高考英语作文提升训练课件：分类写作-3请求求助信.ppt

1、 全国高考英语二轮突破an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历一次难忘的经历make preparations for 做准备做准备have trouble in sth./doing sth.有困难有困难collect materialS 收集材料收集材料properly 合适地合适地appreciate 感激；欣赏感激；欣赏offer sb.a hand 提供帮助提供帮助passenger 旅客旅客airline company 航空公司航空公司flight 航班航班leave sb.a deep impression 给某人留下深刻印象给某人留下深刻印象na

2、me and address 姓名和地址姓名和地址course 课程课程accent 口音；方言口音；方言manage to do sth.设法成功地做了某事设法成功地做了某事hobby 爱好爱好symbol 象征象征luck and unity 运气和团结运气和团结silk thread 丝线丝线customer 顾客顾客further information 进一步的消息进一步的消息ask sb.a favor 请某人帮忙请某人帮忙a precious gift 一份珍贵的礼物一份珍贵的礼物postage 邮资邮资1.I wonder if you could do me a favor.

3、我想请您帮个忙。我想请您帮个忙。2.I am wondering whether you could.我想知道您是否能够我想知道您是否能够3.I would be very grateful if you could.如果您能如果您能，我将感激不，我将感激不尽。尽。4.I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.如果您能帮助我，如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。我将感激不尽。5.Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor.不知道我是否可以不知道我是否可以请您帮个忙？请您帮个忙？6.I cant

4、wait to see you again!我等不及再次见到你了！我等不及再次见到你了！7.Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.谢谢您的关注，期待收到您尽早的回复。谢谢您的关注，期待收到您尽早的回复。8.If you need further information,do let me know.如果您需要更多的如果您需要更多的信息，请告知我。信息，请告知我。9.Thank you very much for all the kindness.谢谢您一切的好

5、意。谢谢您一切的好意。10.Hope everything is fine with you there.希望您在那里一切如意。希望您在那里一切如意。1.The whole thing is getting very difficult and I real need your good advice!1.real改为really2.The main reason Im writing is that I have litte favour to ask.2.little前面加a3.I thank you in the advance for your prompt attention to

6、these matters.3.删掉the4.I would like to bring your attention to some problems what are occurring in this block.4.what改为that/which5.The people in the apartment below mine often play loudly music late at night,making it very difficult for me to sleep.5.loudly改为loud6.Also,there is often rubbish leaving

7、in the stairway.6.leaving改为left7.I would appreciate you if you would help me solve these problems.7.第一个you改为it8.Were trying to find someone to look after the cats while we away.8.away前加are9.There are hundreds of people go to work in cars and buses.9.go改为going10.I look forward to hear from you about

8、the action that the council will take on this matter.10.hear改为hearing【20132013新课标新课标1 1卷：请求帮助接机卷：请求帮助接机】假定你是李华。请你给笔友假定你是李华。请你给笔友PeterPeter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：航班号：CA985CA985到达：到达：8 8月月6 6日上午日

9、上午11:3011:30满分佳作（一）满分佳作（一）Dear Peter,How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to have a meeting in your city.Do you remember the Chinese painting I promised you last year?My uncle will bring it to you soon.I hope you will like it.I wonder if you could do me a favour.Th

10、is is the first time that my uncle visited the US,so I hope you can meet him at the airport.He arrives at 11:30 a.m.on August 6th and his flight number is CA 985.I would appreciate it if you could take him to his hotel.My uncle is tall.He will be wearing dark glasses and a blue jacket.Looking forwar

11、d to your reply.Yours,Li Hua满分赏析满分赏析Im writing to tell you that使用了宾语从句。使用了宾语从句。the Chinese painting I promised you使用了定语从句，提升了文章使用了定语从句，提升了文章的档次。的档次。使用了使用了I wonder if的结构，表达了委婉的语气。的结构，表达了委婉的语气。使用客气套话使用客气套话I would appreciate it if显得非常礼貌，语言得体。显得非常礼貌，语言得体。满分佳作（二）满分佳作（二）Dear Peter,How are you doing?Do you

12、 remember the Chinese painting you like very much?Here is some good news for you.You know,my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting.He is to bring the painting to you.I am wondering whether you could pick him up at the airport.My uncle is tall and wears

13、a pair of glasses.His flight number is CA985.He will get there at 11:30 a.m.on August 6.I would be very grateful if you could meet him at the airport.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua满分赏析满分赏析使用定语从句使用定语从句the Chinese painting you like very much，属于高级，属于高级句型。句型。本句是作者适当添加的内容，起到很好的过渡作用，为下文转入本句是作者

14、适当添加的内容，起到很好的过渡作用，为下文转入谈论叔叔为谈论叔叔为Peter带去他喜欢的那幅中国画作铺垫。带去他喜欢的那幅中国画作铺垫。使用使用I am wondering whether，语言表达委婉礼貌。，语言表达委婉礼貌。高级句型高级句型I would be very grateful if是一大亮点，会让阅卷老师是一大亮点，会让阅卷老师眼前一亮。眼前一亮。【2011山东卷改编：演讲比赛写稿求助山东卷改编：演讲比赛写稿求助】作文原题作文原题假设你是李华，你的美国朋友假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛七月份你将

15、去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：写一封电子邮件：1.询问询问Tom的生活和学习情况；的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；帮忙；3.告诉告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。你打算赛后去看他。作文翻译作文翻译亲爱的亲爱的TomTom，你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。今年七月，我将

16、参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同现，我正在做准备。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。我等不及再次和你见面了。比赛后在北京见到你。我等不及再次和你见面了。你的你的,李华李华Dear Tom,Its been a month since

