高中英语-浙江高考概要写作技巧指导-改写(二)课件.pptx

1、概要写作技巧指导1What is a summary?A summary is a shortened passage which keeps the important information of the original in your own words but without your opinion.A summaryA brief writing2How to make a summary?How to make a summary?Step 1:Read for the topic Step 2:Read for the structure Step 3:Underline t

2、he key points,sentencesStep 4:Paraphrasing Step 5:Polish and make up the whole passageFive steps to make a summary3The ways of paraphrasing:The ways of paraphrasing:1.1.正反法正反法 You will fail.You will not succeed.Jack didnt pass the driving test,but he still hoped to.Though Jack failed to pass the dri

3、ving test,he still hoped to.42.2.词性转换法词性转换法 Patience is very important.Patience is of great importance.The pollution makes people very anxious about their living environment.People show great _ about their living environment.anxiety53.3.同义替换法同义替换法:Keeping silent can actually make your anger longer.K

4、eeping silent may not help and can _ your anger.She went to study in New Zealand because she intended to immigrate there.She went to New Zealand _ immigrating there.I didnt catch any fish because I was not patient.I didnt catch any fish _ I was not patient.lengthen with the intention ofowing to the

5、fact64.4.句式变换法句式变换法 Parents should give children more praise.Children should be given more praise.Children should be encouraged more.This will help them learn faster.Children should be encouraged more,which will help them learn faster.Children are given more praise.They will achieve more success.Whe

6、n given more praise,children will achieve more success.75.5.连词衔接法连词衔接法 We should encourage students.We should not scold them.We should encourage students instead of scolding them.Cold and wet have nothing to do with catching colds,why are they more frequent in the winter?.No one has yet found the an

7、swer.However,no one has yet found the answer why colds are frequent in the winter 86.6.词序改变法词序改变法The secret of success was patience.Patience was the secret of success.97.7.细节省略法细节省略法Recordings of angry bees are enough to send big,tough African elephants running away!Recordings of angry bees can send

8、 African elephants running away!108.8.句意理解法句意理解法Because he played carelessly we lost the game._,we wouldnt have lost the match.But for his carelessness Shopping on the internet is becoming increasingly popular.More and more people prefer Internet shopping.1112Practice1.What is beneficial to nature m

9、ay not be good for people.2.She went to study in New Zealand because she intended to immigrate there.3.The police said that the case was being investigated.4.Because he played carelessly we lost the game.5.The pollution makes people very anxious about their living environment.Everything _ nature is

10、not necessarily good for people.benefitingbenefiting She went to New Zealand _ immigrating there.with the intention of According to the police,the case is _.under investigation under investigation_,we wouldnt have lost the match.But for his But for his carelessnesscarelessness People show great _ ab

11、out their living environment.anxiety136.On a personal note,the Internet is very valuable.7.In general men are not aware of this problem as women.8.The more one knows about pollution,the more one can do for our environment.9.Keeping silent can actually make your anger longer.10.She lay under the buil

12、ding and she was trapped there for threedays.Practice Personally,the Internet _.is of great value is of great value Men should raise the _ of this problem in general.awarenessawarenessOne should _ of pollution to contribute to the environment.have a good knowledge have a good knowledge Keeping silen

13、t may not help and can _ your anger.lengthenlengthen She lay _ under the building for three days.trappedtrapped14阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。With the help of data one can easily know the price of a can of Coke in a supermarket,the speed at which a car is running,the result of a football match or the t

14、emperature of a certain day.Obviously,data can make our life easier and more comfortable.What is more important,data seems to be fairer than words or statements.Therefore,many people would rather believe data than trust a man.On the other hand,if people judge things only by data from so-called speci

15、fic research,arent they a little too narrow-minded?The fast pace of modern life and the experience of being cheated make these people forget something important about data.More often than not,data is just part of the truth.For example,how can you tell that somebody isnt a good student just because s

16、he or he doesnt get high marks in the final examinations?And how can you refuse to accept that he poetry of William Yeats is really wonderful even though books about his poetry are never best-sellers?There is no doubt that analyzing the exact data is important to the assessment of an actual event.Bu

17、t the data people get are not always correct.Incorrect data may cause people to make a wrong judgment.Therefore,data does not mean much to people if they do not have the abilities to analyze the data with the knowledge and confidence to judge whether it is true or false.One more thing,it is impossib

18、le for people to measure all the things in life by data.For example,the degree of your feeling happy in your life,the depth of love between you and your friends,and the faith you have in your country.People can only feel them in their hearts but can never express them in data.Data is data after all.

