordinary-looking _very popular in his school because of his kindness.but连接亦重要连接亦重要2021/7/2624 高考大纲中常用的高考大纲中常用的连接词连接词 also;besides;moreover;furthermore,in addition;what is more;but;however;though,on the other hand;on the contrary;1.表示递进表示递进2.表示转折关系表示转折关系2021/7/2625 since;as;because(of

11、);so;thus;consequently;therefore;as a result;if;on condition that;as long as 3.表示因果关系表示因果关系4.表示条件关系表示条件关系2021/7/2626 when;while;after;before;until;as soon as;5.表示时间关系表示时间关系2021/7/2627above all;first(ly);second(ly);then;next;finally;in the end in other words;that is to say;6.表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系7.换一种方法

12、表述换一种方法表述2021/7/2628 for instance;for example;like;such as;in fact;actually;as a matter of fact;to tell you the truth;8.进行举例说明进行举例说明9.用于陈述事实用于陈述事实2021/7/2629 luckily;happily;vividly;obviously;eventually;surprisingly;consequently;“总而言之”，“总的来说”:on the whole;in short;to sum up;in general;in brief;in a

13、word;above all;10.其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词11.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结2021/7/2630 To rid students of the situation,here I address some effective measures to relieve pressure.First of all,spare time for relaxation.Some music and physical activities bring you leisure.In addition,you can turn to the psychologist for

14、help if necessary,for they can always give practical advice.学生习作一2021/7/2631 Above all,the school is no more than one mile the distance from our house,so its really convenient.Exactly speaking,Im confident that I can treat my British brother as if he were at his home.Above all Exactly speaking学生习作二学

15、生习作三2021/7/2632抓住要点抓住要点 开门见山开门见山 完美收关完美收关适当扩展适当扩展文章有窍门文章有窍门2021/7/2633 假定你是某国际学校学生李华。今年暑假将有15名英国学生来你校参加“游学”（Study Abroad）活动。学校现从学生中招募15个义务接待家庭。请你根据以下要点用英文给负责此项目的Mr.DeanMr.Dean写一封申请信。1.你的家庭情况；2.你家的居住条件及与学校的距离；3.你家作为接待家庭的优势。注意 1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加情节以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。写作天天练写作天天练 高分有希望高分有希望2021/7

16、/2634要点要点1.家庭情况2.居住条件3.与学校的距离4.优势(advantage)2021/7/2635 Dear Mr.Dean,Its nice to learn that 15 students from Britain will come to our school for a Study Abroad program.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua2021/7/2636Possible version Dear Mr.Dean,Its nice to learn that 15 students from Britai

17、n will come to our school for a Study Abroad program.After I consulted with my parents,my family would like to be a host family to one of them.We have the following advantages.First of all,my dad is a university teacher,and my mom is a saleswoman in a shop.We all can speak English,so it will be easy

18、 for us to communicate with our great guest.Second,we have a spare room with a washroom and shower for our guests convenience.Third,my home is within easy reach of the school,and it normally takes about 10 minutes by subway or 25 minutes by bus.Whats more,my mom is good at cooking.I believe my guest

19、 will have a pleasant stay with my family.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours.Li Hua(121 words)2021/7/26371 1 天天天天“315315”-高考高考“135135”2 2 背诵范文背诵范文写作复习写作复习建议建议2021/7/2638书面表达书面表达我我最好最好2021/7/26392021/7/2640 Dear Mr.Dean,Its nice to learn that 15 students from Britain will come to our school for a

20、 Study Abroad program.And Im writing to be admitted as one of the host families.Firstly,my mom is a happy housewife,so she can pick us up on time.Located not far from our school,with all conditions are fully equipped,I think our family couldnt be better for this activity.Secondly,Im outgoing and I c

21、an speak English well.So communication is not a big deal.Also,my father cooks well,which will definitely makes him or her feel at home.All in all,its the best chance that I can meet a foreigner face to face.I would appreciate it if you could offer me an honor.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,L

22、i Hua(123 words by 闫丹彤)学生习作学生习作一一2021/7/2641假设你是李华,正在带领来自英国某中学的交换生参观你校的图书馆。请你根据以下要点，用英语为他们做一个简短的介绍：1.图书馆的环境：前有花园，后有教学楼，内有各种书籍、报刊杂志等；2.借阅规定：一次至多借5本，保留10天；3.开放时间：周二到周日8：30-21：30，周一闭馆。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现你学校的名称。与您交流Homework2021/7/2642 Boys and girls,May I have your att

23、ention,please?The building we are visiting is the library.As you can see,in frontof the library is a beautiful garden and the teaching building is right behind it.When you get into the library,you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects.There are also newspapers and magazines near

24、the reading zone.According to the rules,every student can borrow up to five books at a time and keep them for 10 days.The library isopen from 8:30am to 9:30pm from Tuesday to Sundayand is closed on Monday.We all like the library very much.Now you can visit it by yourselves.Remember:be quiet,please!2

25、021/7/2643 It is quite obvious/clear that(很显然很显然)There is no doubt that(毫无疑问毫无疑问)On one hand,on the other hand(一方面，一方面，另一方面另一方面)Only in this way can we(只有这样我们才能只有这样我们才能)As far asis concerned,I prefer(就就而言，我更而言，我更)Measures/Action should be taken to(必须采取措施去必须采取措施去)What made me impressed was that(给我印象深

26、刻的是给我印象深刻的是.)书面表达必备语句书面表达必备语句2021/7/2644 I like not only because but also because(我喜欢我喜欢 不仅因为不仅因为而且因为而且因为)I am writing to you to inquire about(我写信给你想询问我写信给你想询问)I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with(我给你我给你 写信表示我对写信表示我对的不满）的不满）I apologize to you for(我为我为向你道歉）向你道歉）I am grateful to you for(我为我为向你表示感谢）向你表示感谢）Mr.Green,my best friend,is teaching Mr.Green,a favorite teacher from the USA,is teaching2021/7/26452021/7/2646