17、you studied in Beijing.How is everything going with you?I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here.I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July.To have a very good performance,I am making preparations for it.However,I still ha

18、ve some trouble in collecting useful materials.Meanwhile,I find it hard to use English properly.I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.You know,I have been missing you since you left,so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.I cant wait to see you again!Yours,Li Hua【2010重

19、庆卷改编：请求寻找物品重庆卷改编：请求寻找物品】作文原题作文原题假设你是李华，于假设你是李华，于2010年年6月月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。）。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。信件要点包括：信件要点包括：1.陈述写信原因陈述写信原因;2.简要描述该行李简要描述该行李;3.说明其重要性说明其重要性;4.期待回复并表示感谢。期待回复并表示感谢。作文翻译作文翻译尊敬的先生，尊敬的先生，我的名字

20、是李华，你们航空公司我的名字是李华，你们航空公司BA793BA793航班的一个乘客。我是航班的一个乘客。我是在在20102010年年6 6月月3 3日乘坐这趟班机的。日乘坐这趟班机的。你们优质的服务给我留下了很深的印象。但是，不幸的是，我你们优质的服务给我留下了很深的印象。但是，不幸的是，我到家时，我发现我把一个旅行箱落在了飞机上。到家时，我发现我把一个旅行箱落在了飞机上。您想象不到这个旅行箱对我是多么重要。里面有我需要参加一您想象不到这个旅行箱对我是多么重要。里面有我需要参加一个工作面试的文件和我的身份证，没有身份证我不能参加一场重要个工作面试的文件和我的身份证，没有身份证我不能参加一场重要

21、的考试。我的旅行箱较小，蓝色，有一条拉链。在把手处有一个标的考试。我的旅行箱较小，蓝色，有一条拉链。在把手处有一个标签，上面有我的姓名和地址。签，上面有我的姓名和地址。谢谢你善意的关心，我期待收到您尽早的回复。谢谢你善意的关心，我期待收到您尽早的回复。您真挚的，您真挚的，李华李华Dear Sir,My name is Li Hua,a passenger of flight BA793 of your airline company.It was on June 3rd,2010 that I took this flight.Your good service left me a deep

22、impression.But unfortunately,the moment I got home,I found I had left a suitcase in your plane.You cant imagine how important the suitcase is to me.There are some documents I need for a job interview and my ID card,without which I cant take an important exam.My suitcase is a small blue one with a zi

23、p.There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it.Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【2011新课标卷：预约课程信息帮助新课标卷：预约课程信息帮助】假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Centre

24、）的帮助。根据学校）的帮助。根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简介；本人简介；2.求助内容；求助内容；3.约定时间；约定时间；4.你的联系方式（你的联系方式（Email:;Phone:12345678）Dear Sir/Madam,.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【20112011新课标卷：预约课程信息帮助新课标卷：预约课程信息帮助】Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li hua,a Chinese student taking summer courses in your

25、 university.Everything is going well.I enjoy all the courses here but one offered by Professor Martin Bygate.I have difficulty understanding him in class.He has a very strong accent,which makes it hard for me to follow him in class.I feel worried about this.I was told that I can go to the Learning C

26、entre for help.Im wondering if I could come on Wednesday or Friday afternoons.I have no classes at both times and can manage to come for help and suggestions.Please let me know which time is OK with you either via or on 12345678.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【20132013全国大纲卷：请求代卖中国结全国大纲卷：请

27、求代卖中国结】假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chinese knotChinese knot）。）。给开网店的美国朋友给开网店的美国朋友TomTom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：1.1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）；外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）；2.2.象征意义；象征意义；3.3.价格。价格。Dear Tom,Dear Tom,How are you doing?How are you doing?Yours,Yours,Li HuaLi Hua【20132013全国大纲卷：请求代卖中国结全国大纲卷：请求代卖中国结】Dear Tom,How

28、are you doing?I am so excited to know that you have set up a shop on the Internet.My hobby is making Chinese knots by hand.Could you sell some for me?As a symbol of good luck and unity,Chinese knots have a long history.They are still popular today.The colour includes red,green and yellow.They are as

29、 large as a handkerchief and made of red silk threads,cloth and other materials.Chinese knots are usually used as a gift for friends and can be hung on the wall to decorate the room.So I guess some customers may like them.I suggest you sell them for 15 dollars each.If you need further information,do

30、 let me know.Yours,Li Hua【20062006安徽卷改编：请求帮助寄回字典安徽卷改编：请求帮助寄回字典】假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在寄住在Mr.BrownMr.Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后你发现自己的一本英家里，刚回到国内。回国后你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：主要内容如下：1.1.感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助；感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助；2.2.一本英语词典忘

31、记带回；一本英语词典忘记带回；3.3.词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵；词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵；4.4.词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上；词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上；5.5.邮资自己付。邮资自己付。参考词汇：参考词汇：邮资邮资 postage postageDear Mr.Brown,Dear Mr.Brown,Yours,Yours,Li HuaLi Hua【2006安徽卷改编：请求帮助寄回字典安徽卷改编：请求帮助寄回字典】Dear Mr.Brown,Im now safely back home.Thank you very much for all the kindness I got fr

32、om you during my stay.Hope everything is fine with you there.Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor.When I came back,I suddenly realized that I had left my English dictionary behind at your place.It is a precious gift from my American teacher.Would you please be so kind as to send it back to me?Ill pay for the postage.The dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom.It is the one with a red cover.Thanks and all the best.Yours,Li Hua