高考英语作文提升训练课件：分类写作-5建议信.ppt

1、 全国高考英语二轮突破a global village 地球村地球村master English 掌握英语掌握英语be aware of 意识到意识到have a good command of sth.某事掌握得很好某事掌握得很好two aspects 两个方面两个方面keep sth.in mind 记住记住English composition 英语作文英语作文memorize English words 记忆英语单词记忆英语单词control ones temper 控制某人的脾气控制某人的脾气let out ones anger 释放怒气释放怒气an effective way 一个

2、有效的方式一个有效的方式get rid of 摆脱摆脱remain optimistic about sth.保持乐观保持乐观lift ones spirits 振奋某人的精神振奋某人的精神improve ones reading ability 提高阅读能力提高阅读能力be alarmingly shocking 十分令人震惊的十分令人震惊的ironically 讽刺地讽刺地get used to the phenomenon 习惯于这个现象习惯于这个现象have a bad effect on 对对有坏影响有坏影响dustbin 垃圾箱垃圾箱set up specific rules 制定

3、具体的制度制定具体的制度develop good habits 培养好的习惯培养好的习惯with the joint efforts of sb.有了某人的共同努力有了某人的共同努力cover a wide variety of 涵括各种各样的涵括各种各样的broaden our horizon 开阔我们的视野开阔我们的视野1.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.我十分喜欢我十分喜欢它，主要有以下两个原因。它，主要有以下两个原因。2.Almost perfect as it is,it should make mor

4、e improvement in some area.尽管它近乎完美，它在一些方面仍需要改进。尽管它近乎完美，它在一些方面仍需要改进。3.And Ive found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects.For one thing,.For another thing,.我发现我的问题主要在于两个方面。我发现我的问题主要在于两个方面。一方面，一方面，另一方面，另一方面，4.Therefore,its my hope that you can give us some practical tips on how to.因此，我希望你能就因此，我希

5、望你能就给我们一些实用的建议。给我们一些实用的建议。5.Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you.这里是一些建议，希望会对你有帮助。这里是一些建议，希望会对你有帮助。6.I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around.我想学校我想学校是否能够在周围多放些垃圾桶。是否能够在周围多放些垃圾桶。7.I believe that,with the joint efforts of both teachers and students,our sch

6、ool will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.我我相信，有了老师和学生的共同努力，我们学校会在不久的将来成为相信，有了老师和学生的共同努力，我们学校会在不久的将来成为一个更令人快乐的地方。一个更令人快乐的地方。1.Id like to give you some suggestions that may help you learn your math good.1.good 改为well2.If you will need to buy a good smart phone at a low price,I will su

7、ggest a Hongmi Mi3.2.删掉第一个will3.We all know that it is always very hard to starting in a new school.3.starting改为start4.I found it difficult to express myself in English,and my English teacher advised me that I practiced more.4.practiced改为practice5.As for your future major,I think most suitable thing

8、 for you is teaching Chinese as a foreign language.5.most前面加the6.I sorry to learn that you havent adapted to the new life there.6.在I后加am7.Playing football not only make us grow tall and strong but also gives us a sense of team spirit.7.make改为makes8.I hope everything will be OK and you will soon make

9、 some friend in the new city.8.friend改为friends9.Why not ask him to give a explanation for his being absent from the meeting yesterday？9.a改为an10.I think you should grasp the opportunity and go to abroad for further studies.10.删掉to【20112011全国全国卷：读者给报刊建议卷：读者给报刊建议】假定你是李华，你所喜爱的假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global MirrorGl

10、obal Mirror周报正于创刊五周年之周报正于创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1.1.说明你是该报的忠实读者；说明你是该报的忠实读者；2.2.赞赏该报优点：赞赏该报优点：1)1)兼顾国内外新闻兼顾国内外新闻 2)2)介绍名人成功故事；介绍名人成功故事；3.3.提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。满分佳作（一）满分佳作（一）Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global

11、Mirror!Im a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.First,it covers both national and international news so that,by simply turning the pages,I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.Equally attractive are the success storie

12、s of world-famous people,which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.As a young student,I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning,and I hope that it will become even more popular.Sincerely yours,Li Hua满分赏析满分赏析用到用到mainly f

13、or the following two reasons解释原因的总起句，体解释原因的总起句，体现了对写作句型的熟练掌握。现了对写作句型的熟练掌握。cover(覆盖覆盖范围、包括范围、包括)一词用得地道；还用上了一词用得地道；还用上了so that引引导的结果状语从句。导的结果状语从句。Equally attractive are(同样吸引人的还有同样吸引人的还有)这是地道、不同于这是地道、不同于一般模板的连接手段，表示与上面一般模板的连接手段，表示与上面First提到的内容并列；本句还提到的内容并列；本句还有有which引导的定语从句和引导的定语从句和to make the world a