19、Just remember the world is far more wonderful than the pale data can describe.15Para1:Obviously,data can make our life easier and more comfortable.What is more important,data seems to be fairer than words or statements.Therefore,many people would rather believe data than trust a man.Para2:On the oth

20、er hand,if people judge things only by data from so-called specific research,arent they a little too narrow-minded?Para3:More often than not,data is just part of the truth.Para4:But the data people get are not always correct.Incorrect data may cause people to make a wrong judgment.Para5:One more thi

21、ng,it is impossible for people to measure all the things in life by data.Para6:Data is data after all.Just remember the world is far more wonderful than the pale data can describe.主次要点主次要点 (CP and SP)-(CP and SP)-合并，改写，删细节合并，改写，删细节16本文主要介绍的data对于我们的影响。One possible version:Data brings ease and comfor

22、t to ones life and seems reliable,so many people only trust data while judging things.However,if people rely too much on data,they become narrow-minded.Firstly,data is not the whole truth.Besides,wrong data may prevent them from making a good judgment.Lastly,many things in life like emotions can nev

23、er be measured by data.All in all data is not enough to describe the wonderful world.One possible version:17 I talk a lot to myself.It helps me to keep my concentration on the activity on hand,makes me focus more on my studies,and gives me some pretty brilliant ideas while chattering to myself;more

24、importantly,I produce better works.For example,right now,as I am typing,I am constantly mumbling to myself.Do you talk to yourself?Dont get embarrassed admitting it because science has discovered that those who talk to themselves are actually geniuses and not crazy!Psychologist-researcher Gary Lupya

25、n conducted an experiment where 20 volunteers were shown objects,in a supermarket,and were asked to remember them.Half of them were told to repeat the objects,for example,banana,and the other half remained silent.In the end,the result shown that self-directed speech aided people to find the objects

26、faster,by 50 to 100 milliseconds,compared to the silent ones.“Ill often mutter to myself when searching for something in the refrigerator or the supermarket shelves,”said Gary Lupyan.This personal experience actually made him conduct this experiment.Lupyan,together with another psychologist,Daniel S

27、wigley,came up with the outcomes that those to talk to oneself are geniuses.Here are the reasons:When you are talking to yourself,your sensory mechanism gets activated.It gets easier on your memory since you can visualise the word,and you can act accordingly.Every one of us tends to have various typ

28、es of thoughts.Most make sense,while the others dont.Suppose you are furious at someone and you feel like killing that person.Now for this issue you wont run to a therapist,will you?No,what you do is lock yourself in a room and mutter to yourself.You are letting go off the anger by talking to yourse

29、lf,the pros and cons of killing that person,and eventually you calm down.This is a silly thought that you have and are unable to share it with any other person.Psychologist Linda Sapadin said,“It helps you clarify your thoughts,tend to whats important and firm up any decisions you are contemplating.

30、”18写作指导：写作指导：Step 1:read for topic Step 2:read for structure Step 3:read and underline key points or sentences talking to themselves geniusesPara.1 Para.2Para.3Para.4Para.5 Part 1 introduction to the topicPart 2 experiment to prove itPart 3 reasons for talking to oneself19 I talk a lot to myself.It

31、helps me to keep my concentration on the activity on hand,makes me focus more on my studies,and gives me some pretty brilliant ideas while chattering to myself;more importantly,I produce better works.For example,right now,as I am typing,I am constantly mumbling to myself.Do you talk to yourself?Dont

32、 get embarrassed admitting it because science has discovered that those who talk to themselves are actually geniuses and not crazy!Psychologist-researcher Gary Lupyan conducted an experiment where 20 volunteers were shown objects,in a supermarket,and were asked to remember them.Half of them were tol

33、d to repeat the objects,for example,banana,and the other half remained silent.In the end,the result shown that self-directed speech aided people to find the objects faster,by 50 to 100 milliseconds,compared to the silent ones.“Ill often mutter to myself when searching for something in the refrigerat