14、better place这样地道这样地道自然的表达；这样的句子是提分的句子。自然的表达；这样的句子是提分的句子。用到用到suggest加宾语从句，从句动词用加宾语从句，从句动词用do或者或者should do。满分佳作（二）满分佳作（二）Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!As a loyal reader,I have learnt much from your newspaper,including reading daily news.It is obvious that

15、 Global Mirror enjoys high popularity for a series of advantages.First,it not only includes domestic and foreign news but also makes a detailed analysis full of remarkable insights.Besides,it introduces different celebrities success which motivates readers not to give up but to pursue their dreams w

16、hatever happens.Of course,they can avoid the detours in their progress.Almost perfect as it is,it should make more improvement in some area.For example,considering many readers thirst for English study,it will be a good idea to publish some articles dealing with approaches to English learning.Sincer

17、ely yours,Li Hua满分赏析满分赏析a loyal reader(一位忠实的读者一位忠实的读者)，这个短语体现了作者的词汇能力。，这个短语体现了作者的词汇能力。用到用到It is obvious that.加主语从句的句型；加主语从句的句型；enjoy high popularity(享有很高的声誉享有很高的声誉)，体现了作者平时的积累。，体现了作者平时的积累。用到用到not onlybut also连接信息。连接信息。本句的精华之处也很多：有本句的精华之处也很多：有Besides的连接手段；有的连接手段；有which引导的引导的定语从句的句法手段；有定语从句的句法手段；有moti

18、vate sb.not to do sth.和和pursue their dreams whatever happens(无论发生什么都要追求自己的梦想无论发生什么都要追求自己的梦想)这些这些优美的词句。优美的词句。Almost perfect as it is这是一个让步状语从句的倒装句，意为：尽这是一个让步状语从句的倒装句，意为：尽管它已经接近完美。管它已经接近完美。本篇句句高级、词词优美，怎能不给满分？本篇句句高级、词词优美，怎能不给满分？【2012四川卷改编：告诉老师学习情况和建议四川卷改编：告诉老师学习情况和建议】作文原题作文原题假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师假如

19、你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识；对英语学习的认识；2.自己目前的英语水平；自己目前的英语水平；3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4.对英语教学的两点建议。对英语教学的两点建议。作文翻译作文翻译亲爱的李老师，亲爱的李老师，我非常高兴您当我们的英语老师。我非常高兴您当我们的英语老师。随着世界变成了地球村，随着世界变成了地球村，英语变得越来越重要，因此掌握好英语意味着我们

20、可以通过一扇新英语变得越来越重要，因此掌握好英语意味着我们可以通过一扇新的窗户看世界。的窗户看世界。虽然我意识到其重要性，但我的英语掌握得不好。我发现我虽然我意识到其重要性，但我的英语掌握得不好。我发现我的问题主要在于两个方面。一方面，我觉得很难记住英语单词。而的问题主要在于两个方面。一方面，我觉得很难记住英语单词。而且，在写英语作文上我也有困难，写作时甚至犯一些愚蠢的错误。且，在写英语作文上我也有困难，写作时甚至犯一些愚蠢的错误。因此，我希望您能给我们一些如何记忆英语单词的实用的方因此，我希望您能给我们一些如何记忆英语单词的实用的方法另外，如果您能教我们如何写好的英语作文就更好了。法另外，如

21、果您能教我们如何写好的英语作文就更好了。谢谢您！谢谢您！诚挚的诚挚的李华李华Dear Ms Li,I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.As the world is becoming a global village,English is getting more and more important,so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.Though Im aware of its importance,I dont have

22、a good command of it.And Ive found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects.For one thing,I find it difficult to keep English words in mind.For another thing,I also have difficulty with my English composition and even make some foolish mistakes when I write.Therefore,its my hope that you can give

23、 us some practical tips on how to memorize English words.Besides,it would be better if you could instruct us on how to write good English compositions.Thank you!Sincerely yours,Li Hua【2014安徽卷改编：解除困扰的建议安徽卷改编：解除困扰的建议】作文原题作文原题 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑专栏。假设

24、你是该栏目的编辑Li Hua，收到一封署名为，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。封回信。内容要点如下：内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。提出建议并说明理由。参考词汇：参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪脾气，情绪作文翻译作文翻译嗨，忧心人，嗨，忧心人，知道你现在如此难过，我很遗憾。知道你现在如此难过，我很遗憾。事实是，每个人都会有事事

25、实是，每个人都会有事情看起来不对劲的时期，因此你不需要过于担忧。重要的是要控制情看起来不对劲的时期，因此你不需要过于担忧。重要的是要控制你的情绪，这样你就不会做一些你会后悔的事，说一些你会后悔的你的情绪，这样你就不会做一些你会后悔的事，说一些你会后悔的话。以下是三条有用的建议：话。以下是三条有用的建议：首先，把你的感受告诉你相信的人。这是一个释放愤怒且对首先，把你的感受告诉你相信的人。这是一个释放愤怒且对人对己无害的好方式。其次，到户外去，和朋友去活动活动，因为人对己无害的好方式。其次，到户外去，和朋友去活动活动，因为体育运动是摆脱愤怒的有效方式。最后，对未来保持乐观，这对提体育运动是摆脱愤怒

26、的有效方式。最后，对未来保持乐观，这对提高你的情绪有帮助。高你的情绪有帮助。我希望你会很快平静下来，和平常一样。我希望你会很快平静下来，和平常一样。你的，你的，李华李华Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong,so you dont have to worry so much.The important thin

27、g is to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret.Here are three useful tips.First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second,go outdoors and play games with your friends as physica

28、l exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third,remain optimistic about your future,which is helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Li Hua【2008全国全国卷：建议如何学好中文卷：建议如何学好中文】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列

29、要点写回信。请你根据下列要点写回信。1.参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。交中国朋友。June 8,2008 Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Best wishes,Li Hua【20082008全国全国2 2卷：建议如何学好中文卷：建议如何学好中文】June 8,2008Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter as

30、king for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you.To begin with,it is a good idea to take a Chinese course,where you can follow the teacher and get help from your classmates.Next,reading some Chinese books and magazines will help you t

31、o improve your reading ability.You can also watch some Chinese programs on TV,which will improve your listening ability.To make sure that learning Chinese isnt too dull,it would be a good idea to learn to sing some Chinese songs.Last but not least,if possible,make some Chinese friends,so that you ca

32、n learn languages from each other.Looking forward to receiving your letter written in Chinese.Best wishes,Li Hua【20112011浙江卷改编：建议应对乱涂乱扔浙江卷改编：建议应对乱涂乱扔】假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(to(to scribble)scribble)和乱丢垃圾和乱丢垃圾(to litter)(to litter)的行为，请用英语给的行为，请用英语给校长写一封信。信中应包括以下内容：校长写一封信。信中应包括

33、以下内容：1.1.说明写信目的；说明写信目的；2.2.对这些行为进行批评；对这些行为进行批评；3.3.提出建议。提出建议。June 8,2011June 8,2011Dear Mr.Headmaster,Dear Mr.Headmaster,I am Li Hua,a student from Class 1,Senior 2.I am Li Hua,a student from Class 1,Senior 2.Yours faithfullyYours faithfullyLi HuaLi Hua【20112011浙江卷改编：建议应对乱涂乱扔浙江卷改编：建议应对乱涂乱扔】June 8,20

34、11Dear Mr.Headmaster,Im Li Hua,a student from Class 1,Senior 2.Im writing to tell you that it has been alarmingly shocking to see so much scribing and littering in our school,but ironically,seemingly everyone pretends to get used to the phenomenon.Without doubt it not only brings our school under a

35、cloud,but also has a bad effect on students mind.I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour.At the same time,students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.I believe that,with the joint efforts of both t

36、eachers and students,our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【20122012辽宁卷改编：对教材的看法与建议辽宁卷改编：对教材的看法与建议】假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写封信，表假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法，内容主要包括：达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法，内容主要包括：优点：优点：1.1.话题广泛；话题广泛；2.2.图片丰富；图片丰富；3.3.有助于提高学习兴趣

37、。有助于提高学习兴趣。建议：适当降低词汇难度。建议：适当降低词汇难度。Dear Editor,Dear Editor,As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your houseEnglish textbooks published by your house.Best regards,Best regards,Li HuaLi Hua【20122012辽宁卷改编：对教材

38、的看法与建议辽宁卷改编：对教材的看法与建议】Dear Editor,Dear Editor,As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the English As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your housetextbooks published by your house.These books have many advantages.These books have many advantages.One

39、 of them is that they cover a wide variety of topics,ranging from One of them is that they cover a wide variety of topics,ranging from history and geography to the latest scientific development,which are history and geography to the latest scientific development,which are sure to broaden our horizon

40、.Whats more,along with the texts there sure to broaden our horizon.Whats more,along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures,which can help us are many beautiful and colorful pictures,which can help us understand English better.Even the students who used to dislike understand En

41、glish better.Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject.However,English have turned out to be interested in the subject.However,some texts carry too many difficult words and expressions,which some texts carry too many difficult words and expressions,which consequently add to the difficulty in learning the texts.Therefore,consequently add to the difficulty in learning the texts.Therefore,Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones.Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones.Best regards,Best regards,Li HuaLi Hua