34、or or the supermarket shelves,”said Gary Lupyan.This personal experience actually made him conduct this experiment.Lupyan,together with another psychologist,Daniel Swigley,came up with the outcomes that those to talk to oneself are geniuses.Here are the reasons:When you are talking to yourself,your

35、sensory mechanism gets activated.It gets easier on your memory since you can visualize the word,and you can act accordingly.Every one of us tends to have various types of thoughts.Most make sense,while the others dont.Suppose you are furious at someone and you feel like killing that person.Now for t

36、his issue you wont run to a therapist,will you?No,what you do is lock yourself in a room and mutter to yourself.You are letting go off the anger by talking to yourself,the pros and cons of killing that person,and eventually you calm down.This is a silly thought that you have and are unable to share

37、it with any other person.Psychologist Linda Sapadin said,“It helps you clarify your thoughts,tend to whats important and firm up any decisions you are contemplating.”20Step 4:paraphrase&polishPara1:Science has discovered that those who talk to themselves are actually geniuses.It has been discovered

38、that people talking to themselves are geniuses.Para2:Psychologist-researcher Gary Lupyan conducted an experiment.Para3:Lupyan,together with another psychologist,Daniel Swigley,came up with the outcomes that those to talk to oneself are geniuses.Experiments carried out by Gary,together with Daniel ar

39、e supporting this discovery.Psychologist Gary Lupyan carried out an experiment.He and another psychologist put forward the same result.When you talk to yourself,the words appear in your mind repeatedly,which makes it easier to remember.Para5:It helps you clarify your thoughts,tend to whats important

40、 and firm up any decisions you are contemplating.Meanwhile,it helps to express yourself clearly,focus on the importance and make decisions firmly.Para4:It gets easier on your memory since you can visualize the word,and you can act accordingly.21One possible version:It has been discovered that people

41、 talking to themselves are geniuses.Experiments carried out by Gary,together with Daniel are supporting this discovery.When you talk to yourself,the words appear in your mind repeatedly,which makes it easier to remember.Meanwhile,it helps to explain your ideas clearly,focus on the importance and mak

42、e decisions firmly.(57 words)22A good summaryContent:1.Use your own words to summarize (general words)2.Cover the main points,no examples or details3.Be short and objectiveLanguage：Proper words,accurate sentence building,dont copy the original words23 Computers have changed the way a business functi

43、ons in a long way.In the past,companies rented spaces for running accounting departments.It took months to figure out profit or loss that a business had made or suffered.Recording entries and other relevant data were mainly done by hand.However,computers have become the backbone of all businesses no

44、w.Today,computers are widely used.Almost everything that happens in an organization is recorded and evaluated with the help of computers.Imagining our lives without computers is next to impossible.Computers were initially used only in workplaces.However,they soon revolutionized everything from schoo

45、l homework to grocery shopping.When the Internet came into being,it changed the way we functioned.It brought the world closer.Over a period of time,computers enabled working at home,which created a new typed of employment for many.As technology progressed,things such as shopping,booking tickets,buyi

46、ng a new house,searching for schools and colleges,applying to the same,researching for projects and medical information became a lot easier.As an indispensable tool in our lives,computers have changed the way we think in more ways than one.Today,all you have to do to find answers is,just“Google it”!

47、the online world of blogging,instant messaging,chatting and social networking unites the world in a completely unimaginable way.The powerful medium provides a platform for people to voice their opinions and stir discussions that have brought about a change in the world.Computers have pushed us to se

48、e different worlds and experience different cultures.Although the growth is a virtual one,its after-effects that are very real.The revolution in Egypt is the latest example of how computers changed the world.Today the identity of information technology is computers,economics,history and current affa

49、irs.The advent of computers has no doubt brought a revolutionary change in our existence,however it has a flip side too.Thus,using a computer for a better evolution in the coming decades remains a bigger challenge for mankind.24 Computers have brought great changes in our lives over the years.Firstl

50、y,computers have largely changed the traditional way that people do business.Secondly,computers have become an important part of our lives and benefit us in different ways.Besides,computers have changed our way of thinking.More importantly,computers allow us to see different worlds and experience di